Omg...I opened my mail page this morning and got not 1, not 2, but 8 new
reviews!!
Captainsparrowsfeistylass-Honestly? I didn't like it that much! Lol, thanks!!
PED-Sarah-Omg, your review almost made me cry! It was so sweet!! Lol, and yes, I have realized that Juniper is pretty much a Mary-Sue, but that's ok. As long as people read it, I'm happy.
Rebel Lady-Thanks!! Yeah I tried to make Jack emotional in this. You rock!
SuzzieQue-Yea, sorry, I made it a little bit of a cliffhanger. Sorry! But thanks for the awesome review!! Lol, and thanks for the SECOND review! And stop pouting! I'll post soon! Lol
LaDyKaGoMe409-Yes, that's why I hated the ending, it was SOOO out of character for Jack, but I couldn't think of anything. And about the baby, not quite sure yet. I've had thoughts for both. And thanks! You rock!!
Emmy-Honestly?? Some people are complimenting that part while I hated it! Lol, but keep reviewing! You are awesome!
Angie-Lol!! And you'll see what happens.I know it was a cliffhanger, and ya know, I didn't even realize I left it at a cliffhanger? Hmm...
Omg, you guys, I am speechless. I can't believe it! Everyone who reviewed gets their own Jack and Will dolls!! *And for those who hate Elizabeth I will throw in a Liz Voodoo doll.*
Disclaimer: *SIGHS!* Here we go again. I DON'T OWN POTC!! Happy? I may have seen the movie 5 times, but I don't own it, sorry.
Chapter 13
Jack...holding a box behind his back...with a single rose in his hand.
Will walked over to Jack and turned him away from me. "JACK!! I said be patient with her, not go proposing marriage!!"
"I'm not proposing marriage, boy, I just have gifts."
"Jack Sparrow with gifts, now I've heard everything."
"Shut it, lad. This is for your bonny lass." He said, handing him the box. Will eyed the box curiously before going on to take it.
I tried to ignore the fact that Jack had a single rose in his right hand and tried to apologize.
"Anyway, erm...Jack, I just wanted to apologize for before and um..."
"No need to apologize, love. I expected too much of ye too early." He looked down towards his right hand and noticed the flower. "Just friends for now?"
I smiled and gladly accepted the flower. "Just friends."
"I can't believe I did that." Jack moaned, covering his face in his hands.
"It was for the best, Jack! She wasn't ready for it!"
"I know," He sighed. "But I was..."
"I can't believe it...He understood? And he's giving me time? Liz, what's going on?"
"He cares that much about you. That's what I call romantic, Juniper."
"But he's a pirate!"
"And so are you!"
"Pirates aren't supposed to be understanding."
"He's not just any pirate, Juniper," Liz began. "He's Captain Jack Sparrow!"
I smiled. "That's true. Hey, what did he get you anyway?"
Liz laughed and held up a little hat, just like Jack's. On a label, it said, "For Liz's little Buccaneer."
Jack sat in his cabin for a long time, just thinking about what he did that night and the thing he just gave up. He had a large pint of rum sitting in front of him (He figured he needed it badly) and a map lying under the pint.
He tried to figure out the closest land to where he was and for good reasons. He thought up Tortuga, but that wasn't close enough. Then he thought of an island he had never been to before. Pearl Island. 'It's sorta like the Pearl," He thought.
It was settled. In a month, he would drop Juniper off at Pearl Island. For good.
Will soon found out about this and was baffled beyond all belief.
"Jack, you can't be serious!"
"I am, mate. She's takin' over my life and I have to drop her off somewhere."
"But Jack, that's crazy!"
"It's brilliance, lad. I couldn't concentrate with her on this ship. She was takin' over!"
"You just care too much about her."
"Exactly."
All the while Will was talking to Jack, I was listening in the next room over. Jack wanted to abandon me. All because I was taking over his life. And now, Pearl Island would be my new home. Away from the pirate I think I was really starting to love.
A/N: YAY! I liked the ending to this one! It was sad-ish lol. You know what I like! R &R! You know I love the guys who do and I give fake prizes!
Captainsparrowsfeistylass-Honestly? I didn't like it that much! Lol, thanks!!
PED-Sarah-Omg, your review almost made me cry! It was so sweet!! Lol, and yes, I have realized that Juniper is pretty much a Mary-Sue, but that's ok. As long as people read it, I'm happy.
Rebel Lady-Thanks!! Yeah I tried to make Jack emotional in this. You rock!
SuzzieQue-Yea, sorry, I made it a little bit of a cliffhanger. Sorry! But thanks for the awesome review!! Lol, and thanks for the SECOND review! And stop pouting! I'll post soon! Lol
LaDyKaGoMe409-Yes, that's why I hated the ending, it was SOOO out of character for Jack, but I couldn't think of anything. And about the baby, not quite sure yet. I've had thoughts for both. And thanks! You rock!!
Emmy-Honestly?? Some people are complimenting that part while I hated it! Lol, but keep reviewing! You are awesome!
Angie-Lol!! And you'll see what happens.I know it was a cliffhanger, and ya know, I didn't even realize I left it at a cliffhanger? Hmm...
Omg, you guys, I am speechless. I can't believe it! Everyone who reviewed gets their own Jack and Will dolls!! *And for those who hate Elizabeth I will throw in a Liz Voodoo doll.*
Disclaimer: *SIGHS!* Here we go again. I DON'T OWN POTC!! Happy? I may have seen the movie 5 times, but I don't own it, sorry.
Chapter 13
Jack...holding a box behind his back...with a single rose in his hand.
Will walked over to Jack and turned him away from me. "JACK!! I said be patient with her, not go proposing marriage!!"
"I'm not proposing marriage, boy, I just have gifts."
"Jack Sparrow with gifts, now I've heard everything."
"Shut it, lad. This is for your bonny lass." He said, handing him the box. Will eyed the box curiously before going on to take it.
I tried to ignore the fact that Jack had a single rose in his right hand and tried to apologize.
"Anyway, erm...Jack, I just wanted to apologize for before and um..."
"No need to apologize, love. I expected too much of ye too early." He looked down towards his right hand and noticed the flower. "Just friends for now?"
I smiled and gladly accepted the flower. "Just friends."
"I can't believe I did that." Jack moaned, covering his face in his hands.
"It was for the best, Jack! She wasn't ready for it!"
"I know," He sighed. "But I was..."
"I can't believe it...He understood? And he's giving me time? Liz, what's going on?"
"He cares that much about you. That's what I call romantic, Juniper."
"But he's a pirate!"
"And so are you!"
"Pirates aren't supposed to be understanding."
"He's not just any pirate, Juniper," Liz began. "He's Captain Jack Sparrow!"
I smiled. "That's true. Hey, what did he get you anyway?"
Liz laughed and held up a little hat, just like Jack's. On a label, it said, "For Liz's little Buccaneer."
Jack sat in his cabin for a long time, just thinking about what he did that night and the thing he just gave up. He had a large pint of rum sitting in front of him (He figured he needed it badly) and a map lying under the pint.
He tried to figure out the closest land to where he was and for good reasons. He thought up Tortuga, but that wasn't close enough. Then he thought of an island he had never been to before. Pearl Island. 'It's sorta like the Pearl," He thought.
It was settled. In a month, he would drop Juniper off at Pearl Island. For good.
Will soon found out about this and was baffled beyond all belief.
"Jack, you can't be serious!"
"I am, mate. She's takin' over my life and I have to drop her off somewhere."
"But Jack, that's crazy!"
"It's brilliance, lad. I couldn't concentrate with her on this ship. She was takin' over!"
"You just care too much about her."
"Exactly."
All the while Will was talking to Jack, I was listening in the next room over. Jack wanted to abandon me. All because I was taking over his life. And now, Pearl Island would be my new home. Away from the pirate I think I was really starting to love.
A/N: YAY! I liked the ending to this one! It was sad-ish lol. You know what I like! R &R! You know I love the guys who do and I give fake prizes!