A/N: HEY! SORRY FOR THE WAIT! I WENT TO BASKETBALL CAMP AND THEN I KINDA
FIGURED OUT THAT I LIKED MAX/ALEC FICS ALSO. SO I HAVE BEEN READING TONS
OF FICS. SORRY! I'LL TRY TO MAKE THESE CHAPTERS COME QUICKER! ENJOY!
ARI
***By the way in this story Max is 13 and Zack is 16. That should spice things up a bit!***
Chapter 5: Heat?
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Max and Zack proceeded to Zane's place in New Mexico. When they arrived Max was in fury.
"I can't believe I didn't think to bring cooler clothes. It must be like 100( out." Max said with a touch of annoyment.
"I'm sorry." Zack answered looking downtrodden because he thought Max was mad at him.
"No, that's aiight. It's not your fault." She replied while beating her hand furiously next to her face. "Is it getting hotter or is it just me?" she felt like she was burning up.
"I don't feel it getting hotter, but maybe it's because you still have your jacket on." He said eyeing her.
"Right," she replied taking off her jacket. "So, are we almost to Zane's?"
'Mmmm.Zane..he sure is hott. What the hell? What's going on in my head? He's my brother along with Zack. Mmmmm.Zack! Oh my god, I'm in heat!'
She looked up at Zack waiting for his answer. When Zack's gaze dropped down to her she had fear in her eyes. "Max?"
"Yeah, Zack?" she purred.
"Are you alright?" he asked starting to get concerned.
She suddenly slapped herself, "I am now." She replied.
Zack just shrugged his shoulders and kept walking at the same brisk pace.
'Oh my god! What will happen if Zack needs to get a room to sleep? I can't control myself in the same room with him, plus any minute now he'll be able to smell me.'
Suddenly Zack said, "Max, I think we should get a room. You look dead beat. Wait here let me go in and get a room." He walked into a nearby motel.
'Now how am I going to control myself?' she said asking herself in alarm.
When he came out she forgot all her previous thoughts. Now all she could think about was this hott guy in front of her, she licked her lips, 'Mmmm.What a fine body we got here.' She slapped herself again and thought, 'Ew! Even if I am in love wit him, I can't just sleep with him because I'm in heat.
"Max," Zack asked questionably, "do you smell anything?"
"No," she replied quickly.
"That's kinda weird. It smells familiar but I can't place it." Then suddenly he realized.
"Max?" he asked afraid of the answer that was coming.
"Yeah, Zack?" she asked trying really hard not to look at him.
"Are you.um.in heat?"
"I think so," she answered her eyes and voice laced with fear.
"Shit! How are you gonna stay away from me, and how am I going to be able to resist you!" he groaned. Then realizing the second thing he had said slapped himself.
"Sorry." He said quietly.
"Why?" she asked with a baffled look in her eyes.
"Well, for the second part?" he said doubtfully.
"That's okay let's just get this bitch over with," she moaned. Suddenly, unable to resist the heat, she grabbed Zack and shoved him forcefully against the door of their room, laying kisses down his neck.
He shoved her back, opened the door, and yanked her inside. Once inside he tried to run to the bathroom but she ran faster and went in before he could.
'O god. How am I going to survive the next 24 hours? I could lock myself in here, but then what would be so bad of being with Zack. After all she did love him. But, no that's not the answer, I need to learn how to fight this bitch. I'll just tell Zack.mmm.Zack.that I'm going to stay in here for awhile.'
"Zack." She said through the door.
"Yeah, Max." came Zack's husky voice.
"I'm going to stay in here and take like 20 cold showers. Maybe I can get it out of my system." She added. Though thinking 'It won't take it out of my system, and we both know that.'
They had learned about the female's 'cycle's' only right before they escaped. 'Oh yeah, this was going to be one long night.'
Zack didn't sleep at all that night. He was too aware of the scent of Max being in heat. His conscious was the only thing that didn't keep him from kicking down the door and making love to her. At least he had that.
In the morning Zack finally dozed off for an hour. When he woke up he couldn't smell anything. He hadn't opened his eyes and ideas kept running through his head. 'What if Max had it so bad she left and did it with someone else? What if she left because I wouldn't do it with her. No, she wouldn't want me anyways, she's too good for me.'
When he finally opened his eyes he saw Max sitting in a chair staring at him.
"Max?" he said confused.
"Yeah, I think I'm okay now. You can't smell anything can you?"
"No, I started to worry. Well we should get a move on if we want to go see Zane before lunch."
With that they ran as fast as they could away from the motel.
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At about 11 they came upon an old brick colonial house.
"Zack, is this where Zane lives?"
"Yep, I just hope he hasn't gotten himself into too much trouble." He said emphasizing too.
"Knowing Zane, he probably started his room on fire." She said shaking with laughter.
When they reached the door Zack knocked.
A tall brunette came to the door and said,
"Good Morning, Riverwood residence. How may I help you?" she didn't look as though she thought it were a good morning.
Zack started, "Hi, um.is Grant around?" he said adding Zane's false name.
The lady looked at them with a look of disgust, "Yeah, just sec." She turned her back and yelled, "Grant! You have company, and how many times have I told you not to use your chemistry set in your bedroom." She added upon seeing him come down the stairs with black marks on his face.
"Sorry." He said and turned to Zack with a grin on his face, "Zack, my man. What's up? Oh, I see you do not go alone. Is this your lady friend?"
Zack gave him a look that meant if-you-say-another-word-I'm-seriously-going- to-kill-you!
Throwing his hands up in defeat he said, "I was just joking! I knew it was my baby sister Maxie. So how are you?" he asked when he had turned to Max giving her a big hug.
"Great! How are you, Grant?" she added with a little giggle.
"Ha Ha, very funny! I'm good!" he turned back to Zack, "So, how long are you staying this time?"
"We gotta leave by 3." Zack merely grunted.
Zane started thinking. Was that a flash of jealousy I saw spark through Zack's eye's when I hugged her? I think brother man's got a thing for baby sis.
"So, Max. Got any boyfriends?" he asked winking at her.
She looked at her feet solemnly, "No." she merely grunted.
"Oh, sorry. Didn't mean to make you sad." He then leaned over and hugged Max again. Then suddenly on instinct looked up to see that jealous look in Zack's eyes.
He release Max so suddenly she fell back, and would have fallen on her ass if Zack hadn't caught her.
Zane looked up at Zack, "Yo, bro. Come here I gotta talk to you quick."
Zack walked over to Zane and sat down as Max made her way down to the garden and sat on the pretty yellow bench, admiring the flowers around her. 'Actually she just wanted to be close enough to hear what they were talking about.'
After Max walked away Zane asked, "You got a thing for her don't you?"
"What?! I mean no!" he added quickly.
"You do too, now don't give me that bullshit."
"Okay, okay I do like her. But, I have the feeling she likes somebody else."
"Naw man. What you seeing is her looking at you, but you ain't realizing it because you in denial." He added as an afterthought.
"Really?"
"Yep! How about I talk to her."
Max couldn't believe what she was hearing. 'Zack, like me? No way in hell. He was so in love with his mission. How could he like her?'
She was so lost in thought when Zane walked up beside her and sat down, she didn't even notice.
"Maxie, do you have a crush on someone?"
"No!" she replied a little to quickly.
"I think you do," he added with a mischievous grin.
"Okay, I do. But, you don't know who!" she added returning his grin.
"Oh, I do. You in love with Zack over ain't you?"
"Am I that transparent?"
"No, it's just that I can feel what's going on between you two."
He grabbed her hand and led the way back to were Zack was standing.
"Max, we better get going. We gotta go check on Tinga."
When Max turned to have one final look at the beautiful garden she failed to see Zane give Zack two thumbs up grinning.
"Well, Grant. I'll see you around!" she said hugging him tightly.
Zack merely nodded while holding a grin that was so not him.
"See ya bro."
"Yep, don't forget to have a little fun. Let a little loose." He added knowing Zack really wanted Max and she in return wanted him just as bad.
With that Max and Zack set of to go see Tinga in Houston.
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Hope everyone liked this chapter! Please Review, I like to hear your critism and your praises.(mostly praises) but, it's all good, all the time. Enjoy!-ARI
ARI
***By the way in this story Max is 13 and Zack is 16. That should spice things up a bit!***
Chapter 5: Heat?
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Max and Zack proceeded to Zane's place in New Mexico. When they arrived Max was in fury.
"I can't believe I didn't think to bring cooler clothes. It must be like 100( out." Max said with a touch of annoyment.
"I'm sorry." Zack answered looking downtrodden because he thought Max was mad at him.
"No, that's aiight. It's not your fault." She replied while beating her hand furiously next to her face. "Is it getting hotter or is it just me?" she felt like she was burning up.
"I don't feel it getting hotter, but maybe it's because you still have your jacket on." He said eyeing her.
"Right," she replied taking off her jacket. "So, are we almost to Zane's?"
'Mmmm.Zane..he sure is hott. What the hell? What's going on in my head? He's my brother along with Zack. Mmmmm.Zack! Oh my god, I'm in heat!'
She looked up at Zack waiting for his answer. When Zack's gaze dropped down to her she had fear in her eyes. "Max?"
"Yeah, Zack?" she purred.
"Are you alright?" he asked starting to get concerned.
She suddenly slapped herself, "I am now." She replied.
Zack just shrugged his shoulders and kept walking at the same brisk pace.
'Oh my god! What will happen if Zack needs to get a room to sleep? I can't control myself in the same room with him, plus any minute now he'll be able to smell me.'
Suddenly Zack said, "Max, I think we should get a room. You look dead beat. Wait here let me go in and get a room." He walked into a nearby motel.
'Now how am I going to control myself?' she said asking herself in alarm.
When he came out she forgot all her previous thoughts. Now all she could think about was this hott guy in front of her, she licked her lips, 'Mmmm.What a fine body we got here.' She slapped herself again and thought, 'Ew! Even if I am in love wit him, I can't just sleep with him because I'm in heat.
"Max," Zack asked questionably, "do you smell anything?"
"No," she replied quickly.
"That's kinda weird. It smells familiar but I can't place it." Then suddenly he realized.
"Max?" he asked afraid of the answer that was coming.
"Yeah, Zack?" she asked trying really hard not to look at him.
"Are you.um.in heat?"
"I think so," she answered her eyes and voice laced with fear.
"Shit! How are you gonna stay away from me, and how am I going to be able to resist you!" he groaned. Then realizing the second thing he had said slapped himself.
"Sorry." He said quietly.
"Why?" she asked with a baffled look in her eyes.
"Well, for the second part?" he said doubtfully.
"That's okay let's just get this bitch over with," she moaned. Suddenly, unable to resist the heat, she grabbed Zack and shoved him forcefully against the door of their room, laying kisses down his neck.
He shoved her back, opened the door, and yanked her inside. Once inside he tried to run to the bathroom but she ran faster and went in before he could.
'O god. How am I going to survive the next 24 hours? I could lock myself in here, but then what would be so bad of being with Zack. After all she did love him. But, no that's not the answer, I need to learn how to fight this bitch. I'll just tell Zack.mmm.Zack.that I'm going to stay in here for awhile.'
"Zack." She said through the door.
"Yeah, Max." came Zack's husky voice.
"I'm going to stay in here and take like 20 cold showers. Maybe I can get it out of my system." She added. Though thinking 'It won't take it out of my system, and we both know that.'
They had learned about the female's 'cycle's' only right before they escaped. 'Oh yeah, this was going to be one long night.'
Zack didn't sleep at all that night. He was too aware of the scent of Max being in heat. His conscious was the only thing that didn't keep him from kicking down the door and making love to her. At least he had that.
In the morning Zack finally dozed off for an hour. When he woke up he couldn't smell anything. He hadn't opened his eyes and ideas kept running through his head. 'What if Max had it so bad she left and did it with someone else? What if she left because I wouldn't do it with her. No, she wouldn't want me anyways, she's too good for me.'
When he finally opened his eyes he saw Max sitting in a chair staring at him.
"Max?" he said confused.
"Yeah, I think I'm okay now. You can't smell anything can you?"
"No, I started to worry. Well we should get a move on if we want to go see Zane before lunch."
With that they ran as fast as they could away from the motel.
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At about 11 they came upon an old brick colonial house.
"Zack, is this where Zane lives?"
"Yep, I just hope he hasn't gotten himself into too much trouble." He said emphasizing too.
"Knowing Zane, he probably started his room on fire." She said shaking with laughter.
When they reached the door Zack knocked.
A tall brunette came to the door and said,
"Good Morning, Riverwood residence. How may I help you?" she didn't look as though she thought it were a good morning.
Zack started, "Hi, um.is Grant around?" he said adding Zane's false name.
The lady looked at them with a look of disgust, "Yeah, just sec." She turned her back and yelled, "Grant! You have company, and how many times have I told you not to use your chemistry set in your bedroom." She added upon seeing him come down the stairs with black marks on his face.
"Sorry." He said and turned to Zack with a grin on his face, "Zack, my man. What's up? Oh, I see you do not go alone. Is this your lady friend?"
Zack gave him a look that meant if-you-say-another-word-I'm-seriously-going- to-kill-you!
Throwing his hands up in defeat he said, "I was just joking! I knew it was my baby sister Maxie. So how are you?" he asked when he had turned to Max giving her a big hug.
"Great! How are you, Grant?" she added with a little giggle.
"Ha Ha, very funny! I'm good!" he turned back to Zack, "So, how long are you staying this time?"
"We gotta leave by 3." Zack merely grunted.
Zane started thinking. Was that a flash of jealousy I saw spark through Zack's eye's when I hugged her? I think brother man's got a thing for baby sis.
"So, Max. Got any boyfriends?" he asked winking at her.
She looked at her feet solemnly, "No." she merely grunted.
"Oh, sorry. Didn't mean to make you sad." He then leaned over and hugged Max again. Then suddenly on instinct looked up to see that jealous look in Zack's eyes.
He release Max so suddenly she fell back, and would have fallen on her ass if Zack hadn't caught her.
Zane looked up at Zack, "Yo, bro. Come here I gotta talk to you quick."
Zack walked over to Zane and sat down as Max made her way down to the garden and sat on the pretty yellow bench, admiring the flowers around her. 'Actually she just wanted to be close enough to hear what they were talking about.'
After Max walked away Zane asked, "You got a thing for her don't you?"
"What?! I mean no!" he added quickly.
"You do too, now don't give me that bullshit."
"Okay, okay I do like her. But, I have the feeling she likes somebody else."
"Naw man. What you seeing is her looking at you, but you ain't realizing it because you in denial." He added as an afterthought.
"Really?"
"Yep! How about I talk to her."
Max couldn't believe what she was hearing. 'Zack, like me? No way in hell. He was so in love with his mission. How could he like her?'
She was so lost in thought when Zane walked up beside her and sat down, she didn't even notice.
"Maxie, do you have a crush on someone?"
"No!" she replied a little to quickly.
"I think you do," he added with a mischievous grin.
"Okay, I do. But, you don't know who!" she added returning his grin.
"Oh, I do. You in love with Zack over ain't you?"
"Am I that transparent?"
"No, it's just that I can feel what's going on between you two."
He grabbed her hand and led the way back to were Zack was standing.
"Max, we better get going. We gotta go check on Tinga."
When Max turned to have one final look at the beautiful garden she failed to see Zane give Zack two thumbs up grinning.
"Well, Grant. I'll see you around!" she said hugging him tightly.
Zack merely nodded while holding a grin that was so not him.
"See ya bro."
"Yep, don't forget to have a little fun. Let a little loose." He added knowing Zack really wanted Max and she in return wanted him just as bad.
With that Max and Zack set of to go see Tinga in Houston.
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Hope everyone liked this chapter! Please Review, I like to hear your critism and your praises.(mostly praises) but, it's all good, all the time. Enjoy!-ARI
