Hi this is my first fanfic so be nice kay?(but truthfully tell me if it
totally sucked.
A girl of 12 walked down the street her bangs shadowing her eyes.She thought back on her painful memories.
Then she noticed that it was raining.she looked up as the water droplets dripped down her face.
She stopped at a park.she saw a small family of a 7 year-old girl with her two parents trying to keep the liitle girl from getting wet.
She started to cry.the tears started to roll down her face.but in the rain you couldn't see them.
'that could have been me..'she thought.
She continued to walk.
**flashback**
''mommy,mommy! a small girl of 5 was running to her mother holding a daisy.
"I brought a pretty flower for your hair!" she held out the daisy to her mom.
Her mom smiled and put her on her lap.she took the daisy and put it in her hair after she tucked her raven black hair behind her ear.
"thanks honey!" her mom said.
The Humira family was having a picnic.the little girl,Akahana,ran to her dad who was setting up the banket and laying out the food.
"daddy!is the food almost done???im hungry!!!" Akahana playfully complained.
"okay okay!here you go Aka." Her dad gave her a bbq rib.
"o boy!" she clapped her hands and grabbed the rib.She ate messily and drooped it on her overalls.she pushed back her little blue-ish black bangs and picked it up.
"oops!!" she laughed.Her parents laughed whith the little joyful,sweet girl.
**end of flashback**
Aka frowned deeply and threw back her long hair.'why do I always wear my hair down?' She wondered.
Then she remembered.
**flashback**
"hold still!" Aka's mom commanded with a brush in her hand.
"but daddy's coming to take me shopping!" 5 year-old Aka jumped up and down.
"auuughhh.i guess I shouldn't have fed you that extra bar of chocolate," she said as she sighed.then she smiled.
"well I wont give you the candy then," her mom smiled mischieviously.
"what candy?" Aka curiously asked.
"oh just the candy that I've been saving." Her mom smiled.
"okay ill stay still." Aka said quickly.
Her mom smiled and brushed her hair until her hair was silky and soft.
"Now,why don't you ever wear you hair like that?You look so pretty!!" her mom exclaimed.
A fustrated Aka just sighed and asked,"Can I have my candy now?"
Her mom just laughed.
**end of flashback**
Aka's mouth twitched as if it was about to smile.After a while it stopped twitching.Aka sighed.
She didn't know how to smile.She hadn't smiled since she was six.She hadn't smiled since he came into her life.
Since he ruined her life.
She touched a big ugly scar on her right cheek.She traced the long diagnal line that started from bottom of her cheek to the top.
She suddenly became angry.Really angry.
**flashback**
There was a knock on her door.Her dad opened it.A young boy of seven came.
"Hello.Are you here for Aka's sixth birthday?Sorry but youre a little late.Her friends already left," her dad asked.
The little boy pulled out knife.Aka's dad got confused.
"what are you doing with a knife?Why-" her dad got cut off.Literaly.The little boy had stabbed him in the heart.Her dad was dead.
"Honey who's at the door-" Her mom stopped when she saw the boy with a bloody knife and her husband on the ground lying in his own pool of blood.
She put two and two together and quickly ran to a now six-year old Aka.She tried to get her to run away,but it was too late.The boy was already at the dooway.He ran to her with inhuman speed and killed her.
Aka was terrified.She had seen everything.She had seen her father and mother ruthlessly killed.And the boy hadn't even flinched.
"You..You monster!!!!!!" She screamed.
The boy slowly walked up to her and punched her.She fell on the floor.
She wiped her blood trickling down her lip.The boy tried to cut her but missed.It only scraped her cheek.
Her normal blue eyes had now turned puple with speckle of red.She glared at her with such hatred that the boy took a step back.Reddish purple eyes met reddish brown eyes.
"What are you doing boy?!Kill her quickly!We're leaving soon!" A new voice sounded.
Aka looked at the person who spoke.It was an old man.
She got up and ran.Ran like the wind.She ran faster than she could before.It was like her parents were giving her power.
'Mommy and Daddy sacrificed themselves for me.When I grow up I'll take revenge for them." She thought as she cried and ran.
She stopped at a large lake and cried.She looked at her reflection.Her hair was messy.Her face was red from running and her eyes were puffy because of her crying.But her eyes were what caught her attention.They were completely red with hatred.
Then an old man came out the cabin that she just noticed.He comforted her.
He took her in and took care of her.That was where she grew up.She grew up in the woods in the mountains beside the lake.But the old man was almost always away on ''a business trip."
Every night she had nightmares about the boy who had gray hair in the front and navy blue in the back.
Everyday she trained herself.She always pushed herself over the limit.Then she was noticed by a person called Boris.She was seven then.
He gave her the opportunity to go to a school called the abbey.He had said that there I could be strong.The strongest that there ever was.She agreed but her guardian,Mr. Dickinson,disagreed.
"But why not??!!!" She complained and whined.
"I know that man.He is cruel.That is all I have to say." Mr. Dickinson said calmly.
"You cant control my life!!!I hate you!!!!" she screamed.
That night she ran away.She packed up her things and ran.That's where the real trouble began.
**end of flashback**
She thought back on him.'I should have listened.'She regretted her dicision but her parents' revenge was more important.She was now very strong.
She had a now more feminine body without any muscle.But really she was so strong that she could crack rock.
She looked up.The rain had stopped.Now she stopped.She was here.
She had received a letter a few days ago asking her to join a famous beyblade team since one of their team mates got injured by falling down the stairs.
'Who is stupid enough to fall down the stairs and break both their legs?' She wondered.She walked in and went to the elevator.
She pushed the up button and leaned against the wall,arms crossed,head bowed and eyes closed.
A group of three boys walked by.She heard their conversation.
"Poor Max.I hope he'll heal soon.Man check that out.That girl's all wet!"A boy with a stupid cap on his blue head teased.
She looked down.He was right.She was wet.
She looked up and glared.
"Whoa,sorry dude.Man What's her problem?"the same boy asked.
She noticed that they were waiting for the elevator too so she walked past him and said,"You are my problem."
Then she headed towards the stairs and ran,not knowing that a pair of reddish brown eyes were watching her.
"Hey girl you dropped your-"The boy stopped when she saw that she was already at the next flight of stairs.
"Whoa that was fast.How can she run so fast?"
'I agree.How?'The owner of the eyes thought.
A girl of 12 walked down the street her bangs shadowing her eyes.She thought back on her painful memories.
Then she noticed that it was raining.she looked up as the water droplets dripped down her face.
She stopped at a park.she saw a small family of a 7 year-old girl with her two parents trying to keep the liitle girl from getting wet.
She started to cry.the tears started to roll down her face.but in the rain you couldn't see them.
'that could have been me..'she thought.
She continued to walk.
**flashback**
''mommy,mommy! a small girl of 5 was running to her mother holding a daisy.
"I brought a pretty flower for your hair!" she held out the daisy to her mom.
Her mom smiled and put her on her lap.she took the daisy and put it in her hair after she tucked her raven black hair behind her ear.
"thanks honey!" her mom said.
The Humira family was having a picnic.the little girl,Akahana,ran to her dad who was setting up the banket and laying out the food.
"daddy!is the food almost done???im hungry!!!" Akahana playfully complained.
"okay okay!here you go Aka." Her dad gave her a bbq rib.
"o boy!" she clapped her hands and grabbed the rib.She ate messily and drooped it on her overalls.she pushed back her little blue-ish black bangs and picked it up.
"oops!!" she laughed.Her parents laughed whith the little joyful,sweet girl.
**end of flashback**
Aka frowned deeply and threw back her long hair.'why do I always wear my hair down?' She wondered.
Then she remembered.
**flashback**
"hold still!" Aka's mom commanded with a brush in her hand.
"but daddy's coming to take me shopping!" 5 year-old Aka jumped up and down.
"auuughhh.i guess I shouldn't have fed you that extra bar of chocolate," she said as she sighed.then she smiled.
"well I wont give you the candy then," her mom smiled mischieviously.
"what candy?" Aka curiously asked.
"oh just the candy that I've been saving." Her mom smiled.
"okay ill stay still." Aka said quickly.
Her mom smiled and brushed her hair until her hair was silky and soft.
"Now,why don't you ever wear you hair like that?You look so pretty!!" her mom exclaimed.
A fustrated Aka just sighed and asked,"Can I have my candy now?"
Her mom just laughed.
**end of flashback**
Aka's mouth twitched as if it was about to smile.After a while it stopped twitching.Aka sighed.
She didn't know how to smile.She hadn't smiled since she was six.She hadn't smiled since he came into her life.
Since he ruined her life.
She touched a big ugly scar on her right cheek.She traced the long diagnal line that started from bottom of her cheek to the top.
She suddenly became angry.Really angry.
**flashback**
There was a knock on her door.Her dad opened it.A young boy of seven came.
"Hello.Are you here for Aka's sixth birthday?Sorry but youre a little late.Her friends already left," her dad asked.
The little boy pulled out knife.Aka's dad got confused.
"what are you doing with a knife?Why-" her dad got cut off.Literaly.The little boy had stabbed him in the heart.Her dad was dead.
"Honey who's at the door-" Her mom stopped when she saw the boy with a bloody knife and her husband on the ground lying in his own pool of blood.
She put two and two together and quickly ran to a now six-year old Aka.She tried to get her to run away,but it was too late.The boy was already at the dooway.He ran to her with inhuman speed and killed her.
Aka was terrified.She had seen everything.She had seen her father and mother ruthlessly killed.And the boy hadn't even flinched.
"You..You monster!!!!!!" She screamed.
The boy slowly walked up to her and punched her.She fell on the floor.
She wiped her blood trickling down her lip.The boy tried to cut her but missed.It only scraped her cheek.
Her normal blue eyes had now turned puple with speckle of red.She glared at her with such hatred that the boy took a step back.Reddish purple eyes met reddish brown eyes.
"What are you doing boy?!Kill her quickly!We're leaving soon!" A new voice sounded.
Aka looked at the person who spoke.It was an old man.
She got up and ran.Ran like the wind.She ran faster than she could before.It was like her parents were giving her power.
'Mommy and Daddy sacrificed themselves for me.When I grow up I'll take revenge for them." She thought as she cried and ran.
She stopped at a large lake and cried.She looked at her reflection.Her hair was messy.Her face was red from running and her eyes were puffy because of her crying.But her eyes were what caught her attention.They were completely red with hatred.
Then an old man came out the cabin that she just noticed.He comforted her.
He took her in and took care of her.That was where she grew up.She grew up in the woods in the mountains beside the lake.But the old man was almost always away on ''a business trip."
Every night she had nightmares about the boy who had gray hair in the front and navy blue in the back.
Everyday she trained herself.She always pushed herself over the limit.Then she was noticed by a person called Boris.She was seven then.
He gave her the opportunity to go to a school called the abbey.He had said that there I could be strong.The strongest that there ever was.She agreed but her guardian,Mr. Dickinson,disagreed.
"But why not??!!!" She complained and whined.
"I know that man.He is cruel.That is all I have to say." Mr. Dickinson said calmly.
"You cant control my life!!!I hate you!!!!" she screamed.
That night she ran away.She packed up her things and ran.That's where the real trouble began.
**end of flashback**
She thought back on him.'I should have listened.'She regretted her dicision but her parents' revenge was more important.She was now very strong.
She had a now more feminine body without any muscle.But really she was so strong that she could crack rock.
She looked up.The rain had stopped.Now she stopped.She was here.
She had received a letter a few days ago asking her to join a famous beyblade team since one of their team mates got injured by falling down the stairs.
'Who is stupid enough to fall down the stairs and break both their legs?' She wondered.She walked in and went to the elevator.
She pushed the up button and leaned against the wall,arms crossed,head bowed and eyes closed.
A group of three boys walked by.She heard their conversation.
"Poor Max.I hope he'll heal soon.Man check that out.That girl's all wet!"A boy with a stupid cap on his blue head teased.
She looked down.He was right.She was wet.
She looked up and glared.
"Whoa,sorry dude.Man What's her problem?"the same boy asked.
She noticed that they were waiting for the elevator too so she walked past him and said,"You are my problem."
Then she headed towards the stairs and ran,not knowing that a pair of reddish brown eyes were watching her.
"Hey girl you dropped your-"The boy stopped when she saw that she was already at the next flight of stairs.
"Whoa that was fast.How can she run so fast?"
'I agree.How?'The owner of the eyes thought.