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they were mine. Thank you EvilStrawberry for your review I am happy you
liked it. Here is chapter 3 I don't know how good it is but I am trying. I
know you r supposed to indent when another person speaks but my computer
has a spaz attack *looks at the weird computer* well please review everyone
when u finish.
When Alanna, Gary, Jon, and Raoul walked through the gates that separated the palace from the city they headed towards the Dancing Dove where they would find George. They had changed out of their palace clothes before they left so that now they looked just like city people. They walked through the doors of the pub and saw George sitting in his usual spot and Alanna walked over to him while Jon, Raoul, and Gary went to the bar to get something to drink.
"Hi lass" George said to her "I was hoping you would come to visit for the holiday. Is Jon, Gary, and Raoul with you?" he looked around for them and spotting them at the bar turned back to face Alanna. "Well come on lass lets go visit with our friends." They headed off to see the others.
Jon was the first to spot them coming and he poked Raoul and Gary to turn around. Gary who was flirting with a pretty girl who worked there told her he had to go and he would find her later. She nodded and walked off to a nearby table to get what those people wanted.
"Hi George," Jon said to him "what are we going to do today? We were bored up there and well you normally are more fun than we are." Jon gave him a small smile and then turned to Alanna and winked. Alanna just rolled her eyes.
"Well I thought you might like to meet some new friends of mine they just came from the Hill Country and they asked to stay here for awhile. I don't know if I trust them or not I think they may be spies of some sort but they have done some good stuff for me. My Gift doesn't let me watch them they are protected by magic of some sort which is suspicious but I can't do nothin' about it. Come, you can meet them."
Alanna was ready to meet these new people if they were spies she would help George and she knew Gary, Jon, and Raoul were thinking the same thing. George was a good friend to all of them and Alanna knew that they trusted him and he trusted them otherwise he wouldn't have said what he had.
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I will write chapter four soon I promise I already have it all planned out. Please keep those reviews coming I really appreciate them. You know you want to review. I know you are looking longingly at that purple button saying you want to push it and review this wonderful amazing story. *smiles at you* I know you enjoyed it bye bye for now my friends.
When Alanna, Gary, Jon, and Raoul walked through the gates that separated the palace from the city they headed towards the Dancing Dove where they would find George. They had changed out of their palace clothes before they left so that now they looked just like city people. They walked through the doors of the pub and saw George sitting in his usual spot and Alanna walked over to him while Jon, Raoul, and Gary went to the bar to get something to drink.
"Hi lass" George said to her "I was hoping you would come to visit for the holiday. Is Jon, Gary, and Raoul with you?" he looked around for them and spotting them at the bar turned back to face Alanna. "Well come on lass lets go visit with our friends." They headed off to see the others.
Jon was the first to spot them coming and he poked Raoul and Gary to turn around. Gary who was flirting with a pretty girl who worked there told her he had to go and he would find her later. She nodded and walked off to a nearby table to get what those people wanted.
"Hi George," Jon said to him "what are we going to do today? We were bored up there and well you normally are more fun than we are." Jon gave him a small smile and then turned to Alanna and winked. Alanna just rolled her eyes.
"Well I thought you might like to meet some new friends of mine they just came from the Hill Country and they asked to stay here for awhile. I don't know if I trust them or not I think they may be spies of some sort but they have done some good stuff for me. My Gift doesn't let me watch them they are protected by magic of some sort which is suspicious but I can't do nothin' about it. Come, you can meet them."
Alanna was ready to meet these new people if they were spies she would help George and she knew Gary, Jon, and Raoul were thinking the same thing. George was a good friend to all of them and Alanna knew that they trusted him and he trusted them otherwise he wouldn't have said what he had.
END Ch 3
I will write chapter four soon I promise I already have it all planned out. Please keep those reviews coming I really appreciate them. You know you want to review. I know you are looking longingly at that purple button saying you want to push it and review this wonderful amazing story. *smiles at you* I know you enjoyed it bye bye for now my friends.