bambu: Hi! ^^
I'm bamboomarang, a new writer on fan fiction. But I have written stories on other sites. I WILL take flames IF they are actually good flames that will tell me what I did wrong. Stupid flames will be used to burn Greg. which you wouldn't know yet. well, the point is, this is kinda a preview of my first story, romance Fuu/Ferio, that I will put up after I finish chap one and two. Now for the Disclaimer.
*Crickets chirp *
.Loki.
Loki: no
Why?
Loki: *saying this really fast* I'mnotgoingtalksowhatyousaidonthebottomofthepreveiw willbewrong. *Gasps*
Oh.what if I-
Loki: *starts smashing things* toolateI'mbusy.
O.O .okay then.bambu?
bambu: ^^ bamboomarang does not own ray earth, just this stupid preview thingy, us, and Greg.
STUPID PREVIEW THINGY?!?!? LOKI!!!!! IT WAS YOU, WASN'T IT?!?!?
Loki: *stops smashing things* no duh
*gets the BOOMARANG OF DOOM* LOKI!
Loki: gulp, ^^; w-wh-who m-m-m-m-me?
*THWACK *
Loki: X.X
bambu: *sits on Loki* he's a good couch! ^^
--; yea yea, read on before I scare you away.
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.Life just seems.
Unfair.
*When our last hope finally looses it*
Hikaru is
Strong, energetic;
Umi is
Beautiful, strong willed,
And both have wonderful families.
*When our last defense finally feels jealous*
And me?
*When our last proper soul starts to ask why*
Are not Hikaru and Umi smart too?
*When our last hope finally questions herself*
A polite, perfect little friend
*When our last support has finally gone under*
I do love my sister.
*Hell will break loose*
She just lacks intelligence.
*Because dark is from light*
The cheating, lying, abusing, hurting, not listening,
*And when our support finally sees the evil*
Mother hates me
*Sees how bad the loved ones can be*
She has the attention,
She has the friends,
She has the family,
*Sees how even then life isn't happily ever after*
"Fuu! Are you going to your room?"
*The evil will get to see where it was born*
'Got' him his stuff?
You mean when he kicked me out
And told me to go to his drug dealer
And buy some weed?
*Will see that light has a sense of irony*
But I did not understand; he had had a pack of beer.
*And will see that the light can use that vile word 'death'*
.There goes my grade.
*Light might go a shade darker,*
Or is Greg a cockroach?
*And while it is waiting she will twist your world, cause you don't know*
To try to make you remember how it was to be proper.
*That light doesn't have to be proper*
.Do you really hate me that much?
*that light doesn't have to cry*
So you do not try to kill me.
*And light can show the evil's darkest corners light*
"YOU ARE NOT GONNA PUT ME IN JAIL! YOU UNDERSTAND?"
*And then it won't be pretty*
You are my Mother, my family, and I would not do that.
*In fact, light can deceive*
.Though I know you could not say the same.
*Yet she won't*
"IF IT WEREN'T FOR YOUR SISTER,
THE REMAINS OF THIS FAMILY WOULD ALREADY BE GONE,
AND WITHOUT HER YOU WOULDN'T EVEN GET TO GO TO SCHOOL,CAN YOU
UNDERSTAND,THAT YOU SISSY BITCH?"
*'Till she can pass the defenses*
Good bye-I mean, good night, mother,
*And then she will do the unexpected*
"I wouldn't have to do this shit
If you got off your ass and helped this family."
*Because light can do anything evil can*
You really should increase you vocabulary.
*And with her irony*
.And your intelligence for that matter.
*And her comebacks*
I have enough money that I will not seem like a hobo,
But not enough that I'll attract a lot of thieves.
*And how she knows everything*
.I think.
*.Usually*
"Wheare iz mye prezious beere? Ie know ie had i' zomwheare!"
"Foo!"
*Evil, you're not so tough*
They would probably look for some girl who was on the streets,
Or just hanging around with friends,
Skipping school,
And not doing any thing with her life.
*Light will hide, and come when you're sleeping*
The people look really rich,
There are a lot of cars,
And I could be spotted easily.
.But it is the only way,
*Yet she might loose*
So I just go running
And faking right
*Cause the one thing light might need*
Before running into the street and
Not seeing that car
*Is the thing she doesn't have*
And
Crashing into the car
And.
*.Which are eyes in the back of her head.*
Uhh. my head.
*But, you see, light doesn't know she's light*
.Where am I?
*So she's going to need some help, right?*
1,
2,
3.
.JUMP!
*Cause the thing is.*
O MY GOD WE HIT SOME ONE!
*That was just one side of the story.*
"Sir, your sister specifically paid me to get you to the premiere on time."
*A prince who doesn't know he's a prince*
YOU KILLED SOME ONE!"
*Is now with our only hope*
"You missed the turn."
*And for someone who doesn't know he's a prince*
Turn around now!
*He's defiantly used to things going his own way.*
You do not pay me; I am paid by your sister's acquaintance.
*But evil doesn't care,*
This floor is dirty; it should be cleaned
*And now the prince has to get dirty*
She's not bleeding too badly
*And help someone besides himself*
She's got glasses.
*And if you must know*,
I don't think she can wear these now that I stood on them.
*He's not the brightest guy around.*
*If you thought that was scary*
*That's just the first and half of the second chapter*
bambu:*Holding dead crickets* Jilley? Carrods? NOOOOOOOOOOooooooooo!
*But if you want scary*
Loki: Jilley? You mean jelly? Carrods? You mean carrots?
*Try reading*
*Watches in interest while bambu tries to get near Loki with her new 'kids'
while Loki is running like an idiot throwing things behind him to slow
bambu down. *
*Something even scarier*
Loki: ^^
^^
Greg: ^^
Everyone: *looked at Greg before running away screaming*
*Read the author's notes*
Greg: *shrugs* ie nead ae prezious beere. *Grins before walking away. *
*And even better*
What! No! I didn't mean it like that!
*After you read, try and review*
Loki: *on top of bambu's head* I dare ya.
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Loki: X.X
bambu: *still sitting on Loki* that was good! ^^
Erm, you say everything is good
bambu: I do? ~ ~ *sniff*
Err. I'm sorry, bambu?
bambu: you are?
Yea
bambu: ^^ 'Kay! Thankies! *Goes to skip in flowers*
O.o. that was weird.well, any who, R/R, please, 'cause if you've got an opinion I'd like to hear it. But with flames I'd like it if you told me why I did horrible. With flames and reviews I will take anomynous reviews, so tell me if I accidentally set it on 'no anomynous reviews'. Thank you.
Loki: *crankily gets up* booma, you idiot, it's anoNymous reviews. AnoNymous!!!
^^; Yea yea, as long as they review I'll be happy.
bambu: *flowers in her hair* bye bye! ^^
I'm bamboomarang, a new writer on fan fiction. But I have written stories on other sites. I WILL take flames IF they are actually good flames that will tell me what I did wrong. Stupid flames will be used to burn Greg. which you wouldn't know yet. well, the point is, this is kinda a preview of my first story, romance Fuu/Ferio, that I will put up after I finish chap one and two. Now for the Disclaimer.
*Crickets chirp *
.Loki.
Loki: no
Why?
Loki: *saying this really fast* I'mnotgoingtalksowhatyousaidonthebottomofthepreveiw willbewrong. *Gasps*
Oh.what if I-
Loki: *starts smashing things* toolateI'mbusy.
O.O .okay then.bambu?
bambu: ^^ bamboomarang does not own ray earth, just this stupid preview thingy, us, and Greg.
STUPID PREVIEW THINGY?!?!? LOKI!!!!! IT WAS YOU, WASN'T IT?!?!?
Loki: *stops smashing things* no duh
*gets the BOOMARANG OF DOOM* LOKI!
Loki: gulp, ^^; w-wh-who m-m-m-m-me?
*THWACK *
Loki: X.X
bambu: *sits on Loki* he's a good couch! ^^
--; yea yea, read on before I scare you away.
^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^
.Life just seems.
Unfair.
*When our last hope finally looses it*
Hikaru is
Strong, energetic;
Umi is
Beautiful, strong willed,
And both have wonderful families.
*When our last defense finally feels jealous*
And me?
*When our last proper soul starts to ask why*
Are not Hikaru and Umi smart too?
*When our last hope finally questions herself*
A polite, perfect little friend
*When our last support has finally gone under*
I do love my sister.
*Hell will break loose*
She just lacks intelligence.
*Because dark is from light*
The cheating, lying, abusing, hurting, not listening,
*And when our support finally sees the evil*
Mother hates me
*Sees how bad the loved ones can be*
She has the attention,
She has the friends,
She has the family,
*Sees how even then life isn't happily ever after*
"Fuu! Are you going to your room?"
*The evil will get to see where it was born*
'Got' him his stuff?
You mean when he kicked me out
And told me to go to his drug dealer
And buy some weed?
*Will see that light has a sense of irony*
But I did not understand; he had had a pack of beer.
*And will see that the light can use that vile word 'death'*
.There goes my grade.
*Light might go a shade darker,*
Or is Greg a cockroach?
*And while it is waiting she will twist your world, cause you don't know*
To try to make you remember how it was to be proper.
*That light doesn't have to be proper*
.Do you really hate me that much?
*that light doesn't have to cry*
So you do not try to kill me.
*And light can show the evil's darkest corners light*
"YOU ARE NOT GONNA PUT ME IN JAIL! YOU UNDERSTAND?"
*And then it won't be pretty*
You are my Mother, my family, and I would not do that.
*In fact, light can deceive*
.Though I know you could not say the same.
*Yet she won't*
"IF IT WEREN'T FOR YOUR SISTER,
THE REMAINS OF THIS FAMILY WOULD ALREADY BE GONE,
AND WITHOUT HER YOU WOULDN'T EVEN GET TO GO TO SCHOOL,CAN YOU
UNDERSTAND,THAT YOU SISSY BITCH?"
*'Till she can pass the defenses*
Good bye-I mean, good night, mother,
*And then she will do the unexpected*
"I wouldn't have to do this shit
If you got off your ass and helped this family."
*Because light can do anything evil can*
You really should increase you vocabulary.
*And with her irony*
.And your intelligence for that matter.
*And her comebacks*
I have enough money that I will not seem like a hobo,
But not enough that I'll attract a lot of thieves.
*And how she knows everything*
.I think.
*.Usually*
"Wheare iz mye prezious beere? Ie know ie had i' zomwheare!"
"Foo!"
*Evil, you're not so tough*
They would probably look for some girl who was on the streets,
Or just hanging around with friends,
Skipping school,
And not doing any thing with her life.
*Light will hide, and come when you're sleeping*
The people look really rich,
There are a lot of cars,
And I could be spotted easily.
.But it is the only way,
*Yet she might loose*
So I just go running
And faking right
*Cause the one thing light might need*
Before running into the street and
Not seeing that car
*Is the thing she doesn't have*
And
Crashing into the car
And.
*.Which are eyes in the back of her head.*
Uhh. my head.
*But, you see, light doesn't know she's light*
.Where am I?
*So she's going to need some help, right?*
1,
2,
3.
.JUMP!
*Cause the thing is.*
O MY GOD WE HIT SOME ONE!
*That was just one side of the story.*
"Sir, your sister specifically paid me to get you to the premiere on time."
*A prince who doesn't know he's a prince*
YOU KILLED SOME ONE!"
*Is now with our only hope*
"You missed the turn."
*And for someone who doesn't know he's a prince*
Turn around now!
*He's defiantly used to things going his own way.*
You do not pay me; I am paid by your sister's acquaintance.
*But evil doesn't care,*
This floor is dirty; it should be cleaned
*And now the prince has to get dirty*
She's not bleeding too badly
*And help someone besides himself*
She's got glasses.
*And if you must know*,
I don't think she can wear these now that I stood on them.
*He's not the brightest guy around.*
*If you thought that was scary*
*That's just the first and half of the second chapter*
bambu:*Holding dead crickets* Jilley? Carrods? NOOOOOOOOOOooooooooo!
*But if you want scary*
Loki: Jilley? You mean jelly? Carrods? You mean carrots?
*Try reading*
*Watches in interest while bambu tries to get near Loki with her new 'kids'
while Loki is running like an idiot throwing things behind him to slow
bambu down. *
*Something even scarier*
Loki: ^^
^^
Greg: ^^
Everyone: *looked at Greg before running away screaming*
*Read the author's notes*
Greg: *shrugs* ie nead ae prezious beere. *Grins before walking away. *
*And even better*
What! No! I didn't mean it like that!
*After you read, try and review*
Loki: *on top of bambu's head* I dare ya.
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Loki: X.X
bambu: *still sitting on Loki* that was good! ^^
Erm, you say everything is good
bambu: I do? ~ ~ *sniff*
Err. I'm sorry, bambu?
bambu: you are?
Yea
bambu: ^^ 'Kay! Thankies! *Goes to skip in flowers*
O.o. that was weird.well, any who, R/R, please, 'cause if you've got an opinion I'd like to hear it. But with flames I'd like it if you told me why I did horrible. With flames and reviews I will take anomynous reviews, so tell me if I accidentally set it on 'no anomynous reviews'. Thank you.
Loki: *crankily gets up* booma, you idiot, it's anoNymous reviews. AnoNymous!!!
^^; Yea yea, as long as they review I'll be happy.
bambu: *flowers in her hair* bye bye! ^^