Authors note:
Hi all! I'm sorry for the lack of updates, but I've not seen my Role- Playing partner for a few weeks now, but I'm gonna write another chapter on my own, but I might have to change it if she doesn't like it. I had to differ from the story, because things were happening too fast. In the original, Shail, although she's meant to be pretty uptight around guys, jumped into bed with Jack immediately after the kiss scene from the end of chapter three, and ended up pregnant. I thought it would ruin the storyline if that happened, because Shail would be physically impaired with a bun in the oven, so I'll leave that till later. And I might have to change the rating to pg-13; I'm not a writer for a 'sick fantasy' section in playboy, so there won't be much, if any smut. Still, it's not going to be for kiddies. You'll get the general idea of what they were up to, and it ain't pretty.
I'd like to hear your thoughts on this, if you have any ideas for plot twists or anything or if you will be disappointed in the forthcoming lack of smut. Which I highly doubt. Please Review, and tel me all your ponderings, ideas, worries, comments, sick fantasies etc.. actually, ignore that last one.
One last thing, I'm always looking for new stories, if you're interested in role-playing POTC style, IM me on Snapemustdie252. I'm usually on around 7- 10pm most Fridays and Saturdays.
Ciao
~^*^~^*^~^*^~^*^~^*^Love Stacey xxx ~^*^~^*^~^*^~^*^~^*^
Hi all! I'm sorry for the lack of updates, but I've not seen my Role- Playing partner for a few weeks now, but I'm gonna write another chapter on my own, but I might have to change it if she doesn't like it. I had to differ from the story, because things were happening too fast. In the original, Shail, although she's meant to be pretty uptight around guys, jumped into bed with Jack immediately after the kiss scene from the end of chapter three, and ended up pregnant. I thought it would ruin the storyline if that happened, because Shail would be physically impaired with a bun in the oven, so I'll leave that till later. And I might have to change the rating to pg-13; I'm not a writer for a 'sick fantasy' section in playboy, so there won't be much, if any smut. Still, it's not going to be for kiddies. You'll get the general idea of what they were up to, and it ain't pretty.
I'd like to hear your thoughts on this, if you have any ideas for plot twists or anything or if you will be disappointed in the forthcoming lack of smut. Which I highly doubt. Please Review, and tel me all your ponderings, ideas, worries, comments, sick fantasies etc.. actually, ignore that last one.
One last thing, I'm always looking for new stories, if you're interested in role-playing POTC style, IM me on Snapemustdie252. I'm usually on around 7- 10pm most Fridays and Saturdays.
Ciao
~^*^~^*^~^*^~^*^~^*^Love Stacey xxx ~^*^~^*^~^*^~^*^~^*^