9/15/03

Hey everyone! Do you remember me? lol. I'm so sorry everyone! I've bailed on you all! *bows down before you all* I'm soooo sorry! I've just not been in the mood to write and then school started so it's been a little hectic getting into a different schedule. I'm writng the next chapter right now...well actually after I finish writing this. I should have it up by the end of this week if not earlier. If not then..well..I'm a liar and there's really nothing you can do about it but stop reading and reviewing my story. Wait...that's bad. *drops to the floor and grabs your legs* DON'T LEAVE ME!!!!!! PLEEEEEEASE!!!!!!!

Ok...here's the deal. I'm not going to respond to each and every single review. It would be too much(which is pretty much my fault but I'm really lazy). I'm only responding to the reviews with questions. I will, however, list everyone's name acknowledging that I got your review and a thankyou behind the names.

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Unsung Hero(4): First question. She didn't "jump". She walked. sry. Seriously, she was under shock at the moment so she pretty much would have walked on a ship with anyone at that rate that wasn't holding a weapon to her or tearing off her clothes. Also, she had nothing left for her there, so he seemed as good a choice as any especially since he was the one that had saved her from being raped.

Second question, Jack has a reason for taking her aboard the ship which will unravel very soon in the story. Don't worry. All in due time.

This story is a few years after the movie, so I'm thinking maybe he gained SOME of his sanity. I'll try a little harder to get him to be more the like the movie character, but it's been a few years and I'm writing him like he's toned down a bit after a few years time.

Jack will crack down on her crap soon don't worry. He's going to start really whipping Gale into shape. He'll be getting his room and bed back in the next chapter in fact. :) Betcha he's excited.

Eradwyn(5): Jack is older than Gale by a good amount of years, but not THAT old. That's just SICK. lol. He was...let's say...mid-twenties when her father knew him. Gale's father was also older than Jack. Is it cleared up now? I didn't really touch on that so don't worry.

Anya Midnight(6): Alrightie. The Mary-sue thing. Not to sound bitchy or anything but, WHO THE FUCK MADE THAT UP?!. I'm sorry, I'm not yelling at you. I just think that it's way to hard to make a character, put it into an already created storyline, and have them be 100% non-Mary-sue. It's practically impossible. Also, some of those so-called unrealistic attributes are what makes a character interesting. There are cases where it's practically disgusting how perfect the characters are and, in that case, I'd have to agree with you. But let's face it, Gale may have pirate heritage, but she friggin sucks. Her first lesson and she ends up drunk off her rocker and nearly drowns. She can't steer a ship for crap and she still acts like a lady. She's absolutely nothing like a pirate. I'm not going to take this down and refurbish it aside from errors and things that may need to be added that I forgot. I will, however, keep in mind for the future not to make Gale some superchic because that she is not. This story may seem a little on the slow side right now, but that's why I threw humor in there to make it interesting till the real plot starts to unravel. Hold on to your pants and it'll get here, don't worry.

IF ANYONE HAS THE SONG THAT PIRATES SING PLEASE PLEASE SEND IT TO ME!!!! my e-mail is in my bio.