Yes.Finally I'm updating.I know its not that good but no reviews means
less of a plot.*trying not to cry*PLEASE REVIEW
Vicfan-sorry but this is a nar/kag story.Read my other story I am what I am for a sess/kag.nar will die in that one.
DemonLady1-here's my update
Firebeauty-thanks so much for letting me know.I guess I did a good job huh. You should read my Love Forgives All for another nar/kag story.
ANGRY and slightly happy-I'm sorry you don't like my story and you say I'm going to fast but I was hardly getting any reviews so I was just trying to hurry and finish. Thanks for your review.I like when someone tells me what they don't like so I can fix it.
Rosemary-Thank you.I try to describe everything to give good mental pics.
Higurashi Kagome-thanks for reviewing but I'm having difficulty coming up with a good summary.
Yura Of The Hair-Hey thanks for reviewing.Hope you do so soon enough again.
Sailor Galaxia-Thanks for being my first reviewer.Kagome decided not to go home anymore becaus whats the point.She's failing school and she'll live long enough to see her friends again anyways.
THANK YOU ALL FOR YOUR REVIEWS KEEP THEM COMING now on with the story _______________________________________________________________
Kagome woke up to feel something soft and warm next to her.She opened her eyes to see herself hugging Naraku.She felt herself turn red with embarrasement. She decided to get up quietly.She lifted herself up but felt his arm tighten his hold on her and a low chuckle.She turned to find eyes full of amusement looking at her. ''Trying to get away now after keeping me here all night.As I recall you held onto my shirt and wouldn't let me go last night when you fell asleep in my arms,'' Naraku said with huge amusement showing in his voice and eyes along with a hint of playfullness.
She raised an eyebrow at him when she heard the playfullness.''Oh really well I didn't want to wake you up.You looked to peaceful.Besides I would like a bath and something to eat.I want to see Bell to.We always take our baths together,'' she said. She is to the left and my room is to the right.The hotsprings are down the hallway to the right.Use Bell to find the dining room,''He said getting up to go to his room.She got up and went to Bell's room to find her feline friend in small form asleep in the middle of a large bed.''Bell its time to wake up,'' she said.The cat awoke and stretched.''Let's go take a bath,''Kagome said picking Bell up.
"Kagome, what's wrong.I can tell you feel confused.Does it have to do with Naraku,''Bell asked.They were now in the hotsprings.''Yes Bell it does.It seems as if I'm developing feelings for him.But can he love me.I'll die before him though since hes a half-breed and i'm immortal,''Kag said.''Not if you use the jewel.It won't be an unpure wish.I mean you only wish to stay with the man you love right?''Bell said.Kag nodded her head and said,''I guess your right.At breakfast I'll ask him for his help to finish collecting the shards.'' Bell nodded her head in agreemant.They got out and Bell used her nose to find Naraku.He was sitting at a beautiful wooden table with an assortment of foods.He had on a completely balack silk kimono with a blood red obi.Naraku looked at Kagome who had on her pure white with inrticate gold,silver and lavendar design kimono with matching sandles that Miroku had given her.They all nodded their heads in greeting and Naraku told them where to sit.Kagome was to his right and Bell was in her lap.
They were halfway through and Kagome decided to ask the question."Naraku, will you help Bell and I find the rest of the jewel?''She asked.He smiled and said,'' I would be delighted to help you.What will you do once the jewel is done since you are the guardian?''he asked.Kagome blushed and looked down.''I was gonna let my hopefully future mate use it.I just don't know if he wants to or not yet,'' she said. "Why don't we go to the library and talk privately.I can have a servant show Bell the gardens.'' he said.Kag nooded and a servant came to get Bell.She left and Kagome and Naraku stood to go to the library.
They were now seated across from each other in front of the fire place looking at each other.''Now tell me Kagome who is the one you wish to give the jewel to?''asked Naraku.''The man I want to give it to is a deep down kind man.He's evil yes but not all the time.I still love him.He has long black hair and has tried to kill me before but so have most of my friends.He is a hanyou and is sitting in front of me.I love you Naraku.I want yo......'' she was cut off by Narku pushing her down and crushing her with his lips.When she was almost out of air he raised his head and said,''I love you to Kagome.Be my mate?'' he asked.When she nodded his lips touched hers again. He wanted more and she wasn't going to stop him.She felt him cast a barrier around the library so they could have piece.Outside a feline smiled.Her job had been done.She knew her master was happy and now she had another master. 'Looks like I won't be sharing a bath with her every day' Bell thought then went on playing with the butterflies. _______________________________________________________________
so what do ya'll think.Please review.My story is almost done.Next chapter might be last that is if i make it really long.What do ya'll prefer one last long one or 2 or 3 more ones this long. its really up to yall. please read and review my other stories. I'm trying to come up with a really good ending but i'm having difficulty.My other stories will be updated soon.Ja Ne REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!If anyone wants to use any of my stories on their sites please e-mail me first. Your welcome to any and all stories of mine. READ AND REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh yeah here are two awesome Naraku and Kagome shrines (Into the Spider's Nest:A Naraku and Kagome shrine.) and (Illicit Love:A Naraku and Kagome shrine) They are the best Naraku and Kagome sites I know of.If you know any leave me the site addresses in your review.I'll post if for everyone to see if I like it.
Vicfan-sorry but this is a nar/kag story.Read my other story I am what I am for a sess/kag.nar will die in that one.
DemonLady1-here's my update
Firebeauty-thanks so much for letting me know.I guess I did a good job huh. You should read my Love Forgives All for another nar/kag story.
ANGRY and slightly happy-I'm sorry you don't like my story and you say I'm going to fast but I was hardly getting any reviews so I was just trying to hurry and finish. Thanks for your review.I like when someone tells me what they don't like so I can fix it.
Rosemary-Thank you.I try to describe everything to give good mental pics.
Higurashi Kagome-thanks for reviewing but I'm having difficulty coming up with a good summary.
Yura Of The Hair-Hey thanks for reviewing.Hope you do so soon enough again.
Sailor Galaxia-Thanks for being my first reviewer.Kagome decided not to go home anymore becaus whats the point.She's failing school and she'll live long enough to see her friends again anyways.
THANK YOU ALL FOR YOUR REVIEWS KEEP THEM COMING now on with the story _______________________________________________________________
Kagome woke up to feel something soft and warm next to her.She opened her eyes to see herself hugging Naraku.She felt herself turn red with embarrasement. She decided to get up quietly.She lifted herself up but felt his arm tighten his hold on her and a low chuckle.She turned to find eyes full of amusement looking at her. ''Trying to get away now after keeping me here all night.As I recall you held onto my shirt and wouldn't let me go last night when you fell asleep in my arms,'' Naraku said with huge amusement showing in his voice and eyes along with a hint of playfullness.
She raised an eyebrow at him when she heard the playfullness.''Oh really well I didn't want to wake you up.You looked to peaceful.Besides I would like a bath and something to eat.I want to see Bell to.We always take our baths together,'' she said. She is to the left and my room is to the right.The hotsprings are down the hallway to the right.Use Bell to find the dining room,''He said getting up to go to his room.She got up and went to Bell's room to find her feline friend in small form asleep in the middle of a large bed.''Bell its time to wake up,'' she said.The cat awoke and stretched.''Let's go take a bath,''Kagome said picking Bell up.
"Kagome, what's wrong.I can tell you feel confused.Does it have to do with Naraku,''Bell asked.They were now in the hotsprings.''Yes Bell it does.It seems as if I'm developing feelings for him.But can he love me.I'll die before him though since hes a half-breed and i'm immortal,''Kag said.''Not if you use the jewel.It won't be an unpure wish.I mean you only wish to stay with the man you love right?''Bell said.Kag nodded her head and said,''I guess your right.At breakfast I'll ask him for his help to finish collecting the shards.'' Bell nodded her head in agreemant.They got out and Bell used her nose to find Naraku.He was sitting at a beautiful wooden table with an assortment of foods.He had on a completely balack silk kimono with a blood red obi.Naraku looked at Kagome who had on her pure white with inrticate gold,silver and lavendar design kimono with matching sandles that Miroku had given her.They all nodded their heads in greeting and Naraku told them where to sit.Kagome was to his right and Bell was in her lap.
They were halfway through and Kagome decided to ask the question."Naraku, will you help Bell and I find the rest of the jewel?''She asked.He smiled and said,'' I would be delighted to help you.What will you do once the jewel is done since you are the guardian?''he asked.Kagome blushed and looked down.''I was gonna let my hopefully future mate use it.I just don't know if he wants to or not yet,'' she said. "Why don't we go to the library and talk privately.I can have a servant show Bell the gardens.'' he said.Kag nooded and a servant came to get Bell.She left and Kagome and Naraku stood to go to the library.
They were now seated across from each other in front of the fire place looking at each other.''Now tell me Kagome who is the one you wish to give the jewel to?''asked Naraku.''The man I want to give it to is a deep down kind man.He's evil yes but not all the time.I still love him.He has long black hair and has tried to kill me before but so have most of my friends.He is a hanyou and is sitting in front of me.I love you Naraku.I want yo......'' she was cut off by Narku pushing her down and crushing her with his lips.When she was almost out of air he raised his head and said,''I love you to Kagome.Be my mate?'' he asked.When she nodded his lips touched hers again. He wanted more and she wasn't going to stop him.She felt him cast a barrier around the library so they could have piece.Outside a feline smiled.Her job had been done.She knew her master was happy and now she had another master. 'Looks like I won't be sharing a bath with her every day' Bell thought then went on playing with the butterflies. _______________________________________________________________
so what do ya'll think.Please review.My story is almost done.Next chapter might be last that is if i make it really long.What do ya'll prefer one last long one or 2 or 3 more ones this long. its really up to yall. please read and review my other stories. I'm trying to come up with a really good ending but i'm having difficulty.My other stories will be updated soon.Ja Ne REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!If anyone wants to use any of my stories on their sites please e-mail me first. Your welcome to any and all stories of mine. READ AND REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh yeah here are two awesome Naraku and Kagome shrines (Into the Spider's Nest:A Naraku and Kagome shrine.) and (Illicit Love:A Naraku and Kagome shrine) They are the best Naraku and Kagome sites I know of.If you know any leave me the site addresses in your review.I'll post if for everyone to see if I like it.