Chapter 1
This fic is about Carter and Susan but involves nearly all the people in ER there is more to come so review and tell me what you think.
One sweet day
The people in this story don't belong to me apart from Ali who I made etc etc etc.
Susan opened her eyes she had been back at County hospital for at least 2 years now and she was loving every minute of it, today she was going away to Miami with some of the staff for a week. There was Mark and Elizabeth, Abby and Carter and Luka and many other nurses. She jumped up quickly she was so excited it was her birthday in two days and she could not wait. She ran in to the shower and got a quick shower.
Fade out and back in 9 hours later
"Oh my god" Susan said "This is beautiful, oh wow look at the beach."
"I know" Abby said.
Susan smiled she loved the sun and she missed it so much. "Man it's hot," she said tying her hair back and tying her T-shirt in a knot. She got out of the car that Mark was driving, walking up outside their beach house she ran around to get her suitcase.
"Man Susan" Luka said, "what have you got in this thing rocks."
Susan smiled taking it off him she picked it up with a struggle.
"Here" Carter smiled "let me help you" he said taking the case off her.
"Thanks" Susan said following him, "it was really nice of your parents to let us use this place Carter," she said.
Carter smiled "I know" he said he opened the door and put Susan's case down.
"Wow" Susan said, "this place is gorgeous"
"I haven't been here since I was 9" Carter said "sure has changed."
"Ok Mark" said walking in and putting bags down "nice place John."
Elizabeth walked in holding Ella "it really is."
"I know" Abby said leaning on Luka "and were right next to the beach."
"Were next door you guys," Chunie said pointing to the beach house Carter had rented for them.
"Ok" Luka, said.
"We will come and knock when were ready" Pratt Said holding Jing Mei.
"Ok" Carter, said.
"So were is everyone staying" Mark asked "which rooms?"
"Oh yeah" Carter said "Elizabeth Mark you are in the room upstairs and across the hall to your right that has a crib in."
"Thankyou" Mark said picking up his suit cases and walking off followed by Elizabeth.
"Luka Abby you are in the room over there" he pointed to a room just across from them.
"Susan" he smiled "you are in the room across the hall from me come on" he said picking up her case and walking up a different set of stairs from everyone else.
Susan smiled "you don't snore do you" Susan asked?
"No" Carter said.
"Good" Susan smiled as Carter opened the door for her to reveal a huge room with a four poster bed and a view of the sea "oh this is beautiful" Susan said.
"Ill leave you to get settled" Carter said leaving.
Susan smiled watching him he was so sweet, she knew he kind of had a crush on her years ago, but he was grown up now he was so handsome his eyes made her go weak at the knees "Stop it" Susan said to her self she lay on the bed, it was starting to go dark so she thought she would take a nap.
Fade out and back in 4 hours later.
Susan opened her eyes to hear music playing, she could smell something cooking and she could hear a lot of people laughing. She got up and looked at her self in the mirror, she quickly threw some water over her face and changed her clothes in to a white dress she pinned her hair up and walked down stairs and outside in the garden (well if you could call it that it was the beach), she looked around to see Mark standing over a barbecue she could see Luka and Abby talking and kissing each other. Elizabeth playing with Ella she caught sight of Carter talking to Pratt.
"Hey Carter" said as she walked over "enjoy your sleep."
"Yes" Susan said sitting down on the beach "how did you know I was asleep" she asked?
Carter smiled "because I know everything" Carter smiled "that and I walked in on you snoring."
"What" Susan said "I do not snore at all."
"Yes You do" Carter said "I heard you."
"I don't" Susan said, "I know I don't."
Carter smiled "you want anything to eat" he asked?
"Yes" Susan said "im so hungry."
"Come on then" Carter said pulling her to her feet.
She stood close to him her heart pounding as she looked in to his eyes she wanted to kiss him so badly.
God she is beautiful Carter was thinking he wanted to lean in and kiss her.
"Hey" Mark shouted "Burgers are done."
"Good" Susan smiled at Carter.
Fade out and back in later that night.
Susan was sitting on the sofa talking to Abby and Luka and Carter, everyone else was in bed, after her nap she wasn't tired at all.
"Right" Abby said "im going to bed you coming Luka."
"Yeah" Luka said "we will see you both in the morning."
"Night" Susan said she looked over at a picture "Carter" she said "is this you."
"What" Carter asked looking around to see Susan looking at a picture of him when he was about 3 "yes" he said.
"OOOwww" she said smiling "you were so cute."
"Give it back" Carter said.
"No" Susan said, "there is nothing to be ashamed off you were a cute baby."
Carter ran after her "Susan" he said
Susan laughed and ran around the room.
Carter jumped on her and grabbed the picture.
Susan looked at him he was looking back.
"Em I think I better get to bed" Susan said standing up.
"Yeah" Carter said "long day tomorrow."
Fade out and back in the next morning.
Carter walked down the stairs.
"Hey Sleepy head" Susan smiled "we've all been waiting for you were going swimming you coming."
"Yeah Carter" said.
"Good" Susan smiled.
Carter followed her out to see everyone swimming and playing in the sea.
Susan smiled "coming she asked"
"Yeah" Carter said pulling his T-shirt off.
Susan smiled pulling her shorts and T-shirt off.
Cater who was taking a bite of his toast was stunned just how beautiful Susan looked in a bikini he choked on his toast.
"Oh" Susan said "you ok."
"Yeah" Carter said coughing "just went down the wrong way."
Susan smiled "come on then" she said taking his hand and running in to the sea.
Carter smiled running with Susan.
Abby who was swimming was lying on the Tire while Luka pushed it. She looked up to see Susan and Carter running in to the water she smiled "they make such a cute couple" Abby said.
Luka nodded "I was talking to John about it the other day."
Abby smiled "are you kidding dose he like her."
Luka smiled and nodded "he said he has for years."
Abby smiled "I wonder if Susan likes him," she said.
Luka smiled "we are going to get them together."
Abby laughed and nodded "hell yes" she said.
Susan swam over to Abby "hey" she said "isn't the water great."
"Yeah" Luka said "later we were thinking about going on the jet ski's but there are only 4 so we will have to go on them in two's" he said looking at Abby.
Abby smiled caching on to what he was saying "oh yeah" she said, "it will be fun."
"Ok" Susan said "it dose" as she was talking she felt her self being pulled under the water she came back up coughing "Carter" she said between couching.
Carter was laughing.
Mark swam over "who wants a came of volley ball in the water?"
"Sure" Susan said "I UST to kick ass at Volley ball."
"Really?" Carter asked.
"Yes" Susan said "I was the captain of my high school and college Volley ball team and we were state champs for 4 years in High school and 2 in College"
Carter smiled at her she was pretty the water made her bronze skin glow and her sun kissed hair shine.
"What?" Susan asked.
"Nothing" Carter said
"Ok" Abby said as Mark carried a net out of one of the cars and in to the sea and tied it around some rocks and a palm tree right next to the sea.
"Is this to deep?" Mark asked securing it on one of the rocks in the sea.
"No its ok" Susan said standing up the water was up to her stomach.
Everyone else agreed.
"Ok Teams" Abby said lets see "I think me and Luka should be captains."
"What" Pratt said, "I don't think so."
Jing Mei smiled "let them" she said.
"Ok" Pratt, said, "I just best not be on the bad team."
Abby smiled "ok" she said looking at Luka and smiling "I will pick em Susan" she said.
Susan smiled and swam over to Abby.
"I will have Mark" Luka said.
"Elizabeth" Abby said.
"I know" Pratt said "how about woman against men."
"That's not fair," Jing Mei said.
"Yes it is" Susan said, "we will kick their ass."
"Hell yes" Jing Mei said swimming over to were Susan was.
"Ok" then Luka shrugged.
Abby smiled "ok girls" she said swimming over to the other side of the net "we know Susan UST to play and she seems like are best player yes."
Every one agreed.
"Ok then" Abby said "Susan you are up front we will have three at the back and two at the front since the other woman are sunning them selves on the beach" she looked over to see nearly all the nurses sun bathing, there was only Elizabeth, her, Susan Chunie and Jing Mei and the boys team there was Carter, Luka, Mark, Pratt and Malik.
"Ok" then Susan said "I think that who's taller Elizabeth you are up back with Chunie and Jing Mei and Abby your the smallest your up front with me ok."
"Ok" everyone, said they all swam to the net.
"Finally" Mark shouted "finished your little chat."
Susan smiled "we were just discussing how to kick your ass."
"In your dreams" Carter said swimming forward he was opposite her.
Susan smiled "any dream I have with you in it is classed as a night mare she said."
"Oh that hurt" Carter said clutching his chest and pretending to be in pain.
"Ok lets go" Luka shouted from the back.
"Ok" Malik said throwing up the ball.
Susan jumped in to the air and hit it back it hit the water quickly she smiled.
Carter looked up at her.
Fade out and back in 1-hour later.
"Yes" Abby, shouted as she hit the ball and it hit the water "that's it we win woho."
Susan smiled she was hot and she felt the sun on her skin "im going to put some creme on she said anyone want anything from the house."
"Can you get me some ice water" Abby asked.
"Sure" Susan said walking out of the water.
"Can you get me a soda please" Carter asked.
"Yeah" Susan said she walked out of the water, she walked in to the beach house and opened the fridge it was so cool in the house she pulled out a bottle of water and poured it in to a glass with ice and grabbed a soda she walked back outside to find everyone lying on the beach she walked over to Abby and handed her the water and then she sat down on her towel which was next to Carter, which she was sure a couple of minutes ago was next to Malik she handed Carter his soda.
"Thanks" he said "so your really good at Volley ball then."
"Yep" Susan said "I told you"
"I thought you were messing" Carter said.
Susan smiled and began to rub sun tan lotion in to her self she started to put it on to her back but couldn't reach, she looked over at Abby who was in a deep kiss with Luka and Jing Mei was walking in to the house she turned to Carter "could you put this on my back for me?" she asked.
"Sure" Carter said.
Susan lay on her front and undid her bikini top.
"Here" Carter said rubbing it in to her.
Susan closed her eyes it felt so good she was slowly falling asleep.
Carter was becoming more and more attracted to her by the second he could barley restrain him self "so" he said trying to get his mind off her "what are we doing for lunch do you all want to go out to eat?"
"That sounds nice" Abby said smiling at Seeing Carter rubbing Susan's shoulders even though he was out of sun creme.
"Good then" Carter said looking at his watch "well we all better go get ready."
Susan opened her eyes when she realised Carter's hands were still on her ticking her back with his soft touch she laughed and moved.
"Oh your ticklish?" Cater smiled ticking her.
"Don't" Susan said laughing "don't."
Carter smiled carrying on.
"Don't" Susan said moving around "no my top is falling off."
Carter smiled "I can't seem to understand why that is a bad thing" he laughed.
Susan smiled he had nether been that way with her before she hit him and smiled "it will be a bad thing for me" she said trying to fasten her bikini top.
"Want any help?" Carter said.
"Please" Susan said she lay there for a couple of minutes waiting for Carter to fasten it "Carter" she said, "aren't you going to help?"
"I am" Carter smiled "im helping me."
Susan smiled as she finally clipped her bikini top back in to place and stood up "im going to get ready" she said walking away.
Fade out and back in a little later.
"Ok" Carter said "im just going to take a quick shower and I'll be right down" he opened the door.
Susan screamed "no she said get out."
Carter looked shocked at first and then smiled.
Susan threw a towel over his head and pushed him out of the door.
Fade out and back in when everyone is ready to go out they are all waiting for Carter in the sitting room.
"Ok ok "Carter said "sorry im late I know I know but I couldn't get in the shower?"
Susan felt her cheeks go red and stood up.
Carter smiled "hey" he said
Susan looked at him "John" she said "it's not funny."
"Oh john is it now" Carter said still smiling.
"Im being serious" Susan said.
"Ok ok" Carter "I didn't even see anything I swear."
"You swear?" Susan said.
"Yes" Carter, said, "now come on lets go eat" he opened the car door for Susan as she got in.
Fade out and back in later on in the night everyone was drunk Susan was lying on the beach, which was lit by lanterns while Abby lay next to her snoring.
"Hey" Carter said sitting down next to her.
Susan smiled "I think im drunk" she said.
"Yep" Carter said me to.
"You want to go for a swim?" Susan asked.
"Ok" Carter, said.
Susan ran to the water holding Carter's hand she swam out and smiled as Carter came up to her he put his arms around her pulling her closer to him.
"John" Susan said.
"Yep" Carter said leaning in to her.
"Nothing" Susan said kissing him as his lips met hers it was one of the most passionate kisses she had ever experienced her body tingled all over.
"Come on" Carter said leading her to the bedroom and with that the door closed.
Fade out and back in the next morning.
Susan opened her eyes the night before was a blur she sat up and realised she was not in her own bed she turned over to see Carter lying there fast asleep "oh know" she said, she quietly crept out of he bed picking up her clothes on the way she ran out of the room and in to hers hoping no one heard or saw her. She clasped on her bed taking in deep breaths of air she couldn't even remember what had happened in the night all she remembered was helping Abby to lie down on the beach and then her falling asleep she looked at the clock 11:45 she jumped in to the shower washed her self and then pulled a skirt and a string top she walked down stairs.
"Surprise!" everyone, shouted "happy birthday."
Susan looked at them in shock she had completely forgot it was her birthday she was 31 she forced a smiled "wow" she said, "you guys didn't have to."
"Here" Abby said handing her a present "this is off all of us."
"Ow" Susan said "Thankyou" she opened the box to reveal a chain with a heart shaped diamond on it.
"What do you think?" Elizabeth asked.
"Its gorgeous" Susan said "Thankyou guys so much."
"Carter picked it" Luka said.
"Ow" Susan said "oh" she didn't know what to say.
"Yes I did" Carter said as he walked down the stairs "but Mark helped."
Susan's stomach flipped as she heard his voice she didn't even want to turn around "it's beautiful she said Thankyou."
"Your welcome" Carter said walking around to the front of her "em anyone want anything im going to the store?"
"No" Susan said "thanks" she walked over to the tv and sat down taking in deep breathes maybe last night didn't happen maybe I just fell asleep in the wrong bed and he didn't even realise, yeah he doesn't seem to be acting any different from me at all yeah that's it just fell asleep in his bed I cant remember anything because nothing happened. She smiled getting up an getting a bottle of water from the refrigerator taking a sip she looked at Carter he was looking at her, and he looked hurt it did happen she thought to her self that same feeling hit her stomach again she felt sick "em im going back to bed you know."
"What?" Abby said "but it is your birthday."
"I wont be long" Susan said "I just need a lie down hangover" she said.
"Oh ok" Mark said "you want anything for it?"
"No im ok" Susan lied "I'll just go lie down."
"Ok" Malik, said "but we will wake you when the part is set up ok?"
"Ok" Susan said walking up stairs she got to her room and walked in, she locked the door with the lock on the top, she didn't want to see anyone at the moment she pulled the covers back on her bed and got in closing her eyes she fell asleep.
Fade out and back down stairs.
"Dose she seem ok to You?" Abby asked Mark.
"No" Mark said "but im sure she will pick up later when she sees the surprise that we have for her."
Malik smiled "oh yeah"
"You ok Carter?" Luka asked Carter who was sipping coffe and seemed to be thinking.
"Yeah" Carter said "hmm im just going the store you know get some more stuff in for the party."
"Ok" Abby said "here Is a list of the things we need ok."
"Ok" Carter said.
Fade out and back in 5 hours later.
Susan opened her eyes to hear banging on her door.
"Susan" Abby was saying "Susan wake up you ok in there?"
Susan jumped up and ran over to the door "Abby" she said.
"Yes" Abby said "you ok."
Susan opened the door "yeah" she said "I was just sleeping."
"How come the door was locked?" Abby asked.
"Oh I jut wanted some rest you know" Susan said.
"Oh ok" Abby said "so you ready for your party?"
"Yeah" Susan said she was going to push everything to the back of her mind for now at least, "you look nice" she said.
"Thankyou" Abby said twirling around.
Susan smiled "em just shut the door" she got changed in to a green dress and let her curly hair down "Abby" she said.
Abby was sitting on the bed "yeah" she said.
"Can I tell you something?" Susan asked.
"Sure" Abby smiled "whats up?"
"Ok" Susan said sitting down as she pulled on her shoes "but you can't tell anyone not Luka not anyone ok."
"Ok" Abby said "what is it."
Susan looked up at her "I em I slept with Carter."
"What!" Abby said shocked "oh my god that's great."
"What it's not" Susan said "it's awful I was drunk so was he I cant even remember it Abby this is awful I mean I know he had a crush on me but now I feel like I have led him on I cant do this" Susan said "just try and keep me away from him all night ok."
"Ok" Abby smiled hugging her "I will."
"Ok" Susan, said putting on some lipstick "lets go and remember not a word to no one."
Abby pretended to zip her mouth.
Susan walked down stairs to find food all set out and banners up every were "oh you guys" she smiled walking downstairs.
"HAPPY BIRTHDAY!" everyone shouted.
Susan smiled and hugged Mark "Thankyou" she said.
"Ok" Mark said "we have one more surprise for you ok."
"Ok" Susan, said.
"Ok" Abby said holding her hand "close your eyes."
Susan closed her eyes her heart was pounding she was sure everyone else could hear it.
"Ok open them" Mark said.
As she did there stood in front of her was Doug and Carol "oh my god" she screamed she hugged them so tight tears formed in her eyes and now she was crying.
Carol smiled "I missed you so much."
"Oh my god" Doug shouted like a girl.
Susan laughed "what are you two doing here?"
"Were on vacation" Doug said.
Carol smiled "oh you have changed" she said.
Susan smiled "time flies huh" she said.
"Yeah" Carol said.
Fade out
This fic is about Carter and Susan but involves nearly all the people in ER there is more to come so review and tell me what you think.
One sweet day
The people in this story don't belong to me apart from Ali who I made etc etc etc.
Susan opened her eyes she had been back at County hospital for at least 2 years now and she was loving every minute of it, today she was going away to Miami with some of the staff for a week. There was Mark and Elizabeth, Abby and Carter and Luka and many other nurses. She jumped up quickly she was so excited it was her birthday in two days and she could not wait. She ran in to the shower and got a quick shower.
Fade out and back in 9 hours later
"Oh my god" Susan said "This is beautiful, oh wow look at the beach."
"I know" Abby said.
Susan smiled she loved the sun and she missed it so much. "Man it's hot," she said tying her hair back and tying her T-shirt in a knot. She got out of the car that Mark was driving, walking up outside their beach house she ran around to get her suitcase.
"Man Susan" Luka said, "what have you got in this thing rocks."
Susan smiled taking it off him she picked it up with a struggle.
"Here" Carter smiled "let me help you" he said taking the case off her.
"Thanks" Susan said following him, "it was really nice of your parents to let us use this place Carter," she said.
Carter smiled "I know" he said he opened the door and put Susan's case down.
"Wow" Susan said, "this place is gorgeous"
"I haven't been here since I was 9" Carter said "sure has changed."
"Ok Mark" said walking in and putting bags down "nice place John."
Elizabeth walked in holding Ella "it really is."
"I know" Abby said leaning on Luka "and were right next to the beach."
"Were next door you guys," Chunie said pointing to the beach house Carter had rented for them.
"Ok" Luka, said.
"We will come and knock when were ready" Pratt Said holding Jing Mei.
"Ok" Carter, said.
"So were is everyone staying" Mark asked "which rooms?"
"Oh yeah" Carter said "Elizabeth Mark you are in the room upstairs and across the hall to your right that has a crib in."
"Thankyou" Mark said picking up his suit cases and walking off followed by Elizabeth.
"Luka Abby you are in the room over there" he pointed to a room just across from them.
"Susan" he smiled "you are in the room across the hall from me come on" he said picking up her case and walking up a different set of stairs from everyone else.
Susan smiled "you don't snore do you" Susan asked?
"No" Carter said.
"Good" Susan smiled as Carter opened the door for her to reveal a huge room with a four poster bed and a view of the sea "oh this is beautiful" Susan said.
"Ill leave you to get settled" Carter said leaving.
Susan smiled watching him he was so sweet, she knew he kind of had a crush on her years ago, but he was grown up now he was so handsome his eyes made her go weak at the knees "Stop it" Susan said to her self she lay on the bed, it was starting to go dark so she thought she would take a nap.
Fade out and back in 4 hours later.
Susan opened her eyes to hear music playing, she could smell something cooking and she could hear a lot of people laughing. She got up and looked at her self in the mirror, she quickly threw some water over her face and changed her clothes in to a white dress she pinned her hair up and walked down stairs and outside in the garden (well if you could call it that it was the beach), she looked around to see Mark standing over a barbecue she could see Luka and Abby talking and kissing each other. Elizabeth playing with Ella she caught sight of Carter talking to Pratt.
"Hey Carter" said as she walked over "enjoy your sleep."
"Yes" Susan said sitting down on the beach "how did you know I was asleep" she asked?
Carter smiled "because I know everything" Carter smiled "that and I walked in on you snoring."
"What" Susan said "I do not snore at all."
"Yes You do" Carter said "I heard you."
"I don't" Susan said, "I know I don't."
Carter smiled "you want anything to eat" he asked?
"Yes" Susan said "im so hungry."
"Come on then" Carter said pulling her to her feet.
She stood close to him her heart pounding as she looked in to his eyes she wanted to kiss him so badly.
God she is beautiful Carter was thinking he wanted to lean in and kiss her.
"Hey" Mark shouted "Burgers are done."
"Good" Susan smiled at Carter.
Fade out and back in later that night.
Susan was sitting on the sofa talking to Abby and Luka and Carter, everyone else was in bed, after her nap she wasn't tired at all.
"Right" Abby said "im going to bed you coming Luka."
"Yeah" Luka said "we will see you both in the morning."
"Night" Susan said she looked over at a picture "Carter" she said "is this you."
"What" Carter asked looking around to see Susan looking at a picture of him when he was about 3 "yes" he said.
"OOOwww" she said smiling "you were so cute."
"Give it back" Carter said.
"No" Susan said, "there is nothing to be ashamed off you were a cute baby."
Carter ran after her "Susan" he said
Susan laughed and ran around the room.
Carter jumped on her and grabbed the picture.
Susan looked at him he was looking back.
"Em I think I better get to bed" Susan said standing up.
"Yeah" Carter said "long day tomorrow."
Fade out and back in the next morning.
Carter walked down the stairs.
"Hey Sleepy head" Susan smiled "we've all been waiting for you were going swimming you coming."
"Yeah Carter" said.
"Good" Susan smiled.
Carter followed her out to see everyone swimming and playing in the sea.
Susan smiled "coming she asked"
"Yeah" Carter said pulling his T-shirt off.
Susan smiled pulling her shorts and T-shirt off.
Cater who was taking a bite of his toast was stunned just how beautiful Susan looked in a bikini he choked on his toast.
"Oh" Susan said "you ok."
"Yeah" Carter said coughing "just went down the wrong way."
Susan smiled "come on then" she said taking his hand and running in to the sea.
Carter smiled running with Susan.
Abby who was swimming was lying on the Tire while Luka pushed it. She looked up to see Susan and Carter running in to the water she smiled "they make such a cute couple" Abby said.
Luka nodded "I was talking to John about it the other day."
Abby smiled "are you kidding dose he like her."
Luka smiled and nodded "he said he has for years."
Abby smiled "I wonder if Susan likes him," she said.
Luka smiled "we are going to get them together."
Abby laughed and nodded "hell yes" she said.
Susan swam over to Abby "hey" she said "isn't the water great."
"Yeah" Luka said "later we were thinking about going on the jet ski's but there are only 4 so we will have to go on them in two's" he said looking at Abby.
Abby smiled caching on to what he was saying "oh yeah" she said, "it will be fun."
"Ok" Susan said "it dose" as she was talking she felt her self being pulled under the water she came back up coughing "Carter" she said between couching.
Carter was laughing.
Mark swam over "who wants a came of volley ball in the water?"
"Sure" Susan said "I UST to kick ass at Volley ball."
"Really?" Carter asked.
"Yes" Susan said "I was the captain of my high school and college Volley ball team and we were state champs for 4 years in High school and 2 in College"
Carter smiled at her she was pretty the water made her bronze skin glow and her sun kissed hair shine.
"What?" Susan asked.
"Nothing" Carter said
"Ok" Abby said as Mark carried a net out of one of the cars and in to the sea and tied it around some rocks and a palm tree right next to the sea.
"Is this to deep?" Mark asked securing it on one of the rocks in the sea.
"No its ok" Susan said standing up the water was up to her stomach.
Everyone else agreed.
"Ok Teams" Abby said lets see "I think me and Luka should be captains."
"What" Pratt said, "I don't think so."
Jing Mei smiled "let them" she said.
"Ok" Pratt, said, "I just best not be on the bad team."
Abby smiled "ok" she said looking at Luka and smiling "I will pick em Susan" she said.
Susan smiled and swam over to Abby.
"I will have Mark" Luka said.
"Elizabeth" Abby said.
"I know" Pratt said "how about woman against men."
"That's not fair," Jing Mei said.
"Yes it is" Susan said, "we will kick their ass."
"Hell yes" Jing Mei said swimming over to were Susan was.
"Ok" then Luka shrugged.
Abby smiled "ok girls" she said swimming over to the other side of the net "we know Susan UST to play and she seems like are best player yes."
Every one agreed.
"Ok then" Abby said "Susan you are up front we will have three at the back and two at the front since the other woman are sunning them selves on the beach" she looked over to see nearly all the nurses sun bathing, there was only Elizabeth, her, Susan Chunie and Jing Mei and the boys team there was Carter, Luka, Mark, Pratt and Malik.
"Ok" then Susan said "I think that who's taller Elizabeth you are up back with Chunie and Jing Mei and Abby your the smallest your up front with me ok."
"Ok" everyone, said they all swam to the net.
"Finally" Mark shouted "finished your little chat."
Susan smiled "we were just discussing how to kick your ass."
"In your dreams" Carter said swimming forward he was opposite her.
Susan smiled "any dream I have with you in it is classed as a night mare she said."
"Oh that hurt" Carter said clutching his chest and pretending to be in pain.
"Ok lets go" Luka shouted from the back.
"Ok" Malik said throwing up the ball.
Susan jumped in to the air and hit it back it hit the water quickly she smiled.
Carter looked up at her.
Fade out and back in 1-hour later.
"Yes" Abby, shouted as she hit the ball and it hit the water "that's it we win woho."
Susan smiled she was hot and she felt the sun on her skin "im going to put some creme on she said anyone want anything from the house."
"Can you get me some ice water" Abby asked.
"Sure" Susan said walking out of the water.
"Can you get me a soda please" Carter asked.
"Yeah" Susan said she walked out of the water, she walked in to the beach house and opened the fridge it was so cool in the house she pulled out a bottle of water and poured it in to a glass with ice and grabbed a soda she walked back outside to find everyone lying on the beach she walked over to Abby and handed her the water and then she sat down on her towel which was next to Carter, which she was sure a couple of minutes ago was next to Malik she handed Carter his soda.
"Thanks" he said "so your really good at Volley ball then."
"Yep" Susan said "I told you"
"I thought you were messing" Carter said.
Susan smiled and began to rub sun tan lotion in to her self she started to put it on to her back but couldn't reach, she looked over at Abby who was in a deep kiss with Luka and Jing Mei was walking in to the house she turned to Carter "could you put this on my back for me?" she asked.
"Sure" Carter said.
Susan lay on her front and undid her bikini top.
"Here" Carter said rubbing it in to her.
Susan closed her eyes it felt so good she was slowly falling asleep.
Carter was becoming more and more attracted to her by the second he could barley restrain him self "so" he said trying to get his mind off her "what are we doing for lunch do you all want to go out to eat?"
"That sounds nice" Abby said smiling at Seeing Carter rubbing Susan's shoulders even though he was out of sun creme.
"Good then" Carter said looking at his watch "well we all better go get ready."
Susan opened her eyes when she realised Carter's hands were still on her ticking her back with his soft touch she laughed and moved.
"Oh your ticklish?" Cater smiled ticking her.
"Don't" Susan said laughing "don't."
Carter smiled carrying on.
"Don't" Susan said moving around "no my top is falling off."
Carter smiled "I can't seem to understand why that is a bad thing" he laughed.
Susan smiled he had nether been that way with her before she hit him and smiled "it will be a bad thing for me" she said trying to fasten her bikini top.
"Want any help?" Carter said.
"Please" Susan said she lay there for a couple of minutes waiting for Carter to fasten it "Carter" she said, "aren't you going to help?"
"I am" Carter smiled "im helping me."
Susan smiled as she finally clipped her bikini top back in to place and stood up "im going to get ready" she said walking away.
Fade out and back in a little later.
"Ok" Carter said "im just going to take a quick shower and I'll be right down" he opened the door.
Susan screamed "no she said get out."
Carter looked shocked at first and then smiled.
Susan threw a towel over his head and pushed him out of the door.
Fade out and back in when everyone is ready to go out they are all waiting for Carter in the sitting room.
"Ok ok "Carter said "sorry im late I know I know but I couldn't get in the shower?"
Susan felt her cheeks go red and stood up.
Carter smiled "hey" he said
Susan looked at him "John" she said "it's not funny."
"Oh john is it now" Carter said still smiling.
"Im being serious" Susan said.
"Ok ok" Carter "I didn't even see anything I swear."
"You swear?" Susan said.
"Yes" Carter, said, "now come on lets go eat" he opened the car door for Susan as she got in.
Fade out and back in later on in the night everyone was drunk Susan was lying on the beach, which was lit by lanterns while Abby lay next to her snoring.
"Hey" Carter said sitting down next to her.
Susan smiled "I think im drunk" she said.
"Yep" Carter said me to.
"You want to go for a swim?" Susan asked.
"Ok" Carter, said.
Susan ran to the water holding Carter's hand she swam out and smiled as Carter came up to her he put his arms around her pulling her closer to him.
"John" Susan said.
"Yep" Carter said leaning in to her.
"Nothing" Susan said kissing him as his lips met hers it was one of the most passionate kisses she had ever experienced her body tingled all over.
"Come on" Carter said leading her to the bedroom and with that the door closed.
Fade out and back in the next morning.
Susan opened her eyes the night before was a blur she sat up and realised she was not in her own bed she turned over to see Carter lying there fast asleep "oh know" she said, she quietly crept out of he bed picking up her clothes on the way she ran out of the room and in to hers hoping no one heard or saw her. She clasped on her bed taking in deep breaths of air she couldn't even remember what had happened in the night all she remembered was helping Abby to lie down on the beach and then her falling asleep she looked at the clock 11:45 she jumped in to the shower washed her self and then pulled a skirt and a string top she walked down stairs.
"Surprise!" everyone, shouted "happy birthday."
Susan looked at them in shock she had completely forgot it was her birthday she was 31 she forced a smiled "wow" she said, "you guys didn't have to."
"Here" Abby said handing her a present "this is off all of us."
"Ow" Susan said "Thankyou" she opened the box to reveal a chain with a heart shaped diamond on it.
"What do you think?" Elizabeth asked.
"Its gorgeous" Susan said "Thankyou guys so much."
"Carter picked it" Luka said.
"Ow" Susan said "oh" she didn't know what to say.
"Yes I did" Carter said as he walked down the stairs "but Mark helped."
Susan's stomach flipped as she heard his voice she didn't even want to turn around "it's beautiful she said Thankyou."
"Your welcome" Carter said walking around to the front of her "em anyone want anything im going to the store?"
"No" Susan said "thanks" she walked over to the tv and sat down taking in deep breathes maybe last night didn't happen maybe I just fell asleep in the wrong bed and he didn't even realise, yeah he doesn't seem to be acting any different from me at all yeah that's it just fell asleep in his bed I cant remember anything because nothing happened. She smiled getting up an getting a bottle of water from the refrigerator taking a sip she looked at Carter he was looking at her, and he looked hurt it did happen she thought to her self that same feeling hit her stomach again she felt sick "em im going back to bed you know."
"What?" Abby said "but it is your birthday."
"I wont be long" Susan said "I just need a lie down hangover" she said.
"Oh ok" Mark said "you want anything for it?"
"No im ok" Susan lied "I'll just go lie down."
"Ok" Malik, said "but we will wake you when the part is set up ok?"
"Ok" Susan said walking up stairs she got to her room and walked in, she locked the door with the lock on the top, she didn't want to see anyone at the moment she pulled the covers back on her bed and got in closing her eyes she fell asleep.
Fade out and back down stairs.
"Dose she seem ok to You?" Abby asked Mark.
"No" Mark said "but im sure she will pick up later when she sees the surprise that we have for her."
Malik smiled "oh yeah"
"You ok Carter?" Luka asked Carter who was sipping coffe and seemed to be thinking.
"Yeah" Carter said "hmm im just going the store you know get some more stuff in for the party."
"Ok" Abby said "here Is a list of the things we need ok."
"Ok" Carter said.
Fade out and back in 5 hours later.
Susan opened her eyes to hear banging on her door.
"Susan" Abby was saying "Susan wake up you ok in there?"
Susan jumped up and ran over to the door "Abby" she said.
"Yes" Abby said "you ok."
Susan opened the door "yeah" she said "I was just sleeping."
"How come the door was locked?" Abby asked.
"Oh I jut wanted some rest you know" Susan said.
"Oh ok" Abby said "so you ready for your party?"
"Yeah" Susan said she was going to push everything to the back of her mind for now at least, "you look nice" she said.
"Thankyou" Abby said twirling around.
Susan smiled "em just shut the door" she got changed in to a green dress and let her curly hair down "Abby" she said.
Abby was sitting on the bed "yeah" she said.
"Can I tell you something?" Susan asked.
"Sure" Abby smiled "whats up?"
"Ok" Susan said sitting down as she pulled on her shoes "but you can't tell anyone not Luka not anyone ok."
"Ok" Abby said "what is it."
Susan looked up at her "I em I slept with Carter."
"What!" Abby said shocked "oh my god that's great."
"What it's not" Susan said "it's awful I was drunk so was he I cant even remember it Abby this is awful I mean I know he had a crush on me but now I feel like I have led him on I cant do this" Susan said "just try and keep me away from him all night ok."
"Ok" Abby smiled hugging her "I will."
"Ok" Susan, said putting on some lipstick "lets go and remember not a word to no one."
Abby pretended to zip her mouth.
Susan walked down stairs to find food all set out and banners up every were "oh you guys" she smiled walking downstairs.
"HAPPY BIRTHDAY!" everyone shouted.
Susan smiled and hugged Mark "Thankyou" she said.
"Ok" Mark said "we have one more surprise for you ok."
"Ok" Susan, said.
"Ok" Abby said holding her hand "close your eyes."
Susan closed her eyes her heart was pounding she was sure everyone else could hear it.
"Ok open them" Mark said.
As she did there stood in front of her was Doug and Carol "oh my god" she screamed she hugged them so tight tears formed in her eyes and now she was crying.
Carol smiled "I missed you so much."
"Oh my god" Doug shouted like a girl.
Susan laughed "what are you two doing here?"
"Were on vacation" Doug said.
Carol smiled "oh you have changed" she said.
Susan smiled "time flies huh" she said.
"Yeah" Carol said.
Fade out