Princess Kat: Sorry it took so long to update this. I was stumped on how to
write this scene. Please note that I can't write fighting scenes too well.
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Reviewers:
Jaid Skywalker - Heh. ^^* Miroku can be evil.
Kikyou-sama - ^^* I thought about making Kohaku Sango's brother in this, but then I couldn't imagine Souta fighting later when he is Kagome's brother so I had to keep it that way. Kirara is going to come in as a demon cat to help Sango later in the story, so no, I'll keep Buyo. Hmm, "Twisted World" sounds okay. Please read the notes at the end of the chapter! ^^ And here's more!
Araki-chan - That's what I have it saved as on my computer, but I didn't think people would like the title. o_o* Please read the notes at the end of the chapter when you're done.
Sylver-Ajah - Lol. ^^* I didn't even think about changing the word, but oh well! It's too late now. Actually, it isn't, but I still don't want to change it. I got the cutest idea for -- ::stops so she doesn't blurt out her plan:: _* Sorry for not updating in so long.
Lil-strange-person - Well, I'll eventually go through each one. ^^
Zephor - Doubt it's a record. Sorry for not updating in so long. I'll start my update-every-five-seconds routine again soon!
Ginagurl1234 - ^^* Thank you.
Larania - Heh, sometimes I do that. ^^*
Johanna Gen - Lol.
Kaylana - Yay! ^^ It's getting better!
Kagome - Yep, it's a good title. I already got that suggestion, and that's what I have this saved as on my computer. Updated! ^^
~*~
Sango looked around frantically until she spotted Yura up in a tree. "You! What do you want?!"
Miroku followed Sango's gaze to the barely dressed woman.
"The Shikon no Tama, of course." Yura said. She moved her hand, and hair flew at Sango.
Sango held Hiraikotsu in front of herself. The hair hit it, and she slowly slid back. "Sorry, Yura.you have to try harder than.that!" She screamed as she pushed forward, the hair snapping one by one.
"Sango?" Miroku questioned.
"Miroku.you have to get rid of Yura." Sango said as she continued to push forward.
"So you have some power, girl?" Yura laughed. "My hair will destroy you!"
Sango growled. "Shut up!"
Miroku rolled his eyes. "What are you doing, Sango?"
Oh, yeah, he couldn't see the hair.
"If you could see the hair, you'd know what I was doing!" Sango snapped. "Now get going, we don't have all day!"
Miroku rolled his eyes. "Fine, fine, picky, picky. I don't see what's so wrong with that girl..."
"SHE'S A YOUKAI, MIROKU! A YOUKAI! Y-O-U-K-A-I!" Sango screamed. "SHE WANTS THE SHIKON NO TAMA! FIND SOMETHING WRONG WITH HER?!"
Miroku blinked. He then launched himself at the barely clad woman.
Yura laughed. She moved her hands and the hair pushing Sango back shot away from her and at Miroku.
"WATCH OUT!" Sango screamed.
The hair hit Miroku and snapped.
"WHAT WAS THAT?!" Miroku shouted back as he tried to hit Yura with his staff. The woman jumped out of the tree and onto a string of hair.
"Never mind." Sango sighed. "HIRAIKOTSU!" She threw her boomerang at Yura.
It hit her and she fell off her hair net to the ground. The boomerang went flying back to Sango who caught it.
"All right, Miroku, get moving!" Sango shouted.
Miroku jumped out of the tree and landed next to Yura.
Yura immediately jumped up, her sword drawn. She slashed at Miroku, but her sword hit the staff he placed in front of himself.
"You have to try better than that." Miroku said as he jumped backwards.
"Hyaa!!!" Yura screamed as she ran at Miroku, slashing at him wildly.
Miroku used his staff to block her every move, that is, until her sword got past and shoved into his stomach.
Miroku groaned as he fell backwards. He had dropped his staff and was clutching his stomach.
Yura pulled her sword from him, smirking.
"HIRAIKOTSU!!!" Sango screamed as she threw her boomerang.
The boomerang knocked Yura off her feet before returning to Sango.
Sango caught it. She then ran to Miroku and kneeled down next to him. "Are you okay?!"
"I'll be fine." Miroku muttered as he sat up with much difficulty.
Yura stood up, smirking. "Come after me, if you dare." She said as she jumped up into her hair and, pretty much, disappeared.
"You stay here, Miroku. I'll go after Yura." Sango said as she stood up.
"No!" Miroku shouted.
"Don't make me say the s-word." Sango warned.
Miroku growled. "All right, fine, but let me come." He said.
"Do you think you'll be able to walk?" Sango asked worriedly.
"I'll be fine." Miroku declared, and with much more difficulty than when sitting up, stood up and grabbed his staff. He leaned into it to help him stand.
"All right, let's go." Sango said as she started walking.
Miroku slowly followed after her.
~*~
Sango and Miroku were able to find Yura quickly because Miroku could sense her aura. They were now in a place filled with skulls, and Yura was standing in front of them, smirking.
"So you came." Yura sneered.
"I'll be your opponent, Yura!" Sango yelled. "Leave Miroku out of this!"
Yura laughed. "And I'll listen to you...why?"
Sango growled. "I'll give you a chance now to get out of this. After now, if you try to steal anything from me, you're dead."
Yura smirked and pulled out her sword. She then ran towards Sango. "GIVE ME THE SHIKON NO TAMA!!!"
Sango pushed Miroku away then held Hiraikotsu in front of herself. The sword smashed against it.
Miroku landed on the ground with a groan. "Thanks a lot, Lady Sango." He mumbled sarcastically as he stood up with much trouble.
Sango had managed to push Yura away. "I guess you choose to die for the jewel!"
"No, little girl, it's you who chooses to die for it!" Yura laughed.
Sango threw her boomerang shouting, "HIRAIKOTSU!"
The boomerang went flying towards Yura.
Yura easily moved out of the way of the boomerang but then she flew back with the wind knocked out of her.
Sango was standing right in front of where Yura was standing, her fist extended. She was panting. "Never thought *pant* that I'd run *pant* that fast in *pant* my life." The boomerang returned to Sango, whom caught it.
Yura stood. "Puny girl!" She screamed.
"Hiraikotsu!" Sango yelled while throwing her boomerang.
Yura moved, but the Hiraikotsu flew through her arm, cutting it right off.
"Ha!" Sango screamed as she caught her boomerang. "Now you'll have trouble controlling your hair!!!"
"Ah, but I still have one hand!" Yura grinned as she lay her sword down and moved her fingers a little. Hair went flying at Sango from all sides. She then picked her sword back up.
Sango screamed and jumped up as high as she could. The hair went past the other side, just scraping the bottom of Sango's shoes.
Lucky for Sango, when she landed on the ground, the hair had cleared out.
But not so lucky for Sango when Yura flew by and almost cut Sango in half. She would have, if Sango hadn't moved.
"You seem experienced!" Miroku yelled.
"I'm not! It's just like some instincts are controlling me!" Sango yelled back.
Sango then felt a sharp pain rushing through her back. She screamed.
"Rule number one: always keep your attention on your opponent." Yura sneered. She had slashed Sango's back.
Sango turned around and punched Yura, right in the face. "BITCH!"
A white light erupted from Sango's fist.
Yura flew back. When Sango got a good look at Yura's face, it was completely black, as if burned. She had no idea how someone could have survived with burns like that!
'That's Yukiko's special power!' Miroku thought. 'But it should have killed that Yura. Maybe...' He looked around at the skulls until he spotted one that looked slightly different. 'That's it!'
"You little brat!" Yura yelled as she rushed at Sango with her sword.
Sango held her boomerang out in front of herself. Once again, Yura's sword collided with it.
Miroku was slowly making his way up to the weird skull. 'Keep her busy, Sango, keep her busy.'
Yura continued to push on her sword.
Sango held onto Hiraikotsu tightly.
Miroku laughed when he got to the skull. "You should have been paying attention!" He shouted down at the two girls as he slammed his staff right through the skull. It broke in half. Also broke in half, was a comb.
Yura's body started to glow and soon her sword clanked to the ground.
Sango slowly pulled the Hiraikotsu out of its defensive position to see Yura's sword and clothes lying on the ground. Yura's body is gone.
Miroku made his way down to Sango. "Yura trapped her soul into the comb."
"Oh. Hey, are you okay?" Sango asked as she looked Miroku over.
"I'll be fine. If you can't tell, the wound on my stomach is already healing. Being a monk means I have spiritual powers, which includes healing." Miroku explained.
"Oh." With that, Sango fainted from exhaustion.
~*~
Princess Kat: Done! ^^ Okay, review and tell me what you thought. Also, if you have the time, please read my other fic "Remembering My Family". It was a Mother's Day thing, but I barely got any reviews on it. ;-;
Also, an important note!
I need you to vote for which title this should have.
Twisted World
Miroku: A Feudal Fairy Tale
Vote for the title and read my other fic! It's short enough not to take too long! I'll update soon! Bye!!!
Disclaimer: Own nothing.
Reviewers:
Jaid Skywalker - Heh. ^^* Miroku can be evil.
Kikyou-sama - ^^* I thought about making Kohaku Sango's brother in this, but then I couldn't imagine Souta fighting later when he is Kagome's brother so I had to keep it that way. Kirara is going to come in as a demon cat to help Sango later in the story, so no, I'll keep Buyo. Hmm, "Twisted World" sounds okay. Please read the notes at the end of the chapter! ^^ And here's more!
Araki-chan - That's what I have it saved as on my computer, but I didn't think people would like the title. o_o* Please read the notes at the end of the chapter when you're done.
Sylver-Ajah - Lol. ^^* I didn't even think about changing the word, but oh well! It's too late now. Actually, it isn't, but I still don't want to change it. I got the cutest idea for -- ::stops so she doesn't blurt out her plan:: _* Sorry for not updating in so long.
Lil-strange-person - Well, I'll eventually go through each one. ^^
Zephor - Doubt it's a record. Sorry for not updating in so long. I'll start my update-every-five-seconds routine again soon!
Ginagurl1234 - ^^* Thank you.
Larania - Heh, sometimes I do that. ^^*
Johanna Gen - Lol.
Kaylana - Yay! ^^ It's getting better!
Kagome - Yep, it's a good title. I already got that suggestion, and that's what I have this saved as on my computer. Updated! ^^
~*~
Sango looked around frantically until she spotted Yura up in a tree. "You! What do you want?!"
Miroku followed Sango's gaze to the barely dressed woman.
"The Shikon no Tama, of course." Yura said. She moved her hand, and hair flew at Sango.
Sango held Hiraikotsu in front of herself. The hair hit it, and she slowly slid back. "Sorry, Yura.you have to try harder than.that!" She screamed as she pushed forward, the hair snapping one by one.
"Sango?" Miroku questioned.
"Miroku.you have to get rid of Yura." Sango said as she continued to push forward.
"So you have some power, girl?" Yura laughed. "My hair will destroy you!"
Sango growled. "Shut up!"
Miroku rolled his eyes. "What are you doing, Sango?"
Oh, yeah, he couldn't see the hair.
"If you could see the hair, you'd know what I was doing!" Sango snapped. "Now get going, we don't have all day!"
Miroku rolled his eyes. "Fine, fine, picky, picky. I don't see what's so wrong with that girl..."
"SHE'S A YOUKAI, MIROKU! A YOUKAI! Y-O-U-K-A-I!" Sango screamed. "SHE WANTS THE SHIKON NO TAMA! FIND SOMETHING WRONG WITH HER?!"
Miroku blinked. He then launched himself at the barely clad woman.
Yura laughed. She moved her hands and the hair pushing Sango back shot away from her and at Miroku.
"WATCH OUT!" Sango screamed.
The hair hit Miroku and snapped.
"WHAT WAS THAT?!" Miroku shouted back as he tried to hit Yura with his staff. The woman jumped out of the tree and onto a string of hair.
"Never mind." Sango sighed. "HIRAIKOTSU!" She threw her boomerang at Yura.
It hit her and she fell off her hair net to the ground. The boomerang went flying back to Sango who caught it.
"All right, Miroku, get moving!" Sango shouted.
Miroku jumped out of the tree and landed next to Yura.
Yura immediately jumped up, her sword drawn. She slashed at Miroku, but her sword hit the staff he placed in front of himself.
"You have to try better than that." Miroku said as he jumped backwards.
"Hyaa!!!" Yura screamed as she ran at Miroku, slashing at him wildly.
Miroku used his staff to block her every move, that is, until her sword got past and shoved into his stomach.
Miroku groaned as he fell backwards. He had dropped his staff and was clutching his stomach.
Yura pulled her sword from him, smirking.
"HIRAIKOTSU!!!" Sango screamed as she threw her boomerang.
The boomerang knocked Yura off her feet before returning to Sango.
Sango caught it. She then ran to Miroku and kneeled down next to him. "Are you okay?!"
"I'll be fine." Miroku muttered as he sat up with much difficulty.
Yura stood up, smirking. "Come after me, if you dare." She said as she jumped up into her hair and, pretty much, disappeared.
"You stay here, Miroku. I'll go after Yura." Sango said as she stood up.
"No!" Miroku shouted.
"Don't make me say the s-word." Sango warned.
Miroku growled. "All right, fine, but let me come." He said.
"Do you think you'll be able to walk?" Sango asked worriedly.
"I'll be fine." Miroku declared, and with much more difficulty than when sitting up, stood up and grabbed his staff. He leaned into it to help him stand.
"All right, let's go." Sango said as she started walking.
Miroku slowly followed after her.
~*~
Sango and Miroku were able to find Yura quickly because Miroku could sense her aura. They were now in a place filled with skulls, and Yura was standing in front of them, smirking.
"So you came." Yura sneered.
"I'll be your opponent, Yura!" Sango yelled. "Leave Miroku out of this!"
Yura laughed. "And I'll listen to you...why?"
Sango growled. "I'll give you a chance now to get out of this. After now, if you try to steal anything from me, you're dead."
Yura smirked and pulled out her sword. She then ran towards Sango. "GIVE ME THE SHIKON NO TAMA!!!"
Sango pushed Miroku away then held Hiraikotsu in front of herself. The sword smashed against it.
Miroku landed on the ground with a groan. "Thanks a lot, Lady Sango." He mumbled sarcastically as he stood up with much trouble.
Sango had managed to push Yura away. "I guess you choose to die for the jewel!"
"No, little girl, it's you who chooses to die for it!" Yura laughed.
Sango threw her boomerang shouting, "HIRAIKOTSU!"
The boomerang went flying towards Yura.
Yura easily moved out of the way of the boomerang but then she flew back with the wind knocked out of her.
Sango was standing right in front of where Yura was standing, her fist extended. She was panting. "Never thought *pant* that I'd run *pant* that fast in *pant* my life." The boomerang returned to Sango, whom caught it.
Yura stood. "Puny girl!" She screamed.
"Hiraikotsu!" Sango yelled while throwing her boomerang.
Yura moved, but the Hiraikotsu flew through her arm, cutting it right off.
"Ha!" Sango screamed as she caught her boomerang. "Now you'll have trouble controlling your hair!!!"
"Ah, but I still have one hand!" Yura grinned as she lay her sword down and moved her fingers a little. Hair went flying at Sango from all sides. She then picked her sword back up.
Sango screamed and jumped up as high as she could. The hair went past the other side, just scraping the bottom of Sango's shoes.
Lucky for Sango, when she landed on the ground, the hair had cleared out.
But not so lucky for Sango when Yura flew by and almost cut Sango in half. She would have, if Sango hadn't moved.
"You seem experienced!" Miroku yelled.
"I'm not! It's just like some instincts are controlling me!" Sango yelled back.
Sango then felt a sharp pain rushing through her back. She screamed.
"Rule number one: always keep your attention on your opponent." Yura sneered. She had slashed Sango's back.
Sango turned around and punched Yura, right in the face. "BITCH!"
A white light erupted from Sango's fist.
Yura flew back. When Sango got a good look at Yura's face, it was completely black, as if burned. She had no idea how someone could have survived with burns like that!
'That's Yukiko's special power!' Miroku thought. 'But it should have killed that Yura. Maybe...' He looked around at the skulls until he spotted one that looked slightly different. 'That's it!'
"You little brat!" Yura yelled as she rushed at Sango with her sword.
Sango held her boomerang out in front of herself. Once again, Yura's sword collided with it.
Miroku was slowly making his way up to the weird skull. 'Keep her busy, Sango, keep her busy.'
Yura continued to push on her sword.
Sango held onto Hiraikotsu tightly.
Miroku laughed when he got to the skull. "You should have been paying attention!" He shouted down at the two girls as he slammed his staff right through the skull. It broke in half. Also broke in half, was a comb.
Yura's body started to glow and soon her sword clanked to the ground.
Sango slowly pulled the Hiraikotsu out of its defensive position to see Yura's sword and clothes lying on the ground. Yura's body is gone.
Miroku made his way down to Sango. "Yura trapped her soul into the comb."
"Oh. Hey, are you okay?" Sango asked as she looked Miroku over.
"I'll be fine. If you can't tell, the wound on my stomach is already healing. Being a monk means I have spiritual powers, which includes healing." Miroku explained.
"Oh." With that, Sango fainted from exhaustion.
~*~
Princess Kat: Done! ^^ Okay, review and tell me what you thought. Also, if you have the time, please read my other fic "Remembering My Family". It was a Mother's Day thing, but I barely got any reviews on it. ;-;
Also, an important note!
I need you to vote for which title this should have.
Twisted World
Miroku: A Feudal Fairy Tale
Vote for the title and read my other fic! It's short enough not to take too long! I'll update soon! Bye!!!