DESCRIPTIONS
In a review, someone pointed out that I didn't really describe the characters in my story. This is a description of the 7 characters from 'Newndale' and Naku.
Nanya Frewing:
Height: six feet (she's very tall for a girl) Hair color: light brown Eye color: dark hazel Birthday: October 22, 1981 Personality: Nanya seems really sarcastic at first, but after you get past that part she is kind and thoughtful. She is very outspoken and stubborn. She has made Dirk mortally afraid of her as he is her 'favorite punching bag' when she is angry. Parents: Mithros the god of the sun and war, king of the gods and Arneith, Goddess of Immortals Siblings: Gambler, god of gambling and the elements and Thayet, Queen of Tortall. Extra: She is bonded to the Flamer Naku who is also prince of the Flames who reside in the Lands of Fire and Ice in the Realms of the Gods.
Dirk Talsman:
Height: six feet two inches Hair color: dirty blond Eye color: bright green Birthday: June 4, 1981 Personality: He's a joker who is also quick and can come up with an alibi for something he 'didn't do' off the top of his head. Parents: Michael and Arieka Talsman Siblings: Kraig and Sidney Talaman Extra: He is mortally terrified of Nanya when she is angry because she hung him upside down from the school jungle gym from his shoelaces when they were in grade two. They managed to make up six months later.
Dante Javry:
Height: six feet five inches Hair color: very dark brown Eye color: gray Birthday: May 3, 1981 Personality: Dante is the last of the three big troublemakers in the group. He is also the first to blame someone else for something he did. Parents: David and Yalaya Javry Siblings: Jared Javry Extra: Dante is an excellent goalie in hockey.
Ashely Garnier:
Height: five feet ten inches Hair color: light brown Eye color: bright blue Birthday: October 5, 1981 Personality: Ashley is the person who can find something hilarious (and often perverted) in anything. She is also the best friend you could ever have. Parents: Alex and Danielle Garnier Siblings: Nick Garnier Extra: Ashley is an excellent hockey player who will never get down when something doesn't go the way she planned.
Carn Haver:
Height: five feet five inches Hair color: reddish brown Eye color: brown Birthday: December 4, 1981 Personality: Carn is the voice of reason but can often times be strayed into making trouble by Nanya. Parents: Brad and Ellie Haver Siblings: Jacob, Tyson, Rodney, Niles, Carl, Hank, Paul, Rickel, Fiona, Daisy, and Trina Haver. Extra: Carn loves horses, she gave up hockey to ride and show them.
Rocky Hill:
Height: five feet eight inches Hair color: bright blond Eye color: blue Birthday: November 7, 1981 Personality: Rocky is the peacemaker. She is rather quiet and slightly distant, but everyone likes her (except Nanya's older brother) Parents: Willie and Asia Hill Siblings: Zachary Hill Extra: Rocky's best friend died when she was younger, so Nanya introduced her into 'the gang'.
Mirk Alpaca:
Height: six feet three inches Hair color: bright blond Eye color: blue Birthday: March 17, 1981 Personality: Mirk is the spoiled principal's son who is also a jock Parents: Lyle and Margaret Alpaca Siblings: Catriona Alpaca Extra: Mirk is excellent at all sports except basketball (Dante is working on that)
Naku:
Height: five foot seven Fur color: white and gray with hints of black and brown Eye color: Gray Birthday: January 22, 1979 (according to our calendar) Personality: Very sarcastic and sometimes dangerous Parents: King Dalor and Queen Ariel of the Flamers Siblings: Naki, Nakoi and Asdan of the Flamers Extra: Naku is bonded to Nanya, he is also the next king of the Flamers.
Other Information: Dante and Ash are cousins. Dante, Nanya and Dirk are huge trouble makers (will play a big part in story eventually) and always seem to drag the others into their pranks.
When Nanya was 5 her parents and older brother got murdered (they never caught the murderer). She had been at Rocky's at the time so she never got murdered. After that she got sent to live with her uncle who was a sexist alcoholic. He beat Nanya and slit her throat one night in a drunk rage, then left her to die while he went to the bar. Rocky and her mother dropped in to see how Nanya was doing and found her where they saved her life. She then moved in with her father's brother. She has a scar around the front part of her neck so she wears a choker necklace at all times to hide it.
Rocky wasn't one of 'the gang' until they were twelve and her best friend died in a car crash. Ever since then she has been rather distant to all but Nanya and co.
IF THERE IS ANYTHING ELSE YOU'D LIKE TO KNOW, TELL ME IN A REVIEW
In a review, someone pointed out that I didn't really describe the characters in my story. This is a description of the 7 characters from 'Newndale' and Naku.
Nanya Frewing:
Height: six feet (she's very tall for a girl) Hair color: light brown Eye color: dark hazel Birthday: October 22, 1981 Personality: Nanya seems really sarcastic at first, but after you get past that part she is kind and thoughtful. She is very outspoken and stubborn. She has made Dirk mortally afraid of her as he is her 'favorite punching bag' when she is angry. Parents: Mithros the god of the sun and war, king of the gods and Arneith, Goddess of Immortals Siblings: Gambler, god of gambling and the elements and Thayet, Queen of Tortall. Extra: She is bonded to the Flamer Naku who is also prince of the Flames who reside in the Lands of Fire and Ice in the Realms of the Gods.
Dirk Talsman:
Height: six feet two inches Hair color: dirty blond Eye color: bright green Birthday: June 4, 1981 Personality: He's a joker who is also quick and can come up with an alibi for something he 'didn't do' off the top of his head. Parents: Michael and Arieka Talsman Siblings: Kraig and Sidney Talaman Extra: He is mortally terrified of Nanya when she is angry because she hung him upside down from the school jungle gym from his shoelaces when they were in grade two. They managed to make up six months later.
Dante Javry:
Height: six feet five inches Hair color: very dark brown Eye color: gray Birthday: May 3, 1981 Personality: Dante is the last of the three big troublemakers in the group. He is also the first to blame someone else for something he did. Parents: David and Yalaya Javry Siblings: Jared Javry Extra: Dante is an excellent goalie in hockey.
Ashely Garnier:
Height: five feet ten inches Hair color: light brown Eye color: bright blue Birthday: October 5, 1981 Personality: Ashley is the person who can find something hilarious (and often perverted) in anything. She is also the best friend you could ever have. Parents: Alex and Danielle Garnier Siblings: Nick Garnier Extra: Ashley is an excellent hockey player who will never get down when something doesn't go the way she planned.
Carn Haver:
Height: five feet five inches Hair color: reddish brown Eye color: brown Birthday: December 4, 1981 Personality: Carn is the voice of reason but can often times be strayed into making trouble by Nanya. Parents: Brad and Ellie Haver Siblings: Jacob, Tyson, Rodney, Niles, Carl, Hank, Paul, Rickel, Fiona, Daisy, and Trina Haver. Extra: Carn loves horses, she gave up hockey to ride and show them.
Rocky Hill:
Height: five feet eight inches Hair color: bright blond Eye color: blue Birthday: November 7, 1981 Personality: Rocky is the peacemaker. She is rather quiet and slightly distant, but everyone likes her (except Nanya's older brother) Parents: Willie and Asia Hill Siblings: Zachary Hill Extra: Rocky's best friend died when she was younger, so Nanya introduced her into 'the gang'.
Mirk Alpaca:
Height: six feet three inches Hair color: bright blond Eye color: blue Birthday: March 17, 1981 Personality: Mirk is the spoiled principal's son who is also a jock Parents: Lyle and Margaret Alpaca Siblings: Catriona Alpaca Extra: Mirk is excellent at all sports except basketball (Dante is working on that)
Naku:
Height: five foot seven Fur color: white and gray with hints of black and brown Eye color: Gray Birthday: January 22, 1979 (according to our calendar) Personality: Very sarcastic and sometimes dangerous Parents: King Dalor and Queen Ariel of the Flamers Siblings: Naki, Nakoi and Asdan of the Flamers Extra: Naku is bonded to Nanya, he is also the next king of the Flamers.
Other Information: Dante and Ash are cousins. Dante, Nanya and Dirk are huge trouble makers (will play a big part in story eventually) and always seem to drag the others into their pranks.
When Nanya was 5 her parents and older brother got murdered (they never caught the murderer). She had been at Rocky's at the time so she never got murdered. After that she got sent to live with her uncle who was a sexist alcoholic. He beat Nanya and slit her throat one night in a drunk rage, then left her to die while he went to the bar. Rocky and her mother dropped in to see how Nanya was doing and found her where they saved her life. She then moved in with her father's brother. She has a scar around the front part of her neck so she wears a choker necklace at all times to hide it.
Rocky wasn't one of 'the gang' until they were twelve and her best friend died in a car crash. Ever since then she has been rather distant to all but Nanya and co.
IF THERE IS ANYTHING ELSE YOU'D LIKE TO KNOW, TELL ME IN A REVIEW