More reviews!
SuzzieQue-Woah! Nice idea! Thanks a lot!
SweetPea0431-Not at all! *SweetPea gets eye patch!* And thanks! And lol, it's ok about the multiple posts.
Pirate-Jazzy-Finally, a new reviewer! Thanks so much!
PhoenixRider11-You are the best! Thank you so much, you totally made my day!
BobdaFrog-Sorry about the last chapter, Jack's been a lil OOC lately, and yes, I hate it, but I've been trying my best. And thanks for reading! (A lil heads up; the baby will NOT be named Weatherby if I have anything to do with it...)
GuavaBoat-Yes, I knew that 'Juniper' is a shrub. Why don't you go read a story you actually LIKE then keep reviewing mine? If you're quite convinced my story sucks, then why won't you review under a real username? Have you ever written any stories? It's not easy and getting reviews from people like you never helps. And why don't you read the other reviews, and then tell me I'm dull witted. I'm quite aware that Juniper is from the 17th century, so stop telling me that. No other reader BESIDES you is laughing at her name, so give up already. And believe me, my other reviewers happen to like my story a lot, so if you don't like it, don't read it. And you're the dull witted one if you keep reading something you don't like. I don't see why you're hunting me down because I liked a name. Ever hear of an opinion? I happened to like the name, so get over it.
*All reviewers get...a new book entitled Teach your Parrot to Talk for You! How else do you think Mr. Cotton got his parrot to talk for him? Except GuavaBoat...GuavaBoat gets a life. (S)he apparently needs one.*
A/N: I just realized sometimes it doesn't email me all the people who reviewed, so everyone who reviewed that I never got to thank, thank you and you get a bunch of prizes!
DeadRed
Emmy *Did I thank you?*
Jacks girl *I don't remember if I thanked you either:-/*
Disclaimer: I don't own POTC...sadly, and the idea for Chapter 20 is thanks to SuzzieQue for giving me this fantastic idea!! I was going to do exactly what SuzzieQue said, but changed my mind. Basically, this chapter is dedicated to SuzzieQue. You inspired me!
Chapter 20: A New Crew?
It had been a week since the whole Catherine incident, and I was quite happy that it was over with. Ever since, Jack had been quite sweet and he never took me for granted. He understood that if he did, he would run into more women like that.
Life on the high sea had been quite wonderful. Liz was growing wider and she was still considering names. Will and Weatherby (A/N: lmao...that is the funniest name...* were still in the top, and Jack had been thrown in there as well. As for girl's, they had Elizabeth, and one name that Will and Liz kept secret, for reasons unknown.
Chores went on during the day and Jack and I spent time together during the night. We talked, played card games (A/N: Did they have cards back then? Oh well...), and anything else to keep us occupied. Jack helped me clean my wound daily and it was going down. The scar was quite gruesome to look at, but it was much better than it used to be.
Will and Liz, on the other hand, were quite nervous about the months ahead of them. Sometimes Liz would be upset and cry; something that worried me in the beginning. But Will told me it's all part of a pregnancy. Will ran around frantically all the time, getting what his wife asked for. He was literally pulling out his hair in nervousness and I couldn't help but feel bad for the poor guy.
I sat on deck and Jack steered at the helm. Will sharpened his swords and Liz sat down below resting. The crew was busy at work and I wanted to help, but Jack wouldn't let me with my wound.
"Brawwwk! Ship ahead! Brawwwk!" Squawked Mr. Cotton's parrot. Jack immediately took out his spy glass and looked ahead. Indeed, there was a ship advancing towards us.
Jack turned the helm to the starboard side to make sure we wouldn't collide with the ship. To our surprise, the ship dropped anchor. These people wanted to talk, so we let down our anchor as well.
"We want our lass back!!" A voice yelled.
My eyes widened and I gasped. My old captain. On the ship I used to work on. With the old crew. They came to get me back and I didn't want to go.
"Never! She's with us now!" Jack yelled.
"She is not, give us our crew member back!"
"Whatever happened to the pirate's code?"
"No one fights as well as that lass does! And no one keeps the deck as clean either."
"What incentive should I have to give her back?"
"You give her back, we give you whatever you want. Any demand at any cost, it's yours."
Jack nodded and smiled. I gasped.
"Fine. I want the lass."
"That doesn't count!"
Jack moaned. "Why don't we let the lass choose?!"
The other captain rubbed his chin and agreed.
I walked up next to Jack. "I want to stay."
The whole crew of the other ship looked at me in disbelief.
The captain started walking forward. "You mean...you want to stay on the ship with a bunch of awful pirates that can't kill a fly?"
"Speak of yerselves, gentlemen." Jack said before spitting into the sea.
Many of the crew came onto the Black Pearl and fought for me. Ana Maria came out to fight against the horrid men, but there were too many. Before long, they grabbed me and held me against their waist. They went to swing back to the ship. Jack tried to get me back, but it was too late. The anchor was up and they were off. Jack got a late start and after waiting too long to pick up the anchor, the other ship had turned in some other direction behind a large sea boulder and wasn't to be seen.
The last I saw was Jack staring at me in the arms of the evil pirate captain, shrinking off into the distance.
SuzzieQue-Woah! Nice idea! Thanks a lot!
SweetPea0431-Not at all! *SweetPea gets eye patch!* And thanks! And lol, it's ok about the multiple posts.
Pirate-Jazzy-Finally, a new reviewer! Thanks so much!
PhoenixRider11-You are the best! Thank you so much, you totally made my day!
BobdaFrog-Sorry about the last chapter, Jack's been a lil OOC lately, and yes, I hate it, but I've been trying my best. And thanks for reading! (A lil heads up; the baby will NOT be named Weatherby if I have anything to do with it...)
GuavaBoat-Yes, I knew that 'Juniper' is a shrub. Why don't you go read a story you actually LIKE then keep reviewing mine? If you're quite convinced my story sucks, then why won't you review under a real username? Have you ever written any stories? It's not easy and getting reviews from people like you never helps. And why don't you read the other reviews, and then tell me I'm dull witted. I'm quite aware that Juniper is from the 17th century, so stop telling me that. No other reader BESIDES you is laughing at her name, so give up already. And believe me, my other reviewers happen to like my story a lot, so if you don't like it, don't read it. And you're the dull witted one if you keep reading something you don't like. I don't see why you're hunting me down because I liked a name. Ever hear of an opinion? I happened to like the name, so get over it.
*All reviewers get...a new book entitled Teach your Parrot to Talk for You! How else do you think Mr. Cotton got his parrot to talk for him? Except GuavaBoat...GuavaBoat gets a life. (S)he apparently needs one.*
A/N: I just realized sometimes it doesn't email me all the people who reviewed, so everyone who reviewed that I never got to thank, thank you and you get a bunch of prizes!
DeadRed
Emmy *Did I thank you?*
Jacks girl *I don't remember if I thanked you either:-/*
Disclaimer: I don't own POTC...sadly, and the idea for Chapter 20 is thanks to SuzzieQue for giving me this fantastic idea!! I was going to do exactly what SuzzieQue said, but changed my mind. Basically, this chapter is dedicated to SuzzieQue. You inspired me!
Chapter 20: A New Crew?
It had been a week since the whole Catherine incident, and I was quite happy that it was over with. Ever since, Jack had been quite sweet and he never took me for granted. He understood that if he did, he would run into more women like that.
Life on the high sea had been quite wonderful. Liz was growing wider and she was still considering names. Will and Weatherby (A/N: lmao...that is the funniest name...* were still in the top, and Jack had been thrown in there as well. As for girl's, they had Elizabeth, and one name that Will and Liz kept secret, for reasons unknown.
Chores went on during the day and Jack and I spent time together during the night. We talked, played card games (A/N: Did they have cards back then? Oh well...), and anything else to keep us occupied. Jack helped me clean my wound daily and it was going down. The scar was quite gruesome to look at, but it was much better than it used to be.
Will and Liz, on the other hand, were quite nervous about the months ahead of them. Sometimes Liz would be upset and cry; something that worried me in the beginning. But Will told me it's all part of a pregnancy. Will ran around frantically all the time, getting what his wife asked for. He was literally pulling out his hair in nervousness and I couldn't help but feel bad for the poor guy.
I sat on deck and Jack steered at the helm. Will sharpened his swords and Liz sat down below resting. The crew was busy at work and I wanted to help, but Jack wouldn't let me with my wound.
"Brawwwk! Ship ahead! Brawwwk!" Squawked Mr. Cotton's parrot. Jack immediately took out his spy glass and looked ahead. Indeed, there was a ship advancing towards us.
Jack turned the helm to the starboard side to make sure we wouldn't collide with the ship. To our surprise, the ship dropped anchor. These people wanted to talk, so we let down our anchor as well.
"We want our lass back!!" A voice yelled.
My eyes widened and I gasped. My old captain. On the ship I used to work on. With the old crew. They came to get me back and I didn't want to go.
"Never! She's with us now!" Jack yelled.
"She is not, give us our crew member back!"
"Whatever happened to the pirate's code?"
"No one fights as well as that lass does! And no one keeps the deck as clean either."
"What incentive should I have to give her back?"
"You give her back, we give you whatever you want. Any demand at any cost, it's yours."
Jack nodded and smiled. I gasped.
"Fine. I want the lass."
"That doesn't count!"
Jack moaned. "Why don't we let the lass choose?!"
The other captain rubbed his chin and agreed.
I walked up next to Jack. "I want to stay."
The whole crew of the other ship looked at me in disbelief.
The captain started walking forward. "You mean...you want to stay on the ship with a bunch of awful pirates that can't kill a fly?"
"Speak of yerselves, gentlemen." Jack said before spitting into the sea.
Many of the crew came onto the Black Pearl and fought for me. Ana Maria came out to fight against the horrid men, but there were too many. Before long, they grabbed me and held me against their waist. They went to swing back to the ship. Jack tried to get me back, but it was too late. The anchor was up and they were off. Jack got a late start and after waiting too long to pick up the anchor, the other ship had turned in some other direction behind a large sea boulder and wasn't to be seen.
The last I saw was Jack staring at me in the arms of the evil pirate captain, shrinking off into the distance.