LittlePuppyDog, you're so funny... and thanx for that tad bit of info.
Bruised phoenix thanx for that big long review. Quite enjoyable and your boyfriend sounds absolutely lovely! Hahaha....quite so... but who knows what'll happen to yukari... dun dun dun... well I do.... u_u
Ah my, I don't know... um, yeah I have a research paper due tomorrow that I haven't started yet so I really shouldn't be.... Sitting here staring at meh keyboard so here's the last of it. It might sound a tad bit corny but I like it.
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Chapter 9
George shoved Arashi's body off of him, letting the gun fall out of his hand, all thoughts of possession out of his head. Arashi grabbed at the hem of George's jacket, regaining his stand. George smacked his hand away and raced for Yukari, laying only a few yards away. Arashi was right behind then falling to the ground next to Yukari's fallen body.
George and Arashi turned her body onto her back ever so gently. Incredulous expressions shone on both their faces, at this unexpected turn of events.
"George! Arashi!" Miwako came running towards them then stopped abruptly as she saw what the two men held in their arms. She allowed an intake of breath before edging nearer. "Wha. . . What happened?!" She asked once she stood above them. "What did you do?!!?" She fell to her knees, taking Yukari's hand in her own.
George fell back, his head hanging in his dirty hands. Loud breaths heaved in and out of his chest.
"Arashi?" Miwako tried again through tears of her own. "What. . ."
Arashi shook his head. Salty droplets conjured up in the rims of his eyes.
A struggled gasp of breath made them all look back to Yukari. Her eyes barely opened but she coughed, violently.
"Yukari!" Miwako gripped her hand tighter.
The faintest smile crept across her lips. "Miwako. . . Ugh. . " Her brows furrowed as she had to take another ragged breath. "George. I'm . . . I'm so. . . sorry."
Miwako cried into the dying girl's hand. "No. . . No, no, no! You can't. You can't die!"
But it was already too late. Her breathing stopped and her heart stilled.
As if on cue, big fat drops began to fall from the sky. Soon they splattered all around them, drenching them with icy cold water, relentlessly.
Miwako's cries rang over the sudden clash of thunder. Arashi's hair melted down the back of his head and into her eyes but he didn't make an effort to push it away. George was on his feet walking away.
He returned though. He returned in maddening rage. All senses completely lost to him. No one knew what was going on until it happened. No one knew . . . until there was only one left.
One left among the piled bodies. All dead. Blood washed down into the gutters along with the rain.
Scared.
Frantic.
Horrified.
One thing to do.
And then there were none.
The End. . .
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So, tell me. . .what did you think of it?
Was it so horrible that yukari did die along with the rest of them? If ya want I could do a whole nother story and have them all live! In time for Thankgiving!!!!!!!!!!!! HAPPY THANKSGIVING!!!!!!
Should there be an epilogue? I suppose I could think up something for Isabella, seeing how she's the only one left . . .
If anyone wants to email me for whatever . . . like for another story or something my email is Arien721@aol.com .... And with that you should figure out meh sn
Peash y'all
Bruised phoenix thanx for that big long review. Quite enjoyable and your boyfriend sounds absolutely lovely! Hahaha....quite so... but who knows what'll happen to yukari... dun dun dun... well I do.... u_u
Ah my, I don't know... um, yeah I have a research paper due tomorrow that I haven't started yet so I really shouldn't be.... Sitting here staring at meh keyboard so here's the last of it. It might sound a tad bit corny but I like it.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Chapter 9
George shoved Arashi's body off of him, letting the gun fall out of his hand, all thoughts of possession out of his head. Arashi grabbed at the hem of George's jacket, regaining his stand. George smacked his hand away and raced for Yukari, laying only a few yards away. Arashi was right behind then falling to the ground next to Yukari's fallen body.
George and Arashi turned her body onto her back ever so gently. Incredulous expressions shone on both their faces, at this unexpected turn of events.
"George! Arashi!" Miwako came running towards them then stopped abruptly as she saw what the two men held in their arms. She allowed an intake of breath before edging nearer. "Wha. . . What happened?!" She asked once she stood above them. "What did you do?!!?" She fell to her knees, taking Yukari's hand in her own.
George fell back, his head hanging in his dirty hands. Loud breaths heaved in and out of his chest.
"Arashi?" Miwako tried again through tears of her own. "What. . ."
Arashi shook his head. Salty droplets conjured up in the rims of his eyes.
A struggled gasp of breath made them all look back to Yukari. Her eyes barely opened but she coughed, violently.
"Yukari!" Miwako gripped her hand tighter.
The faintest smile crept across her lips. "Miwako. . . Ugh. . " Her brows furrowed as she had to take another ragged breath. "George. I'm . . . I'm so. . . sorry."
Miwako cried into the dying girl's hand. "No. . . No, no, no! You can't. You can't die!"
But it was already too late. Her breathing stopped and her heart stilled.
As if on cue, big fat drops began to fall from the sky. Soon they splattered all around them, drenching them with icy cold water, relentlessly.
Miwako's cries rang over the sudden clash of thunder. Arashi's hair melted down the back of his head and into her eyes but he didn't make an effort to push it away. George was on his feet walking away.
He returned though. He returned in maddening rage. All senses completely lost to him. No one knew what was going on until it happened. No one knew . . . until there was only one left.
One left among the piled bodies. All dead. Blood washed down into the gutters along with the rain.
Scared.
Frantic.
Horrified.
One thing to do.
And then there were none.
The End. . .
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
So, tell me. . .what did you think of it?
Was it so horrible that yukari did die along with the rest of them? If ya want I could do a whole nother story and have them all live! In time for Thankgiving!!!!!!!!!!!! HAPPY THANKSGIVING!!!!!!
Should there be an epilogue? I suppose I could think up something for Isabella, seeing how she's the only one left . . .
If anyone wants to email me for whatever . . . like for another story or something my email is Arien721@aol.com .... And with that you should figure out meh sn
Peash y'all