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Captainsparrowsfeistylass-Goodness, I can always depend on you for a great review! Thanks so much!
Dizzy Izzy-Do you have any idea how much you crack me up? Your reviews are hysterical! Thank you for reviewing!! And thanks for the support!
Dizzy Izzy has a little something to say to GuavaBoat, and no matter how stupid she thinks it sounds, I'm posting it anyway because I love the reviewers that support me!
From: dizzy izzy (
HI! i have one more thing to say that i thot of after i submitted my last review, but i wanna say it, and u can pass it on. to guavaboat: i bet u have a lot of problems that are hard to pronounce, but i can give u one name that sums it all up: BORED. that's actually one word as opposed to an actual name, but still. and i think Juniper's a great name, and in a TON of my history books i've found that a lot of people are named after plants, and nowadays much fewer people are named after shrubberies, 'cept for 'rose' but other than that.. and a lot of peeps s named Elizabeth NOW, and i really don't have much of a point n e more, so i'll shut up.
PED-Sarah-She stabbed the other captain dude...did I make that a little unclear? If I did, sorry. And yes, I will talk more about her father...I think...
Angie-Yes, I'll certainly try to make it longer! Thanks for the review and you will find out who that person was.
Captainsparrowsfeistylass-Thank you so much!! Yes, pretty much everyone wants to know who that person was, I will explain.
Csfl has said this as well. little miss GuavaBoat can just shove it up her arse, and get over it, becuase your story ownz all and i love it! and my oppinion is the only one that counts lol becuase the world, is centered around me! no i'm jk.
Xavier Jade-I'm so honored you read my story instead of doing an essay! Lol. And those tips, I'm going to DEFINITELY keep them in mind when I write my next story. Thanks!
Wow, going on to two pages with reviews here.
One-Winged-First of all, I'm going to ignore the whole name statement *Sheesh* But thanks anyways for the marvelous review! You admire me?! Geeze, this is incredible! Thank you so much!
One-Winged *2nd Review*-See? You are so nice! You apologized about the name! Thank you!
One-Winged *3rd Review*-Lol, you weren't bitchy! And I will write more!
Jullez-Yay, it's my hero! I think they did, because they haven't reviewed lately. Thanks for the awesome review!
I have pretty bad news :( You see, my hands hurt a lot of the time and I went to the doctor to see what's wrong with me. I have a chronic disease called Bursitis, or what some people call Limb Girdle MD. I have to wear this retarded splint all day *except for showers and sleeping* and I can barely type. My updates will REALLY take some time now, and I'm so sorry for this inconvenience. And I'm so sorry my chapters are really short, it's just I really want to get them up as quick as I can with my...disablement I suppose you can call it.
Hey! I was thinking of renting the movie Chocolat. If anyone can tell me if it's good or bad, please do. I'd love some recommendations before I rent it!
Chapter 24-Reunion Part 1
All blood drained from Jack's face as he saw the slumping Juniper collapse to the deck floor. He looked up to the laughing man that had stabbed her and went straight at him.
"Who do ye think ye are, stabbin' poor Juniper like that?!" Jack demanded, yelling at the lad loudly.
"Sir...I'm a pirate!"
"What's yer name, lad!"
"I don't think that concerns the likes of you."
"Either tell me," He started, holding up his dagger, "Or wear my dagger as a necklace!"
The young man with little courage decided to speak up. "My name is Elijah. Because Juniper went and ran away with you, I got kicked off the ship. The man saw us as sort of a team, and thought I couldn't do as well without the little strumpet," He paused to spit out the last word. "I stowed away on this Godforsaken ship for a week, almost dying of hunger, but I made sure I exacted my revenge. By the looks of things, I don't think I did a well enough job." He looked down at the lass, who was twitching and from what he could tell, still breathing.
"I'll show ye a well enough job!" Jack screamed and advanced towards the man, who parried Jack's attempted blows.
They fought for a while, Jack being the obviously better swordsman. He cornered Elijah to a rail of the deck, but Elijah scampered away.
Jack wanted to check on Juniper, but couldn't with all the people here to fight him. Jack looked to his left and saw Elijah charging towards him again, sword sticking out. Jack dodged out of the way and Elijah came to a screeching halt, turned around and growled at Jack. He came to charge at Jack again, but once again, Jack parried.
"Listen! Why don't ye just come on my ship with the lass and I? It's like we'll be a big happy family and ye can be a pirate again, eh? What say you?"
"I say, you're crazy!" With that, he jolted towards Jack again, and this time Jack fought back. He raised his sword and slashed down, missing the lad by a hair. They continued this fight, all the while leaving Juniper to bleed and suffer.
The fight went on for about an hour. Sure, Jack could've finished him off as soon as they began, but as he would say, he was waiting for the opportune moment.
Jack heard other swords clashing and quickly turned to see what it was. He couldn't believe his eyes. Will was actually fighting. He was advancing quickly too. Every once in a while, Jack would peek at his friend and see how good of a swordsman he actually was, even though Jack still believed he could beat Will with his eyes closed. He snuck peaks until Will defeated the crew member, sticking his sword through the stomach, turning it, then pulling it out again. Jack smiled to himself, but turned to continue fighting the lad.
He defended himself rather easily, and made sure to move his opponent towards the rail of the ship. Elijah noticed what Jack was doing, and tried to avoid it at all costs. It didn't work, and Elijah looked over the edge uneasily. Finally, when the opportunity was available, Elijah parried to the side away from Jack and sliced Jack's shoulder. Jack winced, but continued to fight.
Jack decided it was time to finish off the whelp. He advanced quicker than usual and fought more vigorously. Elijah started to break a sweat; first of all he was getting tired and was working harder, then again he was just plain nervous.
Jack decided to trick the kid. Jack paused in what he was doing and gasped. He fell to the deck floor (Or so Elijah thought) and closed his eyes. Elijah scratched his head and peeked at Jack. Jack's eyes fluttered open and he reached up, stabbing Elijah in the stomach. Elijah mouth gaped open like a fish, and he stumbled backwards. He fell to the deck floor.
'Finally' Jack thought to himself. The rest of Jack's crew finished off the opposing crew and Jack went over to Juniper. He cradled her in his arms and brought her downstairs to Elizabeth. ~*~*~*~
"Don't worry Jack, I'll take care of her." Liz said. She started peeling off Juniper's clothes to see the wound. It was crusted and still bleeding. Liz winced, but cleaned it and wrapped it. Juniper's eyes fluttered open. ~*~*~*~ FINALLY! Back to Juniper's point of view! ~*~*~*~
"Wh...where am I?" I asked.
"It's ok. You're on the Black Pearl again." Liz reassured me.
"O...k..." I muttered, before my eyes rolled to the back of my head and I fainted again.
Captainsparrowsfeistylass-Goodness, I can always depend on you for a great review! Thanks so much!
Dizzy Izzy-Do you have any idea how much you crack me up? Your reviews are hysterical! Thank you for reviewing!! And thanks for the support!
Dizzy Izzy has a little something to say to GuavaBoat, and no matter how stupid she thinks it sounds, I'm posting it anyway because I love the reviewers that support me!
From: dizzy izzy (
HI! i have one more thing to say that i thot of after i submitted my last review, but i wanna say it, and u can pass it on. to guavaboat: i bet u have a lot of problems that are hard to pronounce, but i can give u one name that sums it all up: BORED. that's actually one word as opposed to an actual name, but still. and i think Juniper's a great name, and in a TON of my history books i've found that a lot of people are named after plants, and nowadays much fewer people are named after shrubberies, 'cept for 'rose' but other than that.. and a lot of peeps s named Elizabeth NOW, and i really don't have much of a point n e more, so i'll shut up.
PED-Sarah-She stabbed the other captain dude...did I make that a little unclear? If I did, sorry. And yes, I will talk more about her father...I think...
Angie-Yes, I'll certainly try to make it longer! Thanks for the review and you will find out who that person was.
Captainsparrowsfeistylass-Thank you so much!! Yes, pretty much everyone wants to know who that person was, I will explain.
Csfl has said this as well. little miss GuavaBoat can just shove it up her arse, and get over it, becuase your story ownz all and i love it! and my oppinion is the only one that counts lol becuase the world, is centered around me! no i'm jk.
Xavier Jade-I'm so honored you read my story instead of doing an essay! Lol. And those tips, I'm going to DEFINITELY keep them in mind when I write my next story. Thanks!
Wow, going on to two pages with reviews here.
One-Winged-First of all, I'm going to ignore the whole name statement *Sheesh* But thanks anyways for the marvelous review! You admire me?! Geeze, this is incredible! Thank you so much!
One-Winged *2nd Review*-See? You are so nice! You apologized about the name! Thank you!
One-Winged *3rd Review*-Lol, you weren't bitchy! And I will write more!
Jullez-Yay, it's my hero! I think they did, because they haven't reviewed lately. Thanks for the awesome review!
I have pretty bad news :( You see, my hands hurt a lot of the time and I went to the doctor to see what's wrong with me. I have a chronic disease called Bursitis, or what some people call Limb Girdle MD. I have to wear this retarded splint all day *except for showers and sleeping* and I can barely type. My updates will REALLY take some time now, and I'm so sorry for this inconvenience. And I'm so sorry my chapters are really short, it's just I really want to get them up as quick as I can with my...disablement I suppose you can call it.
Hey! I was thinking of renting the movie Chocolat. If anyone can tell me if it's good or bad, please do. I'd love some recommendations before I rent it!
Chapter 24-Reunion Part 1
All blood drained from Jack's face as he saw the slumping Juniper collapse to the deck floor. He looked up to the laughing man that had stabbed her and went straight at him.
"Who do ye think ye are, stabbin' poor Juniper like that?!" Jack demanded, yelling at the lad loudly.
"Sir...I'm a pirate!"
"What's yer name, lad!"
"I don't think that concerns the likes of you."
"Either tell me," He started, holding up his dagger, "Or wear my dagger as a necklace!"
The young man with little courage decided to speak up. "My name is Elijah. Because Juniper went and ran away with you, I got kicked off the ship. The man saw us as sort of a team, and thought I couldn't do as well without the little strumpet," He paused to spit out the last word. "I stowed away on this Godforsaken ship for a week, almost dying of hunger, but I made sure I exacted my revenge. By the looks of things, I don't think I did a well enough job." He looked down at the lass, who was twitching and from what he could tell, still breathing.
"I'll show ye a well enough job!" Jack screamed and advanced towards the man, who parried Jack's attempted blows.
They fought for a while, Jack being the obviously better swordsman. He cornered Elijah to a rail of the deck, but Elijah scampered away.
Jack wanted to check on Juniper, but couldn't with all the people here to fight him. Jack looked to his left and saw Elijah charging towards him again, sword sticking out. Jack dodged out of the way and Elijah came to a screeching halt, turned around and growled at Jack. He came to charge at Jack again, but once again, Jack parried.
"Listen! Why don't ye just come on my ship with the lass and I? It's like we'll be a big happy family and ye can be a pirate again, eh? What say you?"
"I say, you're crazy!" With that, he jolted towards Jack again, and this time Jack fought back. He raised his sword and slashed down, missing the lad by a hair. They continued this fight, all the while leaving Juniper to bleed and suffer.
The fight went on for about an hour. Sure, Jack could've finished him off as soon as they began, but as he would say, he was waiting for the opportune moment.
Jack heard other swords clashing and quickly turned to see what it was. He couldn't believe his eyes. Will was actually fighting. He was advancing quickly too. Every once in a while, Jack would peek at his friend and see how good of a swordsman he actually was, even though Jack still believed he could beat Will with his eyes closed. He snuck peaks until Will defeated the crew member, sticking his sword through the stomach, turning it, then pulling it out again. Jack smiled to himself, but turned to continue fighting the lad.
He defended himself rather easily, and made sure to move his opponent towards the rail of the ship. Elijah noticed what Jack was doing, and tried to avoid it at all costs. It didn't work, and Elijah looked over the edge uneasily. Finally, when the opportunity was available, Elijah parried to the side away from Jack and sliced Jack's shoulder. Jack winced, but continued to fight.
Jack decided it was time to finish off the whelp. He advanced quicker than usual and fought more vigorously. Elijah started to break a sweat; first of all he was getting tired and was working harder, then again he was just plain nervous.
Jack decided to trick the kid. Jack paused in what he was doing and gasped. He fell to the deck floor (Or so Elijah thought) and closed his eyes. Elijah scratched his head and peeked at Jack. Jack's eyes fluttered open and he reached up, stabbing Elijah in the stomach. Elijah mouth gaped open like a fish, and he stumbled backwards. He fell to the deck floor.
'Finally' Jack thought to himself. The rest of Jack's crew finished off the opposing crew and Jack went over to Juniper. He cradled her in his arms and brought her downstairs to Elizabeth. ~*~*~*~
"Don't worry Jack, I'll take care of her." Liz said. She started peeling off Juniper's clothes to see the wound. It was crusted and still bleeding. Liz winced, but cleaned it and wrapped it. Juniper's eyes fluttered open. ~*~*~*~ FINALLY! Back to Juniper's point of view! ~*~*~*~
"Wh...where am I?" I asked.
"It's ok. You're on the Black Pearl again." Liz reassured me.
"O...k..." I muttered, before my eyes rolled to the back of my head and I fainted again.