A/N-Oh my gosh! I've never gotten 4 reviews for a first chapter before!
Anywho, a bit of action in this chapter....
I want to thank:
Kd Zeal-Hi! Thanks, and I read the next chapter, it rocked!
daisycutters-thanks! ^_^ I will keep on writing..
IcyZephyrGirl-You'll find out ^_^
Silver Mist4-thanks! Especially the 'great writing style' part, no one's ever said that to me before! It truly made my day. ^_^
Chapter 2
Tea dashed into her room, her face slightly pink from the cold. She ran to her roommate's bed, and shouted,
"Oh-My-God-You'll-Never-Guess-What-Happened!!!!"
"Hold on, say that slower, please." Said the roommate.
"Oh, ok. Oh_My_God_You'll_never_guess_what_happened! Better?"
"Yes, much. So tell me what happened, please!" Tea's roommate sat up in her bed, ready to listen.
"Guess who got picked to be in the Nutcracker?" Said Tea happily.
"You mean the main character? You? Hurry up in telling me please."
"Ok, Erica." She paused.
"Tell me, Please!!!!!" Erica hollered.
"Ok, ok, I'll tell you. I was just thinking... Anyways, the person in the Nutcracker is..." She paused again for a dramatic affect. "I am! Isn't that awesome?!?" Tea smiled.
"That's great! Do you know what the costume looks like? If you do, tell me please!" Erica said happily.
"Ok. It's pink, with a pretty long skirt, and a lacy top. It's really pretty, but kind-of hard to describe."
"I see. Are you excited?"
"Of course! I can't wait till practice! It will be SO much fun!" Said Tea. "But you should get some rest. All of this excitement isn't good for you, since you're still sick."
"You should rest too, please, Tea." Said Erica nicely.
"No, you need company." Said Tea, and she pulled up a stool and smiled. "Do you want me to tell you a story?"
"Sure..." Said Erica doubtfully, but she slid back down into her bed, and closed her eyes.
"Ok! Once there was a boy, and he had spiky hair. It was mostly black, but he had yellow bangs, and part of his hair was red. Oh! And he was very short. His name was Yu- I mean, his name was Seto Kaiba. Now, Seto was very good at cards, but he didn't have any friends, except for one named... Mai. Mai had brown hair and blue eyes, and had been Seto's friend since he was a kid.."
She went on to tell about how Weevil (Joey) and Rex (Tristan) always picked on Seto. Oh, and she also told all about the Millennium Puzzle, and how inside was a spirit named Ryou, and about the rich snobby Yugi Muto, who owned MutoCorp. Her favorite part was telling about Duelist kingdom.
"While Seto was dueling Cecilia Pegasus, Rex, Weevil and Mai all put their hands together and cheered on Seto, and finally, Seto won, all thanks to Friendship." She paused, and realized how dry her throat was. "Oh well, that's enough for tonight!" Tea said brightly, and pulled out a book.
"I gotta stay up all night to make sure that you are okay." Tea whispered, and started reading, 'The care and keeping of friendship'.
The next day, Tea woke up bright and early. She yawned and stretched. Then she noticed where she was, which was on a chair instead of on a bed.
"Ack! I was supposed to stay up ALL NIGHT to make sure Erica was Ok!!!" Tea scolded herself, but then looking at her watch, she gasped and completely forgot about Erica.
Her day hurried along as usual and she barely made it to class on time. The only difference was that she was receiving a lot of glares from the other girls, but Tea shrugged it off, knowing it was just jealousy.
Finally, the long day was over, and Tea started going back to her dorm, but she wasn't looking forward to walking that long distance, so Tea decided to go to the mall instead.
"What to buy, what to buy..." She looked through all the stores, finally stopping in front of the food court. "Whatever I'm going to buy, it's going to have to wait." She said, being reminded of her stomach.
"Welcome to Wendy's, how may I help you?" Said the green haired teen in front of the register.
"I want a garden salad and five chicken nuggets please!" Tea ordered.
"Coming right up!" Said the teen. He turned around. "One garden and five little chicks!" The people in the small 'restaurant' bustled around, getting all the food for Tea and for other customers.
"Miss, your food is ready, the total is $3.50." Said the teen, handing Tea a bag of food. Tea handed him over a $4, said,
"Keep the change!" She smiled, and flounced over to a table to chow down.
A few minutes later, Tea was searching through the mall. 'I need a new purse,' she thought. 'Now where to go..' She searched through a bunch of stores, and then settled on a store called 'Afterthoughts'. Then she found the perfect purse, it was bright pink, with a bunch of different pockets, but small enough to be travel-size.
"Perfect!" She exclaimed, and then ran off to pay for it.
An hour later, she was lugging a bunch of packages through the mall, desperately trying to find the entrance. Finally, she found a police officer to ask for directions, and then she left for home.
It had started snowing heavily by the time she was very close, and she started to run.
"Snow.. freezing... butt... cold!...." She muttered, while panting. Then she thought she recognized a short-cut, and started dashing down that way, but a few minutes later, she murmured,
"No, that can't be right." Tea faced a brick wall. "Dead end."
She turned around and noticed someone, but the snow was too thick to make out a face.
"Hello, what's your name?" Tea asked, trying to block her fear from coming through her voice.
"That's not important." Said the person, pointing one of her arms at Tea's head.
"What are you holding?" Tea asked, now especially freaked out.
"What do you think, a cookie?" The girl said sarcastically. Then she pulled the trigger.
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the end! Ok, not really. The end of the chappy. I wanted to make the death happen next chapter, but... I kinda got carried away. ^_^;;
Anywho, I loved writing this chapter, don't know why, but I think it's the best chapter I ever wrote, so, please, please keep the insults to a minimum.. ^_^ Oh, and if you noticed, Erica kinda sounded like that person (you know, the person that goes, 'Amanda please') from the Amanda Show. That was unintentional, I wanted to make her sound too polite and annoying, but.. So I don't own the Amanda Show or Wendy's, even though I love to eat at Wendy's!!!!
Please review!
fishkisser
Sk8 gr8!
I want to thank:
Kd Zeal-Hi! Thanks, and I read the next chapter, it rocked!
daisycutters-thanks! ^_^ I will keep on writing..
IcyZephyrGirl-You'll find out ^_^
Silver Mist4-thanks! Especially the 'great writing style' part, no one's ever said that to me before! It truly made my day. ^_^
Chapter 2
Tea dashed into her room, her face slightly pink from the cold. She ran to her roommate's bed, and shouted,
"Oh-My-God-You'll-Never-Guess-What-Happened!!!!"
"Hold on, say that slower, please." Said the roommate.
"Oh, ok. Oh_My_God_You'll_never_guess_what_happened! Better?"
"Yes, much. So tell me what happened, please!" Tea's roommate sat up in her bed, ready to listen.
"Guess who got picked to be in the Nutcracker?" Said Tea happily.
"You mean the main character? You? Hurry up in telling me please."
"Ok, Erica." She paused.
"Tell me, Please!!!!!" Erica hollered.
"Ok, ok, I'll tell you. I was just thinking... Anyways, the person in the Nutcracker is..." She paused again for a dramatic affect. "I am! Isn't that awesome?!?" Tea smiled.
"That's great! Do you know what the costume looks like? If you do, tell me please!" Erica said happily.
"Ok. It's pink, with a pretty long skirt, and a lacy top. It's really pretty, but kind-of hard to describe."
"I see. Are you excited?"
"Of course! I can't wait till practice! It will be SO much fun!" Said Tea. "But you should get some rest. All of this excitement isn't good for you, since you're still sick."
"You should rest too, please, Tea." Said Erica nicely.
"No, you need company." Said Tea, and she pulled up a stool and smiled. "Do you want me to tell you a story?"
"Sure..." Said Erica doubtfully, but she slid back down into her bed, and closed her eyes.
"Ok! Once there was a boy, and he had spiky hair. It was mostly black, but he had yellow bangs, and part of his hair was red. Oh! And he was very short. His name was Yu- I mean, his name was Seto Kaiba. Now, Seto was very good at cards, but he didn't have any friends, except for one named... Mai. Mai had brown hair and blue eyes, and had been Seto's friend since he was a kid.."
She went on to tell about how Weevil (Joey) and Rex (Tristan) always picked on Seto. Oh, and she also told all about the Millennium Puzzle, and how inside was a spirit named Ryou, and about the rich snobby Yugi Muto, who owned MutoCorp. Her favorite part was telling about Duelist kingdom.
"While Seto was dueling Cecilia Pegasus, Rex, Weevil and Mai all put their hands together and cheered on Seto, and finally, Seto won, all thanks to Friendship." She paused, and realized how dry her throat was. "Oh well, that's enough for tonight!" Tea said brightly, and pulled out a book.
"I gotta stay up all night to make sure that you are okay." Tea whispered, and started reading, 'The care and keeping of friendship'.
The next day, Tea woke up bright and early. She yawned and stretched. Then she noticed where she was, which was on a chair instead of on a bed.
"Ack! I was supposed to stay up ALL NIGHT to make sure Erica was Ok!!!" Tea scolded herself, but then looking at her watch, she gasped and completely forgot about Erica.
Her day hurried along as usual and she barely made it to class on time. The only difference was that she was receiving a lot of glares from the other girls, but Tea shrugged it off, knowing it was just jealousy.
Finally, the long day was over, and Tea started going back to her dorm, but she wasn't looking forward to walking that long distance, so Tea decided to go to the mall instead.
"What to buy, what to buy..." She looked through all the stores, finally stopping in front of the food court. "Whatever I'm going to buy, it's going to have to wait." She said, being reminded of her stomach.
"Welcome to Wendy's, how may I help you?" Said the green haired teen in front of the register.
"I want a garden salad and five chicken nuggets please!" Tea ordered.
"Coming right up!" Said the teen. He turned around. "One garden and five little chicks!" The people in the small 'restaurant' bustled around, getting all the food for Tea and for other customers.
"Miss, your food is ready, the total is $3.50." Said the teen, handing Tea a bag of food. Tea handed him over a $4, said,
"Keep the change!" She smiled, and flounced over to a table to chow down.
A few minutes later, Tea was searching through the mall. 'I need a new purse,' she thought. 'Now where to go..' She searched through a bunch of stores, and then settled on a store called 'Afterthoughts'. Then she found the perfect purse, it was bright pink, with a bunch of different pockets, but small enough to be travel-size.
"Perfect!" She exclaimed, and then ran off to pay for it.
An hour later, she was lugging a bunch of packages through the mall, desperately trying to find the entrance. Finally, she found a police officer to ask for directions, and then she left for home.
It had started snowing heavily by the time she was very close, and she started to run.
"Snow.. freezing... butt... cold!...." She muttered, while panting. Then she thought she recognized a short-cut, and started dashing down that way, but a few minutes later, she murmured,
"No, that can't be right." Tea faced a brick wall. "Dead end."
She turned around and noticed someone, but the snow was too thick to make out a face.
"Hello, what's your name?" Tea asked, trying to block her fear from coming through her voice.
"That's not important." Said the person, pointing one of her arms at Tea's head.
"What are you holding?" Tea asked, now especially freaked out.
"What do you think, a cookie?" The girl said sarcastically. Then she pulled the trigger.
*!*!*!*!*!*
the end! Ok, not really. The end of the chappy. I wanted to make the death happen next chapter, but... I kinda got carried away. ^_^;;
Anywho, I loved writing this chapter, don't know why, but I think it's the best chapter I ever wrote, so, please, please keep the insults to a minimum.. ^_^ Oh, and if you noticed, Erica kinda sounded like that person (you know, the person that goes, 'Amanda please') from the Amanda Show. That was unintentional, I wanted to make her sound too polite and annoying, but.. So I don't own the Amanda Show or Wendy's, even though I love to eat at Wendy's!!!!
Please review!
fishkisser
Sk8 gr8!