Hermionegreen~ There will be mainly hints and flash backs as to the time in
the vortex, however if my muses continue to feed me the story I may write a
side story to tell it.
Dreamonforever~ When writing stories like this one it is next to impossible to keep Harry and dumbledore in character. This is mainly because JK writes Harry as a golden child and Dumbledore as the wise old man who can do no wrong.IMHO
Avalon~Harry has done nothing to merit being expelled(so far). He has already bought Diagon Alley and it's land, as well as knockturn's. it would be a wasted effort for him however to buy the HQ for the OotP repeatedly, unless they only stuck to wizard populated areas.
ginnynharrysecretlove~ What's your reason dor him being a bastard? Mines that he has kept so much info from harry that in the long run it hurts more then helps Harry.
Alex~ Sure!
shdurrani~Sure!
Virusgod~ me too! I will! and thanks.
Ian~ I've never been to sure on how it worked, sorry bout the screwup. The "poorer as a church mouse" is a joke, and I brought Sirius back because he didn't deserve to die in such a way as well as that he'll help Harry emotionally. Losing the father figure in yourlife is a mighty blow to a person, so what would you do to get him back?
Bone Crusher~read the next chapter. I can't however buy the ministry as they hold their own deeds as well as it would let them know of HArry's plans.
Lady M.E.L.~ Thank you very much, and heres the next chapter.
Andrew D.B.~ I refuse to give Harry "Special Powers", the power he has is his own. Anyone can learn Ki since all have it, I just got him there in hopes of bringing it to Harry Potter world. not to mention how getting you Ki stronger would affect Magic since both are inside a person. He didn't learn he could, he took a risk. After all if he was wrong he could just chuck Kreacher in there anyways? The veil leads to ? My idea is that it would suck the life force out of the person throuwn through, and depending on how strong the person was determines how long the person lasts before they croak. Dumbledore's, to me anyway, is acting like a Lightside Voldemort to me. He's been controling Harry since his parent's were killed, and if you read between the lines in the book you'll see that harry is abused. Anyone who let's something like that happen is an ass in my books. Harry isn't trying to control everything, he's trying to right wrongs. Something he got from his teacher in ki usage.
Me222~ I don't know if IT is the same as apparition, but I do know that Harry doesn't know how to apparate.
Sweetkitty~ Thanks, and here's more.
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"I'm WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?" Sirius yelled.
"Poorer than a church mouse, you've been declared dead. Your will was read and inacted." Harry said, still a bit surprised he'd managed to get the person he considered his father figure back. "But, now that you're back I'll just get you access to mine. It would save us alot of problems that way, although if you want to know why it'll have to wait. Feel like going home?"
"Yeah," Sirius got out around a yawn."I feel like I could sleep for days."
"You probably will. That thing was sucking out you life force, so it'll probably be a few days before you're back to normal." Harry explained, rubbing the arm he stuck into the veil. He figured he'd have to power up before it returned to normal again.
"Really? Felt like I was taking a nap." Sirius said, shocked.
"Harry? Could we go back now?" Ginny said, slipping an arm around Harry's waist. Hermione's, Ron's, and Sirius' eyebrows shot up at Ginny's move, but Harry just wrapped an arm around her shoulder.
"Gather 'round, folks!" Harry drawled. Once everyone was in contact he IT'd everyone back to the manor's dining room. "Sirius, you're mother would like to speak with you." Harry told Sirius as soon as he was done. Harry grinned as he realized what was going to happen.
"Alright," Sirius said, his voice resigned. Harry listened as Sirius greeted his mother.
"SIRIUS!!! Oh I knew that boy was lying! He told me you were dead!" Mrs. Black yelled in relief.
"He didn't lie, mother. Though why you care is beyond me."
"You did die! WHO?! Who dares kill a Black! And How dare you think I don't care! I love you! I just can't understand how you can follow those blind idiots that call themselves the Light side!" Mrs. Black screamed in disbelief.
"Bella killed me, mum. She shot a spell that pushed me into the veil in the ministry. And I followed them because I was friends with those on it."
"BELLA! WHY THAT NO GOOD, LOW DOWN CHILD! IF I WERE STILL ALIVE I"D BEAT HER TO WITHIN AN INCH OF HER LIFE!" Mrs. Black screamed, loud enough to shake the walls.
Harry ushered everyone into the kitchen, enjoying the shocked look on Mrs. Weasley's face when she saw him.
"HARRY" Mrs. Weasley yelled, before wrapping him up in what would be a bone crushing hug to anyone who hadn't undergone the training he had.
"Hi, Mrs. Weasley," Harry said, genuine affection in his voice. "Not to be rude or anything, but could you set me down?"
"Ooh of course, dear," Mrs. Weasley said. "My, you look splendid. I see those Muggles finally started feeding you right?"
"No, not really." Harry said, falshing back to a memory of his teacher's home.
~Flashback~
"My goodness, he's thin as a rail!" Chichi said, dragging Harry into her home. "He can continue training later, Goku."
~end~
Harry remembered the mountains of food the woman had put in front of him. Chi chi had all but shoveled it down his throat, the only thing that had kept him from looking like Dudley was Goku and Vegeta's training.
~Flashback~
"5006, 5007," Harry counted off, annoyed at the twin weights on his back.
"You know, Vegeta." Goku said, from his perch on Harry's lower back. "I never thought of this as a way to make friends with you."
"Oh shut it, you great boy scout!" Vegeta growled, though there was no malice in his voice.
"5008, 5009,"
~end~
Harry grinned widely, the house elves were gonna love him.
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Sorry for such a short installment folks but my muses are pounding me over the head with a different story.
Dreamonforever~ When writing stories like this one it is next to impossible to keep Harry and dumbledore in character. This is mainly because JK writes Harry as a golden child and Dumbledore as the wise old man who can do no wrong.IMHO
Avalon~Harry has done nothing to merit being expelled(so far). He has already bought Diagon Alley and it's land, as well as knockturn's. it would be a wasted effort for him however to buy the HQ for the OotP repeatedly, unless they only stuck to wizard populated areas.
ginnynharrysecretlove~ What's your reason dor him being a bastard? Mines that he has kept so much info from harry that in the long run it hurts more then helps Harry.
Alex~ Sure!
shdurrani~Sure!
Virusgod~ me too! I will! and thanks.
Ian~ I've never been to sure on how it worked, sorry bout the screwup. The "poorer as a church mouse" is a joke, and I brought Sirius back because he didn't deserve to die in such a way as well as that he'll help Harry emotionally. Losing the father figure in yourlife is a mighty blow to a person, so what would you do to get him back?
Bone Crusher~read the next chapter. I can't however buy the ministry as they hold their own deeds as well as it would let them know of HArry's plans.
Lady M.E.L.~ Thank you very much, and heres the next chapter.
Andrew D.B.~ I refuse to give Harry "Special Powers", the power he has is his own. Anyone can learn Ki since all have it, I just got him there in hopes of bringing it to Harry Potter world. not to mention how getting you Ki stronger would affect Magic since both are inside a person. He didn't learn he could, he took a risk. After all if he was wrong he could just chuck Kreacher in there anyways? The veil leads to ? My idea is that it would suck the life force out of the person throuwn through, and depending on how strong the person was determines how long the person lasts before they croak. Dumbledore's, to me anyway, is acting like a Lightside Voldemort to me. He's been controling Harry since his parent's were killed, and if you read between the lines in the book you'll see that harry is abused. Anyone who let's something like that happen is an ass in my books. Harry isn't trying to control everything, he's trying to right wrongs. Something he got from his teacher in ki usage.
Me222~ I don't know if IT is the same as apparition, but I do know that Harry doesn't know how to apparate.
Sweetkitty~ Thanks, and here's more.
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"I'm WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?" Sirius yelled.
"Poorer than a church mouse, you've been declared dead. Your will was read and inacted." Harry said, still a bit surprised he'd managed to get the person he considered his father figure back. "But, now that you're back I'll just get you access to mine. It would save us alot of problems that way, although if you want to know why it'll have to wait. Feel like going home?"
"Yeah," Sirius got out around a yawn."I feel like I could sleep for days."
"You probably will. That thing was sucking out you life force, so it'll probably be a few days before you're back to normal." Harry explained, rubbing the arm he stuck into the veil. He figured he'd have to power up before it returned to normal again.
"Really? Felt like I was taking a nap." Sirius said, shocked.
"Harry? Could we go back now?" Ginny said, slipping an arm around Harry's waist. Hermione's, Ron's, and Sirius' eyebrows shot up at Ginny's move, but Harry just wrapped an arm around her shoulder.
"Gather 'round, folks!" Harry drawled. Once everyone was in contact he IT'd everyone back to the manor's dining room. "Sirius, you're mother would like to speak with you." Harry told Sirius as soon as he was done. Harry grinned as he realized what was going to happen.
"Alright," Sirius said, his voice resigned. Harry listened as Sirius greeted his mother.
"SIRIUS!!! Oh I knew that boy was lying! He told me you were dead!" Mrs. Black yelled in relief.
"He didn't lie, mother. Though why you care is beyond me."
"You did die! WHO?! Who dares kill a Black! And How dare you think I don't care! I love you! I just can't understand how you can follow those blind idiots that call themselves the Light side!" Mrs. Black screamed in disbelief.
"Bella killed me, mum. She shot a spell that pushed me into the veil in the ministry. And I followed them because I was friends with those on it."
"BELLA! WHY THAT NO GOOD, LOW DOWN CHILD! IF I WERE STILL ALIVE I"D BEAT HER TO WITHIN AN INCH OF HER LIFE!" Mrs. Black screamed, loud enough to shake the walls.
Harry ushered everyone into the kitchen, enjoying the shocked look on Mrs. Weasley's face when she saw him.
"HARRY" Mrs. Weasley yelled, before wrapping him up in what would be a bone crushing hug to anyone who hadn't undergone the training he had.
"Hi, Mrs. Weasley," Harry said, genuine affection in his voice. "Not to be rude or anything, but could you set me down?"
"Ooh of course, dear," Mrs. Weasley said. "My, you look splendid. I see those Muggles finally started feeding you right?"
"No, not really." Harry said, falshing back to a memory of his teacher's home.
~Flashback~
"My goodness, he's thin as a rail!" Chichi said, dragging Harry into her home. "He can continue training later, Goku."
~end~
Harry remembered the mountains of food the woman had put in front of him. Chi chi had all but shoveled it down his throat, the only thing that had kept him from looking like Dudley was Goku and Vegeta's training.
~Flashback~
"5006, 5007," Harry counted off, annoyed at the twin weights on his back.
"You know, Vegeta." Goku said, from his perch on Harry's lower back. "I never thought of this as a way to make friends with you."
"Oh shut it, you great boy scout!" Vegeta growled, though there was no malice in his voice.
"5008, 5009,"
~end~
Harry grinned widely, the house elves were gonna love him.
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Sorry for such a short installment folks but my muses are pounding me over the head with a different story.