THIS IS JUST A RESPONSE TO ALL THE REVIEWS FOR CHAPTER 13!!!
Author's Note: Wow, what an overwhelming response to Kevin getting beat up! Anyways, I thought you guys would think it was cute, I know I did... heh.... :-D I realize a few people here and there didn't read it due to the overwhelming violece, so I'm sorry I didn't put a disclaimer or warning at the beginning to you! Of course, I would never do anything like that to anyone! :-D
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aloha_broha: So it's FANTABULOUS, eh? Absotively posolutely! :-D That's great, I use fantabulous every so often. It's quite a fun word! I'm so happy you enjoyed it. It's always cool to get new readers even after I've put out 13 chapters. One more late-teenager, eh? Awesome! Look, Lizzie McGuire rocks and I don't care what anyone else says! (See? I'm a dedicated fan....) And I know what you mean, I felt so much better about thinking Adam Lamberg was one hot cookie after I found out he was 18. You know, it just felt kinda... wrong? I dunno... :-D I've started reading Evolutions per your suggestion. I'm really liking it so far! It's kinda angsty, but a little angst is always okay. And I can tell you right now what I think should happen (unless something I haven't read yet is preventing it). Dimitri should find a way to move to California, etc. and Gordo should be with Lizzie. Because, as I've said before, Gordo wuv Lizzie and Lizzie wuv Gordo! :-D I've only read to chapter five yet, so like I said something could have happened in a future chapter I don't know about... Thanks for reading!
beegirl: Awesome to hear! I bet your niece thinks you are the coolest aunt ever... I know I would! It is so cool to hear that you like the story, thanks for your review!
NekoRanma13: Well, I'm glad you found it humorous... that was the point, with the silliness and all. (really, who has a pet crocodile named Bruce? At least you could name him Chester or something more appropriate... :-D)
hiddenwriter: I'm glad you liked the story, but I'm sorry you found the 13th chapter so offensive. I have a disclaimer on it now for future readers. If gratuitous violence isn't your thing (and really, it's not mine either), I understand that, but I want you to know that Kevin was dreaming if it that helps at all. If not, I'm sorry about any misunderstanding! And yes, sequel! So stay tuned....
Sky McCoy: Well, someone had to give him the chair, a la Shrek...! No problem, I thought it would be a cute, humorous way to show all my reviewers how much I appreciate them, and I hope it worked!
liz3386: If it gave you a warm fuzzy feeling, then I'm glad because all of your reviews give *me* a warm fuzzy feeling! As for the Gordo/Lizzie question, yes, it was due to the dream and Kevin's conceptions. But don't worry, it will come to fruition... eventually! And yes ma'am, that chapter will be out ASAP! Right now I am actually trying to give myself a direction I want to go with the story, and I'm bringing a laptop with me. So while I won't have internet, I will have a writing program, which is all that really matters... :-D
LizzieC: Just buy a bag of Pixie Stix. Seriously, did you ever snort Pixie Stix in middle school or whatever? Like, we all thought we were so funny. Not cool, just funny. Because really, what are Pixie Stix gonna do to you? Nothing. Maybe make your nose hurt, but that's about it. I'm glad you liked it!
macdeniken: I'm glad you liked the concept! I think I invented it, but if I didn't, at least I came to it on my own, right? :-D
swim6516: Thank you! I'll be here all week... :-D I thought the concept was a clever way of saying thank you, so there it is! How about it's your favorite humor chapter? :-D DPF, girl!
Black Knight: I agree! And what do you know, you filthy English Kaaaaa-nig-git! :-D (A little MP for ya there...)
TL: SIR YES SIR! Alpha unit detained said objective until the commander gave the order SIR! :-D
Baby Gangsta: Yeah, Bruce is a good ol' boy, isn't he? :-D Glad you liked it!
starcraze: Yay! Yes you did! Go you!
afro-dite: That's okay, I'm guilty of it myself sometimes! I'm glad you finally reviewed though. If I ever do something similar, now you'll be included! And please do continue reading....
Sammy The Story Magi: It does have a certain classic charm, doesn't it? :-D Good to know I could make you smile!
JP5683: Dude! I never made anyone do some kung fu! ::slaps forehead:: HOW COULD I BE SO STUPID? Man... I'll have to keep that in mind. Awesome choice of lyrics, major kudos!
Taygeta: Go us! We all rock. :-D Laughter is what makes life worth living and all that... or is it love... or maybe both...?
Jennifer: I am so sorry! Had you ever reviewed before? I made a list before I started writing, but it's possible I missed someone... and I'm sorry about your date... ::shudder:: If a guy is *still* that bad after five drinks... he ain't a keeper, I can tell ya that much for free!
Sum41blinker: Don't worry, I so will!
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Author's Note: Overall, I'd say you guys liked what I did... I may have to make it a tradition of sorts using different scenarios. Is this incentive to review? Is it *cheap* incentive to use? Maybe it is, but I swear I'm not using it as a bribing tool, it was actually fun and funny to write! I think I know where I'm gonna go with my story from here, at least for part II, so look out for a chapter on Monday night or Tuesday, alright?
Author's Note: Wow, what an overwhelming response to Kevin getting beat up! Anyways, I thought you guys would think it was cute, I know I did... heh.... :-D I realize a few people here and there didn't read it due to the overwhelming violece, so I'm sorry I didn't put a disclaimer or warning at the beginning to you! Of course, I would never do anything like that to anyone! :-D
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aloha_broha: So it's FANTABULOUS, eh? Absotively posolutely! :-D That's great, I use fantabulous every so often. It's quite a fun word! I'm so happy you enjoyed it. It's always cool to get new readers even after I've put out 13 chapters. One more late-teenager, eh? Awesome! Look, Lizzie McGuire rocks and I don't care what anyone else says! (See? I'm a dedicated fan....) And I know what you mean, I felt so much better about thinking Adam Lamberg was one hot cookie after I found out he was 18. You know, it just felt kinda... wrong? I dunno... :-D I've started reading Evolutions per your suggestion. I'm really liking it so far! It's kinda angsty, but a little angst is always okay. And I can tell you right now what I think should happen (unless something I haven't read yet is preventing it). Dimitri should find a way to move to California, etc. and Gordo should be with Lizzie. Because, as I've said before, Gordo wuv Lizzie and Lizzie wuv Gordo! :-D I've only read to chapter five yet, so like I said something could have happened in a future chapter I don't know about... Thanks for reading!
beegirl: Awesome to hear! I bet your niece thinks you are the coolest aunt ever... I know I would! It is so cool to hear that you like the story, thanks for your review!
NekoRanma13: Well, I'm glad you found it humorous... that was the point, with the silliness and all. (really, who has a pet crocodile named Bruce? At least you could name him Chester or something more appropriate... :-D)
hiddenwriter: I'm glad you liked the story, but I'm sorry you found the 13th chapter so offensive. I have a disclaimer on it now for future readers. If gratuitous violence isn't your thing (and really, it's not mine either), I understand that, but I want you to know that Kevin was dreaming if it that helps at all. If not, I'm sorry about any misunderstanding! And yes, sequel! So stay tuned....
Sky McCoy: Well, someone had to give him the chair, a la Shrek...! No problem, I thought it would be a cute, humorous way to show all my reviewers how much I appreciate them, and I hope it worked!
liz3386: If it gave you a warm fuzzy feeling, then I'm glad because all of your reviews give *me* a warm fuzzy feeling! As for the Gordo/Lizzie question, yes, it was due to the dream and Kevin's conceptions. But don't worry, it will come to fruition... eventually! And yes ma'am, that chapter will be out ASAP! Right now I am actually trying to give myself a direction I want to go with the story, and I'm bringing a laptop with me. So while I won't have internet, I will have a writing program, which is all that really matters... :-D
LizzieC: Just buy a bag of Pixie Stix. Seriously, did you ever snort Pixie Stix in middle school or whatever? Like, we all thought we were so funny. Not cool, just funny. Because really, what are Pixie Stix gonna do to you? Nothing. Maybe make your nose hurt, but that's about it. I'm glad you liked it!
macdeniken: I'm glad you liked the concept! I think I invented it, but if I didn't, at least I came to it on my own, right? :-D
swim6516: Thank you! I'll be here all week... :-D I thought the concept was a clever way of saying thank you, so there it is! How about it's your favorite humor chapter? :-D DPF, girl!
Black Knight: I agree! And what do you know, you filthy English Kaaaaa-nig-git! :-D (A little MP for ya there...)
TL: SIR YES SIR! Alpha unit detained said objective until the commander gave the order SIR! :-D
Baby Gangsta: Yeah, Bruce is a good ol' boy, isn't he? :-D Glad you liked it!
starcraze: Yay! Yes you did! Go you!
afro-dite: That's okay, I'm guilty of it myself sometimes! I'm glad you finally reviewed though. If I ever do something similar, now you'll be included! And please do continue reading....
Sammy The Story Magi: It does have a certain classic charm, doesn't it? :-D Good to know I could make you smile!
JP5683: Dude! I never made anyone do some kung fu! ::slaps forehead:: HOW COULD I BE SO STUPID? Man... I'll have to keep that in mind. Awesome choice of lyrics, major kudos!
Taygeta: Go us! We all rock. :-D Laughter is what makes life worth living and all that... or is it love... or maybe both...?
Jennifer: I am so sorry! Had you ever reviewed before? I made a list before I started writing, but it's possible I missed someone... and I'm sorry about your date... ::shudder:: If a guy is *still* that bad after five drinks... he ain't a keeper, I can tell ya that much for free!
Sum41blinker: Don't worry, I so will!
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Author's Note: Overall, I'd say you guys liked what I did... I may have to make it a tradition of sorts using different scenarios. Is this incentive to review? Is it *cheap* incentive to use? Maybe it is, but I swear I'm not using it as a bribing tool, it was actually fun and funny to write! I think I know where I'm gonna go with my story from here, at least for part II, so look out for a chapter on Monday night or Tuesday, alright?