Well... since i got the first four reviews... i have decided to write another chapter... if you havent gotten this far... that means that you havent rread the first chapter revised... if you read the part where the girl beats up the patrol's... then read the rest... but here is chapter two...
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We see Nemo sitting in a chair... he is in a white interrogation room... the same three teachers are there... the main teacher pulls out a manilla folder... its not more than a few centimeters thick... he starts to unbind it... he looks down toward it...
"Mr. Bourgeois, as you can tell, we have been watching you for some time now," he now looks at Nemo...
"it seems you live two lives, one life your name is Brian A. Bourgeois, you are a good student, you make passing grades, and you take out the garbage for your mother," he raises an eyebrow... then he quickly begins again,
"and in the other life, you are a cheater, alias Nemo," he shows no emotion..." one of these lives has a future, and the other does not,"
"Okay, lets cut the bullshit, you want me to stop helping kids pass school, that is what you are saying, that seems, well," he starts to feel stumped, he hides it, then he looks brightly at the teacher...
"hows this, i give you the finger," he does, his fingers are long, this one sticks out... the teacher eyes it, he looks as if he wants to break it off...
"and you give me my phone call..." the teacher smiles...
"And what use is a phone call, if you are unable to speak..." duct tape starts to form from Nemo's mouth... he stares widely at the teacher... he grabs at his face and mumbles... the teacher smiles evilly at Nemo... then the other two grab nemo... they pull off his shirt... its a button up dark yellow japanese shirt... the main teacher grabs a small test tube... something small and green wriggles around in it... he opens the tube onto Nemo's stomach and the thing quickly goes into his belly button...
Nemo wakes up... he looks at his alarm clock.... hadnt he broken it... oh well.... must have been a bad dream... his phone rings... it is raining outside... he answers the phone... "Hello Nemo, meet me at willis and bradley...." she calls out a random street name...
Nemo is now under a bridge... a car pulls up... the door opens and he gets in... the girl in the front seat instantly turns around and points a book at him... he freezes...
"What the fuck are you gonna do with that?" he looks at her oddly... then Gothity opens up his shirt... looking at his overweight stomach... she looks kind of dissapointed... then she pulls out a machine looking device...
"What the hell?" Nemo asks and he starts to get scared... she leeches it onto his stomach and it pins on... he cringes... then she looks at a camera... she sees the thiing from the night before...
"Damn, we thought you were booged," she looks at the odd thing... it starts to move and the girl in the front seat... with a russian accent starts to talk...
"Your going to lose it..."
"No im not..." she moves a joystick around and presses a button... and electric shock is sent onto Nemo's belly... he cringes... then she says...
"Clear..." the odd booger like thing pops into a test tube...
"Holy shit, that things real!!!" he watches her empty it out the window... it moves on the ground... and dies... the car stops by what looks to be an abandoned apartment complex...
They walk up endless stairs and go into a room... Nemo sits down and he looks at Doofius... they both sit in red chairs... Doofius opens a pill box... he puts tow pills in his hands... one pill in each... one pill is red.... the other blue...
"Choose the blue pill and you wake up in your bed... and believe... whatever you want to belive... take the red pill... and see how far down the turtle hole goes..." Nemo looks hesitant... he grabs the red pill... and he swallows it... he hadnt recognized the conveniantly placed glass of water... he then looks at it... he looks pained... he takes a gulp of the water... then Doofius stands him up... they walk into another room... their are lots of teens in the room... he looks at them... then he looks at the equiptment... he looks at Gothity...
"You set up all this?" she nods her head... Nemo sits down in a chair... they set up stuff on his temples... and then he looks at an open Bible... he looks at it oddly... it looks like the whole book has been ripped... it starts to mend... he looks around at everyone... he starts to mumble something... they just look at him... he touches the book... then a white color starts to cover his skin...
"God, its cold, so cold..." the others look at monitors... they talk to each other in what sounds to be elvish...
"Now!!" Doofius's geek voice commands... then everything goes black...
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Nemo wakes up in a pool of pink liquid... he has stuff all over his body... he looks around... giant electric sparks are flying everywhere... he looks at the millions of other pools of pink liiquid... he sees that there are teens and young children all around in the pools... his eyes go wide... then a robot flies up to him...
"Hello sir, i am KCC the killer bot..." it pops out a giant what appears to be a drill without a head and it goes for the back of Nemo's head... Nemo falls into the pool... and then all the other wires pop out with a loud noise... he falls and the pool empties out... he then lands in a giant pool of water... a claw comes down... and it picks up Nemo's naked body... it brings him into a bright light... where his fate is to be seen...
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as i said before... if you like it... then review... i shall be tolerant of flames today... im in a good mood... though i have to clean the kitchen... but you all seem to be nive people... and if you odnt like the way i spell shit... then shove it... i want to hear about the story... and how i did... not how you want to see it... fut whatever... just review...
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We see Nemo sitting in a chair... he is in a white interrogation room... the same three teachers are there... the main teacher pulls out a manilla folder... its not more than a few centimeters thick... he starts to unbind it... he looks down toward it...
"Mr. Bourgeois, as you can tell, we have been watching you for some time now," he now looks at Nemo...
"it seems you live two lives, one life your name is Brian A. Bourgeois, you are a good student, you make passing grades, and you take out the garbage for your mother," he raises an eyebrow... then he quickly begins again,
"and in the other life, you are a cheater, alias Nemo," he shows no emotion..." one of these lives has a future, and the other does not,"
"Okay, lets cut the bullshit, you want me to stop helping kids pass school, that is what you are saying, that seems, well," he starts to feel stumped, he hides it, then he looks brightly at the teacher...
"hows this, i give you the finger," he does, his fingers are long, this one sticks out... the teacher eyes it, he looks as if he wants to break it off...
"and you give me my phone call..." the teacher smiles...
"And what use is a phone call, if you are unable to speak..." duct tape starts to form from Nemo's mouth... he stares widely at the teacher... he grabs at his face and mumbles... the teacher smiles evilly at Nemo... then the other two grab nemo... they pull off his shirt... its a button up dark yellow japanese shirt... the main teacher grabs a small test tube... something small and green wriggles around in it... he opens the tube onto Nemo's stomach and the thing quickly goes into his belly button...
Nemo wakes up... he looks at his alarm clock.... hadnt he broken it... oh well.... must have been a bad dream... his phone rings... it is raining outside... he answers the phone... "Hello Nemo, meet me at willis and bradley...." she calls out a random street name...
Nemo is now under a bridge... a car pulls up... the door opens and he gets in... the girl in the front seat instantly turns around and points a book at him... he freezes...
"What the fuck are you gonna do with that?" he looks at her oddly... then Gothity opens up his shirt... looking at his overweight stomach... she looks kind of dissapointed... then she pulls out a machine looking device...
"What the hell?" Nemo asks and he starts to get scared... she leeches it onto his stomach and it pins on... he cringes... then she looks at a camera... she sees the thiing from the night before...
"Damn, we thought you were booged," she looks at the odd thing... it starts to move and the girl in the front seat... with a russian accent starts to talk...
"Your going to lose it..."
"No im not..." she moves a joystick around and presses a button... and electric shock is sent onto Nemo's belly... he cringes... then she says...
"Clear..." the odd booger like thing pops into a test tube...
"Holy shit, that things real!!!" he watches her empty it out the window... it moves on the ground... and dies... the car stops by what looks to be an abandoned apartment complex...
They walk up endless stairs and go into a room... Nemo sits down and he looks at Doofius... they both sit in red chairs... Doofius opens a pill box... he puts tow pills in his hands... one pill in each... one pill is red.... the other blue...
"Choose the blue pill and you wake up in your bed... and believe... whatever you want to belive... take the red pill... and see how far down the turtle hole goes..." Nemo looks hesitant... he grabs the red pill... and he swallows it... he hadnt recognized the conveniantly placed glass of water... he then looks at it... he looks pained... he takes a gulp of the water... then Doofius stands him up... they walk into another room... their are lots of teens in the room... he looks at them... then he looks at the equiptment... he looks at Gothity...
"You set up all this?" she nods her head... Nemo sits down in a chair... they set up stuff on his temples... and then he looks at an open Bible... he looks at it oddly... it looks like the whole book has been ripped... it starts to mend... he looks around at everyone... he starts to mumble something... they just look at him... he touches the book... then a white color starts to cover his skin...
"God, its cold, so cold..." the others look at monitors... they talk to each other in what sounds to be elvish...
"Now!!" Doofius's geek voice commands... then everything goes black...
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Nemo wakes up in a pool of pink liquid... he has stuff all over his body... he looks around... giant electric sparks are flying everywhere... he looks at the millions of other pools of pink liiquid... he sees that there are teens and young children all around in the pools... his eyes go wide... then a robot flies up to him...
"Hello sir, i am KCC the killer bot..." it pops out a giant what appears to be a drill without a head and it goes for the back of Nemo's head... Nemo falls into the pool... and then all the other wires pop out with a loud noise... he falls and the pool empties out... he then lands in a giant pool of water... a claw comes down... and it picks up Nemo's naked body... it brings him into a bright light... where his fate is to be seen...
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as i said before... if you like it... then review... i shall be tolerant of flames today... im in a good mood... though i have to clean the kitchen... but you all seem to be nive people... and if you odnt like the way i spell shit... then shove it... i want to hear about the story... and how i did... not how you want to see it... fut whatever... just review...