Well hi everyone. I am back with another chapter of Hitomi Kanzaki Returns
to Gaia. I hope you are enjoying this story so far. And I want to thank you
for the review. I don't want you to get angry so I won't put you name(s) up
here. Anyway on to chapter 4.
What happened last chapter:
A few minutes later Millerna and Merle came down the stairs to the basement.
"Hitomi-san? Where are you?" asked Millerna.
"Over here Millerna-san," she said.
They followed her voice and found her standing in front of the old Guymelef. Millerna got a little pale.
"Hi," said Hitomi when they found her. "May I ask a question?"
"Um sure," said Millerna still a little pale.
"What is a Guymelef doing in your basement?"
"Well I-." started Millerna.
Chapter 4
"Well I-um." started Millerna nervously.
"Millerna-san? Is something wrong? You're a little pale," asked Merle
"N-no Merle-chan," she said taking a deep breath. "It's just that I'm a little frightened that's all."
"Frightened of what," she asked.
"Fr-frightened of this G-guymelef, that's all," she said, her voice a little shaky
"What for? It's an old Guymelef," whined Merle.
"B-because it was my grandfather's. He used it in a war at about the time Hitomi-san's grandmother came to Gaia. This is the one he died in the day after her grandmother went back to her world," said Millerna, calming down a little.
"Oh," said Merle. "I'm sorry. I didn't mean to bring it up."
"It's all right, Merle-chan," she said Millerna. Tears started to form in her eyes.
"Do you miss him?" asked Hitomi. Millerna nodded. "Don't cry, Millerna- san."
"Yeah, don't cry," said Merle in her perky voice. "Come on. Let's get out of here. It's starting to get cold down here. And also I'm starting to get the creeps."
"Alright, let's get out of here," said Millerna not crying anymore and wiping her tears away from her face with the back her index and middle finger, "and thanks for telling me not to cry."
"You're welcome," both girls said at the same time.
Everyone started to walk towards the basement stairs when they heard Van and Allen shouting from the other side of the door to Hitomi's bedroom, "Millerna-san, are you in there?"
"Uh oh. They're back," said Millerna. "I'll go out the door that the Guymelef used to use to get out. They don't know about it. Not even Allen- san and he's been through this whole castle a bunch of times. Then I will walk through the front door and tell them I went for some fresh air in the back of the castle. You go up the stairs and through the tunnel to the room and lock the door just incase they decide to check the castle again."
"Okay," said Hitomi and started to walk up the stairs put with Merle behind her. Millerna walked to the secret Guymelef exit. She opened it and went out closing it behind her.
Then she ran to the front door and walked in. Van and Allen hear it and run to door about to draw their swords. When they say that it was only Millerna, they took their hands away from the handles of the swords.
"Millerna-san what were you doing out there at this hour?" asked a worried Allen.
"I just decided that I would go out and get some fresh air while you were gone," lied Millerna.
"We didn't see you out there," retorted Van.
"I was out in the courtyard at the back of the castle."
"Oh. Well then," said Allen. "How long have you been there?" "About an hour after you left," said Millerna.
"I see. Do you mind if we stay the night here?"
Millerna panicked. What if one of them saw Hitomi before tomorrow morning? "Um.sure. I guess so."
"Thanks. Where do we sleep?" asked Van.
"Um.I'll show you too the spare bedrooms. Follow me." Millerna start walking to the stairs. They followed her.
Meanwhile, Hitomi and Merle had just opened the trap door in the closet. They walk in to the room and Merle sits on the bed. Hitomi went to the door and was about to lock it with the key that she had grabbed from the dresser, when she hears Millerna coming up the stairs with Van and Allen behind her. She decides to wait a bit before locking the door incase the lock made a bit of noise while it was locking.
"Why aren't you locking the door like Millerna-san said, Hitomi-chan?" asked Merle.
"Because the boys are out in the hall and I'm afraid that the door will make noise."
"Oh. I see. But you had better lock the door soon though in case they decide to do an overnight search through the castle."
Hitomi giggled a little at that.
A few minutes later though she locked it and pretended to go to bed. Merle was already in bed.
Again I am stopping here. Sorry guys. Next chapter coming up. I am hoping to get it up before Monday or on Monday. Don't forget to review for this one if you want more of Hitomi Kanzaki Returns to Gaia. If you spot any mistakes (spelling, grammical.etc) that I have maybe missed, copy it in to a word document with the mistakes being in red and send it to me at Ria_Spirit@ hotmail.com as and attachment with your name or username if you want. Thanks.
Next chapter preview:
When Merle was asleep and Hitomi checked to make sure she really was, she opened the closet and went through the tunnel in the nightgown that Millerna had lent her. She walked down the stairs toward the old Guymelef. She stood in front of it and wondered if it still worked. There was only one way to find out. She climbed up and sat in it. Automatically, it closed her in and start to move.
What happened last chapter:
A few minutes later Millerna and Merle came down the stairs to the basement.
"Hitomi-san? Where are you?" asked Millerna.
"Over here Millerna-san," she said.
They followed her voice and found her standing in front of the old Guymelef. Millerna got a little pale.
"Hi," said Hitomi when they found her. "May I ask a question?"
"Um sure," said Millerna still a little pale.
"What is a Guymelef doing in your basement?"
"Well I-." started Millerna.
Chapter 4
"Well I-um." started Millerna nervously.
"Millerna-san? Is something wrong? You're a little pale," asked Merle
"N-no Merle-chan," she said taking a deep breath. "It's just that I'm a little frightened that's all."
"Frightened of what," she asked.
"Fr-frightened of this G-guymelef, that's all," she said, her voice a little shaky
"What for? It's an old Guymelef," whined Merle.
"B-because it was my grandfather's. He used it in a war at about the time Hitomi-san's grandmother came to Gaia. This is the one he died in the day after her grandmother went back to her world," said Millerna, calming down a little.
"Oh," said Merle. "I'm sorry. I didn't mean to bring it up."
"It's all right, Merle-chan," she said Millerna. Tears started to form in her eyes.
"Do you miss him?" asked Hitomi. Millerna nodded. "Don't cry, Millerna- san."
"Yeah, don't cry," said Merle in her perky voice. "Come on. Let's get out of here. It's starting to get cold down here. And also I'm starting to get the creeps."
"Alright, let's get out of here," said Millerna not crying anymore and wiping her tears away from her face with the back her index and middle finger, "and thanks for telling me not to cry."
"You're welcome," both girls said at the same time.
Everyone started to walk towards the basement stairs when they heard Van and Allen shouting from the other side of the door to Hitomi's bedroom, "Millerna-san, are you in there?"
"Uh oh. They're back," said Millerna. "I'll go out the door that the Guymelef used to use to get out. They don't know about it. Not even Allen- san and he's been through this whole castle a bunch of times. Then I will walk through the front door and tell them I went for some fresh air in the back of the castle. You go up the stairs and through the tunnel to the room and lock the door just incase they decide to check the castle again."
"Okay," said Hitomi and started to walk up the stairs put with Merle behind her. Millerna walked to the secret Guymelef exit. She opened it and went out closing it behind her.
Then she ran to the front door and walked in. Van and Allen hear it and run to door about to draw their swords. When they say that it was only Millerna, they took their hands away from the handles of the swords.
"Millerna-san what were you doing out there at this hour?" asked a worried Allen.
"I just decided that I would go out and get some fresh air while you were gone," lied Millerna.
"We didn't see you out there," retorted Van.
"I was out in the courtyard at the back of the castle."
"Oh. Well then," said Allen. "How long have you been there?" "About an hour after you left," said Millerna.
"I see. Do you mind if we stay the night here?"
Millerna panicked. What if one of them saw Hitomi before tomorrow morning? "Um.sure. I guess so."
"Thanks. Where do we sleep?" asked Van.
"Um.I'll show you too the spare bedrooms. Follow me." Millerna start walking to the stairs. They followed her.
Meanwhile, Hitomi and Merle had just opened the trap door in the closet. They walk in to the room and Merle sits on the bed. Hitomi went to the door and was about to lock it with the key that she had grabbed from the dresser, when she hears Millerna coming up the stairs with Van and Allen behind her. She decides to wait a bit before locking the door incase the lock made a bit of noise while it was locking.
"Why aren't you locking the door like Millerna-san said, Hitomi-chan?" asked Merle.
"Because the boys are out in the hall and I'm afraid that the door will make noise."
"Oh. I see. But you had better lock the door soon though in case they decide to do an overnight search through the castle."
Hitomi giggled a little at that.
A few minutes later though she locked it and pretended to go to bed. Merle was already in bed.
Again I am stopping here. Sorry guys. Next chapter coming up. I am hoping to get it up before Monday or on Monday. Don't forget to review for this one if you want more of Hitomi Kanzaki Returns to Gaia. If you spot any mistakes (spelling, grammical.etc) that I have maybe missed, copy it in to a word document with the mistakes being in red and send it to me at Ria_Spirit@ hotmail.com as and attachment with your name or username if you want. Thanks.
Next chapter preview:
When Merle was asleep and Hitomi checked to make sure she really was, she opened the closet and went through the tunnel in the nightgown that Millerna had lent her. She walked down the stairs toward the old Guymelef. She stood in front of it and wondered if it still worked. There was only one way to find out. She climbed up and sat in it. Automatically, it closed her in and start to move.