Ok this is one of my first fics, so please be a little gentle but if you
really can't then be brutal. ~* Fluffy Dragon *~
Title: To Catch A Falling Star.
Author: Fluffy Dragon.
Email: heaven_sent535@msn.com
Rating: PG-13
Summary: After the death of her mother, Buffy slowly slides away from her friends / family. Will the stars help her?
Feedback: Yes please! Punctuation is definatly not my strongest point so please feel free to tell me that ^.^.
Disclaimers: As much as I would love to take credit for all these wonderful characters I can't because they're not mine, but you could probably guess that anyway so.. on with the tale.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Buffy Summers walked slowly home from the graveyard. Dust and dirt clinging to her clothes, yet they were not dishevelled, her hair and light flutter of makeup still as perfect as they were when she left the house after returning home from work to grab a stake and reapply a light dusting of powder to her much too pale cheeks.
She opened the door, walked in and shut it again with a slow but swift motion, and went straight upstairs to catch a few hours of sleep before she would be coming out again to go to work. She wasn't really sure what she did; she just knew she had to do it to support herself and her younger sister, who she now barely spoke too.
Dawn was still staying at Willow and Tara's not ready to come home yet. That was fine with Buffy. She barely spoke to any of them anymore. They tried to make things as normal as possible and for a while it worked out but once the shock of finally realising that her mother was never coming back Buffy withdrew into a shell and Dawn pretty much did the same.
Her hand hit the switch for the light; the bulb gave a flicker and then washed the room in lemony brightness, leaving one big shadowy black figure standing in front of her.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Dun dun dun ! what will happen next ?? I know its short but this is a kind of experimental fic. I can't decide to whether to write more chapters. R/R plz and tell me what you think, if quite a few peoples think its ok then I'll post another chappy .
Title: To Catch A Falling Star.
Author: Fluffy Dragon.
Email: heaven_sent535@msn.com
Rating: PG-13
Summary: After the death of her mother, Buffy slowly slides away from her friends / family. Will the stars help her?
Feedback: Yes please! Punctuation is definatly not my strongest point so please feel free to tell me that ^.^.
Disclaimers: As much as I would love to take credit for all these wonderful characters I can't because they're not mine, but you could probably guess that anyway so.. on with the tale.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Buffy Summers walked slowly home from the graveyard. Dust and dirt clinging to her clothes, yet they were not dishevelled, her hair and light flutter of makeup still as perfect as they were when she left the house after returning home from work to grab a stake and reapply a light dusting of powder to her much too pale cheeks.
She opened the door, walked in and shut it again with a slow but swift motion, and went straight upstairs to catch a few hours of sleep before she would be coming out again to go to work. She wasn't really sure what she did; she just knew she had to do it to support herself and her younger sister, who she now barely spoke too.
Dawn was still staying at Willow and Tara's not ready to come home yet. That was fine with Buffy. She barely spoke to any of them anymore. They tried to make things as normal as possible and for a while it worked out but once the shock of finally realising that her mother was never coming back Buffy withdrew into a shell and Dawn pretty much did the same.
Her hand hit the switch for the light; the bulb gave a flicker and then washed the room in lemony brightness, leaving one big shadowy black figure standing in front of her.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Dun dun dun ! what will happen next ?? I know its short but this is a kind of experimental fic. I can't decide to whether to write more chapters. R/R plz and tell me what you think, if quite a few peoples think its ok then I'll post another chappy .