No Answer
By HamClover *Moo!*
10/13/03
I decided to write chapter 2 the same day. I hope you're getting into this! I'm currently in my last year of junior high (8th grade) and I'm taking this really cool Creative Writing class. The main reason I'm taking it is to improve on writing fics! Do you think I'm improving? ^__^
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I am so confused! Master left me alone. All alone. Everything seems to have no answer. I hate Master's parents even more now. They took my friends, my only friends. I still didn't get what Master meant when he said that we'll meet "in a better place" I hope I get to that "better place" soon.
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Chapter 2- Open Window
Trent's Mom sulked into the room. Her eyes were read and puffy. Moki guessed that she had been crying.
A cold breeze came from the window. Trent's Mom shivered, and then, mumbling something, shut it. She turned to Moki.
"I guess, Trent isn't here right now, maybe in the shower. I better take you before he finds out..his Dad won the fight."
Moki go confused by what Trent's Mom said. No! Master just left! He isn't here! Not in the shower!
Trent's Mom picked up Moki's cage. "Time to go..Moki.." She murmured.
When they got outside, Trent's Dad had the van in gear, ready to go. "Let's go," he snapped, obviously still mad. Moki was set in the back of the van. Panic began to over run her.
Oh no! They're taking me away! I can't go! I have to meet Master in the "better place!"
She began running furiously on her whiz-wheel. Trent's Dad looked back and snapped. "Stop!"
One of the car windows was wide open.
I know how to get outta this cage! I will if you don't let me out!
No response. Moki pushed the door open, jumped up on a car seat, and gazed at the land, which was now speeding past her. Her eyes glittered. She had never gotten out of the house much, but oh, was this a beautiful sight!
The car stopped at a red light.
Moki pushed her way out and into the street. The light changed to green, and the van speed away, disappearing in the horizon.
Moki was free!
She sniffed around. Hif, hif, hif. Her ears perked up. She smelled a hamster! Moki ran in the direction of the scent. It led to a tiny park. Hif, hif, hif. She had trouble finding the hamster.
Until, that is, what she was searching for, ran right into her!
By HamClover *Moo!*
10/13/03
I decided to write chapter 2 the same day. I hope you're getting into this! I'm currently in my last year of junior high (8th grade) and I'm taking this really cool Creative Writing class. The main reason I'm taking it is to improve on writing fics! Do you think I'm improving? ^__^
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I am so confused! Master left me alone. All alone. Everything seems to have no answer. I hate Master's parents even more now. They took my friends, my only friends. I still didn't get what Master meant when he said that we'll meet "in a better place" I hope I get to that "better place" soon.
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Chapter 2- Open Window
Trent's Mom sulked into the room. Her eyes were read and puffy. Moki guessed that she had been crying.
A cold breeze came from the window. Trent's Mom shivered, and then, mumbling something, shut it. She turned to Moki.
"I guess, Trent isn't here right now, maybe in the shower. I better take you before he finds out..his Dad won the fight."
Moki go confused by what Trent's Mom said. No! Master just left! He isn't here! Not in the shower!
Trent's Mom picked up Moki's cage. "Time to go..Moki.." She murmured.
When they got outside, Trent's Dad had the van in gear, ready to go. "Let's go," he snapped, obviously still mad. Moki was set in the back of the van. Panic began to over run her.
Oh no! They're taking me away! I can't go! I have to meet Master in the "better place!"
She began running furiously on her whiz-wheel. Trent's Dad looked back and snapped. "Stop!"
One of the car windows was wide open.
I know how to get outta this cage! I will if you don't let me out!
No response. Moki pushed the door open, jumped up on a car seat, and gazed at the land, which was now speeding past her. Her eyes glittered. She had never gotten out of the house much, but oh, was this a beautiful sight!
The car stopped at a red light.
Moki pushed her way out and into the street. The light changed to green, and the van speed away, disappearing in the horizon.
Moki was free!
She sniffed around. Hif, hif, hif. Her ears perked up. She smelled a hamster! Moki ran in the direction of the scent. It led to a tiny park. Hif, hif, hif. She had trouble finding the hamster.
Until, that is, what she was searching for, ran right into her!