Here it is, my first Fan fiction. After countless hours of thinking, looking up stuff and typing, it is finally done! Delayed many an hour because of other matters but I did it. With aid from two other authors and a friend, editing mostly. No chapters… too much trouble.
Take notice to some of the specific lines that the characters have near the middle and end, to avoid any confusion… R&R (ending comments mostly, especially if you think I should make more to it…Hint hint…)
Special thanks go out to: Flowers of Moss, she told me how to space paragraphs well and helped with editing, but she is responsible for making me think about Italics, but I still thank her anyway. Deflagratio, if it wasn't for him, I probably would still be nervous about posting this, he edited well, and told me what I needed to know and he helped with the title. Thank you, guys!
Update: thanks to a change of heart and lots of time, I will now have it in chapters! So stop bitchin' that it's too hard to read. (As if you couldn't just read it as it was. Geez!)
Italics are thoughts~#~#~ means short passage of time
^~*~^~*~^~*~^~*~^ means scene change or longer passage of time.
Disclaimer: Nintendo holds all rights to Golden Sun and its characters, some scenarios used are also owned by Nintendo, but not all. Remember, all else was made in my head…
Shattered Dreams
The young, longhaired man and his companions had just docked their ship on the shores of Atteka Inlet. They had just come from Hesperia, the continent to the north, where they had been 3 days earlier. Night was falling and they decided to sleep on the ship. It had 3 bunks below deck, enough for two to share a bed each and one to sleep alone. The loner was usually Kraden, the old and wise scholar with a tendency to talk too much. The other members of the party were Picard, the owner of the ship and the eldest of the five due the Lemurian Water, which extends one's life, Jenna, a teenage girl with garnet eyes and hair, a masked personality and a master of fire, Felix, the longhaired man with a quiet but strong aura around him and Jenna's brother, and Sheba, an early teenaged girl with mysterious origins and a divine destiny. Their mission: to re-light the Elemental Lighthouses and save Felix's parents from captivity.
That night, Felix was restless. He got out of his bed, careful not to disturb his sister's sleep, and walked out onto the deck. He looked up at the moon to see that it was nearly full. To get a better view, he went to his right and climbed up a ladder to the crow's nest. There he lay on the floor with his hands behind his head and he just lied there. Looking into the cloudless night, full of stars. Searching his mind for answers…
He stayed there feeling the ocean breeze through his nightshirt and hair. He felt like he was about to fall asleep when he heard a voice.
"Felix, what are you doing out here?" He turned his head to see the maiden Sheba in her nightgown, looking down on him. "You're going to freeze out here!" she said half angrily, half concerned.
Felix smiled at her. Even though she was fourteen, she was as beautiful as a woman of seventeen. "I've just been a little tense," said Felix, looking up to the heavens once again as Sheba knelt beside him, "and I was relaxing by looking at the sky. It's so, calming…" he trailed off.
Sheba laid herself on her back right next to Felix, "I know it is, Felix," she said, "but, why are you still awake?"
"Why are you?" he replied.
"I got up because I heard you, and because you've been doing this for a while. What's wrong, Felix?" she asked. She turned her body to face him. Felix hadn't moved since she got there.
He turned his head towards her. "I'm just worried for my parents and for Isaac…" he stopped. He had hardly given any thought to his old friend since he landed on Indra. He barely realized how much he missed him. Felix looked back to the sky. "I wonder if he met up with Karst yet."
"I hope not," Sheba said. "If they have, I hope that they haven't fought..." She looked at Felix. He didn't look reassured at all, he looked more worried instead. "Oh Felix, I'm sorry, I totally forgot about how you must be feeling."
Felix quickly blinked back a tear, "Don't be."
"No I insist, I shouldn't have said anything. I made you worry more than you should." She moved closer to him. "I'm sorry, I shouldn't have intruded on your thoughts."
Felix rolled away from Sheba and lay on his stomach. He rested his chin on his hands and had shut his eyes tightly. Sheba could see that he was crying. She inched over to him and he buried his face on the backs of his hands. She lay down on her side, propped up by her left arm. After a few seconds she started to scratch Felix's head slowly. Her fingernails were removing a lot of the dirt and oils that collected on his scalp from their journey both on land and sea. Felix had shivers going through his spine for a brief moment, then he relaxed a little bit. He turned back to face her. Sheba continued to massage Felix's head as she looked into his dark eyes. He used his left arm to get her to lie on her front. He then lay next to her in the same way. Felix ran his hand under her nightgown and started to scratch and rub Sheba's back. She too, had shivers run down her spine.
They lay there, looking into each other's eyes, in a blissful state. They both just wanted it to stay that way. The wind picked up and made their whole bodies shiver. Sheba, who was wearing less than Felix, moved closer to him and put an arm around him. Felix removed his hand from her gown and put both his arms around her. Sheba continued to look at him. She hadn't truly realized it, but she was in love with him and he shared those same feelings.
Felix was the first to make a move. He tightened his grip on her and rolled her on to his chest as he lay on his back. Sheba was not expecting to be moved or to be in that position with Felix. She became tense. Sheba then felt the warmth of his body on hers and she relaxed. She looked at Felix and saw nothing but love in his eyes. She slowly drew her head towards him.
This is it! Sheba thought. She knew Felix was thinking the same thing even though she was not reading his mind.
They continued to draw closer. Felix closed the gap and brought his lips to hers. For Sheba, it was almost too much. She opened her mouth slightly as she and Felix started a tongue war. They seemed to be like that for hours and they never wanted to separate, but it was only several seconds. When their lips parted, they looked into each other's eyes. Sheba rested her head on Felix's shoulder. She seemed to act as though she never would experience that again.
Felix had to fight with himself to not go further than his instincts wanted, which was nothing less than sex. Angaran law was enough to make him want to hold off until she was old enough. Not to mention what the people of Lalivero would do to him. They practically worshiped Sheba and having her sexually active with her captor would lead them to believe that he was a pedophile and make them hunt him down. Plus if she became pregnant, she would be seen as some cheap slut off the street and she would be looked down upon by all. No one would call her Sheba, they'd call her "That Dirty Whore." Felix didn't want that to happen to either of them.
"Don't worry Felix," Sheba said, "I don't think we should either."
She had been reading his mind and Felix didn't even see that.
Felix looked at Sheba, he loved her so much for her understanding ways and for her immense beauty. He kissed her cheek and looked back to the stars. Sheba got up and turned around. She lied back onto to Felix's chest, she was facing the same direction as him, at the stars.
Felix wrapped his arms around Sheba's body. But Sheba brought his arms up higher, to her breasts. Felix could feel that she was not wearing a bra under her gown. He began to move his hands in circular motions, massaging her tits. Sheba let out short gasps of air. She moved one of Felix's hands down under her nightgown to her womanhood. He inserted his finger and started to move it in and out in a circular motion. Sheba let out soft cries of pleasure. Soon, she reached climax and she let out a small cry and started to tear up. She let out a few soft sighs as she blushed slightly. Felix slowed his movements, but did not stop until he fell asleep, and brought his head close to hers. He gave Sheba a kiss on the cheek and Sheba responded by turning to kiss his lips.
"I love you," Felix whispered into Sheba's ear.
Sheba turned redder than she already was. "I love you too," She said.
And they continued to stare at the stars until sleep overcame them both.
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End chapter One