Chapter 6 - (technically Chapter 7)
Author's Note - Wow, so far 30 reviews!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^^ I never thought that I would get this much!!!!!!! I feel really happy, now before I get all emotional, I should just shut up. Oh yeah, advice, YOU DEFINETLY SHOULD WATCH THE JAPENESE MOIVE THE LEGEND OF SNOW WHITE PRETEAR!!!!!!!!!!!!! My friend recommended it to me and I loved it; but, it was pretty long, but still great! You have to down load it though, and watch it on a real player. Al right, I know that all of you want is for me to shut up and go on with the chapter. Just one more eennsy, teensy, tiny thing, TTTTTTHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNKKKKKKKSSSSSSSSSS FFFFFFOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRR AAAAALLLLLLL TTTTTTTHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEE RRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEVVVVIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(what it reads- THANKS FOR ALL THE REVIEWS!) ^^
OH! Before I forget, (crowd groans!^^) Disclaimer - I don't own, (sigh, if only I could hog tie them especially Hiei. I'd keep them underneath my secret basement and keep them there forever!!! MMUUWWWHHAAAA!!!!!!) OOPS, got a little bit carried away over there! (cough) On with the chapter! (crowd cheers!!) ^^
"Keeiikkooo!!!!" Hiei cried out desperately as he saw a tumble of black each going different directions. Hiei quickly tried to find Sukura's kantana, it was thrown across, right in front of him. Hiei tried to get up in getting the kantana but then he saw Sakura regaining strength and walking near Keiko's thrown body. She had changed her clothes and was now in black pants, and a black tank top. Her hair was tangled and all over the place, Keiko's weak body trying to get up. "I'm a.. a .. a demon!" Keiko sputtered. "No, NO, NO, THIS CAN'T BE HAPPENING TO ME! I WON'T LET IT!" Keiko shrieked tears falling down gently on to the ground. She just stood there, crouching on the ground as Sakura walked up to her smirking at the pathetic half demon, and gathered black spirit energy forming in her palm. "NOW! NOW! YOU'LL BE ABLE TO SEE THE TRUE DARK POWERS OF SUKURA!" she cried enraged to both Hiei and Keiko.
Hiei saw Sukura holding as much spirit energy and force to strengthen the attack. Now, now he saw his opportunity. He cried out running with the kantana, "You're battle is with me!"
Sakura saw Hiei too late, and accidentally let go of the now powerful spirit gun. An explosion could be heard through out the whole city and Hiei quickly ran over to Keiko. Using his body as a shield for her, he cried "KEIKO!" Suddenly everything went black! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Hey Urameshi, I think I saw some movement over there!" Kuwabara's voice rang out through the completely destroyed forest. Botan started running toward the two bodies next to each other. "It's Hiei!" Her voice rang out in shock. She then saw a young woman underneath Hiei who looked quite, but not yet quite like. like. Keiko. They were both unconsience and hurt. She wondered if the young woman could be related to Keiko. She hadn't seen her for weeks now and wondered what she was up to. Suddenly her compass watch stated beeping, "No, no.. of course not,that can't be Keiko, the watch tells that the young woman is a demon." Yusuke was suddenly behind her and gasped looking down on them. "Thats..thats. Keiko." He finally sputtered out.
"Yusuke you baka, that can't be Keiko, my compass detects energy from both Hiei and the woman, that means that their obviously demons; and, the last time I checked, Keiko was a human." Botan explained to Yusuke acting like he was a little child.
"But.. but I .. Know that face anywhere... even though it's different. I just know."
"Prove it." "LISTEN DON'T YOU THINK I'D KNOW MY BEST FRIEND'S AND EX- GIRLFRIEND'S FACE!!!" Yusuke cried angrily.
"Hn, you're stupid argument and yelling has woken me up." (Both Botan and Yusuke fall over anime style^^, they get up)
"Hiei, you're up!" Botan cried. "How are you, what happened!" she cried.
"Sakura, Sakura, where the hell is she?" Hiei asked shaking.
"Hold on a sec, who the hell is Sakura?" Yusuke asked.
"Is that her?" Botan asked pointing a finger at Keiko.
"For the last time, THAT'S KEIKO, I DON'T KNOW HOW SHE LOOKS LIKE THAT NOW, BUT IT'S KEIKO!!!!" Yusuke exploded.
"What the HELL IS THAT NOISE!!!?" Kuwabara cried out running towards them.
"I have to go now," Hiei said picking up Keiko and disappearing from sight. Every one just started looking for where Hiei and the other woman went.
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"Hiei, why didn't you just tell me?" Keiko asked. They were both on top of the school's roof at night. The stars twinkled and the moon shone it's heavenly light. The air was pretty chilly and Hiei had his arms around Keiko keeping her warm.
Hiei had taken her to the gym, she had slept there through out the whole day on the bleachers. Now awake, Hiei knew she wanted answer's.
"Tell you what?" Hiei whispered. "About me becoming a demon," Keiko said. "Three reason's, first you would have completely freaked." "I would not!" Keiko cried interrupting him. "Oh, yeah so you're saying that incident before when you were crying that could've gotten you dead, was what? Just you acting like a crybaby?" "Well.. Well .. How would you have acted then if you were in my shoes?" "First I wouldn't have followed me and second I'd try to get myself out of there instead of getting killed."
Trying to get off the subject Keiko asked, "And who was that woman Sakura?"
Hiei suddenly looked at the night darkly, "She's a Dark Demon, the only one on this place. Her powers are extordinary from what I learned of her single spirit gun."
"You still didn't answer my question, who the hell is she?" Keiko asked demandingly.
"She was my onced lover. The only one that could break the shield I my heart back then. My love for her couldn't even be described. I thought we would spend the rest of our lives together. Till she betrayed me. She had gone behind my back with another demon, and to try to get me arrested she framed me by killing thousands if humans, and since I already had a bad record King Yamma believed her and he had my files of what he thought I did. I quickly went in there and destroyed them before any one could see. That's why when I stole the shadow sword, Koenma couldn't find any records of me."
"The shadow sword," Keiko whispered. Something in her mind clicked. 'Remember when you stole the shadow sword and into trying to beat Yusuke Urameshi, you tried to turn poor Keiko into one of your obeying demons? Weeeelll not all the demon blood was gone. Just a very tiny single drop of it remained. It remained in her hidden. Till I controlled it. Over the past few weeks of you and her training, I've secretly been injecting Dark Demon blood into her. Slowly, the ancient Dark Demon blood has been seeping into her and it has been surfacing. Showing it's appearance." The shadow sword!
"It was because of you that I became a demon!" Keiko shrieked! She pulled away from his embrace and stood there staring at him. Hiei looked up at her surprised. "I was hoping you wouldn't remember." "WELL, I did! So you're the reason why I'm becoming into this..this...this thing!!!" Keiko was standing there staring coldly at Hiei. Hiei was about to talk, till Keiko cut him off and yelled, "The one person I thought who would help, not cause the fact that I'm turning into a demon! The one person that I truly loved!" Keiko finished. But as she finished those last seven words she realized what she said. Gasping she stood there staring back at the wide ruby eyes. "I gotta go!" Keiko whispered and climbed down from the roof top. Hiei just sat there not knowing what to do. His mind was in a daze and he had no idea what to do. Reaching into his pocket he found a note that read :
Hiei,
The transition is complete. You're dear Keiko is now a Dark Demon. I suggest you should train her up a bit with her spirit energy. For you won't know when I can come to her and attack. I'm glad you now know the extent of my power's. Hopefully the pathetic girl or should I say demon is ready to give me a good fight.
Hiei angrily tore up the note and had to go find Keiko quickly.
Author's note - Hope you like this chapter! PLEASE READ AND REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Note - Wow, so far 30 reviews!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^^ I never thought that I would get this much!!!!!!! I feel really happy, now before I get all emotional, I should just shut up. Oh yeah, advice, YOU DEFINETLY SHOULD WATCH THE JAPENESE MOIVE THE LEGEND OF SNOW WHITE PRETEAR!!!!!!!!!!!!! My friend recommended it to me and I loved it; but, it was pretty long, but still great! You have to down load it though, and watch it on a real player. Al right, I know that all of you want is for me to shut up and go on with the chapter. Just one more eennsy, teensy, tiny thing, TTTTTTHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNKKKKKKKSSSSSSSSSS FFFFFFOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRR AAAAALLLLLLL TTTTTTTHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEE RRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEVVVVIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(what it reads- THANKS FOR ALL THE REVIEWS!) ^^
OH! Before I forget, (crowd groans!^^) Disclaimer - I don't own, (sigh, if only I could hog tie them especially Hiei. I'd keep them underneath my secret basement and keep them there forever!!! MMUUWWWHHAAAA!!!!!!) OOPS, got a little bit carried away over there! (cough) On with the chapter! (crowd cheers!!) ^^
"Keeiikkooo!!!!" Hiei cried out desperately as he saw a tumble of black each going different directions. Hiei quickly tried to find Sukura's kantana, it was thrown across, right in front of him. Hiei tried to get up in getting the kantana but then he saw Sakura regaining strength and walking near Keiko's thrown body. She had changed her clothes and was now in black pants, and a black tank top. Her hair was tangled and all over the place, Keiko's weak body trying to get up. "I'm a.. a .. a demon!" Keiko sputtered. "No, NO, NO, THIS CAN'T BE HAPPENING TO ME! I WON'T LET IT!" Keiko shrieked tears falling down gently on to the ground. She just stood there, crouching on the ground as Sakura walked up to her smirking at the pathetic half demon, and gathered black spirit energy forming in her palm. "NOW! NOW! YOU'LL BE ABLE TO SEE THE TRUE DARK POWERS OF SUKURA!" she cried enraged to both Hiei and Keiko.
Hiei saw Sukura holding as much spirit energy and force to strengthen the attack. Now, now he saw his opportunity. He cried out running with the kantana, "You're battle is with me!"
Sakura saw Hiei too late, and accidentally let go of the now powerful spirit gun. An explosion could be heard through out the whole city and Hiei quickly ran over to Keiko. Using his body as a shield for her, he cried "KEIKO!" Suddenly everything went black! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Hey Urameshi, I think I saw some movement over there!" Kuwabara's voice rang out through the completely destroyed forest. Botan started running toward the two bodies next to each other. "It's Hiei!" Her voice rang out in shock. She then saw a young woman underneath Hiei who looked quite, but not yet quite like. like. Keiko. They were both unconsience and hurt. She wondered if the young woman could be related to Keiko. She hadn't seen her for weeks now and wondered what she was up to. Suddenly her compass watch stated beeping, "No, no.. of course not,that can't be Keiko, the watch tells that the young woman is a demon." Yusuke was suddenly behind her and gasped looking down on them. "Thats..thats. Keiko." He finally sputtered out.
"Yusuke you baka, that can't be Keiko, my compass detects energy from both Hiei and the woman, that means that their obviously demons; and, the last time I checked, Keiko was a human." Botan explained to Yusuke acting like he was a little child.
"But.. but I .. Know that face anywhere... even though it's different. I just know."
"Prove it." "LISTEN DON'T YOU THINK I'D KNOW MY BEST FRIEND'S AND EX- GIRLFRIEND'S FACE!!!" Yusuke cried angrily.
"Hn, you're stupid argument and yelling has woken me up." (Both Botan and Yusuke fall over anime style^^, they get up)
"Hiei, you're up!" Botan cried. "How are you, what happened!" she cried.
"Sakura, Sakura, where the hell is she?" Hiei asked shaking.
"Hold on a sec, who the hell is Sakura?" Yusuke asked.
"Is that her?" Botan asked pointing a finger at Keiko.
"For the last time, THAT'S KEIKO, I DON'T KNOW HOW SHE LOOKS LIKE THAT NOW, BUT IT'S KEIKO!!!!" Yusuke exploded.
"What the HELL IS THAT NOISE!!!?" Kuwabara cried out running towards them.
"I have to go now," Hiei said picking up Keiko and disappearing from sight. Every one just started looking for where Hiei and the other woman went.
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"Hiei, why didn't you just tell me?" Keiko asked. They were both on top of the school's roof at night. The stars twinkled and the moon shone it's heavenly light. The air was pretty chilly and Hiei had his arms around Keiko keeping her warm.
Hiei had taken her to the gym, she had slept there through out the whole day on the bleachers. Now awake, Hiei knew she wanted answer's.
"Tell you what?" Hiei whispered. "About me becoming a demon," Keiko said. "Three reason's, first you would have completely freaked." "I would not!" Keiko cried interrupting him. "Oh, yeah so you're saying that incident before when you were crying that could've gotten you dead, was what? Just you acting like a crybaby?" "Well.. Well .. How would you have acted then if you were in my shoes?" "First I wouldn't have followed me and second I'd try to get myself out of there instead of getting killed."
Trying to get off the subject Keiko asked, "And who was that woman Sakura?"
Hiei suddenly looked at the night darkly, "She's a Dark Demon, the only one on this place. Her powers are extordinary from what I learned of her single spirit gun."
"You still didn't answer my question, who the hell is she?" Keiko asked demandingly.
"She was my onced lover. The only one that could break the shield I my heart back then. My love for her couldn't even be described. I thought we would spend the rest of our lives together. Till she betrayed me. She had gone behind my back with another demon, and to try to get me arrested she framed me by killing thousands if humans, and since I already had a bad record King Yamma believed her and he had my files of what he thought I did. I quickly went in there and destroyed them before any one could see. That's why when I stole the shadow sword, Koenma couldn't find any records of me."
"The shadow sword," Keiko whispered. Something in her mind clicked. 'Remember when you stole the shadow sword and into trying to beat Yusuke Urameshi, you tried to turn poor Keiko into one of your obeying demons? Weeeelll not all the demon blood was gone. Just a very tiny single drop of it remained. It remained in her hidden. Till I controlled it. Over the past few weeks of you and her training, I've secretly been injecting Dark Demon blood into her. Slowly, the ancient Dark Demon blood has been seeping into her and it has been surfacing. Showing it's appearance." The shadow sword!
"It was because of you that I became a demon!" Keiko shrieked! She pulled away from his embrace and stood there staring at him. Hiei looked up at her surprised. "I was hoping you wouldn't remember." "WELL, I did! So you're the reason why I'm becoming into this..this...this thing!!!" Keiko was standing there staring coldly at Hiei. Hiei was about to talk, till Keiko cut him off and yelled, "The one person I thought who would help, not cause the fact that I'm turning into a demon! The one person that I truly loved!" Keiko finished. But as she finished those last seven words she realized what she said. Gasping she stood there staring back at the wide ruby eyes. "I gotta go!" Keiko whispered and climbed down from the roof top. Hiei just sat there not knowing what to do. His mind was in a daze and he had no idea what to do. Reaching into his pocket he found a note that read :
Hiei,
The transition is complete. You're dear Keiko is now a Dark Demon. I suggest you should train her up a bit with her spirit energy. For you won't know when I can come to her and attack. I'm glad you now know the extent of my power's. Hopefully the pathetic girl or should I say demon is ready to give me a good fight.
Hiei angrily tore up the note and had to go find Keiko quickly.
Author's note - Hope you like this chapter! PLEASE READ AND REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!