Kilala6: Hiya you all. mmm I'm hungry! Guess what! It's Friday, Yu-Gi-
Oh! Is on tommorow!! YAY!!! Anyway . Under request of skatergirl I'm
gonna try to write longer chapters okay? Oh yeah, and you guys should
read her story. I forgot what it was called but. Um.. Just go to the
review thing and click her name. Her story is really good! It's a
Ryou/OC fic. But anyway, gosh today in school my teacher asked me if
I was British, probably cause I was wearing a dog tag with the flag
on it but.. Grr how annoying.
You know in the manga? Mokuba is like SUPER EVIL! He looks like
Kaiba, and he poisoned Joey and tried to kill Yugi, and grr, he's not
CUTE! He's actually very annoying. But oh well. Anyway, if I don't
get carpal tunnel first, I'm gonna try to write a long chapter.
I have a special message fro sirgayass, or what ever your name is.
You know what? You suck. It's not like I really care what you think.
I don't even know you. As far as I know your just some stupid nerd
who reads all the stories he can find so he can try to hurt the
authors feelings. You know what you are? A coward you are a gay ass
mother-fucking COWARD! I don't even understand what kind of loser
would read a story, and keep on reading it if they HATE it that much.
You know what? Just go to hell and shut up about it loser. Get a
life! I haven't read any of your WONDERFUL stories so just shut up
unless you can do better.
Oh yeah and for the rest of you! Thanks for reviewing! You guys are
great!
Ryou stood in front of the tall mansion that belonged to his friend,
Malik. He sighed heavily and rang the doorbell. Ryou was surprised
when he was greeted by Malik, and not the maid or butler.
"Hey Ryou."
"Hi"
"What do you want?"
"I left my book here, have you seen it?"
Malik shrugged and allowed Ryou to come in. Ryou took a seat on a
big red chair.
"You can look around for your book if you want." Malik said, while
grabbing a plate from his cupboards in the kitchen.
Ryou nodded and stood up. He walked upstairs into Malik's room. There
he saw his math book, laying next to the millennium necklace on
Malik's bed.
"Hasn't seen it, he's so forgetful."
Ryou looked at the necklace, and remembered it belonged to Isis and
not Malik. He shrugged and brought it downstairs with him.
"Malik, what was this in your room for?" Ryou asked
Malik ran over to Ryou "Hey let go of that!"
"No, it's not yours!" Ryou said
Malik glared and started to tug on one end of the necklace. A small
game of Tug o war went on between them, when all of a sudden they
both disappeared. Tara was watching from the kitchen, and she started
to scream.
Meanwhile Yami and Kitty were arguing.
"Seto would never do that, he is my faithful follower."
"You think I just made this up?! You should trust me! I'm your queen!
Why don't you listen?"
"That's enough, the festival is tonight, I do not need your mindless
talk. Instead you should worry about how beautiful you will look for
tonight."
Kitty sighed; she knew there was no talking any sense into Yami. She
sighed and left the room. There one of the servants sat with a long
white dress for that night.
Malik and Ryou both blinked when they realized they were somewhere
else.
"Now look what you did," warned Ryou
"Oh shut up, it's not like I haven't been here before. Hey let's look
around."
"No way!"
Malik growled and grabbed Ryou's hair, pulling him down the hill
towards the palace.
By the time they reached the palace, it was well into the afternoon.
There was a sign next to the front gate.
"Celebration of the pharaoh's birth, the festivities begin tonight!
When the sun falls behind the hills." Ryou read
"Cool, you wanna have some fun?" Malik asked
Ryou shrugged "I guess there's no use arguing."
Malik nodded and started to walk off towards the marketplace.
"Where are we going?" Ryou asked, following his friend
We're gonna get some normal clothes. We can't dress like this,
they'll suspect something.
Ryou looked around at Egypt. "Hey, how are we gonna buy stuff? We
have no money!"
Malik stuck his hand in his pocket to see what he had. There was a
pen, a cell phone and fifty cents.
"This'll work."
When the sun had finally set behind the hills. Yami and Kitty were
surrounded by villagers and others who had come to join the
celebration. There in the back of the crowd stood Malik and Bakura.
Bakura was wearing along white robe, since he figured it would be
cold at night, and Malik was shirtless (drool) and wearing a skirty
thing.
"I look gay" Malik complained
Ryou laughed, "I can't believe that man was so amazed with that pen."
"You have to remember they don't have stuff like this."
Ryou nodded "Who's that?" he asked pointing to the girl Malik had
fallen in love with.
"That's. the queen of Egypt."
"And that's. It's YAMI!"
"Keep your voice down, call him pharaoh okay? I don't need any
attention drawn to me"
Yami stood in front of everyone on a tall stone stage "A horrible
thing has happened, our beloved priestess Isis. Last night she was
murdered, the only evidence we found was a small stone that was
placed in her hand. "
Ryou and Malik heard many people sobbing
"She must have been a really nice girl eh?" Ryou whispered
"She sounds like my sister."
Yami nodded "With that in mind, remember not to take life for granted
cause one day it just might catch up with you."
Kitty nodded "Let the festivities begin!"
Ryou walked over to a long table that was covered in food.
"mmm.."
He grabbed an apple from the table and took a big bite. All of a
sudden the noise stopped, and everyone stared at Ryou Bakura.
"What?"
A guard came up and grabbed Ryou's arms "No one eats before the
pharaoh!"
A bead of sweat trickled down Ryou's forehead. He watched as the
familiar face of Yami walked up to him.
"It is him, the thief Bakura!" Screamed one of the villagers
Ryou looked puzzled, scared, and freaked out at the same time.
"Bakura? I'm not Bakura, I'm Ryou!"
Yami walked over towards Ryou and looked him in the eye.
"Trust this man, the real Bakura would never come here, he would be
to easily seen, he only travels by shadow." Yami yelled, "Release the
boy!"
The guard let go of Ryou and left.
Malik ran over to Ryou "Hey, are you okay?"
"Yes, I'm fine."
Malik sighed "I thought that guy was gonna kill you."
"Yes, were they talking about my Yami?"
"I think so"
"So he really was a thief."
Malik nodded and raised his head to look at the stars, as music
started to play, Ryou watched the people dancing. They were all so
happy, simple and happy. A little girl came up to Ryou and held her
hands out. To Ryou.
"Would you like to dance?" she asked him
Ryou took her hands and smiled "Sure"
Malik watched as Ryou danced with the little girl. And then as a girl
his age walked up to Ryou. The woman picked up the little girl and
slapped Ryou.
"Don't touch my baby! You have already killed my son!" she yelled
Ryou was shocked "I've never hurt anybody!"
"They may fall for your disguise, but I don't you're just after the
pharaoh's gold!"
The woman walked off with her daughter into the endless crowd. Ryou
frowned as everyone stared at him, now having second thoughts about
his true identity.
Kilala6: Okay that's all for now. I hope you guys review okay?!
Except for the evil guy he would bring me great pleasure if he would
die. Anyway. yeah, was this chapter long enough sk8tergirl? I really
dunno. Well I'll update tommorow. maybe, my brother will be here,
being annoying and watching me type, so I might not update. Okay? See
ya!
"The ring must've found it's way back to Bakura."
Oh! Is on tommorow!! YAY!!! Anyway . Under request of skatergirl I'm
gonna try to write longer chapters okay? Oh yeah, and you guys should
read her story. I forgot what it was called but. Um.. Just go to the
review thing and click her name. Her story is really good! It's a
Ryou/OC fic. But anyway, gosh today in school my teacher asked me if
I was British, probably cause I was wearing a dog tag with the flag
on it but.. Grr how annoying.
You know in the manga? Mokuba is like SUPER EVIL! He looks like
Kaiba, and he poisoned Joey and tried to kill Yugi, and grr, he's not
CUTE! He's actually very annoying. But oh well. Anyway, if I don't
get carpal tunnel first, I'm gonna try to write a long chapter.
I have a special message fro sirgayass, or what ever your name is.
You know what? You suck. It's not like I really care what you think.
I don't even know you. As far as I know your just some stupid nerd
who reads all the stories he can find so he can try to hurt the
authors feelings. You know what you are? A coward you are a gay ass
mother-fucking COWARD! I don't even understand what kind of loser
would read a story, and keep on reading it if they HATE it that much.
You know what? Just go to hell and shut up about it loser. Get a
life! I haven't read any of your WONDERFUL stories so just shut up
unless you can do better.
Oh yeah and for the rest of you! Thanks for reviewing! You guys are
great!
Ryou stood in front of the tall mansion that belonged to his friend,
Malik. He sighed heavily and rang the doorbell. Ryou was surprised
when he was greeted by Malik, and not the maid or butler.
"Hey Ryou."
"Hi"
"What do you want?"
"I left my book here, have you seen it?"
Malik shrugged and allowed Ryou to come in. Ryou took a seat on a
big red chair.
"You can look around for your book if you want." Malik said, while
grabbing a plate from his cupboards in the kitchen.
Ryou nodded and stood up. He walked upstairs into Malik's room. There
he saw his math book, laying next to the millennium necklace on
Malik's bed.
"Hasn't seen it, he's so forgetful."
Ryou looked at the necklace, and remembered it belonged to Isis and
not Malik. He shrugged and brought it downstairs with him.
"Malik, what was this in your room for?" Ryou asked
Malik ran over to Ryou "Hey let go of that!"
"No, it's not yours!" Ryou said
Malik glared and started to tug on one end of the necklace. A small
game of Tug o war went on between them, when all of a sudden they
both disappeared. Tara was watching from the kitchen, and she started
to scream.
Meanwhile Yami and Kitty were arguing.
"Seto would never do that, he is my faithful follower."
"You think I just made this up?! You should trust me! I'm your queen!
Why don't you listen?"
"That's enough, the festival is tonight, I do not need your mindless
talk. Instead you should worry about how beautiful you will look for
tonight."
Kitty sighed; she knew there was no talking any sense into Yami. She
sighed and left the room. There one of the servants sat with a long
white dress for that night.
Malik and Ryou both blinked when they realized they were somewhere
else.
"Now look what you did," warned Ryou
"Oh shut up, it's not like I haven't been here before. Hey let's look
around."
"No way!"
Malik growled and grabbed Ryou's hair, pulling him down the hill
towards the palace.
By the time they reached the palace, it was well into the afternoon.
There was a sign next to the front gate.
"Celebration of the pharaoh's birth, the festivities begin tonight!
When the sun falls behind the hills." Ryou read
"Cool, you wanna have some fun?" Malik asked
Ryou shrugged "I guess there's no use arguing."
Malik nodded and started to walk off towards the marketplace.
"Where are we going?" Ryou asked, following his friend
We're gonna get some normal clothes. We can't dress like this,
they'll suspect something.
Ryou looked around at Egypt. "Hey, how are we gonna buy stuff? We
have no money!"
Malik stuck his hand in his pocket to see what he had. There was a
pen, a cell phone and fifty cents.
"This'll work."
When the sun had finally set behind the hills. Yami and Kitty were
surrounded by villagers and others who had come to join the
celebration. There in the back of the crowd stood Malik and Bakura.
Bakura was wearing along white robe, since he figured it would be
cold at night, and Malik was shirtless (drool) and wearing a skirty
thing.
"I look gay" Malik complained
Ryou laughed, "I can't believe that man was so amazed with that pen."
"You have to remember they don't have stuff like this."
Ryou nodded "Who's that?" he asked pointing to the girl Malik had
fallen in love with.
"That's. the queen of Egypt."
"And that's. It's YAMI!"
"Keep your voice down, call him pharaoh okay? I don't need any
attention drawn to me"
Yami stood in front of everyone on a tall stone stage "A horrible
thing has happened, our beloved priestess Isis. Last night she was
murdered, the only evidence we found was a small stone that was
placed in her hand. "
Ryou and Malik heard many people sobbing
"She must have been a really nice girl eh?" Ryou whispered
"She sounds like my sister."
Yami nodded "With that in mind, remember not to take life for granted
cause one day it just might catch up with you."
Kitty nodded "Let the festivities begin!"
Ryou walked over to a long table that was covered in food.
"mmm.."
He grabbed an apple from the table and took a big bite. All of a
sudden the noise stopped, and everyone stared at Ryou Bakura.
"What?"
A guard came up and grabbed Ryou's arms "No one eats before the
pharaoh!"
A bead of sweat trickled down Ryou's forehead. He watched as the
familiar face of Yami walked up to him.
"It is him, the thief Bakura!" Screamed one of the villagers
Ryou looked puzzled, scared, and freaked out at the same time.
"Bakura? I'm not Bakura, I'm Ryou!"
Yami walked over towards Ryou and looked him in the eye.
"Trust this man, the real Bakura would never come here, he would be
to easily seen, he only travels by shadow." Yami yelled, "Release the
boy!"
The guard let go of Ryou and left.
Malik ran over to Ryou "Hey, are you okay?"
"Yes, I'm fine."
Malik sighed "I thought that guy was gonna kill you."
"Yes, were they talking about my Yami?"
"I think so"
"So he really was a thief."
Malik nodded and raised his head to look at the stars, as music
started to play, Ryou watched the people dancing. They were all so
happy, simple and happy. A little girl came up to Ryou and held her
hands out. To Ryou.
"Would you like to dance?" she asked him
Ryou took her hands and smiled "Sure"
Malik watched as Ryou danced with the little girl. And then as a girl
his age walked up to Ryou. The woman picked up the little girl and
slapped Ryou.
"Don't touch my baby! You have already killed my son!" she yelled
Ryou was shocked "I've never hurt anybody!"
"They may fall for your disguise, but I don't you're just after the
pharaoh's gold!"
The woman walked off with her daughter into the endless crowd. Ryou
frowned as everyone stared at him, now having second thoughts about
his true identity.
Kilala6: Okay that's all for now. I hope you guys review okay?!
Except for the evil guy he would bring me great pleasure if he would
die. Anyway. yeah, was this chapter long enough sk8tergirl? I really
dunno. Well I'll update tommorow. maybe, my brother will be here,
being annoying and watching me type, so I might not update. Okay? See
ya!
"The ring must've found it's way back to Bakura."