Ok, I got 2 reviews. I'm so happy! I wasn't going to type any more if
people told me they didn't like it, so I kept typing.
Victoriatrevor, thank you again, my very first reviewer told me I should give more details in the story and I should be more descriptive on my settings so I'm going to try.
And think you to kagomehigurashi12 too for the 'oh cool' review. And I'm serious. Ok chapter 2.
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Chapter 2
'Inuyasha..' Kagome thought as she drug herself down the streets of Tokyo. Her mom wasn't home and neither were grandpa or Souta, so she would be alone for a bit.
'Good, now no one will ask me any questions. 'She thought as she limped up the concrete steps to the shrine. She just barely made it to her room before passing out and falling on her bed.
'Maybe I'll rest a bit.'
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Inuyasha's Time
Something was definitely wrong. Kagome had been gone from her time later than promised. I mean WAY longer then promised. She said 2 hours and 30 minutes right? It had been 5 long hours. Inuyasha had been sitting next to the well, peering in for 2 hours.
It had been long enough! Kagome should have been there by NOW, shouldn't she have? It didn't matter anyway. Inuyasha had been waiting so long that it had gotten dark. It was time to go see what was taking so long.
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Kagome's eyes slowly drifted open as she lay on her bed. She looked up at her alarm clock. 10:55. She should have been in Inuyasha's time 3 hours and 25 minutes ago.
But the thing that worried her the most was that Inuyasha hadn't come and gotten her yet. Did he care if she came back? Of course he did. She was his jewel detector!
But she knew he would come back for her.
And as if on q (don't know how to spell the actual q) Inuyasha opened Kagome's window and hopped in.
"Hey, there you are! Why are you just laying around for, come on."
But Kagome just lay there. Motionless.
"Hey! Don't ignore me! I know you're awake so come on!" Inuyasha grabbed Kagome's arm.
'That's weird. She's not wearing what she usually is. She's wearing a.a' well it looked like a kimono so he would call it a kimono. 'A kimono, not that strange thing she usually wears.'
Inuyasha grabbed her usually covered arm and turned her around. She was lying there. With her eyes shut tight. Trying not to let the tears come out.
And Inuyasha had just noticed the difference in her scent. She reeked of man.
"Hey, Kagome?" Inuyasha said this gently, trying not to upset the girl more then she already was.
"Hey Kagome?" he said once more. "Are you ok? What's the matter?" And for the first time that night, Inuyasha saw Kagome's beautiful eyes except they were tinged with a dark blue, as tears streamed down her face and she embraced Inuyasha.
"Oh Inuyasha!" Kagome cried out. "This man! This man! He tried to." But Kagome couldn't bring herself to say it. Inuyasha understood though. Her scent told it all.
"Kagome, I'm sorry I wasn't there. I'm sorry I wasn't there to protect you." Inuyasha pulled Kagome a little bit tighter and she cringed.
"I'm sorry Kagome!! I didn't mean to do that!"
"Don't worry. It wasn't you." Kagome let it out in a small whisper.
"Did that man do this to you too?" Inuyasha asked. His voice getting filled with anger.
"Kind of. I was running from him and I jumped off of some steps and landed on my foot," she said while still in his embrace.
"Kagome."
"It's okay Inuyasha. It's just a sprain."
"Kagome, it would have been nothing if I was here."
"It's ok Inuyasha, you can't be there for me forever. I just have to go take a bath and I'll be ready." Kagome tried to get out of his embrace but couldn't.
"Inuyasha. Let me go. I have to."
Inuyasha picked her up and took her to the bathroom.
"I'll be right outside the door if you need me." Inuyasha layed her on her bathroom floor against the bathtub.
"Kagome.." Inuyasha stopped walking and stood in the frame of the door for a second before saying, "Never mind," and walking out of the bathroom and closing the door.
Inuyasha ran outside as fast as he could. Finally finding an open space where no one was, he used his IRON REAVER almost until he couldn't breath any more. He fell to the ground. When he looked up, his eyes were red and he had a grin on his face.
'Time to kill'
Ok, ok. Kind of cliffy. Will make more chapters tomorrow if I get at least 2 reviews. Oh what the heck, I'll make another chapter even if no one reviews. Right now VashtheUnholy just gave me an im and said the first chap was good, thanks. Well, thanks to everyone! See ya!
Victoriatrevor, thank you again, my very first reviewer told me I should give more details in the story and I should be more descriptive on my settings so I'm going to try.
And think you to kagomehigurashi12 too for the 'oh cool' review. And I'm serious. Ok chapter 2.
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Chapter 2
'Inuyasha..' Kagome thought as she drug herself down the streets of Tokyo. Her mom wasn't home and neither were grandpa or Souta, so she would be alone for a bit.
'Good, now no one will ask me any questions. 'She thought as she limped up the concrete steps to the shrine. She just barely made it to her room before passing out and falling on her bed.
'Maybe I'll rest a bit.'
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Inuyasha's Time
Something was definitely wrong. Kagome had been gone from her time later than promised. I mean WAY longer then promised. She said 2 hours and 30 minutes right? It had been 5 long hours. Inuyasha had been sitting next to the well, peering in for 2 hours.
It had been long enough! Kagome should have been there by NOW, shouldn't she have? It didn't matter anyway. Inuyasha had been waiting so long that it had gotten dark. It was time to go see what was taking so long.
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Kagome's eyes slowly drifted open as she lay on her bed. She looked up at her alarm clock. 10:55. She should have been in Inuyasha's time 3 hours and 25 minutes ago.
But the thing that worried her the most was that Inuyasha hadn't come and gotten her yet. Did he care if she came back? Of course he did. She was his jewel detector!
But she knew he would come back for her.
And as if on q (don't know how to spell the actual q) Inuyasha opened Kagome's window and hopped in.
"Hey, there you are! Why are you just laying around for, come on."
But Kagome just lay there. Motionless.
"Hey! Don't ignore me! I know you're awake so come on!" Inuyasha grabbed Kagome's arm.
'That's weird. She's not wearing what she usually is. She's wearing a.a' well it looked like a kimono so he would call it a kimono. 'A kimono, not that strange thing she usually wears.'
Inuyasha grabbed her usually covered arm and turned her around. She was lying there. With her eyes shut tight. Trying not to let the tears come out.
And Inuyasha had just noticed the difference in her scent. She reeked of man.
"Hey, Kagome?" Inuyasha said this gently, trying not to upset the girl more then she already was.
"Hey Kagome?" he said once more. "Are you ok? What's the matter?" And for the first time that night, Inuyasha saw Kagome's beautiful eyes except they were tinged with a dark blue, as tears streamed down her face and she embraced Inuyasha.
"Oh Inuyasha!" Kagome cried out. "This man! This man! He tried to." But Kagome couldn't bring herself to say it. Inuyasha understood though. Her scent told it all.
"Kagome, I'm sorry I wasn't there. I'm sorry I wasn't there to protect you." Inuyasha pulled Kagome a little bit tighter and she cringed.
"I'm sorry Kagome!! I didn't mean to do that!"
"Don't worry. It wasn't you." Kagome let it out in a small whisper.
"Did that man do this to you too?" Inuyasha asked. His voice getting filled with anger.
"Kind of. I was running from him and I jumped off of some steps and landed on my foot," she said while still in his embrace.
"Kagome."
"It's okay Inuyasha. It's just a sprain."
"Kagome, it would have been nothing if I was here."
"It's ok Inuyasha, you can't be there for me forever. I just have to go take a bath and I'll be ready." Kagome tried to get out of his embrace but couldn't.
"Inuyasha. Let me go. I have to."
Inuyasha picked her up and took her to the bathroom.
"I'll be right outside the door if you need me." Inuyasha layed her on her bathroom floor against the bathtub.
"Kagome.." Inuyasha stopped walking and stood in the frame of the door for a second before saying, "Never mind," and walking out of the bathroom and closing the door.
Inuyasha ran outside as fast as he could. Finally finding an open space where no one was, he used his IRON REAVER almost until he couldn't breath any more. He fell to the ground. When he looked up, his eyes were red and he had a grin on his face.
'Time to kill'
Ok, ok. Kind of cliffy. Will make more chapters tomorrow if I get at least 2 reviews. Oh what the heck, I'll make another chapter even if no one reviews. Right now VashtheUnholy just gave me an im and said the first chap was good, thanks. Well, thanks to everyone! See ya!