koko chan: okay, i think this miht be the last chappie of this fic. :]
vote first though,:
should i do a sequal? like, do another person's POV? If so, which one should I do?
enjoy the last chappie
[note: i'm a kibaXhinata fan so..uhm..beware you naruXhina fans. oh and probably some sakuXneji too XD XD XD .:ducks:. no flames! you have been warned!]
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I feel so dizzy again. I remember bits and bits of what happened but not so sure...Wait, I hear something, it was yelling. I can hear parts and parts of it. What are they saying?
"What do you mean you can't find a cure?! Your a doctor! You better do as well as i'm paying you!!!" Who was that? Was that..father? But, it couldn't be..could it?
Oh wow, everything is changing so much. From the festival, to the snow, and now father. Heh, how intresting. Hm? Was the door closing just now? What's happening? Oh, I just felt something warm touch my hands. Was that father? Was that him actually caring for me?
"Father.." mumbled a little girl's voice. I suppose it was my sister. She was here too? Wow, things are really getting weird.
I felt the warmness leave my hand just as quick as it was welcomed. I could hear father's footsteps turn and leave, followed by a light pair feet.
...but now I wonder, am I that sick? Will I die?
The door suddenly slammed open. I heard deep breathing.
"I-is Hinata chan okay?" Asked a female voice. From the tone and softness, I was sure it was Sakura chan.
"Hey, Hinata! Open your eyes!" Yelled another. I knew it all too well. Naruto kun.
I smiled. I didn't know if I was physically smiling, but I did. SO, I want to open my eyes. Problem is, I can't. Why? Why can't I open my eyes? They feel so heavy all of the sudden.
"Hinata chan!" I heard Sakura yell again. Oh, I want to see their faces. I can't open my eyes though.
The door slammed open again. I heard a bark and a thump on the ground.
"Hey watch it!" I heard Naruto yell. Warmness grasped my hands again and I heard someone ask, "Hinata!!! You okay?!?!" Kiba kun... "Bark!" ..and Akamaru.
"Her breathing isn't normal." Said another voice. Shinno kun.
"Gyaa!!!! Curse this!! Why didn't you tell her to bring a jacket???!!? Huh!? Huh!?" Kiba kun yelled and grasped myhand even tighter. Just a winter day without a jacket.
"No, from her breathing, like Shinno said, isn't normal. She probably had this fever for a couple of days, but never knew it. It finally grew when she went outside and was exposed to the cold." Sakura chan answered.
So that's what happened, seemed believeable. Oh well, since everyone's here, I feel happy. So I shouldn't feel sad right? But..I just want to open my eyes.
But..I can't can I? I don't have strength to open them. I can't.
Once again, the door opened, not as violently though.
"Neji...?" Sakura chan asked.
"Yeah yeah. I heard she was in bad condition." Neji niichan answered.
"Well??" Naruto kun asked.
"Well what?" Was the only reply.
"Aren't you going to help her?!" Naruto kun asked again.
"There's nothing I can do. The Hyuga clan gave her almost every medicene known to man, every jutsu known to shinobis. It depends on her now."
Only I can wake myself up? Only I can make my eyes open? They won't though. It's like, I have lost control over my body. I can't do anything about it. So why?
Okay, one, two, three. I see my eye lids open a little. They open wider, but this isn't the hospital..no, noone, was even here. I look closely, I see a woman, yes. She's running, chasing after a child. Is that...is that child..me?
'Hyuga Hinata, you get here this instance you little girl!'
'The flowers are beautiful today mommy!'
..mother...?
'Honestly, but I suppose your right.'
'hehe. Love you mother.'
Yes, I remeber this day so well. It was a week..before it happened.
'What happend?! I want to know what happend to my wife!!!'
'Sir, she's in a very bad condition now, so if you excuse us..'
'No! I want to know what happend!'
'She got into a bad fever okay?! So just move!'
'..father?'
'Hinata.'
'Father, what's happening to mother?'
'......'
'..father?'
Yes, mother died that day, so, I suppose I follow her path huh? I suppose, I die too?
'Hinata, I want you to know, that no matter what you need to keep trying! Have confidence.'
Oh mother, I wanted to believe you so much..I really did. I can't though.
"Hinata!"
"We're losing her!!!"
Che, how ironic. I finally found somewhere I belonged and look what has happened.
'That's the different between you and I.'
'Who..who are you?'
'I'm you..the other you.'
'...what?'
'I'm the you that was suppose to be born, if I was born, I could've have matsered the Hyuga style.'
"Your right, you seem smarter and much..stronger than me.'
'But that's where your wrong, see everything is done for a reason. If I was born, our little sister would do nothing but mope, she would become a very cold soul. And, I would spend all my time training, and I wouldn't have gained the acception like you have.'
'..acception?'
'Yes, so just be strong, because you are. If you just...have confidnce.'
"No! Dammit!!! Hinata open your eyes!!!" That was Kiba kun's voice. No, I'm, i'm still alive. I must open my eyes.
"Hinata!!" Naruto kun...
"..Hinata chan.." Sakura chan...
"..Hinata." Shinno kun.
"..Hinata sama?" Neji niichan.
I...I want to live. I want to share food, with everyone. I want to tell Naruto kun how I feel. I want to get to know Shinno kun better, I want to know Neji niichan better! I want to share my feelings with Sakura chan! I want to go on walks with Akamaru and Kiba kun! I really want to...
Light filled my eyes as I felt them getting lighter and lighter. I sat up and looked around. Everyone was there, all of them had their eyes on me. My cheeks flustered a little bit before I whispered, "Ko-konnichiwa."
"Hinata!" Kiba kun yelled. HE fianlly broken the long silence that fled the room.
"Thank you God!" Sakura chan yelled and hugged the nearest thing to her.
Neji slightly turned red as Sakura hugged him and was crying tears. Neji..and Sakura? Oh well, anythings possible.
'That's right, anything's possible.'
Yes, anything is possible. Yeah, i'm sure of it now. These past days, have been wonderful to me. No matter of all the pain I went through, I love it here so much.
"Hinata! Don't cry again!" Kiba kun stated and patted my back.
"N-no, i'm not crying because I'm sad, I'm just so happy...Even though, I knew I couldn't open my eyes, I heard everyone." I cried. It felt good this time.
"Anosa, anosa, how about we all go eat ramen after this!!" Naruto kun asked.
"Baka!! We need to let Hinata get better first!" Sakura chan yelled.
"sakura..you can let go now.." Neji niichan said.
"Oh sorry." Sakura chan quickly let go and started to slightly blush.
"You sure your alright?" Shinno kun asked me.
"Yes i'm fine." I answered, I looked downa dn realized the warmth never left my hands. Kiba kun was still holding on.
I looked out the window, everyhting was peaceful again, I think my fever, my depression, my birth, I don't think...it was all coincidence.
Everyone...thank you...
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for those of you who didn't cath it, here's how it went:
Chapter one: realization
chapter two: acception
chapter three: strength.
wow, no "tion" at the end. So yeah. R&R and remeber to vote