Disclaimer: I don't own DBZ but if I did I wouldn't be here writing
FanFiction now would I?
I hope most people enjoyed my first chapter and aren't secretly making fun of me behind my back! I wanna thank 3 people right now. First I wanna thank Sly13; you are my first review thank you!! And the second person I want to thank is SerenityBubbles not because she is my best friend but because she helped me learn how to put my stories up on Fanfiction.net so you all could enjoy it. And thanks to person number 3 brachan90 thanks for giving me some great tips. I'll try to use them from now on! Thanks you two and thanks to everyone who reviewed my fic! Ok now on with Chapter 2.
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(Please note that I changed the Ages) Bra-16 Goten -20 Trunks-21 Pan-15 Marron-17
I Think I Love You Chapter 2
As Goten ran down the street on his way to West City Park he thought to himself, "Geeze Bra sure has grown up! She's really pretty! What am I thinking? I'm gonna go out with Paris! It must just be a brotherly feeling, like my little sister has grown up or something!"
Meanwhile.
Bra was in her room reading but found she could not concentrate. She kept thinking about Goten. So she put down her book and walked to her window. She looked outside and began to daydream about how cute Goten is. Suddenly her phone rang.
"Hello?" Bra answered her phone.
"Hey Bra, it's Marron!" Marron said to Bra.
"Hey Marron how r u doing? What did ya call for?"
"I was just calling to say congratulations!"
"For what," Bra asked dumfounded.
"You know!!" Marron responded, "Congrats because you're going out with Josh! The most popular guy in school!"
"Oh yeah!"
"Oh yeah? Is something bothering you Bra? You sound bummed out! Normally you're excited when you get a new boyfriend!"
"I know Marron; I am excited I just don't feel good right now."
"Oh, well then I'll let you go. I'll talk to you tomorrow at school ok!"
"Ok, bye Marron, oh yeah I should probably tell you the news! My Brother, Pan, and Goku have found all the black star Dragon Balls and are on their way home right now!"
"Wow that's great Bra! Well I'll see you later then."
"Ok bye"
"Bye." They hung up the phone.
In The Kitchen.
"Hey hunny! You're looking good," Bulma said to Vegeta as she kissed him.
Chi-Chi just looked at Bulma and Vegeta and sighed "I wish Goku was around more often," Chi-Chi told to no one in particular. "Vegeta? Why'd you shave your moustache?" Chi-Chi asked Vegeta after she realized what was different about him.
Vegeta immediately blushed and responded, "I'd rather not say."
"Vegeta you are blushing hun!" Bulma told Vegeta.
"GRRRRRRR," Vegeta growls and turns and stomps out of the room as Bulma tells Chi-Chi why Vegeta shaved his moustache. "Stupid woman!" Vegeta thought out loud, "She has no right telling Kakkorots Woman any of my business!"
In Space.
Trunks was looking at the dragonballs he had in his bag.
"They sure are pretty," Pan told Trunks.
"Yeah they sure are something!" He responded, "Just think, tomorrow we'll be home and everything will be back to normal!"
"Yeah!"
"I'm hungry," Goku said as he walked into the room.
Trunks and Pan rolled their eyes. They all walked to the kitchen to eat.
"I can't wait to see everyone!! Especially my mom," Trunks said
"I can't wait to eat some of Chi-Chi's fine cookin!!!" Goku told them
"Grandpa!!! Can't you think about anything besides food?" Pan asked Goku.
"I dunno"
"I don't understand you Gramps, you sure are somethin else."
"Maybe we should all get some rest now so we'll be all rested and ready to see everyone," Trunks interrupted.
"I suppose you're right Trunks," Goku said as he ran off to bed with Trunks and Pan following.
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Was that a little better with the spacing? I hope it was easier to read! Please review and tell me if you like it or not. Or tell me possible ways that I could fix it. Thanks for reading give me at between 10-15 reviews and I'll post another chapter!!!
Ja Ne Hejah
I hope most people enjoyed my first chapter and aren't secretly making fun of me behind my back! I wanna thank 3 people right now. First I wanna thank Sly13; you are my first review thank you!! And the second person I want to thank is SerenityBubbles not because she is my best friend but because she helped me learn how to put my stories up on Fanfiction.net so you all could enjoy it. And thanks to person number 3 brachan90 thanks for giving me some great tips. I'll try to use them from now on! Thanks you two and thanks to everyone who reviewed my fic! Ok now on with Chapter 2.
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(Please note that I changed the Ages) Bra-16 Goten -20 Trunks-21 Pan-15 Marron-17
I Think I Love You Chapter 2
As Goten ran down the street on his way to West City Park he thought to himself, "Geeze Bra sure has grown up! She's really pretty! What am I thinking? I'm gonna go out with Paris! It must just be a brotherly feeling, like my little sister has grown up or something!"
Meanwhile.
Bra was in her room reading but found she could not concentrate. She kept thinking about Goten. So she put down her book and walked to her window. She looked outside and began to daydream about how cute Goten is. Suddenly her phone rang.
"Hello?" Bra answered her phone.
"Hey Bra, it's Marron!" Marron said to Bra.
"Hey Marron how r u doing? What did ya call for?"
"I was just calling to say congratulations!"
"For what," Bra asked dumfounded.
"You know!!" Marron responded, "Congrats because you're going out with Josh! The most popular guy in school!"
"Oh yeah!"
"Oh yeah? Is something bothering you Bra? You sound bummed out! Normally you're excited when you get a new boyfriend!"
"I know Marron; I am excited I just don't feel good right now."
"Oh, well then I'll let you go. I'll talk to you tomorrow at school ok!"
"Ok, bye Marron, oh yeah I should probably tell you the news! My Brother, Pan, and Goku have found all the black star Dragon Balls and are on their way home right now!"
"Wow that's great Bra! Well I'll see you later then."
"Ok bye"
"Bye." They hung up the phone.
In The Kitchen.
"Hey hunny! You're looking good," Bulma said to Vegeta as she kissed him.
Chi-Chi just looked at Bulma and Vegeta and sighed "I wish Goku was around more often," Chi-Chi told to no one in particular. "Vegeta? Why'd you shave your moustache?" Chi-Chi asked Vegeta after she realized what was different about him.
Vegeta immediately blushed and responded, "I'd rather not say."
"Vegeta you are blushing hun!" Bulma told Vegeta.
"GRRRRRRR," Vegeta growls and turns and stomps out of the room as Bulma tells Chi-Chi why Vegeta shaved his moustache. "Stupid woman!" Vegeta thought out loud, "She has no right telling Kakkorots Woman any of my business!"
In Space.
Trunks was looking at the dragonballs he had in his bag.
"They sure are pretty," Pan told Trunks.
"Yeah they sure are something!" He responded, "Just think, tomorrow we'll be home and everything will be back to normal!"
"Yeah!"
"I'm hungry," Goku said as he walked into the room.
Trunks and Pan rolled their eyes. They all walked to the kitchen to eat.
"I can't wait to see everyone!! Especially my mom," Trunks said
"I can't wait to eat some of Chi-Chi's fine cookin!!!" Goku told them
"Grandpa!!! Can't you think about anything besides food?" Pan asked Goku.
"I dunno"
"I don't understand you Gramps, you sure are somethin else."
"Maybe we should all get some rest now so we'll be all rested and ready to see everyone," Trunks interrupted.
"I suppose you're right Trunks," Goku said as he ran off to bed with Trunks and Pan following.
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Was that a little better with the spacing? I hope it was easier to read! Please review and tell me if you like it or not. Or tell me possible ways that I could fix it. Thanks for reading give me at between 10-15 reviews and I'll post another chapter!!!
Ja Ne Hejah