Meeting (Derek's point)
I saw her a couple of times, but I really didn't know her well. At least, not until she asked me to the dance. My name is Derek K. Lawson, but everyone calls me Deadsoul, long story. I'm the popular kid who excels in everything. I am known to turn down anyone who asks me out. Hey I'm sorry but they don't understand me. No one does, no one ever will. That's how I got Deadsoul. But she is something else. She wouldn't care if I were a no life geek. She likes me, not my popularity or money. So when she asked I said yes. Julie is the one for me. When we went to the dance, I asked the D.J. to play my C.D. First a bunch of normal songs passed, but when a slow song played, I got nervous. I had never slow danced before!! But she took lead; she grabbed my arms and rested her head on my shoulder and started to dance. Wow!! I thought, she is a good dancer. I got lost in the song, but when she leaned up towards my face, I knew what would come next. We kissed. In 5 seconds we were past lips, that's right, Frenching!! (For all you non-romantic geeks reading, that means sticking your tongue in another's mouth.) I blushed, and then she started to giggle. Man I loved that giggle. After the dance she asked my to go to her house for an overnight party. I said sure I'd go. What could go wrong? A lot.
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