Ohiyo Gozimasu and Guten Morgen! It's me, New the newbie. As you
obviously see, I am continuing my fan fiction, "Freckled Face Maiden." I
decided that I wouldn't do it from Ema's point of view, but it's still open
to self debate. I appreciate all the reviews, and I'd like to say a few
things in response to them.
Syindikos: I don't mind Gallowin Rose as an S.I... But just because Kei isn't around means he can become a 'Mary-Sue'
Reply: Actually, Gallowin was supposed to be what I could have become, had certain far-fetched things happened. I wouldn't mind, but there's no chance of it happening. Most of the ACC's I'll put in this are simply one or two shot jokes made to be pummeled/laughed at.
Tokyo Fox: Here's a rare one someone who's writing about Ema but that may change with the Love Hina Again out. It has both Ema and Kietaro's sister in it.
But Naru and Keitaro just got in Tokyo U and they are still single (making it an AU?) who knows we may see an Ema / Keitaro fanfic pairing as a result.
Reply: I'm actually only using the books, so. yeah. And Ema/Kei, that's so wrong. and yet. so wrong. It's like a Sarah/Keitaro coupling. Ema: 15. Keitaro: 24/25/26? The boy band syndrome.
And that's it, me hoping that I didn't offend anyone, and let's start!
Music played while making this: Komm Susser Tod, Yatta, and every damn version of Cruel Angel's Thesis there is, along with *Sniffle* Colonel Rahgna Nar Halles' Funeral.
And, now, for the main event, here it is!
Freckled Faced Maiden
Chapter Two
Flying Turtles, and the Art of Doing So/Is That Kid Really Supposed to Be
Doing That?
It was a very soggy morning, for at least some members of the Hinata House. The few sober individuals that were in bed were quite fine, but the many that were not were quite wet. Keitaro and Naru were in a hotel far away, having a grand time. Let's see what they're doing, shall we?
~
"I like it when we can do that."
"We should do it more often."
"True, but won't the girl's be mad?"
"I'm sure they won't mind."
"If you say so, Naru, then I guess so. Shall we continue what we did last night?"
"Yes!"
Umm, let's leave them to that.This is too close to PG-13 as it is.
~
At the party, there were quite a few people. Most of them were wet. It had rained the night before. And they were all outside; the sleeping ones, that is. The ones fortunate enough to be awake at this time (6:00 AM) were either running into the Hinata House, or in the place already.
Amongst the few wet, attempting to get dry, would-be partiers were Haitani, Kero, Nyamo, Motoko, and Kanako.
(AN: Funny, all of those names are called misspelled by WORD. Dorks.)
"Neyh, I have the worst headache." Kero muttered, collapsed on the side of the couch; which was now wet.
"I think I wanna die." Kanako muttered, her hangover splitting her head, or so she felt. "I have this horrible pain, in my left eye."
"Kami-Sama, make it stop!" Motoko said, gripping her head.
"What's with you guys?" Haitani asked, relaxing on the floor.
"Hangover." Motoko and Kanako said, and Nyamo passed out on the armchair.
"Oh, come on, that's nothing! Wait till you've drunk a keg of hot sake." Haitani started to rant about his great times partying.
"I never want to hear the word "Alcohol" ever again." Motoko said, getting up. "I'm going to shove my head in a pool of cold water." This was met with general approval from the others.
"Well, I do know another way to get rid of a headache." Haitani said, a mischievous grin appearing on his face. The others were instantly alight.
"WHAT IS IT?!" The group said, running at him until they were right in front of him "Tell us the cure!"
"Well." Haitani whispered the cure. Shortly thereafter, he was smashed, head first, on the side of the road.
"Crap, so much for nookie ploy #462..*" Haitani muttered as the rain pitter pattered nearby.
~
Not too far away, a boy groaned. He was the boy who had overcharged the candy the day before, and had hopped down the stairs- all the stairs at a time. He had landed on his head, and he had fallen unconscious.
"I think I'm going to die." The boy muttered, still face down on the ground. "My head. oh, lord, the pain." He twitched. "I may live. not that that's a good thing, now." He fainted again.
~
"Well, we better catch the plane, shall we?"
"Yes, we wouldn't want to miss our honeymoon."
*Sigh*
"Hey, don't worry about it, there's always the airplane bathroom." *Wink*
*Nosebleed*
"That's the Keitaro I know and love. Let's go, Hentai."
~
Ema groggily woke up. After her mind convinced her body to get up and MOVE, she slowly got up. She then looked at her clock, and looked for something to eat. She shuffled to the kitchen, and took a look at the wall calendar.
It was fuzzy. She blinked, until she realized she needed her glasses. She shuffled to her room, and put on her glasses. She then shuffled back, and looked at it.
"..."
"Oh, MY GOD! I'm going to be late for school!" Ema shouted, and smashed her way through the house, trying to get ready.
"Hmmshazawha?" Shinobu muttered sleepily, as Ema rampaged through the halls, screaming.
The screaming suddenly came to an end when Kanako threatened to de- bone Ema if she kept it up. Ema quietly got ready for school, and ran out the door.
~
Gallowin sullenly woke up from his faint-induced sleep, falling right back asleep when a foot smashed her head into the pavement.
~
Ema dashed through the town, running through people to get to the train. She barely made it, bag and all, through. She relaxed, sipping the tea she had bought with her on the hasty way out. "But I'm late!" She said her eyes going in a spiral.
The train slowly came to a stop, and Ema tumbled on out at her destination. She ran through town, desperately running to school. She stopped, almost there, when she realized she was hungry, and had no food. She looked around, and saw a Ramen stand.
"Here, give me something to eat!" Ema shouted, slamming money on the counter. The worker there blinked for a second, and started to cook.
"Shoot, I'm gonna be late.. 10 minutes..." Ema started to count the time. It seemed like eons before the server handed over the Ramen and took some of the money, handing back the rest.
"THANKSABUNCHMISTER!" She shouted, running towards the school full blast.
"Kids these days."
~
Next Chapter: Ema's school!
As usual, R&R, have a great time, and LIVE, FROM NEW YORK, IT'S SATURDAY NIGHT!
XD
R&Rers, please read my Yatta fic, and remember to give advice, not just to say whether or not it sucked.
And someone teach me how to use code on the damn thing.
Syindikos: I don't mind Gallowin Rose as an S.I... But just because Kei isn't around means he can become a 'Mary-Sue'
Reply: Actually, Gallowin was supposed to be what I could have become, had certain far-fetched things happened. I wouldn't mind, but there's no chance of it happening. Most of the ACC's I'll put in this are simply one or two shot jokes made to be pummeled/laughed at.
Tokyo Fox: Here's a rare one someone who's writing about Ema but that may change with the Love Hina Again out. It has both Ema and Kietaro's sister in it.
But Naru and Keitaro just got in Tokyo U and they are still single (making it an AU?) who knows we may see an Ema / Keitaro fanfic pairing as a result.
Reply: I'm actually only using the books, so. yeah. And Ema/Kei, that's so wrong. and yet. so wrong. It's like a Sarah/Keitaro coupling. Ema: 15. Keitaro: 24/25/26? The boy band syndrome.
And that's it, me hoping that I didn't offend anyone, and let's start!
Music played while making this: Komm Susser Tod, Yatta, and every damn version of Cruel Angel's Thesis there is, along with *Sniffle* Colonel Rahgna Nar Halles' Funeral.
And, now, for the main event, here it is!
Freckled Faced Maiden
Chapter Two
Flying Turtles, and the Art of Doing So/Is That Kid Really Supposed to Be
Doing That?
It was a very soggy morning, for at least some members of the Hinata House. The few sober individuals that were in bed were quite fine, but the many that were not were quite wet. Keitaro and Naru were in a hotel far away, having a grand time. Let's see what they're doing, shall we?
~
"I like it when we can do that."
"We should do it more often."
"True, but won't the girl's be mad?"
"I'm sure they won't mind."
"If you say so, Naru, then I guess so. Shall we continue what we did last night?"
"Yes!"
Umm, let's leave them to that.This is too close to PG-13 as it is.
~
At the party, there were quite a few people. Most of them were wet. It had rained the night before. And they were all outside; the sleeping ones, that is. The ones fortunate enough to be awake at this time (6:00 AM) were either running into the Hinata House, or in the place already.
Amongst the few wet, attempting to get dry, would-be partiers were Haitani, Kero, Nyamo, Motoko, and Kanako.
(AN: Funny, all of those names are called misspelled by WORD. Dorks.)
"Neyh, I have the worst headache." Kero muttered, collapsed on the side of the couch; which was now wet.
"I think I wanna die." Kanako muttered, her hangover splitting her head, or so she felt. "I have this horrible pain, in my left eye."
"Kami-Sama, make it stop!" Motoko said, gripping her head.
"What's with you guys?" Haitani asked, relaxing on the floor.
"Hangover." Motoko and Kanako said, and Nyamo passed out on the armchair.
"Oh, come on, that's nothing! Wait till you've drunk a keg of hot sake." Haitani started to rant about his great times partying.
"I never want to hear the word "Alcohol" ever again." Motoko said, getting up. "I'm going to shove my head in a pool of cold water." This was met with general approval from the others.
"Well, I do know another way to get rid of a headache." Haitani said, a mischievous grin appearing on his face. The others were instantly alight.
"WHAT IS IT?!" The group said, running at him until they were right in front of him "Tell us the cure!"
"Well." Haitani whispered the cure. Shortly thereafter, he was smashed, head first, on the side of the road.
"Crap, so much for nookie ploy #462..*" Haitani muttered as the rain pitter pattered nearby.
~
Not too far away, a boy groaned. He was the boy who had overcharged the candy the day before, and had hopped down the stairs- all the stairs at a time. He had landed on his head, and he had fallen unconscious.
"I think I'm going to die." The boy muttered, still face down on the ground. "My head. oh, lord, the pain." He twitched. "I may live. not that that's a good thing, now." He fainted again.
~
"Well, we better catch the plane, shall we?"
"Yes, we wouldn't want to miss our honeymoon."
*Sigh*
"Hey, don't worry about it, there's always the airplane bathroom." *Wink*
*Nosebleed*
"That's the Keitaro I know and love. Let's go, Hentai."
~
Ema groggily woke up. After her mind convinced her body to get up and MOVE, she slowly got up. She then looked at her clock, and looked for something to eat. She shuffled to the kitchen, and took a look at the wall calendar.
It was fuzzy. She blinked, until she realized she needed her glasses. She shuffled to her room, and put on her glasses. She then shuffled back, and looked at it.
"..."
"Oh, MY GOD! I'm going to be late for school!" Ema shouted, and smashed her way through the house, trying to get ready.
"Hmmshazawha?" Shinobu muttered sleepily, as Ema rampaged through the halls, screaming.
The screaming suddenly came to an end when Kanako threatened to de- bone Ema if she kept it up. Ema quietly got ready for school, and ran out the door.
~
Gallowin sullenly woke up from his faint-induced sleep, falling right back asleep when a foot smashed her head into the pavement.
~
Ema dashed through the town, running through people to get to the train. She barely made it, bag and all, through. She relaxed, sipping the tea she had bought with her on the hasty way out. "But I'm late!" She said her eyes going in a spiral.
The train slowly came to a stop, and Ema tumbled on out at her destination. She ran through town, desperately running to school. She stopped, almost there, when she realized she was hungry, and had no food. She looked around, and saw a Ramen stand.
"Here, give me something to eat!" Ema shouted, slamming money on the counter. The worker there blinked for a second, and started to cook.
"Shoot, I'm gonna be late.. 10 minutes..." Ema started to count the time. It seemed like eons before the server handed over the Ramen and took some of the money, handing back the rest.
"THANKSABUNCHMISTER!" She shouted, running towards the school full blast.
"Kids these days."
~
Next Chapter: Ema's school!
As usual, R&R, have a great time, and LIVE, FROM NEW YORK, IT'S SATURDAY NIGHT!
XD
R&Rers, please read my Yatta fic, and remember to give advice, not just to say whether or not it sucked.
And someone teach me how to use code on the damn thing.