Authors note: Well lets see.I'm very open to constructive criticism but [
Jay's review] just was meant to be a flare. Can you say I suck at writing
any worse than you already have? Probably.But this is not your story to be
suggesting that I let some other person write MY work. I mean for example
[Jen's review] wasn't bad; I mean I get what she's saying. A part of my
story was unrealistic and I guess I was so in a rush to get it up that I
didn't realize it. But for this JAY person to be saying I should let
someone else right my story, what's that suppose to mean? I mean does my
story really bother you that bad? If so, too bad, don't read it! Basically
that review was a flare and really offensive. Take your 'flares' somewhere
else. Oh yeah and I would like to read one of your 'I'm the best writer
ever' stories.. Please review you guys and tell me if I suck at writing my
story. That's all I have to say Thanks.