A/N: Hey it's my 21st chapter! YAY! Lol ok thanks for the reviews. I
really, really appreciate them! Oh my gosh and I saw Lauren Graham on Law
and Order last night! IT WAS SO FREAKY! She never cracked a joke or
anything, and I was like "Oh come on just say something stupid and then
smile that stupid smile!" But she didn't, instead she just smiled the
stupid smile. To me she was just soooo out of place. It really freaked me
out, she was so stickin serious.
Smile1 thanks again! You asked me how I write the Gilmore humor like I do. I don't know if it's true, but my sister tells me that the way I talk (some of the stupid, very, very stupid things I say, and my very, very strong coffee and caffeine addiction) and things I do remind her very much of Lorelai. And she is my favorite character. And I love reading your favorite parts, it's better than telling me that the story was great and stuff and please continue. I like.... well love it when you all tell me your favorite parts! So please keep doing so, if you have favorite parts that is.
Oh and hopefully you all watch Gilmore Girls tonight (9-9-03) 'Say Goodnight, Gracie' It's one of my most absolute favorites! The beginning, I don't like the fact that it's the end of Rory and Jess. But the beginning before the song when Lorelai and Rory are at Kyle's house getting Lane's book bag. And then Lorelai starts:
LORELAI: This fence is broken because of you, this crap is on the ground because of you.
RORY: What's your point?
LORELAI: [sings] Did you ever know that you're my hero?
RORY: Oh my God!
LORELAI: [sings] You're everything I would like to be. And I could fly higher than an eagle, 'cause you are the wind beneath my wings.
I love it! Oh and whenever I write, if I can't see any of the characters doing or saying what I'm writing I won't write it. At least that's what I've learnt since 'Big Surprise In Europe' my first ff. midnightqueen6 I am very good at being evil MWAHAHA! Lol, ok so yea. Sorry this is so long. Hope you enjoy ^_^ Thanks again for the reviews everyone!!!!
*~Oddmoonbi~*
What The Heart Wants 21
Usual Disclaimers Apply
Rory and Jess were still sitting on the counter. It was now past midnight, and Rory had accepted Jess's offer to play Strip Poker.
Rory was hiding her grin behind her hand of cards; Jess was sitting right in front of her in just his boxers. He was losing, and he was losing badly. Rory still had every bit of her clothing on. She could see the disgust written all over his face. He wasn't expecting to lose, and she knew that. Rory set down her hand of cards and looked at Jess.
He felt her watching him; he knew she was watching him. But he was losing; he had to figure out how to at least get the rubber band out of her hair.
Rory: Jess.
He didn't look up; he just kept studying his cards. Rory reached over and placed her hand on his cards and gently pushed them down. He finally looked up at her. Rory bit her bottom lip to keep from laughing.
R: Jess, what if mom and Luke have to use the bathroom?
Jess grinned.
Jess: Don't know, they just better not drink a lot.
R: But what if they drank a lot before we locked them in?
Jess just shrugged.
J: Don't know.
R: Jess.
J: We'll let them out before four ok? Their probably asleep now anyway.
R: Ok.
Rory looked around the diner she was getting hungry.
J: Rory you hungry?
Rory just nodded as she returned her gaze to Jess.
J: Ok.
Jess slid off the counter and pulled on his pants and shirt, then went into the kitchen. When he came out he had a bag of marshmallows in his hand. Rory's face lit up, she didn't know Luke had those in here.
R: Marshmallows?
J: Looks like it. They were hidden in the very back of the cabinet, beside a half empty bag.
R: Do you think Luke?
J: Or Caesar.
They both shrugged and opened the bag.
J: Where did you learn how to play poker?
R: Why?
J: No reason.
Rory smiled.
R: Mom.
Storage Room.
Lorelai and Luke were laying on the floor in each others arms. They both were listening to Rory and Jess outside, both smiling. As much as either of them hated to admit it, Jess and Rory were meant for each other.
Lorelai: You know, this isn't exactly the romantic date I was hoping for.
Lorelai's comment just got a grunt from Luke. She smiled.
L: Why do you think they done this?
Luke: Don't know.
L: I mean, what could possibly make them want to do this?
Luke: Don't know.
L: Luke.
Luke: Hmmm?
L: Why don't you know?
Luke: Don't know.
L: Luke, can bunnies really fly, while hippo's float. And can all the animals on Lion King. Can they really talk, in real life I mean?
Luke: What?
Lorelai started laughing and sat up, she turned to face him.
L: Ah ha, got you!
Luke: What?
L: You stopped saying "don't know".
Lorelai impersonated his voice when she said the last two words.
L: But now you keep saying "what".
She again impersonated his voice.
Luke: Lorelai.
Luke sat up beside her.
L: Yes?
She smiled.
Luke: Shut up.
Luke put his hand on her cheek and kissed her, they both layed back down.
Diner.
Rory and Jess had just gotten threw with the second bag of marshmallows. They ate the full bag, plus the half empty bag.
Rory threw herself onto the diner floor, sprawled out like she had just been shot. Jess looked over at her, then he walked over to her and stood right over her.
Jess: Rory.
Rory: How could you?
J: What?
Jess smiled and sat beside her.
R: You made me eat all those marshmallows.
J: I did not, you ate them on you own.
R: Fine.
J: What, no argument?
R: I'm too sick to argue with you.
Jess smiled and helped Rory stand. Rory walked to the diner door and looked out. It was the middle of November. The leaves on the trees were already red's, oranges', and yellow's, looking like fire. Everyone was awaiting the snow, especially the two Gilmore Girls. They loved the snow.
Jess joined Rory by the door, he put his arms around her. Rory turned around to him. She placed both hands on his chest and smiled.
R: I'm going to go out for a little while.
J: Ok, you want some company?
R: No, not right now. I just want to think.
J: Ok.
He let her go and watched her walk out into the cold night. He saw her shiver, she forgot her jacket. Maybe she deliberately forgot it. Jess shrugged, he picked up her jacket and sat at a table and watched her walk and sit at the gazebo. He would bring it to her in a minute, he respected her space.
Rory missed this place terribly. She missed the people, her mom, Luke. She really missed the bridge, it held so many memories. Rory smiled, it was their spot, and it would always and forever be their spot. She leaned forward and looked up into the night sky, there were millions of stars out. Rory heard foot steps, but she ignored them. She knew who it was, she could tell by his walk. By how soft he was walking, he always did that when he knew she was thinking. He sat beside her and put her jacket around her shoulders.
J: It's a little cold out here.
R: Yea.
J: Did you deliberately leave your jacket?
Rory looked at him.
R: Yea.
She leaned in and kissed him. His lips were still warm from the diner. It sent a chill down her back. Jess put his hand on the back of her neck. Rory set her hands on his chest and shoulders.
Storage Room.
Lorelai had her ear up against the door. Luke was walking around looking for food.
Lorelai: Their gone! Luke! Their not out there anymore!
Luke walked over to Lorelai.
Luke: What do you mean?
L: Their not out there anymore. They've left us to die!
Luke: Oh come on Lorelai.
L: Well where did they go? Tell me Luke!
Luke: They probably went upstairs-
L: Oooo don't you say that! They better not be upstairs, I'll kill that boy, Rory!
Lorelai started banging on the door.
Luke: Let me finish, they could be outside.
L: Luke.
Luke: What?
L: Don't you get your shipments from back here?
Luke: Umm. Yea why?
Lorelai reached out to Luke's pockets and grabbed his keys. She went running to the back of the storage room, looking through the keys.
L: Which on is it? Come on Luke, which one?
Luke: What are you talking about?
Luke was trying to keep up with Lorelai.
L: The key, the key. Which is it?
Luke: Lorelai!
L: To the back door!
Finally Luke caught onto what Lorelai was doing. He ran up beside her and took the keys, then ran to the back door, Lorelai following.
Luke found the key and shoved it in the door. He pushed, it opened.
L: Yay!
Lorelai jumped up and hugged Luke. They both walked out and through the alley. When they got to the street they saw Rory and Jess sitting in the gazebo making out. They sneaked around into Luke's and locked the front door, then headed upstairs to get some sleep.
Smile1 thanks again! You asked me how I write the Gilmore humor like I do. I don't know if it's true, but my sister tells me that the way I talk (some of the stupid, very, very stupid things I say, and my very, very strong coffee and caffeine addiction) and things I do remind her very much of Lorelai. And she is my favorite character. And I love reading your favorite parts, it's better than telling me that the story was great and stuff and please continue. I like.... well love it when you all tell me your favorite parts! So please keep doing so, if you have favorite parts that is.
Oh and hopefully you all watch Gilmore Girls tonight (9-9-03) 'Say Goodnight, Gracie' It's one of my most absolute favorites! The beginning, I don't like the fact that it's the end of Rory and Jess. But the beginning before the song when Lorelai and Rory are at Kyle's house getting Lane's book bag. And then Lorelai starts:
LORELAI: This fence is broken because of you, this crap is on the ground because of you.
RORY: What's your point?
LORELAI: [sings] Did you ever know that you're my hero?
RORY: Oh my God!
LORELAI: [sings] You're everything I would like to be. And I could fly higher than an eagle, 'cause you are the wind beneath my wings.
I love it! Oh and whenever I write, if I can't see any of the characters doing or saying what I'm writing I won't write it. At least that's what I've learnt since 'Big Surprise In Europe' my first ff. midnightqueen6 I am very good at being evil MWAHAHA! Lol, ok so yea. Sorry this is so long. Hope you enjoy ^_^ Thanks again for the reviews everyone!!!!
*~Oddmoonbi~*
What The Heart Wants 21
Usual Disclaimers Apply
Rory and Jess were still sitting on the counter. It was now past midnight, and Rory had accepted Jess's offer to play Strip Poker.
Rory was hiding her grin behind her hand of cards; Jess was sitting right in front of her in just his boxers. He was losing, and he was losing badly. Rory still had every bit of her clothing on. She could see the disgust written all over his face. He wasn't expecting to lose, and she knew that. Rory set down her hand of cards and looked at Jess.
He felt her watching him; he knew she was watching him. But he was losing; he had to figure out how to at least get the rubber band out of her hair.
Rory: Jess.
He didn't look up; he just kept studying his cards. Rory reached over and placed her hand on his cards and gently pushed them down. He finally looked up at her. Rory bit her bottom lip to keep from laughing.
R: Jess, what if mom and Luke have to use the bathroom?
Jess grinned.
Jess: Don't know, they just better not drink a lot.
R: But what if they drank a lot before we locked them in?
Jess just shrugged.
J: Don't know.
R: Jess.
J: We'll let them out before four ok? Their probably asleep now anyway.
R: Ok.
Rory looked around the diner she was getting hungry.
J: Rory you hungry?
Rory just nodded as she returned her gaze to Jess.
J: Ok.
Jess slid off the counter and pulled on his pants and shirt, then went into the kitchen. When he came out he had a bag of marshmallows in his hand. Rory's face lit up, she didn't know Luke had those in here.
R: Marshmallows?
J: Looks like it. They were hidden in the very back of the cabinet, beside a half empty bag.
R: Do you think Luke?
J: Or Caesar.
They both shrugged and opened the bag.
J: Where did you learn how to play poker?
R: Why?
J: No reason.
Rory smiled.
R: Mom.
Storage Room.
Lorelai and Luke were laying on the floor in each others arms. They both were listening to Rory and Jess outside, both smiling. As much as either of them hated to admit it, Jess and Rory were meant for each other.
Lorelai: You know, this isn't exactly the romantic date I was hoping for.
Lorelai's comment just got a grunt from Luke. She smiled.
L: Why do you think they done this?
Luke: Don't know.
L: I mean, what could possibly make them want to do this?
Luke: Don't know.
L: Luke.
Luke: Hmmm?
L: Why don't you know?
Luke: Don't know.
L: Luke, can bunnies really fly, while hippo's float. And can all the animals on Lion King. Can they really talk, in real life I mean?
Luke: What?
Lorelai started laughing and sat up, she turned to face him.
L: Ah ha, got you!
Luke: What?
L: You stopped saying "don't know".
Lorelai impersonated his voice when she said the last two words.
L: But now you keep saying "what".
She again impersonated his voice.
Luke: Lorelai.
Luke sat up beside her.
L: Yes?
She smiled.
Luke: Shut up.
Luke put his hand on her cheek and kissed her, they both layed back down.
Diner.
Rory and Jess had just gotten threw with the second bag of marshmallows. They ate the full bag, plus the half empty bag.
Rory threw herself onto the diner floor, sprawled out like she had just been shot. Jess looked over at her, then he walked over to her and stood right over her.
Jess: Rory.
Rory: How could you?
J: What?
Jess smiled and sat beside her.
R: You made me eat all those marshmallows.
J: I did not, you ate them on you own.
R: Fine.
J: What, no argument?
R: I'm too sick to argue with you.
Jess smiled and helped Rory stand. Rory walked to the diner door and looked out. It was the middle of November. The leaves on the trees were already red's, oranges', and yellow's, looking like fire. Everyone was awaiting the snow, especially the two Gilmore Girls. They loved the snow.
Jess joined Rory by the door, he put his arms around her. Rory turned around to him. She placed both hands on his chest and smiled.
R: I'm going to go out for a little while.
J: Ok, you want some company?
R: No, not right now. I just want to think.
J: Ok.
He let her go and watched her walk out into the cold night. He saw her shiver, she forgot her jacket. Maybe she deliberately forgot it. Jess shrugged, he picked up her jacket and sat at a table and watched her walk and sit at the gazebo. He would bring it to her in a minute, he respected her space.
Rory missed this place terribly. She missed the people, her mom, Luke. She really missed the bridge, it held so many memories. Rory smiled, it was their spot, and it would always and forever be their spot. She leaned forward and looked up into the night sky, there were millions of stars out. Rory heard foot steps, but she ignored them. She knew who it was, she could tell by his walk. By how soft he was walking, he always did that when he knew she was thinking. He sat beside her and put her jacket around her shoulders.
J: It's a little cold out here.
R: Yea.
J: Did you deliberately leave your jacket?
Rory looked at him.
R: Yea.
She leaned in and kissed him. His lips were still warm from the diner. It sent a chill down her back. Jess put his hand on the back of her neck. Rory set her hands on his chest and shoulders.
Storage Room.
Lorelai had her ear up against the door. Luke was walking around looking for food.
Lorelai: Their gone! Luke! Their not out there anymore!
Luke walked over to Lorelai.
Luke: What do you mean?
L: Their not out there anymore. They've left us to die!
Luke: Oh come on Lorelai.
L: Well where did they go? Tell me Luke!
Luke: They probably went upstairs-
L: Oooo don't you say that! They better not be upstairs, I'll kill that boy, Rory!
Lorelai started banging on the door.
Luke: Let me finish, they could be outside.
L: Luke.
Luke: What?
L: Don't you get your shipments from back here?
Luke: Umm. Yea why?
Lorelai reached out to Luke's pockets and grabbed his keys. She went running to the back of the storage room, looking through the keys.
L: Which on is it? Come on Luke, which one?
Luke: What are you talking about?
Luke was trying to keep up with Lorelai.
L: The key, the key. Which is it?
Luke: Lorelai!
L: To the back door!
Finally Luke caught onto what Lorelai was doing. He ran up beside her and took the keys, then ran to the back door, Lorelai following.
Luke found the key and shoved it in the door. He pushed, it opened.
L: Yay!
Lorelai jumped up and hugged Luke. They both walked out and through the alley. When they got to the street they saw Rory and Jess sitting in the gazebo making out. They sneaked around into Luke's and locked the front door, then headed upstairs to get some sleep.