Disclaimer: I still don't own 'The Ring,' and I still don't want to.
A/N-Thanks to lianeviolet, Riot Gurl, Sammy-chan, alleajandra,
BrokenLizard14, and :-) for reviewing chapter 3!
Chapter 4-Murder of Innocence
As soon as they were pulled back to shore, Rachel and Aiden jumped out of the boat, and ran back to the car. "Ma'am!" Bill yelled after them. "Ma'am! YA WERE ON'Y OUT THAR HALF AN HOUR! DO YA WANT THE FIFTY BACK?"
"NO!" Rachel yelled back. "KEEP IT!"
Bill nodded, and walked back into the rental shack.
Rachel and Aiden opened the car doors, and climbed in. Breathing heavily, Aiden asked, "M-Mom? What just happened?"
"The little girl, Aiden. It was her again."
Aiden gulped. "Why is she following us?"
"Because she wants you, Aiden. But, she's not going to get you."
Rachel was about to start the car, when she heard a man yell. "What the hell..." She was torn between seeing what was wrong, and leaving. She knew immediately that it was Bill who had screamed. "Honey, come with me," she said, uneasily. She and her son got out of the car and ran over to the rental shack.
Rachel got to the door, and inhaled deeply. 'It's not Samara. He didn't watch the tape, so he can't be dead because of her,' she thought, before squeezing her eyes shut, and flinging open the door. As she opened her eyes, she saw Bill sitting in a chair, his back facing her. She slowly walked over to him, and turned him around.....
"AAAAARH!" Bill snapped his eyes open, and looked up at Rachel. "WHAT DO YA THINK YOU'RE DOIN', MA'AM?!"
Rachel sighed. "I just came back to....." Her voice was cut off by static from a T.V. inside the shack. Rachel glanced at it. "....I just came back to...." Suddenly, the picture on the T.V. changed to a field, and, right in the middle of the field, was a well.
Rachel glanced at Bill, her heart pounding. He was holding the remote control. "Dang," he sighed. "Thar's nuttin' on 'cept fer some nature show." Rachel sighed. "Have ya ev'r watched this show befer, Ma'am? I've already seen this one....it's 'bout some town 'round here."
"I see....what did the show-" As she looked back at the screen, she saw something move. "What was that?"
"Oh, I know what this is," stated Bill. "It's prob'ly that 'Frankenstein' movie ev'ryone's talkin' 'bout....ya know, with the lil' gurl and the monster...."
Rachel nodded, but had a horrible feeling about what was about to happen. She glanced back at Aiden; he too knew what was going to appear on the screen. "Yup, I wuz right. See, thar's the gurl."
Rachel's heart began to pound even harder in her chest. She slowly turned around and looked at the screen.....and screamed. Slowly limping towards them was Samara. Her hair was covering her face so that Rachel couldn't make out her face, but she didn't need to. Rachel walked over to Aiden, and scooped him up. "Uhh, Bill. We need to go....."
"Sure, huney. Have a nice day," said Bill, his eyes still fixed upon the screen. Rachel, carrying Aiden, began to run out of the shack. As she was about to pass the window, she heard a scream, not like before, but one filled with pain..she took a deep breath and dashed past the window, only catching a glance of the horribly disfigured face of Bill, and Samara, who was standing over him, murder in her eyes...
Rachel ran as fast as she could to the car. She opened the door and set Aiden down in his seat. Her hands were shaking so badly that she was having trouble getting the keys out. She put the keys in and tried to start the car..she turned the keys and..nothing. She began to breathe heavily and began to sweat. She tried turning them again...still nothing. She looked in the rear-view mirror and saw Samara walking slowly towards her. She screamed, and then turned the keys with all of her might. Finally, the car started. She pressed her foot on the accelerator as far as it would go, and drove off. She took a U-turn and headed towards the exit, to go somewhere..anywhere.
She was heading towards the exit when Samara appeared right in front of her car. She yelled out, and tried to swerve, on reflex, but, she ran right into Samara...or, over her. Right when her car was about to make contact with Samara, Samara layed down on the road. As soon as she went through the exit, Rachel looked into the rear-view mirror and saw Samara lying on the road, and she appeared to be dead; a man ran into the street and tried to help her.
Rachel continued to glance out of the windows and the mirrors, just to make sure that Samara wasn't anywhere around. She looked at Aiden; he had fallen asleep already. She gave him a small smile. She slowly reached her hand over to turn on the radio. She pushed the 'on' button and took a deep breath. "Here's the song that was on the top of the charts for one week: Jimmy Eat World's 'The Middle.'" Rachel sighed in relief, then turned down the radio, and continued to drive..somewhere...
-Before the exit-
The man ran into the road, scooped up Samara, and then ran back to the sidewalk. He set her on the ground, prepared to give her CPR, but, he fell over, dead, with the same empty eyes and open mouth that Katie, Noah, and Bill had...and Samara stood up, and walked away..until she disappeared...
To be continued...
A/N-how was chapter 4? I think it was okay..but I need to know if YOU liked it, so, please, please, PLEASE review! No flames, just suggestions or comments!
Chapter 4-Murder of Innocence
As soon as they were pulled back to shore, Rachel and Aiden jumped out of the boat, and ran back to the car. "Ma'am!" Bill yelled after them. "Ma'am! YA WERE ON'Y OUT THAR HALF AN HOUR! DO YA WANT THE FIFTY BACK?"
"NO!" Rachel yelled back. "KEEP IT!"
Bill nodded, and walked back into the rental shack.
Rachel and Aiden opened the car doors, and climbed in. Breathing heavily, Aiden asked, "M-Mom? What just happened?"
"The little girl, Aiden. It was her again."
Aiden gulped. "Why is she following us?"
"Because she wants you, Aiden. But, she's not going to get you."
Rachel was about to start the car, when she heard a man yell. "What the hell..." She was torn between seeing what was wrong, and leaving. She knew immediately that it was Bill who had screamed. "Honey, come with me," she said, uneasily. She and her son got out of the car and ran over to the rental shack.
Rachel got to the door, and inhaled deeply. 'It's not Samara. He didn't watch the tape, so he can't be dead because of her,' she thought, before squeezing her eyes shut, and flinging open the door. As she opened her eyes, she saw Bill sitting in a chair, his back facing her. She slowly walked over to him, and turned him around.....
"AAAAARH!" Bill snapped his eyes open, and looked up at Rachel. "WHAT DO YA THINK YOU'RE DOIN', MA'AM?!"
Rachel sighed. "I just came back to....." Her voice was cut off by static from a T.V. inside the shack. Rachel glanced at it. "....I just came back to...." Suddenly, the picture on the T.V. changed to a field, and, right in the middle of the field, was a well.
Rachel glanced at Bill, her heart pounding. He was holding the remote control. "Dang," he sighed. "Thar's nuttin' on 'cept fer some nature show." Rachel sighed. "Have ya ev'r watched this show befer, Ma'am? I've already seen this one....it's 'bout some town 'round here."
"I see....what did the show-" As she looked back at the screen, she saw something move. "What was that?"
"Oh, I know what this is," stated Bill. "It's prob'ly that 'Frankenstein' movie ev'ryone's talkin' 'bout....ya know, with the lil' gurl and the monster...."
Rachel nodded, but had a horrible feeling about what was about to happen. She glanced back at Aiden; he too knew what was going to appear on the screen. "Yup, I wuz right. See, thar's the gurl."
Rachel's heart began to pound even harder in her chest. She slowly turned around and looked at the screen.....and screamed. Slowly limping towards them was Samara. Her hair was covering her face so that Rachel couldn't make out her face, but she didn't need to. Rachel walked over to Aiden, and scooped him up. "Uhh, Bill. We need to go....."
"Sure, huney. Have a nice day," said Bill, his eyes still fixed upon the screen. Rachel, carrying Aiden, began to run out of the shack. As she was about to pass the window, she heard a scream, not like before, but one filled with pain..she took a deep breath and dashed past the window, only catching a glance of the horribly disfigured face of Bill, and Samara, who was standing over him, murder in her eyes...
Rachel ran as fast as she could to the car. She opened the door and set Aiden down in his seat. Her hands were shaking so badly that she was having trouble getting the keys out. She put the keys in and tried to start the car..she turned the keys and..nothing. She began to breathe heavily and began to sweat. She tried turning them again...still nothing. She looked in the rear-view mirror and saw Samara walking slowly towards her. She screamed, and then turned the keys with all of her might. Finally, the car started. She pressed her foot on the accelerator as far as it would go, and drove off. She took a U-turn and headed towards the exit, to go somewhere..anywhere.
She was heading towards the exit when Samara appeared right in front of her car. She yelled out, and tried to swerve, on reflex, but, she ran right into Samara...or, over her. Right when her car was about to make contact with Samara, Samara layed down on the road. As soon as she went through the exit, Rachel looked into the rear-view mirror and saw Samara lying on the road, and she appeared to be dead; a man ran into the street and tried to help her.
Rachel continued to glance out of the windows and the mirrors, just to make sure that Samara wasn't anywhere around. She looked at Aiden; he had fallen asleep already. She gave him a small smile. She slowly reached her hand over to turn on the radio. She pushed the 'on' button and took a deep breath. "Here's the song that was on the top of the charts for one week: Jimmy Eat World's 'The Middle.'" Rachel sighed in relief, then turned down the radio, and continued to drive..somewhere...
-Before the exit-
The man ran into the road, scooped up Samara, and then ran back to the sidewalk. He set her on the ground, prepared to give her CPR, but, he fell over, dead, with the same empty eyes and open mouth that Katie, Noah, and Bill had...and Samara stood up, and walked away..until she disappeared...
To be continued...
A/N-how was chapter 4? I think it was okay..but I need to know if YOU liked it, so, please, please, PLEASE review! No flames, just suggestions or comments!