Love is Mysterious
Disclaimer: I don't own Harry Potter. J.K Rowling does and I think she is brilliant to come up with such realistic characters and an interesting plot to go along with them.
Review no matter what. I will take flames, just tell me what I'm doing wrong. I'll be happy to change it. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Lily Evans sat on the bench near Platform 9 and ¾ waiting for some clue as to why they had sent her to a non-existent platform. Her auburn hair shone brightly and her beautiful emerald eyes shone with worry. She was short for her age, but she had time to grow, she was only eleven after all. She suddenly heard a woman talking.
"Come on James, hurry up. You're going to be late for Hogwarts." Lily noticed that the woman was walking with a little boy beside her and yelling at another one behind her. James, as the woman had called him, had unruly jet-black hair, hazel eyes, and looked to be about Lily's age. The one beside the woman looked exactly like James, but looked older. Lily finally got the courage to go up and ask for help.
"Excuse me, but I am going to Hogwarts also and it's my first time, so I don't know how to get on the platform. Could you help me, please?" Lily said as she reached the woman. The woman smiled warmly.
"Yes, dear, I'll help. I'm Mrs. Potter by the way. This is James, and this is Gordon, my sons. James is also a first year. Gordon is in the third. Okay, now that you know a little about me, I'll help. You go through that wall right there," She pointed to the wall between Platforms 9 and 10. "Don't be afraid though, if you think you're going to crash, run." The woman explained. Lily nodded to show understanding, and started toward the wall. She expected to crash, but she never did. When she came out of the wall, she was amazed at what she saw. She stood there for a minute taking in the view. There was a beautiful red train that said 'Hogwarts Express' and hundreds of kids running around with their parents. Suddenly, she was knocked down. She looked up to see James and Gordon. James was the one who knocked her down and he continued to walk.
"Hey, you could be nice and say sorry." Lily said daringly. Gordon looked at her as if she was crazy. James was what most people called a spoiled brat. He was handsome, rich, and got anything he wanted. People treated him like a god. Gordon on the other hand was all that James was only not as mean and heartless. He was a very nice person. James stopped and turned. He was appalled that she had talked to him that way. Lily stood and walked up to him. She was extremely short compared to him, but that didn't matter to her. "That was a really mean thing, and you should apologize or something. Why are you so rude?"
James looked down at her with a look that said 'How dare you talk to me that way.' "Look here. You clearly don't know whom you're talking to. I'm James Potter, and I'm one of the richest eleven year olds you'll meet." He looked down at her with a nasty glare. Lily just looked at him, matching his glare. This was the first time anyone had stood up to James, and he didn't intend to let people think they could.
"Do I look like I care? Does my face show care? If it does then I'm a great actress. I think you're a spoiled rich boy who can't take real life and has everyone else do it for him. I bet you don't even dress yourself. I think you need a reality check. I won't bow down to you! I won't! You will never get me to! We have to go to school together for the next seven years, and I refuse to take orders from you, Pretty Boy! So shape up and face real life!" Lily then walked toward the train before having her wrist grabbed by James.
"Go out with me." It was a statement. Lily wasn't expecting this in any form.
"No, I won't." Lily pulled her wrist from his hand and got on the train. James watched after her. Gordon came up shocked. His little brother would never act like that to a girl who treated him that way.
"She's a feisty one. I think I love her." James said still watching the spot where she had gotten on the train. Gordon just looked at him.
"Come on, get on the train. We have to find Sirius, Remus, and Peter, then I'll leave you with your friends." Gordon finally got out. So they went to find the rest of the guys.
Lily couldn't believe that jerk. He was so annoying and she had only known him five minutes! She finally found a compartment that was empty and sat down to think. About five minutes later, three guys that looked her age walked in. (Who do you think they are? LOL)
"Who is this lovely lady?" One with jet-black hair and chocolate brown eyes said. He reminded her of James. She blushed.
"I'm Lily, Lily Evans." She said shyly. The one with sandy brown hair and soft gray eyes was the next to talk.
"I'm Remus Lupin, Charmer Boy over there is Sirius Black, and this," He pointed to a short boy with blonde hair and sea blue eyes, " is Peter Pettigrew." Lily nodded and they exchanged their 'nice to meet you's. Suddenly the compartment door slid open to reveal the last person Lily wanted to see.
"Hey guys! It took forever to f." He stopped when he saw Lily. The whole compartment was quiet. Sirius, Remus, and Peter were looking from Lily to James confused. Lily and James were glaring at each other. James was upset that she turned him down.
"You know any girl would love to be asked out by me. It was a privilege. You should thank me." Lily just looked at him, well glaring. She slowly stood and walked toward him. When they were face-to-face, well shoulder to head, she started to talk.
"If you want a girlfriend to bow for you, you have the wrong girl. I won't go out with you. Get it through your thick head. Now I am leaving, Pretty Boy. Find another puppet." Lily walked out on him yet again. The rest of the guys were really confused. It's hard to make Remus confused, but they had achieved the impossible.
"What the heck is going on? Why did you scare away the pretty girl?!" Sirius said pointing a finger at him. James then told them about what had happened at the platform.
"James, you're an idiot! Why do you act like that?! You're not like that around us! You acted like a complete jerk!" Remus said looking at him sternly.
"What? She should be happy that I chose her."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Did you like it? If not, then tell me what I did wrong. Well thanks for even looking at my story. I'm writing my own book with my own characters, and if you want to read what I've written and give me opinions, thank you. Just give me your e-mail or somewhere I can send it.
Lots of Love,
~~~Angel~~~
Disclaimer: I don't own Harry Potter. J.K Rowling does and I think she is brilliant to come up with such realistic characters and an interesting plot to go along with them.
Review no matter what. I will take flames, just tell me what I'm doing wrong. I'll be happy to change it. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Lily Evans sat on the bench near Platform 9 and ¾ waiting for some clue as to why they had sent her to a non-existent platform. Her auburn hair shone brightly and her beautiful emerald eyes shone with worry. She was short for her age, but she had time to grow, she was only eleven after all. She suddenly heard a woman talking.
"Come on James, hurry up. You're going to be late for Hogwarts." Lily noticed that the woman was walking with a little boy beside her and yelling at another one behind her. James, as the woman had called him, had unruly jet-black hair, hazel eyes, and looked to be about Lily's age. The one beside the woman looked exactly like James, but looked older. Lily finally got the courage to go up and ask for help.
"Excuse me, but I am going to Hogwarts also and it's my first time, so I don't know how to get on the platform. Could you help me, please?" Lily said as she reached the woman. The woman smiled warmly.
"Yes, dear, I'll help. I'm Mrs. Potter by the way. This is James, and this is Gordon, my sons. James is also a first year. Gordon is in the third. Okay, now that you know a little about me, I'll help. You go through that wall right there," She pointed to the wall between Platforms 9 and 10. "Don't be afraid though, if you think you're going to crash, run." The woman explained. Lily nodded to show understanding, and started toward the wall. She expected to crash, but she never did. When she came out of the wall, she was amazed at what she saw. She stood there for a minute taking in the view. There was a beautiful red train that said 'Hogwarts Express' and hundreds of kids running around with their parents. Suddenly, she was knocked down. She looked up to see James and Gordon. James was the one who knocked her down and he continued to walk.
"Hey, you could be nice and say sorry." Lily said daringly. Gordon looked at her as if she was crazy. James was what most people called a spoiled brat. He was handsome, rich, and got anything he wanted. People treated him like a god. Gordon on the other hand was all that James was only not as mean and heartless. He was a very nice person. James stopped and turned. He was appalled that she had talked to him that way. Lily stood and walked up to him. She was extremely short compared to him, but that didn't matter to her. "That was a really mean thing, and you should apologize or something. Why are you so rude?"
James looked down at her with a look that said 'How dare you talk to me that way.' "Look here. You clearly don't know whom you're talking to. I'm James Potter, and I'm one of the richest eleven year olds you'll meet." He looked down at her with a nasty glare. Lily just looked at him, matching his glare. This was the first time anyone had stood up to James, and he didn't intend to let people think they could.
"Do I look like I care? Does my face show care? If it does then I'm a great actress. I think you're a spoiled rich boy who can't take real life and has everyone else do it for him. I bet you don't even dress yourself. I think you need a reality check. I won't bow down to you! I won't! You will never get me to! We have to go to school together for the next seven years, and I refuse to take orders from you, Pretty Boy! So shape up and face real life!" Lily then walked toward the train before having her wrist grabbed by James.
"Go out with me." It was a statement. Lily wasn't expecting this in any form.
"No, I won't." Lily pulled her wrist from his hand and got on the train. James watched after her. Gordon came up shocked. His little brother would never act like that to a girl who treated him that way.
"She's a feisty one. I think I love her." James said still watching the spot where she had gotten on the train. Gordon just looked at him.
"Come on, get on the train. We have to find Sirius, Remus, and Peter, then I'll leave you with your friends." Gordon finally got out. So they went to find the rest of the guys.
Lily couldn't believe that jerk. He was so annoying and she had only known him five minutes! She finally found a compartment that was empty and sat down to think. About five minutes later, three guys that looked her age walked in. (Who do you think they are? LOL)
"Who is this lovely lady?" One with jet-black hair and chocolate brown eyes said. He reminded her of James. She blushed.
"I'm Lily, Lily Evans." She said shyly. The one with sandy brown hair and soft gray eyes was the next to talk.
"I'm Remus Lupin, Charmer Boy over there is Sirius Black, and this," He pointed to a short boy with blonde hair and sea blue eyes, " is Peter Pettigrew." Lily nodded and they exchanged their 'nice to meet you's. Suddenly the compartment door slid open to reveal the last person Lily wanted to see.
"Hey guys! It took forever to f." He stopped when he saw Lily. The whole compartment was quiet. Sirius, Remus, and Peter were looking from Lily to James confused. Lily and James were glaring at each other. James was upset that she turned him down.
"You know any girl would love to be asked out by me. It was a privilege. You should thank me." Lily just looked at him, well glaring. She slowly stood and walked toward him. When they were face-to-face, well shoulder to head, she started to talk.
"If you want a girlfriend to bow for you, you have the wrong girl. I won't go out with you. Get it through your thick head. Now I am leaving, Pretty Boy. Find another puppet." Lily walked out on him yet again. The rest of the guys were really confused. It's hard to make Remus confused, but they had achieved the impossible.
"What the heck is going on? Why did you scare away the pretty girl?!" Sirius said pointing a finger at him. James then told them about what had happened at the platform.
"James, you're an idiot! Why do you act like that?! You're not like that around us! You acted like a complete jerk!" Remus said looking at him sternly.
"What? She should be happy that I chose her."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Did you like it? If not, then tell me what I did wrong. Well thanks for even looking at my story. I'm writing my own book with my own characters, and if you want to read what I've written and give me opinions, thank you. Just give me your e-mail or somewhere I can send it.
Lots of Love,
~~~Angel~~~