A/N Hi! I'm actually writing a poem! O.o Sorry if it's kinda bad but this
is my first poem on ff.net! AND PLEASE NO FLAMES! CRITICICING FLAMES ARE
OKAY!
Betrayal
By Yukiko (that's my Japanese name)
An arrow pierced through the night
Cutting the wind, the night, my heart, my soul
Leaving no blood but a hole
Betrayal
I remember the day of past
When I looked at you with pathetic eyes
Never knowing you will make me meet my demise
Betrayal
I ran through the darkness of my soul
Spreading flames wherever I go
Glaring eyes ice cold
Betrayal
An arrow pierced through the night
Cutting the wind, the night, my heart, my soul
Leaving no blood but a hole
But I wasn't the only one who met my demise
Betrayal
A/N So what do you think? I know it sound really bad but I just wanted to
post it. Please review and tell me what you think and what I can improve!
Well ja matte ne minna-san!
is my first poem on ff.net! AND PLEASE NO FLAMES! CRITICICING FLAMES ARE
OKAY!
Betrayal
By Yukiko (that's my Japanese name)
An arrow pierced through the night
Cutting the wind, the night, my heart, my soul
Leaving no blood but a hole
Betrayal
I remember the day of past
When I looked at you with pathetic eyes
Never knowing you will make me meet my demise
Betrayal
I ran through the darkness of my soul
Spreading flames wherever I go
Glaring eyes ice cold
Betrayal
An arrow pierced through the night
Cutting the wind, the night, my heart, my soul
Leaving no blood but a hole
But I wasn't the only one who met my demise
Betrayal
A/N So what do you think? I know it sound really bad but I just wanted to
post it. Please review and tell me what you think and what I can improve!
Well ja matte ne minna-san!
