Disclaimer in chapter 1.
Thanks to AprilSkrutin and Tap Dancing Widow for the encouraging reviews.
To nitpick maniac I wasn't sure about the whole 55 mph thing but I wasn't alive in the 50's and I figured someone would catch me if I made that mistake, and to answer your question I wrote to word smile five times.
To the anonymous reviewer I haven't gotten a chance to explain her rank of captain yet, I was hoping to get more time, but to be more politically correct I'll make her a lieutenant (I think that is the original rank I had for her, but I put down captain instead.) "Welcome to Korea." Was literally welcoming her to Korea,… it made sense in my head….Captain now Lieutenant Jones has to go meet the major and I thought I gave off the impression that Hawkeye was askin' her out sorry if that confused you or anyone else. Now I hope I cleared that up for you and I get an encouraging review next time:).
Romance in the War Zone
Chapter 2
The Swamp
Hawkeye returned to the tent whistling catching the attention of his buddy, fellow surgeon, and partner in crime.
"Hot date?"
"You bet."
"New nurse?"
"Of course."
"Dinner under the stars?"
"You know me to well." Hawkeye laughed digging around for his razor, he began to shave when Frank walked in.
"Why are you in such a good mood?" He asked cautiously, checking his cot and casting a casual direction towards the two other occupants of his tent.
"Hawkeye's got a date." Trapper informed.
"Oh really with whom?" Frank inquired sounding like a little girl.
"That new nurse from Alabama." Hawkeye answered.
"Oh yes the new Jewish nurse."
"Really she's Jewish, that's interesting will have something to talk about." Hawkeye continued to shave.
"Do you have something against Jews Frank?" Trapper raised an eyebrow in concern.
"No, we've just never had someone Jewish here before." Hawkeye shrugged nonchalantly.
"Doesn't matter, I feel you can observe any religion you want to." Hawkeye added, as he finished his shaving.
"So what's for dinner?" Trapper asked changing the topic.
"Something dead." Hawkeye replied drying his face, "Which reminds me I got to go to the mess tent and see if I can round something up." With that Hawkeye left humming a happy tune.
I know odd chapter and short to sorry about that, but I wanted it to shed some light onto who Lt. Jones is, and add Frank and Trapper tell me what y'all think. I'd love some writing advice, after all this is my first M*A*S*H fic, and I'd love all the help I could get.