Ahoy me hearties!! Been reading a lot of your reviews and decided to take some advice. Um I don't think anyone will like this chapter, but I couldn't do any better. Sorry and I hope you try and enjoy!
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"Ye know this is really gettin' on me nerves," Jack finally said and grabbed Adelei away from the table and pushed her up against the wall once more.
"No!" she cried, "Not like this, please!" She begged him.
Suddenly he pulled away from her.
"Yer righ'," he said.
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"The bed it be!"Jack said, picking her up and throwing her on the bed.
"Thas not what I meant!" Adelei cried, getting a bit tangled in her own hair.
"Really love, ye need to be more specific,"Jack said, moving on top of her, but she was a strong (not to mention resourceful) girl after all and she kneed him in the groin quite hard.
"Shiver me...," he gasped and before he could grab her, she jumped out of the bed and ran for the door. She expected him to run after her but the door merely slammed shut behind her...with some of her hair still shut in it. Suddenly she realized that there were still some of the crew on the deck and they were looking at her in a way that she did not particularly like. She also noticed her clothing situation and turned to open the Captain's door, but it was locked. She began to panic.
"Errrmm....Capn' Jack.?" she called out. "Perhaps I shall take me chances with ye after all, eh? Capn'?"
The door swung open and Jack stood behind it, smiling. She pulled her hair out quickly.
"Sorry love, ye had yer chance. 'Ave fun with me men!" he smiled and waved his hand goodbye before slamming the door in her face.
"Curse ye, ye scurvy dog," she muttered.
"I heard that!" called Jack from inside the cabin. "Insultin' me isn' goin' to make me open the door, love!"
"Then what is?" Adelei cried, slamming a fist against the door.
"Ello, darlin',"said a grimy voice from behind her. She spun around and came face to face with a few crew members.
"'ello," she whispered and then moved away from them quickly. Some of the crew made a dash for her, but she ran up the stairs and onto the poop deck (A/N: yes that's what it was called!). 'So this must be where the Capn' steers," she thought for a moment until her thoughts were quickly returned to the sexually frustrated crew that were running after her.
"How 'bout ye ride me ship!" one of the men called and the rest laughed. She ran to the other staircase, but more crew were running up that way, grinning, laughing, and shouting. She knew her way around a ship quite well, watching the crew members on her father's ship hard at work and so she jumped down onto the main deck and ran up the rigging and let them chase after her a bit as she swung on a rope tied to the mast and then swung herself over to where the Captain's cabin was.
"I'll tell ye where I found the rubies," she pounded on the door again.
"Ye'll 'ave to do better than that, love!" Jack called from inside. Adelei almost screamed with frustration, but instead screamed with fright when she turned to see the crew dashing for her. Somehow she managed to slip by them and ran up the rigging once more, climbing higher and higher above them all. She looked about her. She could see almost nothing. The moon had disappeared behind the clouds and there was not a single light to be seen anywhere on the ship or beyond in the dark waters. Everything became quiet except her breathe which came in short gasps.
Adelei had never been so frightened in her entire life. The rigging swayed with the wind and she did not know whether there were pirates below her or not. She cried softly, clinging to the rigging. Her hair billowed far behind her. 'Let go,' a small voice inside her head crooned. But Adelei did not want to die. She knew this now. She had no desire to end her life, no matter how hellish it got. She feared death now, after seeing her sisters die the way they did. And she still had hope of freedom, a glimmer perhaps but it was there.
The moon appeared again and when she looked down upon the ship, it was empty. She slowly climbed down. Wiping the tears from her eyes, she walked towards Jack's cabin and knocked softly. No answer came. She sighed and leaned against the door. "Wake up!" she yelled in frustration, banging a fist against the door. Still, no answer came....or not one that she wanted.
"Now, now, now, what's all this then?"a voice said behind her. Adelei turned to look at the crew and beat upon the door again. "Capn' please!" she cried desperately. Several of the men reached out to grab her. She was pulled forward and touched in a way that she most certainly did not like one bit. She screamed and struggled. Suddenly she was pulled away and was in darkness once more.
She lay on the cold wooden floor, trying to silence her breathe. The moon was gone again and the room was pitch black. Not to Jack however, who could see her perfectly well. Suddenly she was picked up and set on his bed again. She still couldn't see him.
"Thank ye," she whispered.
"Ye needn't be thankin' me jest yet, love," he said from somewhere in the room that she could not see. Perhaps he was right next to her or across the room. She could not tell for some reason. She was so very tired and truly did not feel like doing anything except sleeping, but the Captain of the Black Pearl had other ideas. She felt his presence near her and said, "Please don'. I know where the rubies are. I'll take ye where I found 'em!"
"Ye don' know because ye wasn't the one to put 'em there," he said. She felt a rough hand caress her face. She moved her hand to brush it off, but it was gone already.
"How de ye know that?" she asked, yawning.
"Some of me men be quite skilled in sewin', believe it or not," Jack said. "I can barely believe it meself, actually. In fact, it's a bit troublin' sometimes....Anyway, accordin' to 'em, yer dress wasn' sewn up by no woman. So I suspect it be yer father's doin'."
"What?!" Adelei sat up. She could see him now perfectly, laying next to her, one elbow supporting him as he looked at her. She frowned at him. "Trust me, I know me own father. He does not know how to sew. He would never do women's work! A capn' of a pirate ship is what he be, not some servant wench who sews all day!"
"Well, I'm sure he didn' sew all day," said Jack. "I'm sure he did other things too....I think." This comment made Adelei angry.
"Ye know, could ye at least tell me why me father is so hated?" Adelei asked, " I mean, everyone hates him so. He really wasn' that bad." Jack chuckled.
"Ye really don' know anythin' bout yer dear papa then, Adelei," Jack said, "So fer all ye know, he might know how to sew after all." Adelei was a bit surprised that he said her name, but then she was angry after realizing the rest of his words.
"W-well," she sputtered, "Is-Is a daughter supposed to know everythin' bout 'er father...I mean..I-I knew him well. The kindest man ye ever will meet, he was."
"A long time ago, the Grace Boa was the most feared ship in these waters," Jack said and then quickly added, "Next to the Black Pearl o' course. "
"Oh, are ye goin' to tell me the story now, eh?" Adelei asked, putting her hands behind her head.
"Not if ye keep talkin'," said Jack and continued. "Anyway, yer father was first mate on board the Grace Boa an' he broke the pirates code so severely that every pirate in the whole sea 'eard about it and hated 'im ever since."
"What did he do?" asked Adelei, getting a bit sleepy.
"He gave away his Capn' to the Brits an' they hung 'im up fer everyone to see,"Jack said, "An' then he took over the Boa and continued to do the same to Capn's o' other ships. Now, everyone was a bit mad at 'im fer that. An' thas why he be so hated. End of story! What do ye think?"
"Well...," she swallowed hard, "Perhaps he was trying to stop piracy......."
"He was a pirate 'imself, love," Jack reminded her.
"W-well...,"Adelei felt a tear run down her face and her voice started to quiver, "A-a k-kind man he was, I tell ye..."
"An' the mystery is solved!" Jack clapped his hands together. "Well that was nice. Feel like doin' anythin' fun?"
"No," she groaned and turned away from him. She felt so terrible. How could her father have done that? The man she had branded her hero? The father who told her stories and jokes and made her and her sisters happy and joyful? How did her life get so...out of order?
Jack turned her towards him. She covered her eyes with one delicate hand, trying to hide her tears. He slowly pulled her hand away and looked at her. She was indeed beautiful to him and having her tonight would be his own personal revenge on Captain Filiger. He, after all, had his own reasons for hating him.....
But for some reason he could not bring himself to do her harm......or maybe he could. Jack was a pirate, after all, and was never one to consider another's feelings, especially if it benefitted him, and unfortunately for the poor girl lying next him, she was no exception.
And with those thoughts running through his head, he pulled her closer to him.
"What are ye doin'?" she whispered, fear in her quivering voice.
"Benefitting meself, love," he whispered back, and kissed her gently. She tried to pull back, but he only deepened his kiss and she felt his tongue caress hers.
Adelei, as pretty as she was, did not have much experience with the opposite sex. In fact, she had none at all. When she was on her father's ship, she was constantly watched and it was the same way when she was off the ship as well. Someone was always watching what she was doing. Perhaps that was why her thoughts were always pure and she had never thought about those things...until now of course. Suddenly an image flashed in her head. That day....her sisters..... It all seemed like a blur. Was she to suffer the same fate as them?
She did not know what else to do but to kiss him back and she felt him smile against her mouth. 'Wait,' she thought, 'Am I supposed to kiss him back? I don' wanna do this! But.....'
In a way, Jack comforted her. His smell and the warmth of his body made her head swim. Or was that just plain fear? She wasn't very sure of how she felt right at the moment. But she followed his lead, knowing full well that if he really wanted to, he could do whatever he wanted and there was no use in fighting. His lips left her mouth and traveled slowly down her neck. 'Well that doesn' feel too bad...,' she thought.
But despite how good his lips felt on her neck, she was still afraid and when he put a hand on her breast, she almost screamed and pushed him away again. He looked at her and seemed to be reading her thoughts because he said, "Shhhhhh, love, nothin' to worry about," and pulled her in for another kiss. Of course this wasn't the most reassuring thing to say to her, but it was the best Jack could do. He never truly understood women and that was his way of being comforting.
Suddenly Adelei found a new strength from somewhere inside her and pushed him away with all her might and stumbled off the bed. Her long hair, unfortunately, was in his hand.
"I be a Capn's daughter!" she exclaimed. "I believe I be deservin' more respect than that."
Jack pulled her over to him by the hair and she whimpered and reached up to rub her scalp, but he grabbed her wrists and held them behind her firmly.
"Well, love, thas not all ye are," his mouth was right next to hers and his eyes locked with hers, "Yer a pirate's daughter, and a hated pirate's daughter at that. Yer rank on another ship don' matter here. Yer on me ship. Ye could be the Queen o' bloody England 'erself an' I wouldn' show ye the least bit o' respect that ye think ye deserve. I be a pirate, love, an' yer on me pirate ship an' whatever respect I think ye be deservin' ye'll get, savvy?! An' I know for a fact that yer dear papa never showed this amount of courtesy to his captives, 'specially the female ones."
She swallowed hard, not knowing what to say. He was right and she knew it. Her father was quite harsh with the prisoners that he kept on the ship, but he told her it was alright to do that...he told her....
Jack pulled her to the bed once more and pulled her under him. He was as gentle as he could be, which was not that gentle, but he was trying and Adelei could see that. Of course, that didn't mean that she still wanted to lose her virginity to some pirate who hated her father, but seeing as she had no choice she tried to make the best of the situation and did what she knew best: lay still.
He had moved her under the covers and was now attempting to remove her bodice with only slight resistance from her, but that was from his point of view. She was struggling against him with all her might, but she was tired and she eventually stopped struggling as she felt the bodice slip over her head. His hands roamed her body and his lips were forever on her neck. She was extremely disturbed by this. This was her first experience with a man and this was not exactly what she wanted it to be like.
Adelei whimpered softly as he continued to touch her. By this time, he removed his own clothing as well and his lips met hers again.
"Relax, love," he whispered, his voice filled with lust.
"Relax?" breathed Adelei, nervously, "W-what? Why?" But he simply put a finger on her lips and kissed her once more as he slid into her. She cried out, but it was muffled into his mouth.
"I told ye to relax," he whispered into her ear and then kissed her once more. His rough fingers wiped away her tears. If there was anything Adelei learned from this experience it was that sex does not feel good. He rocked back and forth into her and every thrust was as painful as the last. Suddenly she felt a strange sensation and he gently groaned and pulled out of her, his lips still on hers. His eyes locked with hers and stayed there as she cried softly. Then she looked away, sickened by him. He rolled off of her and turned over to face away from her.
She lay there, hearing him breathe as he slept as if nothing had happened. She felt so wronged and did not know what would happen to her the next day. She had stopped crying and felt numb as she held herself and edged away from him.
The next morning he was gone and she quickly put on her bodice once more. She felt nauseous and scared. She got up to sit on a chair and moved it so that it faced the window. She watched the ocean and rocked with the occasional large wave. And then she felt his hand on her shoulder.
"'Ave a nice sleep, love?" Jack asked softly. She looked up at him and glared.
"I dislike ye very much righ' now, Capn' Jack Sparrow," she said quietly returning her gaze to the crisp blue water in front of her. He moved his other hand on her other shoulder.
"Are ye 'ungry?" he asked.
"No."
"Thirsty?"
"No."
"Alrigh' then," Jack said, removed his hands from her shoulders and turned towards the door, "I'll be gettin' ye somethin' then."
"But I said no!"Adelei turned around.
"There's no sense in starvin' ye...," his voice trailed off as he closed the door. He came back with a goblet of wine and a loaf of bread. He set it down on the dresser and turned to her. Her eyes avoided him, but he walked over to her and turned her chin towards him.
"Don' be too mad at me love,"Jack whispered.
"Oh ye are terrible," she hissed pulling away, "How would ye feel if that 'appened to ye!"
"Well, it wouldn'," Jack said, looking a bit surprised.
"An' why not?" Adelei turned towards him, giving him a spiteful look.
"I'm Capn' Jack Sparrow" he smiled.
"Oh, ye are so full o' yerself!"she exclaimed, angrily and scooted the chair away from him. But he scoots it back.
"Love, I be a pirate," Jack sighed, "An' that is the only thing I be guilty of. I never said I was proud of anythin' I did but....well....actually....I did say somethin' like that...but thas not the point. The point is.... ye see........hmm....what were we talkin' about?" Adelei rolled her eyes.
"I think I got the point that yer a pirate," she said, "But that don' pardon ye from nothin'."
"On the contrary, it does," said Jack taking a bite of the bread on the dresser.
" 'Ey! Thas mine!" she exclaimed.
"Ye said ye didn' want any!" said Jack, putting his hands out, or at least thats what he meant to say but his mouth was full and he sounded slightly different.
Suddenly there was a knock on the door and yelling outside. The door flew open and tall man stepped in.
"I've come to collect what be mine," he said.
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Authors note: This took me a while to write because I couldn't think of what to do. I kept adding and deleting parts and editing until I decided it was decent at the most. I had a pain in the ass writer's block and it sucked so bad so if you didn't like this chapter, so sorry but I couldn't have done any better. Quite sad, I know, but hey, the chapter is up. So enjoy....or try to. It really sucks when you don't know the ending to your own story. It's a bit darker than I expected it to be. Again sorry if it didn't suit your fancy!
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CaptainSparrow'sLuv: Yes, I don't regret now that I lost that chapter. If I was Adelei, I would have enjoyed that but then I'm not her and that's sad. *sniff* Thanks for reviewing!
Ruki the Sake Fairy: Yes, Jack IS quite the asshole in this, but I just think guys are so much hotter when they're being naughty. Thanks!
queenofgondor21: Omg, that is so terrible!!! Dude, I'm so sorry. And I was so upset about one little chapter! I don't know what I would have done if that happened to me! Ahh well thank you for sharing your computer story. lol
Nefertari Membarak: I added the savvy! Yay! Thank you so much! I'm definitely going to get some flames for this chapter, but oh well I'm happy that I made you happy because I wanted to point out the fact that Jack is a pirate and pirates are NOT nice. Hehe but I repeat it so much in this chapter I don't know how anyone can miss it. :-)
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Jo12: lol!!! Yes, I'm glad someone likes (and notices) my strange references to...errr....male organs. Hehe! Well this chapter does include a bit of rape, but I'll make it up to her! I promise!
tiger6: I'm so glad you enjoy my other stories!!! Thank you!! Although after this chapter, I don't know how you'll like me at all. Heh. But yes, I would be more than happy to sleep with our Jack, but I still feel bad for her.
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Pirate Lass: AWWW!!!Sorry hun, I already have a best friend who I love, but I welcome new friends!!! :-) Gladiator...never saw it. But heard it was good. I heard the word gladiator means penis in latin. Hehe...um...yes...I hope you liked this chapter. Thanks for reviewing!
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