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Harry Potter and the Pokemon Wizard
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A Harry Potter Crossover
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A fanfic by Sheya
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Chapter 2
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Of Aunts and Cousins
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Note:: Disclaimer is at the beginning of the last chapter.
I typed up part of this chapter the other day and my stupid disk f---ed it up!!!!!! This chapter will be riddled with Spelling errors, I assure you that they will be corrected as soon as I can find the references to correct them with. And A few weeks ago my disk somehow changed the folder this story was in into a system folder.... I got really discouraged when that happened.
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Harry had gone to Diagon Alley to get his equipment for the school year, he had wanted to go by himself but his so-called family insisted on coming with him. When he got there he met his friends, Ron and Hermione. Luckily for Harry, Hermione's parents also came this year. When the Dursley's found out that the Grangers were Muggles they insisted on joining with them. Harry supposed that they wanted someone to complain to. The Grangers were gracious enough to volunteer to sidetrack the Dursleys and left Ron Harry and Hermione to their own devices.
He and his friends then proceeded to get money and supplies. After they had finished getting the bulk of their supplies Hermione explained that she would meet them at Quality Quiditch Supplies after she got a new set of school robes. When she rejoined them she dragged them off to see some strange sites that weren't there before she went to get her robes. As she was bringing them to see the sights she told them about a young man just about their age who had black hair, golden brown eyes, and could almost have been Harry's twin if it wasn't for the brown eyes and lack of scar. When they all got back to the clothing store she showed them first a strange bit of sidewalk that seemed to have been demolished in a lightning strike. And, secondly Draco Malfoy, sitting on a bench seemingly "shell stocked".
They watched Malfoy for a few seconds- then Harry suggested some ice cream so the headed towards Florian Fortescue's Ice-cream Parlor. There Harry got a shock of his own, he met his fathers long thought dead older sister Delia Ketchum and her son Ash, who looked remarkably like himself- except for eye color and lack of the scar. They also mat the creature-a Pokemon called Pikachu- Who destroyed the sidewalk and scared Malfoy junior.
"You're my... aunt- my father's... sister?"
"Yes. When I was young my late husband and I were Aurors we fought Voldemort and he got so pissed at us that we had to leave or we would have been captured or killed by him. The place we moved to had protections that are unbreakable for protecting us."
"Oh- but... why didn't you came back when he was defeated?"
"Ash was just a baby and there was an evil that we got involved in fighting at our new home. In fact the evil is still being fought... He is not nearly as deadly as Voldemort because he doesn't have the prejudices that Voldemort has but he does wish for world domination. However when Ash was six my husband was killed by that man, his name is Giovanni. At that time I retired to raise Ash, I am wealthy so I really don't need a job."
"But why...?"
"Harry not Owls or Scrying spells or anything else, except for Pidgy or another flying Pokemon, could have found us so I couldn't even get the Daily Prophet because they don't employ Pokemon their fees are way to expensive."
"Well you seem to be getting along." Lucius sneered.
"Lucius- you are an Idiot!" Delia snarled at him.
"YOU DARE!!!!"
"What are you gonna do? Run to daddy? Oh wait- I forgot... He's dead! Heero and I killed him." Delia turned towards Malfoy senior.
He turned red with rage. "You shouldn't have comeback, my Lord will hunt you down and finish the job your Giovanni started. Then he will kill your son."
"Che- Better people then this 'Voldemort' have tried and failed, he'll have to have something real special to beat me." ash stood up with Pikachu on his shoulder- she was sparking angrily. "So I suggest you leave before Pikachu teaches you the same lesson she taught your son."
Lucius turned and stalked away.
"Now that he is gone what kind of spells were there to protect you from being found?" Hermione the ever curious asked.
"Oh no spells just Pokemon. They protect their trainers and the people their trainers love."
Just after Delia answered Hermione, dear Petunia, Vernon, and Dudley Dursley came up to Harry screeching about the inconsiderate freaks that worked in the Alley.
Delia took one look at them and snorted. "Maybe if you didn't insult us we would be more considerate? 'Course that's just a suggestion."
"Who are you?" Vernon blustered turning red.
"I'm Delia Potter Ketchum, and you are?"
"Vernon Dursley, my wife Petunia, and son Dudley."
"Petunia? You're Lily's sister?" Delia looked at the woman surprised. "You're nothing like her."
"You're a Potter?"
"I am James's older sister."
"Then why didn't they send the brat to live with you?"
"I suppose that would be because they thought I was dead or if they didn't they couldn't find me." Delia sat down. "Of course if Harry wishes it I can remedy that situation."
"YES! And YES! Anything to get away for THEM!!!!" Harry yelled pointing at the Dursleys, although you could almost see the scorn dripping in the air when he said 'them'.
"Then we will all have to go to the Ministry of Magic and... Harry? Who placed you with Petunia?"
"Dumbledore."
"Then we will have to Owl him- Ash you newest friend will make her first delivery."
"Hai, Okasan." Ash turned to his Owl and freed her from her cage. "Well I guess you'll need to fly fast."
As Ash was getting the Owl- Delia wrote a note, she then tied it to the Owls leg, as she did she called out... "Mimey? I need you to teleport this owl to Hogsmead." She then turned to the owl. "When you get to Hogsmead bring to letter to Albus Dumbledore. After delivering return to the Leaky Cauldron."
The Owl hooted and flew to the Mr. Mime that had appeared at Delia's call. They both then disappeared.
"I still need a name for her." Ash Lamented.
"How about Athena?" Hermione suggested.
"Huh?"
"She was the Greek goddess of Wisdom and her symbol was an Owl."
"Great!! Thanks!." Ash jumped up and held out his hand in his classic Victory Pose. Hermione blinked, Harry stepped back and Ron stared.
"You should have more decorum." Petunia sneered.
"Che- what? A kid can't be happy anymore?"
"You freaks don't deserve to be happy." Vernon growled.
"Mou... you really hate us, ne? Well consider this- for at least every one of you that hate us there are one of us that hate you.... Now note that those of us that hate you have nothing against killing you... and they know where you live." Ash explained.
"In other words be nice 'cause you might one day run into someone who won't just be inconsiderate- he or she might be downright deadly." Delia clarified.
Petunia blanched, Vernon got purple, and Dudley squealed and hid behind his mother, or at least tried to.
Delia turned and looked towards the Leaky Cauldron. "Ahh- here comes Albus."
The man in question walked over to them. "So, Delia is back... I told those fools that you weren't dead. But since I couldn't find you the point was moot."
"Yes- well I'd like to take Harry in over the summers."
"The problem with that is that Harry is protected at the Dursleys because of his mother's sacrifice. She died to protect him."
"For what it's worth- James died for his son as well. Or is he still alive and you are hiding him?"
Albus stared at Delia for a few moments. "I never thought of it that way. With the two-fold protection... that is why the spell backfired on Voldemort."
"You're catching on. Now I'd really like Harry to stay with me."
Meanwhile the magical kids were watching. "Woah... She's..." Ron trailed off.
"Mom is very goo at what she does- even if she is playing the airhead. Harry be ready to be embarrassed when you come live with us. She's real good at that too."
"Well the only thing that the Dursleys ever do is insult me so embarrassment will be a nice change." Harry smiled at his newfound cousin.
"Ahhh. I think we're going somewhere."
Delia nodded to Ash. "Harry, your friends need to either inform their parents that they are coming with us or return to their parents sides."
Ron and Hermione looked at each other then noticed Ron's mother and siblings and Hermione's Parents, watching from across the street. They both ran over and explained what happened asking if they could go with Harry. However permission was denied and they shook their heads and called "Good Luck" to harry. He nodded at them and joined Dumbledore, Delia, the Dursleys, and Ash as they headed out to the Leaky Cauldron.
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As they left the Ministry; Ash, Delia, and Harry were talking to each other.
"So, when will get my stuff from them?"
"We can go today, Ash and I are staying at the Leaky Cauldron. I'll get a new room and you and Ash can share one. Petunia, we will follow you as soon as I rent a car. So, where is the nearest car rental?"
"Over there." Vernon pointed down the block.
"Good." Delia walked over to the place walked inside and a few minutes later came out and a car was delivered to her at the curb.
"Ash, Harry- come we will follow Vernon."
"Delia, before you go would you consider taking a position at Hogwarts as the Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher? If I don' find one soon the Ministry is going to force someone on us."
"Well I don't need to go home yet- and it would be nice to be near Ash.... Ok Albus I'll do it."
"Thank you Delia... the Ministry has succeeded in scaring off everyone else I've tried to hire. They want this person to be the teacher."
"Ah, I wish for the book 'Dark Arts Defense: Defending for the inexperienced'. It should be in the Bookstore."
"Fine, I will send out Owl's to inform the students."
"Then I will see you at the beginning of the school year."
Delia, Ash, and Harry followed the Dursleys to collect Harry's possessions. Then they returned to the Leaky Cauldron, Delia getting an adjacent room for herself.
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Ryu the Weredragon 2003-11-06 Ch1
Come on! Don't leave us hanging!
This story was getting really good!
I didn't even need to beg to get you to have Pikachu stay with Ash.
The hanging has ended for chapter 2 at least you're gonna have to hang a bit for Chapters 3-9 though. And Ash and Pikachu are like Milk and cookies you can't have one without the other. ^ . ^
PaigeGirl-nee 2003-10-09 Ch1
...you...you cant whrite only one chapter! Continue, or face the fury of my pencle! *holds up pencle*
I would never stop a story after only one chapter... well that is unless it is a oneshot...
Natasha 2003-10-02 Ch1
This is good! You really should continue!
I know it's been awhile since you updated but, try. I know you can do it. Deep down this story is pounding to get out and explore the world.
Yeah- and it would have been out sooner if my disk hadn't turned the folder that has all my Harry Potter fics into a system folder a few weeks ago.... And it would have been out last week if my disk hadn't messed up the file that the story was in....
KiAnson 2003-09-30 Ch1
Would you please write more of this story? Please, please!
Yeah And I'll tell you that it's up next time I see you which should be ummm Tuesday ^ . ^
Jckidsmart 2003-09-20 Ch1
please update!
Done
Catalyst of Light 2003-08-14 Ch1
Great Story!!
Please Keep Writing!!
I will always finish any fic I post.
Alabastir 2003-07-14 Ch1
g
^ . ^
Firehedgehog 2003-06-20 Ch1
I like this story, better update soon.
Ja ne
Ohhh I have gotten a review from someone whose fics I have enjoyed for- heh it must be almost two years now.... This is soooo cooool I just love your Ranma/Nights crossover.
Ian 2003-06-06 Ch1
this is great! ^_^ I luv HP and PKMN too!
I love them too- but I hate when people write that someone goes to another reality just for them to meet up when it would be simpler to write them just being on different islands.
lastchildof89 2003-06-06 Ch1
The story is good! You should continue. The Pokemon/Harry Potter crossover is cool. But you should let Pikachu fry that bloody Malfoy's arse!! ^_^
I think that that honor will go to Charizard... call it Norbert's payback for him getting Harry and co in trouble that time... I think Hargrid will LOVE Charizard don't you?
Gina 2003-06-06 Ch1
HERMIONE. HER-MI-ONE.
Why- yes- I believe that I got the idea when the first person told me that.
Professor Puddy Tat 2003-06-06 Ch1
Very Nice job... I am a fan of both, and I hope to see more
Thank you I just love to please. ^ . ^
The Kuro no Tenshi 2003-06-06 Ch1
hm.. that was different... intriguing, but different
I love to be different... find a new way to do something old or just stare something new ^ . ^ 'The Kuro no Tenshi'? The 'Angel of Black'? Or The 'Black Angel'?
Caspian Raider 2003-06-06 Ch1
Gr. This is kinda bad. Needs some action.
Grrrr didn't I open with a Pokemon Battle? Didn't Malfoy almost get fried? Didn't Delia have a confrontation with the father? What more could you ask for?
(Unknown) 2003-06-06 Ch1
This is so gay!
Well you know what they say if you don't like it don't Read/Eat/Drink/Look at it.
readingreak742 2003-06-06 Ch1
dude? its spelled H-E-R-M-I-O-N-E not...wutever way u spelled it.
Lady! And thank you I had thought I checked but I guess I didn't It has been fixed for quite a while... changed it the day after I got the FF.net review notices.
Chibi Chi 2003-06-06 Ch1
This is ok, but you badly need at least another chapter soon, to give us all the flavour of what's in store. With a little imagination, I think the crossover can work very well. It might be an idea to let something happen to Snape, with Ash to blame ( supposedly ) which resuts in Harry, Hermione and the others forming a strong alliance with Ash. With his different supplementary powers he could use them on Malfoy and his sidekicks, but get into even more trouble and face being expelled. I know you will have your own ideas, but every bit helps! Chibi Chi
I have this all planned out.... Except I can't decide if I should put romance in and If I do who would Delia romance? I have an Idea but I don't know if it will work.
Harry Potter and the Pokemon Wizard
~~~
A Harry Potter Crossover
~~~~~
A fanfic by Sheya
~~~~~~~
Chapter 2
~~~~~~~~~~
Of Aunts and Cousins
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Note:: Disclaimer is at the beginning of the last chapter.
I typed up part of this chapter the other day and my stupid disk f---ed it up!!!!!! This chapter will be riddled with Spelling errors, I assure you that they will be corrected as soon as I can find the references to correct them with. And A few weeks ago my disk somehow changed the folder this story was in into a system folder.... I got really discouraged when that happened.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Harry had gone to Diagon Alley to get his equipment for the school year, he had wanted to go by himself but his so-called family insisted on coming with him. When he got there he met his friends, Ron and Hermione. Luckily for Harry, Hermione's parents also came this year. When the Dursley's found out that the Grangers were Muggles they insisted on joining with them. Harry supposed that they wanted someone to complain to. The Grangers were gracious enough to volunteer to sidetrack the Dursleys and left Ron Harry and Hermione to their own devices.
He and his friends then proceeded to get money and supplies. After they had finished getting the bulk of their supplies Hermione explained that she would meet them at Quality Quiditch Supplies after she got a new set of school robes. When she rejoined them she dragged them off to see some strange sites that weren't there before she went to get her robes. As she was bringing them to see the sights she told them about a young man just about their age who had black hair, golden brown eyes, and could almost have been Harry's twin if it wasn't for the brown eyes and lack of scar. When they all got back to the clothing store she showed them first a strange bit of sidewalk that seemed to have been demolished in a lightning strike. And, secondly Draco Malfoy, sitting on a bench seemingly "shell stocked".
They watched Malfoy for a few seconds- then Harry suggested some ice cream so the headed towards Florian Fortescue's Ice-cream Parlor. There Harry got a shock of his own, he met his fathers long thought dead older sister Delia Ketchum and her son Ash, who looked remarkably like himself- except for eye color and lack of the scar. They also mat the creature-a Pokemon called Pikachu- Who destroyed the sidewalk and scared Malfoy junior.
"You're my... aunt- my father's... sister?"
"Yes. When I was young my late husband and I were Aurors we fought Voldemort and he got so pissed at us that we had to leave or we would have been captured or killed by him. The place we moved to had protections that are unbreakable for protecting us."
"Oh- but... why didn't you came back when he was defeated?"
"Ash was just a baby and there was an evil that we got involved in fighting at our new home. In fact the evil is still being fought... He is not nearly as deadly as Voldemort because he doesn't have the prejudices that Voldemort has but he does wish for world domination. However when Ash was six my husband was killed by that man, his name is Giovanni. At that time I retired to raise Ash, I am wealthy so I really don't need a job."
"But why...?"
"Harry not Owls or Scrying spells or anything else, except for Pidgy or another flying Pokemon, could have found us so I couldn't even get the Daily Prophet because they don't employ Pokemon their fees are way to expensive."
"Well you seem to be getting along." Lucius sneered.
"Lucius- you are an Idiot!" Delia snarled at him.
"YOU DARE!!!!"
"What are you gonna do? Run to daddy? Oh wait- I forgot... He's dead! Heero and I killed him." Delia turned towards Malfoy senior.
He turned red with rage. "You shouldn't have comeback, my Lord will hunt you down and finish the job your Giovanni started. Then he will kill your son."
"Che- Better people then this 'Voldemort' have tried and failed, he'll have to have something real special to beat me." ash stood up with Pikachu on his shoulder- she was sparking angrily. "So I suggest you leave before Pikachu teaches you the same lesson she taught your son."
Lucius turned and stalked away.
"Now that he is gone what kind of spells were there to protect you from being found?" Hermione the ever curious asked.
"Oh no spells just Pokemon. They protect their trainers and the people their trainers love."
Just after Delia answered Hermione, dear Petunia, Vernon, and Dudley Dursley came up to Harry screeching about the inconsiderate freaks that worked in the Alley.
Delia took one look at them and snorted. "Maybe if you didn't insult us we would be more considerate? 'Course that's just a suggestion."
"Who are you?" Vernon blustered turning red.
"I'm Delia Potter Ketchum, and you are?"
"Vernon Dursley, my wife Petunia, and son Dudley."
"Petunia? You're Lily's sister?" Delia looked at the woman surprised. "You're nothing like her."
"You're a Potter?"
"I am James's older sister."
"Then why didn't they send the brat to live with you?"
"I suppose that would be because they thought I was dead or if they didn't they couldn't find me." Delia sat down. "Of course if Harry wishes it I can remedy that situation."
"YES! And YES! Anything to get away for THEM!!!!" Harry yelled pointing at the Dursleys, although you could almost see the scorn dripping in the air when he said 'them'.
"Then we will all have to go to the Ministry of Magic and... Harry? Who placed you with Petunia?"
"Dumbledore."
"Then we will have to Owl him- Ash you newest friend will make her first delivery."
"Hai, Okasan." Ash turned to his Owl and freed her from her cage. "Well I guess you'll need to fly fast."
As Ash was getting the Owl- Delia wrote a note, she then tied it to the Owls leg, as she did she called out... "Mimey? I need you to teleport this owl to Hogsmead." She then turned to the owl. "When you get to Hogsmead bring to letter to Albus Dumbledore. After delivering return to the Leaky Cauldron."
The Owl hooted and flew to the Mr. Mime that had appeared at Delia's call. They both then disappeared.
"I still need a name for her." Ash Lamented.
"How about Athena?" Hermione suggested.
"Huh?"
"She was the Greek goddess of Wisdom and her symbol was an Owl."
"Great!! Thanks!." Ash jumped up and held out his hand in his classic Victory Pose. Hermione blinked, Harry stepped back and Ron stared.
"You should have more decorum." Petunia sneered.
"Che- what? A kid can't be happy anymore?"
"You freaks don't deserve to be happy." Vernon growled.
"Mou... you really hate us, ne? Well consider this- for at least every one of you that hate us there are one of us that hate you.... Now note that those of us that hate you have nothing against killing you... and they know where you live." Ash explained.
"In other words be nice 'cause you might one day run into someone who won't just be inconsiderate- he or she might be downright deadly." Delia clarified.
Petunia blanched, Vernon got purple, and Dudley squealed and hid behind his mother, or at least tried to.
Delia turned and looked towards the Leaky Cauldron. "Ahh- here comes Albus."
The man in question walked over to them. "So, Delia is back... I told those fools that you weren't dead. But since I couldn't find you the point was moot."
"Yes- well I'd like to take Harry in over the summers."
"The problem with that is that Harry is protected at the Dursleys because of his mother's sacrifice. She died to protect him."
"For what it's worth- James died for his son as well. Or is he still alive and you are hiding him?"
Albus stared at Delia for a few moments. "I never thought of it that way. With the two-fold protection... that is why the spell backfired on Voldemort."
"You're catching on. Now I'd really like Harry to stay with me."
Meanwhile the magical kids were watching. "Woah... She's..." Ron trailed off.
"Mom is very goo at what she does- even if she is playing the airhead. Harry be ready to be embarrassed when you come live with us. She's real good at that too."
"Well the only thing that the Dursleys ever do is insult me so embarrassment will be a nice change." Harry smiled at his newfound cousin.
"Ahhh. I think we're going somewhere."
Delia nodded to Ash. "Harry, your friends need to either inform their parents that they are coming with us or return to their parents sides."
Ron and Hermione looked at each other then noticed Ron's mother and siblings and Hermione's Parents, watching from across the street. They both ran over and explained what happened asking if they could go with Harry. However permission was denied and they shook their heads and called "Good Luck" to harry. He nodded at them and joined Dumbledore, Delia, the Dursleys, and Ash as they headed out to the Leaky Cauldron.
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As they left the Ministry; Ash, Delia, and Harry were talking to each other.
"So, when will get my stuff from them?"
"We can go today, Ash and I are staying at the Leaky Cauldron. I'll get a new room and you and Ash can share one. Petunia, we will follow you as soon as I rent a car. So, where is the nearest car rental?"
"Over there." Vernon pointed down the block.
"Good." Delia walked over to the place walked inside and a few minutes later came out and a car was delivered to her at the curb.
"Ash, Harry- come we will follow Vernon."
"Delia, before you go would you consider taking a position at Hogwarts as the Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher? If I don' find one soon the Ministry is going to force someone on us."
"Well I don't need to go home yet- and it would be nice to be near Ash.... Ok Albus I'll do it."
"Thank you Delia... the Ministry has succeeded in scaring off everyone else I've tried to hire. They want this person to be the teacher."
"Ah, I wish for the book 'Dark Arts Defense: Defending for the inexperienced'. It should be in the Bookstore."
"Fine, I will send out Owl's to inform the students."
"Then I will see you at the beginning of the school year."
Delia, Ash, and Harry followed the Dursleys to collect Harry's possessions. Then they returned to the Leaky Cauldron, Delia getting an adjacent room for herself.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Ryu the Weredragon 2003-11-06 Ch1
Come on! Don't leave us hanging!
This story was getting really good!
I didn't even need to beg to get you to have Pikachu stay with Ash.
The hanging has ended for chapter 2 at least you're gonna have to hang a bit for Chapters 3-9 though. And Ash and Pikachu are like Milk and cookies you can't have one without the other. ^ . ^
PaigeGirl-nee 2003-10-09 Ch1
...you...you cant whrite only one chapter! Continue, or face the fury of my pencle! *holds up pencle*
I would never stop a story after only one chapter... well that is unless it is a oneshot...
Natasha 2003-10-02 Ch1
This is good! You really should continue!
I know it's been awhile since you updated but, try. I know you can do it. Deep down this story is pounding to get out and explore the world.
Yeah- and it would have been out sooner if my disk hadn't turned the folder that has all my Harry Potter fics into a system folder a few weeks ago.... And it would have been out last week if my disk hadn't messed up the file that the story was in....
KiAnson 2003-09-30 Ch1
Would you please write more of this story? Please, please!
Yeah And I'll tell you that it's up next time I see you which should be ummm Tuesday ^ . ^
Jckidsmart 2003-09-20 Ch1
please update!
Done
Catalyst of Light 2003-08-14 Ch1
Great Story!!
Please Keep Writing!!
I will always finish any fic I post.
Alabastir 2003-07-14 Ch1
g
^ . ^
Firehedgehog 2003-06-20 Ch1
I like this story, better update soon.
Ja ne
Ohhh I have gotten a review from someone whose fics I have enjoyed for- heh it must be almost two years now.... This is soooo cooool I just love your Ranma/Nights crossover.
Ian 2003-06-06 Ch1
this is great! ^_^ I luv HP and PKMN too!
I love them too- but I hate when people write that someone goes to another reality just for them to meet up when it would be simpler to write them just being on different islands.
lastchildof89 2003-06-06 Ch1
The story is good! You should continue. The Pokemon/Harry Potter crossover is cool. But you should let Pikachu fry that bloody Malfoy's arse!! ^_^
I think that that honor will go to Charizard... call it Norbert's payback for him getting Harry and co in trouble that time... I think Hargrid will LOVE Charizard don't you?
Gina 2003-06-06 Ch1
HERMIONE. HER-MI-ONE.
Why- yes- I believe that I got the idea when the first person told me that.
Professor Puddy Tat 2003-06-06 Ch1
Very Nice job... I am a fan of both, and I hope to see more
Thank you I just love to please. ^ . ^
The Kuro no Tenshi 2003-06-06 Ch1
hm.. that was different... intriguing, but different
I love to be different... find a new way to do something old or just stare something new ^ . ^ 'The Kuro no Tenshi'? The 'Angel of Black'? Or The 'Black Angel'?
Caspian Raider 2003-06-06 Ch1
Gr. This is kinda bad. Needs some action.
Grrrr didn't I open with a Pokemon Battle? Didn't Malfoy almost get fried? Didn't Delia have a confrontation with the father? What more could you ask for?
(Unknown) 2003-06-06 Ch1
This is so gay!
Well you know what they say if you don't like it don't Read/Eat/Drink/Look at it.
readingreak742 2003-06-06 Ch1
dude? its spelled H-E-R-M-I-O-N-E not...wutever way u spelled it.
Lady! And thank you I had thought I checked but I guess I didn't It has been fixed for quite a while... changed it the day after I got the FF.net review notices.
Chibi Chi 2003-06-06 Ch1
This is ok, but you badly need at least another chapter soon, to give us all the flavour of what's in store. With a little imagination, I think the crossover can work very well. It might be an idea to let something happen to Snape, with Ash to blame ( supposedly ) which resuts in Harry, Hermione and the others forming a strong alliance with Ash. With his different supplementary powers he could use them on Malfoy and his sidekicks, but get into even more trouble and face being expelled. I know you will have your own ideas, but every bit helps! Chibi Chi
I have this all planned out.... Except I can't decide if I should put romance in and If I do who would Delia romance? I have an Idea but I don't know if it will work.