Secrets
Ravenstar: Okay guys, this is my first fanfic. So please try and go easy on me. Flames are not welcome. So don't bother. I hope that you guys like this. I'm not going to give a defendant couple, except for Ty/Max. I'll let you decide who gets to be with whom. If I like the pairings then I'll do them that way. I'm making this up as I go along, so please bare with me.
Summary: Kai and Tala have been together for three years now. They live in the mansion that Kai's grandfather left him. Tyson, Max and Rei live with them as well. A small girl shows up on their doorstep, she looks just like Kai! Who is this little girl, and what secrets can she reveal about Kai, that not even Tala knows? Can Kai and Tala stay together? Or will Tala walk into Rei's open arms and never look back? The truths will be revealed, and they could ruin everything that Kai has built, or bring him back into the arms of the one he thought lost to him.
Warnings: This will be rated R for language, sexual scenes (a lot of yaoi), and some rape in the later chapters. Since I am one for happy ending and a little humor this fic will not be dark, even though some parts of it are.
Key: //Thinking// "speaking" **bitbeasts talking** (mentally speaking)
It was raining, but the young man didn't seem to care. He didn't seem to notice his two toned hair was being plastered to his head. His crimson eyes were on the big screen TV that was on one of the many buildings in Tokyo.
Kai stood there trembling with rage. //How dare she! How dare she!// He was watching the newest music video by Mimori, called "Bring me to life." (yes I will be using a lot of Evanescence in this fic.). The young woman singing claimed to have written the song herself. His fist got tighter with each word form the song, "That lying little bitch! Rin wrote that song...she wrote it for me.", Kai closed his eyes against the pain. He could still hear her soft pure voice, singing to him this very song. And now this little tramp was taking credit for Rin's work! And the worst part was, Mimori was Rin's best friend. The backstabbing little slut didn't even wait 3 years after Rin's death to so up and take credit for Rin's songs. And not long after that Mimori became Europe's hottest singing sensation. //That fucking bitch! What right does she have to be sitting there happy knowing that she killed Rin!//
The young woman in question sat in her lovely island mansion, and answered the interviewers questions. She was dressed in all black goth, her tri-colored hair was up in two braided, Chinese style buns in the back. A long tail of hair fell out of the bottom of each bun, and piled around her chair, like a small island. She wore very dark sunglasses so that no one could see her eyes. It was her trademark. No one ever knew what color her eyes were. Kai bet he knew. The most beautiful green you'd ever seen. And the coldest heart behind them. Her full lips were made up in a "come fuck me" red. Her voice was soft, falling like a beautiful lullaby on ones ears. But Kai knew her for what she was. A lying conniving little tramp! One that he was going to kill. Then he heard something that made him smile.
"Mimori..the world is just dieing to know....where will you be stopping off on the first leg of your tour?"
"The first and last leg will be in Japan. It's has been quiet some time since I've been home....I look forward to it. I shall bee there for a month in both cases."
"Perfect.", purred Kai.
So what do you think? Tell me what you did and didn't like, and what you would like to see happen in the next chapter. It'll either be from Tala's point of view or Mimori's tell me who you'd like to see first and why. Then tell me what you would like to see happen. If I like your ideas then I'll put them in my story. Please nothing off the wall, or really freaky. Please review and let me know.
~~Ravenstar
Ravenstar: Okay guys, this is my first fanfic. So please try and go easy on me. Flames are not welcome. So don't bother. I hope that you guys like this. I'm not going to give a defendant couple, except for Ty/Max. I'll let you decide who gets to be with whom. If I like the pairings then I'll do them that way. I'm making this up as I go along, so please bare with me.
Summary: Kai and Tala have been together for three years now. They live in the mansion that Kai's grandfather left him. Tyson, Max and Rei live with them as well. A small girl shows up on their doorstep, she looks just like Kai! Who is this little girl, and what secrets can she reveal about Kai, that not even Tala knows? Can Kai and Tala stay together? Or will Tala walk into Rei's open arms and never look back? The truths will be revealed, and they could ruin everything that Kai has built, or bring him back into the arms of the one he thought lost to him.
Warnings: This will be rated R for language, sexual scenes (a lot of yaoi), and some rape in the later chapters. Since I am one for happy ending and a little humor this fic will not be dark, even though some parts of it are.
Key: //Thinking// "speaking" **bitbeasts talking** (mentally speaking)
It was raining, but the young man didn't seem to care. He didn't seem to notice his two toned hair was being plastered to his head. His crimson eyes were on the big screen TV that was on one of the many buildings in Tokyo.
Kai stood there trembling with rage. //How dare she! How dare she!// He was watching the newest music video by Mimori, called "Bring me to life." (yes I will be using a lot of Evanescence in this fic.). The young woman singing claimed to have written the song herself. His fist got tighter with each word form the song, "That lying little bitch! Rin wrote that song...she wrote it for me.", Kai closed his eyes against the pain. He could still hear her soft pure voice, singing to him this very song. And now this little tramp was taking credit for Rin's work! And the worst part was, Mimori was Rin's best friend. The backstabbing little slut didn't even wait 3 years after Rin's death to so up and take credit for Rin's songs. And not long after that Mimori became Europe's hottest singing sensation. //That fucking bitch! What right does she have to be sitting there happy knowing that she killed Rin!//
The young woman in question sat in her lovely island mansion, and answered the interviewers questions. She was dressed in all black goth, her tri-colored hair was up in two braided, Chinese style buns in the back. A long tail of hair fell out of the bottom of each bun, and piled around her chair, like a small island. She wore very dark sunglasses so that no one could see her eyes. It was her trademark. No one ever knew what color her eyes were. Kai bet he knew. The most beautiful green you'd ever seen. And the coldest heart behind them. Her full lips were made up in a "come fuck me" red. Her voice was soft, falling like a beautiful lullaby on ones ears. But Kai knew her for what she was. A lying conniving little tramp! One that he was going to kill. Then he heard something that made him smile.
"Mimori..the world is just dieing to know....where will you be stopping off on the first leg of your tour?"
"The first and last leg will be in Japan. It's has been quiet some time since I've been home....I look forward to it. I shall bee there for a month in both cases."
"Perfect.", purred Kai.
So what do you think? Tell me what you did and didn't like, and what you would like to see happen in the next chapter. It'll either be from Tala's point of view or Mimori's tell me who you'd like to see first and why. Then tell me what you would like to see happen. If I like your ideas then I'll put them in my story. Please nothing off the wall, or really freaky. Please review and let me know.
~~Ravenstar