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CHAPTER #1
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Anna
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HOTDOGS
It was the first time I had seen Seth Cohen since I got back from Philladelphia. We were joking around and, thank god, talking about everything BUT Summer. I had been suprised when I first got to class that the first thing he said wasn't, "I made Summer that was a landscape of summer in Orange County!". Actually I was relieved and satisfied when instead he commented me on my new vintage sweater.
Thinking about nothing but Seth for months was leaving me weary. And then finally seeing him made me want to jump in his arms kiss him all over..... even though I knew I couldn't do that (at least not yet). We went to the snack bar and he got a Sub Sandwich while I got a hotdog, extra relish.
"Don't you know what's in those things?!?", he quized me. I already knew the gross ingredients, but I shook my head and humored him. "They put in all kinds of grody crap in those things like..... pig penis, pig heart, pig bladder, pig tounge, pretty much pig everything!!"
"Soooo.... your point being...", I challenged, even though I pretty much knew that he was right about the American trademark food .... but really, who cares, it tastes awesome.
He grinned his oh-so-sexy grin and I couldn't help but smile to attempt to cover my melting heart. "Can I have a bit?", he managed to laugh out. We both cracked up while he stole a bite of my juicy, processed meat, landmark in American history, ""mmm, mmm, good!".
Right at that moment, Summer passed us, and Cohen stopped laughing. With relish and bread crumbs dripping down his chin, he looked at her out of the corner of his eye and she was doing the same. They both quickly went down and the went back to what they were doing before. Seth looked up at me and then quickly cleaned his mouth.... he looked back down at his feet and then laughed nervously. I guessed that something had happened while I was in Phillie Cheese Steak Land (as Seth called it), and now all I had to do was find out what it was.
CHAPTER #1
*~~+~~*
Anna
*~~+~~*
HOTDOGS
It was the first time I had seen Seth Cohen since I got back from Philladelphia. We were joking around and, thank god, talking about everything BUT Summer. I had been suprised when I first got to class that the first thing he said wasn't, "I made Summer that was a landscape of summer in Orange County!". Actually I was relieved and satisfied when instead he commented me on my new vintage sweater.
Thinking about nothing but Seth for months was leaving me weary. And then finally seeing him made me want to jump in his arms kiss him all over..... even though I knew I couldn't do that (at least not yet). We went to the snack bar and he got a Sub Sandwich while I got a hotdog, extra relish.
"Don't you know what's in those things?!?", he quized me. I already knew the gross ingredients, but I shook my head and humored him. "They put in all kinds of grody crap in those things like..... pig penis, pig heart, pig bladder, pig tounge, pretty much pig everything!!"
"Soooo.... your point being...", I challenged, even though I pretty much knew that he was right about the American trademark food .... but really, who cares, it tastes awesome.
He grinned his oh-so-sexy grin and I couldn't help but smile to attempt to cover my melting heart. "Can I have a bit?", he managed to laugh out. We both cracked up while he stole a bite of my juicy, processed meat, landmark in American history, ""mmm, mmm, good!".
Right at that moment, Summer passed us, and Cohen stopped laughing. With relish and bread crumbs dripping down his chin, he looked at her out of the corner of his eye and she was doing the same. They both quickly went down and the went back to what they were doing before. Seth looked up at me and then quickly cleaned his mouth.... he looked back down at his feet and then laughed nervously. I guessed that something had happened while I was in Phillie Cheese Steak Land (as Seth called it), and now all I had to do was find out what it was.