Ender: OK I am back. I would like to say Thank You so much to Rain Child who is helping me edit this. Also for giveing me pointers because I have no idea what I am doing. I just write. And Thank You to Ivan-Hammet who also reviewed. Ok well enough chat here is the story.
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Back at the Inn Garet and Ivan were sitting on some chairs discussing weather or not to go after Isaac. They were nearly crying. They were so filed with greif of what happened and filled with hatered toward the kiddnappers. It came as a best intrest to Isaac that they stay at the Inn because Isaac could probubly hide and sneak around with out them. Then The old lady from the front desk came in where a bright yellow dress and her hair tied up in a bun. She said in her extremly high voice, "Would you like some breckfast?" I van saind no thanks but Garet said, " I want 1 Bowl of oatmeal, 1 bowl of corn flakes, a giant stack of toast and a giant stack of walfels." The Old Lady said , wow Coming right up!" then she left. Ivan asked, "how can you eat that much with all of this going on?" He says, "I may be filled with greif but I can still eat. You can have some if you want." Ivan said OK just as the food arived. He took a peice of toast. -------------------- Isaac was back on the trail when he had his first monster encounter. It was a skull night. He Easly defeated it with his Gia Blade since he was so full of anger. The djinn just stood by and watched. Later on that day Flint asked Isaac, "Isaac, What if you can't find Mia? What are you going to do?" Isaac then says, "I will never give up. I will find nomatter what the cost." Then they walked into a town and Isaac asked the Mayor, " Have you seen two big guys and a girl about my age and my hight? He says in a stupid acent, " aahh yyyyyeeeeeeesssssss. They went that a wwwaaaaaayyyyy." and he points to the other end of town. Isaac thanks him and runs that way. Tonic says, " That guyy was weird," and rolls his eyes. Isaac snickers and says Ya.--------------------(This is Mia POV) "Let go of me! Put me down!" But the big guys don't says anything they haven't said anything since the found out she was useig psynergy and used a special type of stone to seal it. And they tied her dijnn to a tree. What had had happened to them? Had they been eaten? Then the first big guy says, "We make camp here." Later when she was tied against a tree and the guys fast asleep she was about to sleep when she saw Flint.
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Ender: Ok That is it for this chapter. I hope you like it. I think I fix the problem of the comments being to close to the story.And I have a request. I need names for the Big Guys. So if you read this please review and give me 2 really stupid names. Stupid counts! Also I have so much free time in the morning before I go to school that I can write a chapter every morning. Ok well Read and Review.
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Back at the Inn Garet and Ivan were sitting on some chairs discussing weather or not to go after Isaac. They were nearly crying. They were so filed with greif of what happened and filled with hatered toward the kiddnappers. It came as a best intrest to Isaac that they stay at the Inn because Isaac could probubly hide and sneak around with out them. Then The old lady from the front desk came in where a bright yellow dress and her hair tied up in a bun. She said in her extremly high voice, "Would you like some breckfast?" I van saind no thanks but Garet said, " I want 1 Bowl of oatmeal, 1 bowl of corn flakes, a giant stack of toast and a giant stack of walfels." The Old Lady said , wow Coming right up!" then she left. Ivan asked, "how can you eat that much with all of this going on?" He says, "I may be filled with greif but I can still eat. You can have some if you want." Ivan said OK just as the food arived. He took a peice of toast. -------------------- Isaac was back on the trail when he had his first monster encounter. It was a skull night. He Easly defeated it with his Gia Blade since he was so full of anger. The djinn just stood by and watched. Later on that day Flint asked Isaac, "Isaac, What if you can't find Mia? What are you going to do?" Isaac then says, "I will never give up. I will find nomatter what the cost." Then they walked into a town and Isaac asked the Mayor, " Have you seen two big guys and a girl about my age and my hight? He says in a stupid acent, " aahh yyyyyeeeeeeesssssss. They went that a wwwaaaaaayyyyy." and he points to the other end of town. Isaac thanks him and runs that way. Tonic says, " That guyy was weird," and rolls his eyes. Isaac snickers and says Ya.--------------------(This is Mia POV) "Let go of me! Put me down!" But the big guys don't says anything they haven't said anything since the found out she was useig psynergy and used a special type of stone to seal it. And they tied her dijnn to a tree. What had had happened to them? Had they been eaten? Then the first big guy says, "We make camp here." Later when she was tied against a tree and the guys fast asleep she was about to sleep when she saw Flint.
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Ender: Ok That is it for this chapter. I hope you like it. I think I fix the problem of the comments being to close to the story.And I have a request. I need names for the Big Guys. So if you read this please review and give me 2 really stupid names. Stupid counts! Also I have so much free time in the morning before I go to school that I can write a chapter every morning. Ok well Read and Review.