Now without further ado I give you Loves Last Moments.
Harry your going to grow up
To be so big to be so strong
I know this because mothers can see it
All of us especiallyme
I know when your older
You wont remember my song
And you won't want to deal with me
But Harry always love me
I love you Harry
And so does Dad
Mommy and Daddy love you
Above anyone else
You have Mommy's eyes
You have Daddy's hair
You have Uncle Padfoot's mischief
And Uncle Monny's love of books
Sleep Harry dream of faraway places
Dream of a place not filled with
Voldemort's damnation
Sleep Harry
I love you Harry
"Lilly" said James Potter, "Take Harry and go! It's him! Go! Run! I'll hold him off!"
"Come on, Harry, lets go", whispered Lilly Potter
For those of you who don't know, Loves Last Moments was the first thing I ever wrote, two years ago on Thanksgiving. The only thing I really remember is praying that I didn't get hate mail. I didn't think anyone would like it, although I hope for reviews.
Since then, I have been spoiled with wonderful friends, betas, colleagues and fellow authors who have enriched my writing abilities and have given me glimpses into character's lives. I was only 11 when I wrote this. In fact, all but 3 where written when I was 11.
I haven't written in a while, but when I realized that I have belonged to the site for two years, and how much the site has changed my writing skills I went back to this story and phsically winced at the punctuation. It was horrible. Harry was never capitalized, I don't think I knew what a comma was and I think I'm still spelling Lilly ( Lily?) wrong. So as my personal two year anniversary, I came back and changed grammar and punctuation but everything else has been left untouched.
Who knows? I have this idea in my head to restart The Past Shall Hold The Future, but this time have it go in a completely different direction, like after the war, House Elves along with Humans learning at Hogwarts side by side. As if, after Harry left, the Wizarding World changed it's identity. It hadn't experienced peace in so long, and now that it was gifted with it, what precautions should they take, and what were the predicaments from those events? Above all else, to change Harry's supposed "sweetheart", change his child's gender andehh? I should probably change his name then. I don't know how many male Elizabeth's are walking around.
Enough with my ramblings. I just wanted to say thank you to everyone who has ever written, read, reviewed or flamed, as they have impacted my life for the better...mostly (homework may have drooped a little). Above all else...
Happy Thanksgiving