What's Up?
This is my second fan fiction, so I'm slowly getting used to this. I'm currently writing two stories at once. This one and the Pitch Black fanfic: A Friend in an Enemy.
This is just a couple of test chapters, and if enough people like it I'll continue it, but if they don't then it may die on the vine (so to speak) and I might remove it from the web.
So please give me reviews.
I know my summary was short so here's the longer version:
Desiree Thorn has a mysterious past with her father and family, when she is asked to return home for a couple of weeks she hesitates but comes any way. She was always the outsider of her family. She was the one that went wrong, the black sheep, the one that every relative treated differently. All her life She wondered, why. So here she is, back at the place where it all began. Something doesn't feel right, and she knows that this is probably going to be hell.
Xander thinks this is going to be an easy case. He's gained the trust of the Boss, the father: Demeterious Thorn. And is learning the ropes of the operation, but things are not going anywhere fast. Everything is going okay, he even has something going with his beautiful model daughter, China.
But everything starts to get complicated when his first mission Anarchy 99 come back to haunt him, including Yellena. Things get even more tangled when Thorn's youngest daughter Desiree enters the picture. She's breath taking, intriguing, and daring. Xander finds himself drawn to her, but is she the thing that could blow his cover and risk him his life? Or will she be the one to save it?
One night everything changes when unexpectedly Yellena returns and a member of the family is brutally murdered. Then secrets are revealed. But the one question still remains: Who is the thorn in the family?
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Yeah I know it's kinda involved but I love my stories that way. Twists and turns are my favorite thing about writing. Just thought I'd warn you. Lol!
Another warning: Anarchy 99, Yellena, and the romance in this story isn't immediate. It takes time, but once it's there, baby it's like a brick wall!
But I hope you read and like it. Give it a chance, I might come out with a couple more chapters in the next few days.
Peace, Love, and Hugs,
~ShadowDiva~