Chapter 9
Author's Note - Heyho! (I'm so hungy(hungry)lol) Anyway, Thanks for all the reviews!!!! Also, if anybody's reading this, well, at first I didn't know that I couldn't take reviews from anonymous people, till I learned how to change it. So, if you are one, then your free to review!!!!^^ Well, hope you like this chapter, it'll be shorter cause I got a special surprise at the end! Hope you like it!!!!!^^ READ AND REVIEW!!!!!!!!!
Disclaimer - I don't own Yu Yu Hakusho , cause if I did, then I'd make my stories into episodes, (sigh) if only.
Since Keiko had already worked with Hiei on her fighting techniques, she had a shrewd idea of what was in for her. Both Keiko and Hiei decided best to practice her spirit moves would be at Makia the Spirit World. And since Keiko was now a fully demon, no report would go to Koenma about a human in Makia. Hiei took her to a secluded forest, where he himself used to workout there. His plan was to start at early in the morning and end late at night, for Keiko had to learn how to deal with the sun for being a Dark Demon, the sun could harm her in many ways. She had to learn to work with the shadows at night as well. 'It's gonna be along four weeks' Hiei thought tiredly as he led the way. And at the same moment, after hearing Hiei's plan, Keiko thought, 'It's gonna be along four weeks.'
"Al right what you want to do, is gather your spirit energy so it can turn into a kind of weapon, that's one of the basics for spirit energy." Keiko scrunched up her forehead and tried to do as he told. A few minutes passed and nothing happened. Sighing, Hiei told her again, "Try to gather it together." In clenched teeth, Keiko tried to keep her anger down, "It's not as easy as you think. What the hell do you mean gathering my spirit energy, I can't feel any!" "Try to" Hiei urged. "If you would explain in a better way, maybe I'll be able to do it!" Keiko cried losing her temper. "Listen, I'm right now wasting my time, trying to teach you!" "Your time! Wasting my time!" Keiko shrieking at the top of her lungs. She curled her hand in a fist and started walking out of the woods, till she felt a warm, tingly feeling in her fist. Looking down, she gasped, around her hand, a wispy black looking mist was surrounding it. "And that's your spirit energy." Hiei said looking rather smug. Ecstatic, Keiko ran to Hiei, her arms flinging wildly around his neck. She had never felt this happy or this proud. "See, all you have to do is follow my directions and you'll be fine. Remember, I'll always take care of you." he whispered in her ear. Tears formed in her eyes in listening to the sweet words he whispered and hugged him tighter. "All right, come on we need to get back to work in strengthening your spirit energy." Nodding, Keiko started to concentrate, listening to his calm instructions.
Author's Note - Well hope you like this chapter!!!!!!! ^^ Any way, about the surprise, well I'm doing another story about a Keiko and Hiei fic. Here's the summary and the beginning of it!!!! PLEASE READ AND REVIEW THIS AND TELL ME YOUR OPINION AND PLEASE REVIEW THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^
Summary - This takes place when the Dark Tournament begins and Keiko comes to see Yusuke, and Hiei in away is officially part of the group. Yusuke and Keiko have been going out for awhile, till chance comes and Keiko and Hiei meet for the first time. She begins to develop unknown feelings toward him and is torn apart between Yusuke and Hiei. How will she decide between her childhood sweet heart or to a new and dangerous love? PG-13-Romance/Angst
Not actually beginning but, the beginning when Keiko and Hiei meet.
Keiko is walking away from the stadium after seeing Yusuke hurt. Keiko O.P.V. How can he deal with this? How can he deal with being in the same place with these.. these. monsters!!!!!!, Keiko thought. Out of no where, a short man in black came streaking down the forest and had run straight into her, knocking Keiko on the ground with him on top of her. "What the hell do you think your doing!!!!" she cried furiously.
Hiei O.P.V.
Shit, shit, shit!!! I'm late, the match had already began and he was late, Hiei thought wildly. He ran quickly through the woods then suddenly fell on top of a young human girl. She cried out, "What the hell do you think your doing!!!!" Hiei just stared at her enticed by her beauty and a remembrance of seeing her before.
Keiko O.P.V.
She stared at him looking at his crimson eyes and breathed in the crisp morning air. Where have I seen this man Keiko thought. Her heart thumped wildly and felt for sure that she could hear it. I never felt this way before, Keiko thought continuing to stare at him.
Hiei O.P.V.
Hiei stared at her and she stared at him. Something at the back of his mind he had a vague thought of a match till he heard a woman's voice throughout the area, "Will the fifth member of the Urameshia team please come to the stadium!" Oh shit! I gotta get there! He then quickly got up and with a last look at her he ran off to the arena.
*~*Later*~*
"Yusuke. Yusuke hold still!" Keiko cried trying to clean his wounds. "Keiko! Did it ever occur to you that it may hurt more than you think!" Groaning, Keiko said, "Did it ever occur to you that your being a big baby and this wouldn't happen if you didn't get hurt as much." "That's not my fault okay, and I still can't believe that you didn't tell me and that I had to make Botan tell me everything!" "Hey, it wasn't my fault about me getting hurt. I was just worried that Hiei may not show up!" he said defensively. Hiei..Hiei.. where have I heard that name before Keiko thought. (She heard that name when he kidnapped her to get the two artifacts from Yusuke.) As Keiko was about to ask who he was, a door opened the hotel room and in came Hiei.
Hiei O.P.V.
As he went into the room he both saw Yusuke with his shirt off, and the young human girl he met before tending to his wounds. Hiei heard a surprised gasp from the human girl and heard Yusuke growl, "Hiei, nice of you to show up."
Author's Note - Well, hope you like it and PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, REVIEW WITHOUT ANY FLAMES!!!!!!!!
*~*PLEASE REVIEW!!!!*~*
*~*Ja Ne*~*
*~*Bye- Bye*~*
Author's Note - Heyho! (I'm so hungy(hungry)lol) Anyway, Thanks for all the reviews!!!! Also, if anybody's reading this, well, at first I didn't know that I couldn't take reviews from anonymous people, till I learned how to change it. So, if you are one, then your free to review!!!!^^ Well, hope you like this chapter, it'll be shorter cause I got a special surprise at the end! Hope you like it!!!!!^^ READ AND REVIEW!!!!!!!!!
Disclaimer - I don't own Yu Yu Hakusho , cause if I did, then I'd make my stories into episodes, (sigh) if only.
Since Keiko had already worked with Hiei on her fighting techniques, she had a shrewd idea of what was in for her. Both Keiko and Hiei decided best to practice her spirit moves would be at Makia the Spirit World. And since Keiko was now a fully demon, no report would go to Koenma about a human in Makia. Hiei took her to a secluded forest, where he himself used to workout there. His plan was to start at early in the morning and end late at night, for Keiko had to learn how to deal with the sun for being a Dark Demon, the sun could harm her in many ways. She had to learn to work with the shadows at night as well. 'It's gonna be along four weeks' Hiei thought tiredly as he led the way. And at the same moment, after hearing Hiei's plan, Keiko thought, 'It's gonna be along four weeks.'
"Al right what you want to do, is gather your spirit energy so it can turn into a kind of weapon, that's one of the basics for spirit energy." Keiko scrunched up her forehead and tried to do as he told. A few minutes passed and nothing happened. Sighing, Hiei told her again, "Try to gather it together." In clenched teeth, Keiko tried to keep her anger down, "It's not as easy as you think. What the hell do you mean gathering my spirit energy, I can't feel any!" "Try to" Hiei urged. "If you would explain in a better way, maybe I'll be able to do it!" Keiko cried losing her temper. "Listen, I'm right now wasting my time, trying to teach you!" "Your time! Wasting my time!" Keiko shrieking at the top of her lungs. She curled her hand in a fist and started walking out of the woods, till she felt a warm, tingly feeling in her fist. Looking down, she gasped, around her hand, a wispy black looking mist was surrounding it. "And that's your spirit energy." Hiei said looking rather smug. Ecstatic, Keiko ran to Hiei, her arms flinging wildly around his neck. She had never felt this happy or this proud. "See, all you have to do is follow my directions and you'll be fine. Remember, I'll always take care of you." he whispered in her ear. Tears formed in her eyes in listening to the sweet words he whispered and hugged him tighter. "All right, come on we need to get back to work in strengthening your spirit energy." Nodding, Keiko started to concentrate, listening to his calm instructions.
Author's Note - Well hope you like this chapter!!!!!!! ^^ Any way, about the surprise, well I'm doing another story about a Keiko and Hiei fic. Here's the summary and the beginning of it!!!! PLEASE READ AND REVIEW THIS AND TELL ME YOUR OPINION AND PLEASE REVIEW THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^
Summary - This takes place when the Dark Tournament begins and Keiko comes to see Yusuke, and Hiei in away is officially part of the group. Yusuke and Keiko have been going out for awhile, till chance comes and Keiko and Hiei meet for the first time. She begins to develop unknown feelings toward him and is torn apart between Yusuke and Hiei. How will she decide between her childhood sweet heart or to a new and dangerous love? PG-13-Romance/Angst
Not actually beginning but, the beginning when Keiko and Hiei meet.
Keiko is walking away from the stadium after seeing Yusuke hurt. Keiko O.P.V. How can he deal with this? How can he deal with being in the same place with these.. these. monsters!!!!!!, Keiko thought. Out of no where, a short man in black came streaking down the forest and had run straight into her, knocking Keiko on the ground with him on top of her. "What the hell do you think your doing!!!!" she cried furiously.
Hiei O.P.V.
Shit, shit, shit!!! I'm late, the match had already began and he was late, Hiei thought wildly. He ran quickly through the woods then suddenly fell on top of a young human girl. She cried out, "What the hell do you think your doing!!!!" Hiei just stared at her enticed by her beauty and a remembrance of seeing her before.
Keiko O.P.V.
She stared at him looking at his crimson eyes and breathed in the crisp morning air. Where have I seen this man Keiko thought. Her heart thumped wildly and felt for sure that she could hear it. I never felt this way before, Keiko thought continuing to stare at him.
Hiei O.P.V.
Hiei stared at her and she stared at him. Something at the back of his mind he had a vague thought of a match till he heard a woman's voice throughout the area, "Will the fifth member of the Urameshia team please come to the stadium!" Oh shit! I gotta get there! He then quickly got up and with a last look at her he ran off to the arena.
*~*Later*~*
"Yusuke. Yusuke hold still!" Keiko cried trying to clean his wounds. "Keiko! Did it ever occur to you that it may hurt more than you think!" Groaning, Keiko said, "Did it ever occur to you that your being a big baby and this wouldn't happen if you didn't get hurt as much." "That's not my fault okay, and I still can't believe that you didn't tell me and that I had to make Botan tell me everything!" "Hey, it wasn't my fault about me getting hurt. I was just worried that Hiei may not show up!" he said defensively. Hiei..Hiei.. where have I heard that name before Keiko thought. (She heard that name when he kidnapped her to get the two artifacts from Yusuke.) As Keiko was about to ask who he was, a door opened the hotel room and in came Hiei.
Hiei O.P.V.
As he went into the room he both saw Yusuke with his shirt off, and the young human girl he met before tending to his wounds. Hiei heard a surprised gasp from the human girl and heard Yusuke growl, "Hiei, nice of you to show up."
Author's Note - Well, hope you like it and PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, REVIEW WITHOUT ANY FLAMES!!!!!!!!
*~*PLEASE REVIEW!!!!*~*
*~*Ja Ne*~*
*~*Bye- Bye*~*