Ok this story not that good but I had this story for awhile and I now just finishing it. There is bad grammar since I'm not really good with it. If your picky about it this is not the story to read. Here is the story:
The day that changed Maxwell Smart's life
99 was reading in bed when Max came out of the bathroom. Max crawled into bed and began to kiss 99's neck. 99 looks up from her book and pushed him away and went back to her book.
Max: (Hurt) 99 what's going on?
99: (Looking at Max) Nothing
Max: You been pushing me away for the past month
99: I just haven't been in the mood
Max: But 99 a month you know a man needs some loving
99: I'm sorry maybe tomorrow night
Max: (Upset) Fine
Max rolls over and went to sleep (well tried) 99 sighed and closed her book. She put it onto the nightstand and then shut off the light.
The next morning:
99 woke up and noticed that she still had time to sleep in before she had to get the kids up and ready for school. She rolled over and tried to fall back to sleep when she couldn't she got up and decided to get ready for the day. She walked into the bathroom, shut the door, and got her shower ready she then got undressed and got in. Max finally woke up and was heading in the bathroom to try to talk to 99 he was about to enter when a little voice stopped him.
Kelsie: Daddy can I come in?
Max: Sure sweetie
Kelsie walks in and goes over to Max and looks over to the bed then back to Max.
Kelsie: Where's mommy?
Max: She's in the bathroom why don't you go set on the bed. Daddy's going to talk to mommy
Kelsie: Ok
Kelsie runs over to the bed , flaps down on it, and then she finally sits down. Max walks into the bathroom he walks over to the shower door and knocks on it.
99: (Opening the door) What?
Max: I was making sure you where ok
99: I'm fine why?
Max: I thought I heard something
99: Oh well I'm fine so please leave so I can finish
Max: Ok
Max walks out, goes over to his daughter, and sits next to her.
Kelsie: Daddy is something wrong?
Max: No honey, why don't you go get ready for the dayKelsie: OkKelsie got off the bed and headed towards the door but turns around.Kelsie: (turning around) Daddy do you want me to Zach up to
Max: Sure
Kelsie leaves just as 99 walked out of the bathroom. 99 walked over to her desk and sat down. She started to put her make-up as Max walked over.
Max: 99 we have to talk
99: About what?
Max: What's going on with us?
99: Nothing is going on
Max: 99 you been pushing me away for the last month
99: (Yelling) I haven't been in the mood what's wrong with that?
Max: (Yelling also) Usually I can't get you off of me
99: Max can we talk about this later?
Max: No 99 I have to know why you been pushing me away
Before 99 could answer, there was a knock on the door.
99: Who is it?
Zach: Mommy Kelsie and I are hungry
99: Ok mommy will be there in a second why don't you go downstairs and watch cartoons
Zach: Ok
99 finished putting on her make-up then she got up and walked out the door. Max stood there for awhile and then he left the room. Max walked downstairs and started to look for 99.
Kelsie: Daddy?
Max: Yes
Zach: Are you looking for mommy?
Max: Yes
Kelsie: She's in the kitchen
Max: Thank you
Max walked into the kitchen and sat saw 99 at the stove. Max walked over to the table and sat down and 99 turned around with tears running down her checks.
The day that changed Maxwell Smart's life
99 was reading in bed when Max came out of the bathroom. Max crawled into bed and began to kiss 99's neck. 99 looks up from her book and pushed him away and went back to her book.
Max: (Hurt) 99 what's going on?
99: (Looking at Max) Nothing
Max: You been pushing me away for the past month
99: I just haven't been in the mood
Max: But 99 a month you know a man needs some loving
99: I'm sorry maybe tomorrow night
Max: (Upset) Fine
Max rolls over and went to sleep (well tried) 99 sighed and closed her book. She put it onto the nightstand and then shut off the light.
The next morning:
99 woke up and noticed that she still had time to sleep in before she had to get the kids up and ready for school. She rolled over and tried to fall back to sleep when she couldn't she got up and decided to get ready for the day. She walked into the bathroom, shut the door, and got her shower ready she then got undressed and got in. Max finally woke up and was heading in the bathroom to try to talk to 99 he was about to enter when a little voice stopped him.
Kelsie: Daddy can I come in?
Max: Sure sweetie
Kelsie walks in and goes over to Max and looks over to the bed then back to Max.
Kelsie: Where's mommy?
Max: She's in the bathroom why don't you go set on the bed. Daddy's going to talk to mommy
Kelsie: Ok
Kelsie runs over to the bed , flaps down on it, and then she finally sits down. Max walks into the bathroom he walks over to the shower door and knocks on it.
99: (Opening the door) What?
Max: I was making sure you where ok
99: I'm fine why?
Max: I thought I heard something
99: Oh well I'm fine so please leave so I can finish
Max: Ok
Max walks out, goes over to his daughter, and sits next to her.
Kelsie: Daddy is something wrong?
Max: No honey, why don't you go get ready for the dayKelsie: OkKelsie got off the bed and headed towards the door but turns around.Kelsie: (turning around) Daddy do you want me to Zach up to
Max: Sure
Kelsie leaves just as 99 walked out of the bathroom. 99 walked over to her desk and sat down. She started to put her make-up as Max walked over.
Max: 99 we have to talk
99: About what?
Max: What's going on with us?
99: Nothing is going on
Max: 99 you been pushing me away for the last month
99: (Yelling) I haven't been in the mood what's wrong with that?
Max: (Yelling also) Usually I can't get you off of me
99: Max can we talk about this later?
Max: No 99 I have to know why you been pushing me away
Before 99 could answer, there was a knock on the door.
99: Who is it?
Zach: Mommy Kelsie and I are hungry
99: Ok mommy will be there in a second why don't you go downstairs and watch cartoons
Zach: Ok
99 finished putting on her make-up then she got up and walked out the door. Max stood there for awhile and then he left the room. Max walked downstairs and started to look for 99.
Kelsie: Daddy?
Max: Yes
Zach: Are you looking for mommy?
Max: Yes
Kelsie: She's in the kitchen
Max: Thank you
Max walked into the kitchen and sat saw 99 at the stove. Max walked over to the table and sat down and 99 turned around with tears running down her checks.