Kilala6: For all of you EVIL EVIL people who flame. how can I put
this? Eh hem. GO TO HELL. thank you. It is very very wrong to type
mean things to people! What kind of parents do you have? If you don't
like the story, shut up and read something else. Yeah and to all
those nice people like ES, THANKS and I read your story, and I think
it's really good so far, and I know you probably won't even be
reading this, cause people give up on stories, which I don't
understand how you could do. But um. yeah . anyway, I love you all
and stuff.
In case you're all wondering that means no flames. or evil reviews as
I call them, kay? Yeah if you do I will take the privilege of hacking
onto your computer, finding out where you live and. doing something
very bad. That's not a threat though, okay?
Now as some of you might know. I talk too much. And that's the way my
life goes. I like talking and stalling things. So you don't have to
read all this junk I'm writing right here, it's just me reaching out
to all of you. Anyway. yep.
Oh yeah, and I know kitty isn't an Egyptian name, but that's not her
real name anyway you idiot! I'm not stupid, but you know what?
Neither is Yami or Bakura okay? So bare with me. I don't know any
Egyptian people, I'm from America, and as far as I know there aren't
a lot of Egyptians in America. Anyway to the wonderful story that
you've been wanting to read.
Malik stood in front of the tall golden gates that led to the castle.
He took a deep breath and looked around at all the guards surrounding
the castle. He knew he had to find a way in. Then he remembered he
had his millennium rod, a small grin grew on his lips as he jumped
over the wall surrounding the castle. He pulled out his rod and
brought sleep upon the guards. When he was sure the coast was clear
he started to walk towards the castle.
What Malik was unaware of, was that someone else was also trying to
get into the castle. Malik turned around and saw the cloaked figure
passing through the castle wall like a ghost.
"How did he do that?"
Malik ran to the front doors and found that they were locked. He
looked up towards the top of the castle and saw an open window. He
saw a woman looking over the edge of the balcony. He knew it wasn't
Kitty. This girl's hair was short. He figured she was a slave of some
sort, or another one of the pharaohs wives. Malik decided the best
way to get in was to climb the wall.
Meanwhile the cloaked figure stood next to the treasure room. He made
sure no one was around. Once he was certain it was safe, he started
to evanesce through the wall.
On the other side of the castle, Malik had tied and gagged the girl
in the window. He tied her to the post on her bed and was about to
leave the room.
"Be quiet," he warned, "If you know what's best for you."
Malik ran down the halls looking around, trying to find out which
room belonged to Kitty. He was tire already from the wall climbing
and things were about to get much worse.
Just then he heard guards yelling and women screaming from down the
hall. He saw the cloaked figure run towards him, and in a dark, raspy
and familiar voice he said, "Get out of my way!"
Malik knew who it was at that very second. The figure stopped running
and skid onto the floor. He pulled a golden pendant from his shirt
and gave an evil smirk.
"I order you all to the shadow realm!" He yelled.
All of a sudden all the guards dropped to the ground, along with a
few of the women who ere also chasing him. The man looked over at
Malik; surprised he didn't fall with the rest of them. The man pulled
off the hood of his cloak, revealing the scarred face of Bakura
himself.
"Bakura?" Malik whispered to himself
Bakura took no time to talk. In an instant he had disappeared from
Malik's sight. Malik sighed, glad that the guards were gone, He was
lucky he had his rod with him, or he would've been sent to the shadow
realm with the others. Just then, someone came up behind him and
wrapped their arm around his neck in a chokehold. The hand was
holding a knife to Malik's throat.
"Drop your weapon and nobody gets hurt."
Malik gulped and pulled his rod from his pocket. He was about to use
it on the guard when he heard another familiar voice.
"You?" Kitty let the word escape her lips "Let him go Ohna."
Ohna took the knife from his neck and put it back in her pocket.
Malik turned around to see who had attacked him, and to his surprise,
it was a woman.
"I was attacked by a woman?!"
"This is Ohna, she's my dear friend and protector."
Malik was surprised that Ohna wasn't at least a muscular woman. She
was thin, and had short black hair that was up in a bun.
Malik stared at Ki for a while. Then he remembered that if Yami came,
he would surely kill him. Of course Malik wasn't really afraid of
Yami or anything.
"You should leave, if Yami finds you here, he will surely kill you."
Malik smiled "Um. you're right, but I doubt he could even touch me."
Ki smiled and walked up to Malik.
"I mean it, he does not like other men around me, or his mistress."
"Mistress?"
"Yes, now go, or I will send you to the dungeon myself."
Malik let out a deep sigh and made his way to the courtyard.
Kilala6: Yeah yeah, I know that my chapters are like freakishly
short, but I had to write SO MUCH in advanced algebra, it's not even
funny. You really shouldn't have to write in math. Maybe I'm just not
used to a pencil anymore. But whatever. Grr remember no flaming, or I
will be sure you will set fire yourself someday. Yeah, my hands are
tired I'm hungry. Remember to REVIEW if you like the story, stick
with it, I hate it when people give up on the.
"If life gives you cookie dough, eat it"
Don't be like expecting chapters everyday or anything, even though
that's what I'm doing. I don't like using the computer when my dad's
around. I don't know why. I like being alone when I use it, so it all
depends who's at my house okay? BYE!
P.S. Yeah email me if you want! I love NICE emails. And I love
internet friends. So yeah. My email address is in my non-updated
profile okay? BYE
Oh and one more thing, I like it when people review EVERY chapter, I
know I don't but. I should, and I do If I think the author is
deserving and doesn't have as many as they should ya know?
this? Eh hem. GO TO HELL. thank you. It is very very wrong to type
mean things to people! What kind of parents do you have? If you don't
like the story, shut up and read something else. Yeah and to all
those nice people like ES, THANKS and I read your story, and I think
it's really good so far, and I know you probably won't even be
reading this, cause people give up on stories, which I don't
understand how you could do. But um. yeah . anyway, I love you all
and stuff.
In case you're all wondering that means no flames. or evil reviews as
I call them, kay? Yeah if you do I will take the privilege of hacking
onto your computer, finding out where you live and. doing something
very bad. That's not a threat though, okay?
Now as some of you might know. I talk too much. And that's the way my
life goes. I like talking and stalling things. So you don't have to
read all this junk I'm writing right here, it's just me reaching out
to all of you. Anyway. yep.
Oh yeah, and I know kitty isn't an Egyptian name, but that's not her
real name anyway you idiot! I'm not stupid, but you know what?
Neither is Yami or Bakura okay? So bare with me. I don't know any
Egyptian people, I'm from America, and as far as I know there aren't
a lot of Egyptians in America. Anyway to the wonderful story that
you've been wanting to read.
Malik stood in front of the tall golden gates that led to the castle.
He took a deep breath and looked around at all the guards surrounding
the castle. He knew he had to find a way in. Then he remembered he
had his millennium rod, a small grin grew on his lips as he jumped
over the wall surrounding the castle. He pulled out his rod and
brought sleep upon the guards. When he was sure the coast was clear
he started to walk towards the castle.
What Malik was unaware of, was that someone else was also trying to
get into the castle. Malik turned around and saw the cloaked figure
passing through the castle wall like a ghost.
"How did he do that?"
Malik ran to the front doors and found that they were locked. He
looked up towards the top of the castle and saw an open window. He
saw a woman looking over the edge of the balcony. He knew it wasn't
Kitty. This girl's hair was short. He figured she was a slave of some
sort, or another one of the pharaohs wives. Malik decided the best
way to get in was to climb the wall.
Meanwhile the cloaked figure stood next to the treasure room. He made
sure no one was around. Once he was certain it was safe, he started
to evanesce through the wall.
On the other side of the castle, Malik had tied and gagged the girl
in the window. He tied her to the post on her bed and was about to
leave the room.
"Be quiet," he warned, "If you know what's best for you."
Malik ran down the halls looking around, trying to find out which
room belonged to Kitty. He was tire already from the wall climbing
and things were about to get much worse.
Just then he heard guards yelling and women screaming from down the
hall. He saw the cloaked figure run towards him, and in a dark, raspy
and familiar voice he said, "Get out of my way!"
Malik knew who it was at that very second. The figure stopped running
and skid onto the floor. He pulled a golden pendant from his shirt
and gave an evil smirk.
"I order you all to the shadow realm!" He yelled.
All of a sudden all the guards dropped to the ground, along with a
few of the women who ere also chasing him. The man looked over at
Malik; surprised he didn't fall with the rest of them. The man pulled
off the hood of his cloak, revealing the scarred face of Bakura
himself.
"Bakura?" Malik whispered to himself
Bakura took no time to talk. In an instant he had disappeared from
Malik's sight. Malik sighed, glad that the guards were gone, He was
lucky he had his rod with him, or he would've been sent to the shadow
realm with the others. Just then, someone came up behind him and
wrapped their arm around his neck in a chokehold. The hand was
holding a knife to Malik's throat.
"Drop your weapon and nobody gets hurt."
Malik gulped and pulled his rod from his pocket. He was about to use
it on the guard when he heard another familiar voice.
"You?" Kitty let the word escape her lips "Let him go Ohna."
Ohna took the knife from his neck and put it back in her pocket.
Malik turned around to see who had attacked him, and to his surprise,
it was a woman.
"I was attacked by a woman?!"
"This is Ohna, she's my dear friend and protector."
Malik was surprised that Ohna wasn't at least a muscular woman. She
was thin, and had short black hair that was up in a bun.
Malik stared at Ki for a while. Then he remembered that if Yami came,
he would surely kill him. Of course Malik wasn't really afraid of
Yami or anything.
"You should leave, if Yami finds you here, he will surely kill you."
Malik smiled "Um. you're right, but I doubt he could even touch me."
Ki smiled and walked up to Malik.
"I mean it, he does not like other men around me, or his mistress."
"Mistress?"
"Yes, now go, or I will send you to the dungeon myself."
Malik let out a deep sigh and made his way to the courtyard.
Kilala6: Yeah yeah, I know that my chapters are like freakishly
short, but I had to write SO MUCH in advanced algebra, it's not even
funny. You really shouldn't have to write in math. Maybe I'm just not
used to a pencil anymore. But whatever. Grr remember no flaming, or I
will be sure you will set fire yourself someday. Yeah, my hands are
tired I'm hungry. Remember to REVIEW if you like the story, stick
with it, I hate it when people give up on the.
"If life gives you cookie dough, eat it"
Don't be like expecting chapters everyday or anything, even though
that's what I'm doing. I don't like using the computer when my dad's
around. I don't know why. I like being alone when I use it, so it all
depends who's at my house okay? BYE!
P.S. Yeah email me if you want! I love NICE emails. And I love
internet friends. So yeah. My email address is in my non-updated
profile okay? BYE
Oh and one more thing, I like it when people review EVERY chapter, I
know I don't but. I should, and I do If I think the author is
deserving and doesn't have as many as they should ya know?