Lin:Yes I'm still alive Sorry for the long wait. But I hope you still like
this! I've had to redo it sevrel times and I'm sick and I have
school!*wines*Life sometimes isn't fair.
R+R~`
******* Aryante took a step back, hand over her racing hart.
"Oh, you scared me!"she said breathlessly looking to a man, tall, stout, and very healthy looking peering down on her. He had shoulder length coil hair, his eyes were that of a black birds back, and his skin was leathery and tanned. She shuffled slightly at his intense gaze but took it for curiosity. She got that a lot.
"I. . .I have to go,"she was about to walk passed the man when he lashed a arm out at her and grabbed her gruffly by the elbow.
"Wait,"his voice was deep, oddly soft, but creepily so. It sent shivers down her spine.
"N. . no my Aunt needs help in the kitchen,"her voice became more firm with each word,"I 'have' to go inside. Pleas let me go."
He just gripped more tightly at that, his other hand clutching her shoulder tightly forcing her to face towards him.
"Don't worry, it'll all be over in a few minuts,"he murmured.
"Wha-"She stopped in mid sentence as she peered at the object in the man's hand. A gun. Fear welled up in her and instantly she considered using magic. But the still fresh warning from the ministry last year settled all thoughts of that. Hogwarts was her home.
Instead she set for yelling. "WHAT THE HELL!"
Immediately she used the powers werewolf's posses and kicked the gun into a dark corner of the ally, then tried punching him. ... and was amazed by the fact that he could catch her hand and be able to hold it back no sweat.
Their they stood, her eyes wide and fearful as she looked into the cold face of the black haired stranger , his silver eyes glaring at her.
"Fighting only makes it worse,"he promised, so saying he pushed her hand back and she fought not to scream in pain as she thought for sure her skin would rip. The fearsome grip tightened and he suddenly squeezed her hand, a loud crunching sound echoing throughout the alleyway.
She swayed on her spot, eyes becoming unfocused, before she tried every punch and kick she could throw his way. But he blocked each one. Suddenly he was able to trip her and hold her to the ground with his own weight.
Something glinted in his hand and the next thing Harriet knew, she had a silver blade knife to her through. Never in her werewolf lived life had she ever felt silver. Sure their were brass and silver nob's at Hogwarts School, but she had always wore Dragon hide gloves for that - curtisy of Albus Dumbldoor.' Their was a sudden growl and he stopped. Aryante was taking short, quick gasps, and she Immetealy - as the knife had been token from her neck and she felt a sudden burst of adrenalin, she yelled at the top of her lungs,"Help! Is somebody over their!"she felt the man be flung off her and she quickly shuffled and tried to sit up, but was unable to seeing as how the adrenalin rush ended as soon as it begun and she was just as helpless as she was before, but even more so.
"And don't you ever think of touching her again!"the man's voice was strong, yet soothing, and unlike the other mans more light hearted.
Slowly the man turned around to look at Aryante, and she blinked at what she saw, trying to see through the hot stinging tears that blinded her. *** A bitter fragrance laces the air so thickly, more a smell then a feeling, more feeling then knowing of what it is. It makes the hair on the back of my neck stand, and the feeling of dominece natural comes to life as it always does when this feeling is near me.
Fear. I smell fear.
Fear is a drug, a drug the wolf feeds on. Fear brings on pain. The wolf feeds off the pain. Fear can become intense, so intense it can make one loose his head for it to continue-like Humans and their silly gold. That is why the wolf has the chase and plays with it's food, the fear is the drug, the pain is it's treat.
I'm immune to the smell of fear. Being what I am I think it a normal thing to feel around you. But what worries me is, It's coming from one of my own kind.
Of course, I know, it isn't from 'my' pack. I am right now out trying to look normal as I trek amount the muggle streets-I cannot stock upon the wizerding world's alleyways and cobble stone walks as for they not only know what I am, they fear me so they would capture me.
I'm on a mission.
But me and my pack will have to wait a while longer for a bite to eat. I am interested, or more so worried, at what makes fear strike so strongly in the hart of one of our own.
I quickly make my way towards it, a small scream issuing from the next ally way that was coming up, and I force my self to quicken my steps, What if it was the Ministry of Magic? They kill our kind after they torture us at times. It's no wonder most Werewolf's turned to the dark lord when he was here. Or just kept to themselfs.
Rounding the corner I am shocked at what I see. A girl, just a mere pup in our sites,(were wolf's, mind you, are pups till age of 25), has a man who is holding her with a knife at her throughout, a trickle of blood spilling from the small nick in her neck. Normally this blood would issue the wolf to become more crazed and take over slightly, but she is one of my kind, and could be a new pack member. I have to ask the girl for her pack, if she has one.
The girl, her eyes wide yet she doesn't look to me, much less I would doubt she could see me as for the man suddenly blocks her sights, starts to scream in a shrilly voice,"Help! Is somebody over their!" I angrily grab the man by the shoulders and fling him off of her.
I wish to check if the girl fairs all right but , sadly, the man leaps at me, and I have to fight him off. Such strength in a man such as him. But I recognize his sent. I know of what 'he' is.
Once chasing the stupid bagger off I quickly gather my wits about me to check out the pup. She's in a corner, whimpering as one would for its mothers milk, eyes glossy with tears and weakness, and limp like a dead stag.
I pick her up, wincing at her thin frame. She cant have a pack, no good pack leader would let a one so young starve! After all, werewolf pups are becoming scarce - speshly since Alpha Females and Males have been taken countless of times so it take's a while for a pack to regroup, much less reproduce.
She whimpers looking up to me with eyes that many pups withold - I haven't seen a pup since the one 13 years ago died- and it is so strong of inniconts that it brakes my hart. Yet, something, something I do not know of is held deeply within those emerald orbs. Something dark, haunting one might say.
"Do not fret, young Pup,"I say in a murmured voice in the language we wolf's speak to one a nether,"I will help you. You shall be fine, and away from harm."
The pup smiles, weakly, and quickly is fast to sleep.
But I am unsure of her actual well fair. Her breath is shallow, but quick, and her skin is hot to the touch. Mind you she is also quite underweight. Must feed her more meat, need more fat on those bones.
I quickly except the alleyway passing many thing; a barking dog chasing me shortly, a cat mowing on a tree, kids playing, birds singing, water running, people pulling in or out of their drives, or washing their cars, a owl flying over head hooting. Soon the sounds of a town leave and I'm faced with a countryside. It is now eve. It has token me most the day to escape the dence houces and drives of the vast city.
Hear a wind blows, causing small gust to make the long emerald grass to ripple, and a few miles ahead lays a forest. My forest. Quickly I start running. The girl has moved little in her hours of sleep, and has shown no sings of waking. The only change is her skin becoming hotter. I plan to stop and wet her down.
I only hope I can save this lone cub before it's to late.
~~~~
Albus Dumble door sat in a worry, fretting over how he would be able to contact the professors from their summer homes without the ministry being notified that Harriet Potter had not returned home last night. He pondered this subject until he had gotten a headache.
Rubbing the brig of his nose he peered down at a paper, from the ministry, that was a contract to the school. He had a big probable. Demeanors. They were to come to the school, wither he liked them or not. Thankfully they would not gloat about the halls, or hover in the class rooms. They were to be outside.
He didn't wish his students to be exposed to such vile creature. Much less they were what he feared. The memorize of the cries, the pleads - Albus shook his head. It was no time to ponder such depressing thoughts. They were of passed.
A short rap interrupted his thoughts. Surprised, as for he expected no one to visit him, or at least at such early hours such as this(buy Merlin's beard it was 2:00 in the morning!), but shook it off. Pushing away the sleepiness and worry he set himself stoutly, quill in hand and replied,"Come in!"
The man who entered was of not who he expected.
*I sooo wanted to leave it here! But, alas, I'm not that cruel.*
"Aaaa Albus!"greeted the man who stepped in. The man was odd, that was for sure. His dominator reflected nothing of his looks:He was old, and was dressed in what seemed to be old tattered robs, his pointed hat slightly bent, and his beard short and graying. But his eyes with held wisdom and power.
"Gandalf,"laughed Dumbldoor as he went around his desk to greet the other wizard,"Such a gap of time it has been since I've last seen you. Why, the last time must have been....about a century ago!"
Gandalf himself laughed,"Yes it has been."he then looked serious,"I must talk to you about Aryante."
Albus knew exactly of what he spoke of. Harriet.
He frowned, his wrinkles creasing deeply into his skin.
"I am sorry, my friend, but I only have bad new,"He murmured softly,"I must talk to you about. Come sit."
Gandalf frowned,"I have family of hers,"said he,"who was wanting to know of her."
~~~~~~~
The sun was now at a set, everything in the Village was quite and eerie, shadows now stretching out and becoming strange shapes to make ones mind think on the imagination.
The marble hallways, and vast rooms with high ceilings were darkened, and this was the easily largest house in the hole village. A castle, one could say.
Even though the evening sun shown down into the front windows of the castle, a large eerie shadow covering quarter of the village from behind it, a person sat within one of the hottest but most oldest of magic feeling rooms in the hole place.
The Library.
Silver eyes scanned the paper that was held with two ivory hands for what could be the hundredth time, sweat dripped from golden locks wither from the heat or something else.
Despite he was in the most musty, dust filled room, one in which the the sun pounding gently threw the pain glass windows, he could think nothing of any of that, only the letter was on his mind.
Many thoughts trailed threw his head, mostly questions with unsure able answers. How could he be? It wasn't true, was it? But he was. And that would explain the family looks.Pale skin, gold hair, silver eyes...but how could it be.
This letter rattled his brain, and went every ware but to every logical teaching he ever had. It just wasn't possible.
But, then again, Harriet Potter was the same, but to his hart. Oh how he felt such strange and unnatural feelings towards her, but his pride and teaching's tough him away from that feeling towards the enemy.
As for, he had fallen, quite hard, in love with Harriet Potter.
~~~~~
Hay yall! Hope yo like this chappy! Now pleas do review~
Also I happen ta have responces to preivous reviwers:
Anonymous little long. Ok though. Up date. THen i'll say if I like
U need a name*smiles*but thenx for the review. I think I know who u r, and- correct me if I am wrong- when I say that you're my cosin-ither Cassie or Amanda.
Long? U muuusst be kidding. iI am a up dating! DO u like?
draco4harry Anonymous When are you continuing please continue the story soon. It good COntineuing right now. Thanx for the good and lovely review. Heather Anonymous I really like your fan fic and would like to read more. I think it is very interresting.
Thank you. Glade u could read it. Yes, I do that with all my stories. I try to make every one of them unic. Never really tried the idea of making something idinacl to some one elses-though some times ppl guess that. Pleas, R+R. See uz
ShanniC Anonymous Aside from spelling errors, ans technical jargon, you've got a great idea. I'm writing a Harry is a girl fic too excpet in my fic, she is Snape's daughter. Good job. Hope you continue.
0.0 Yah, I'm a bad girl in spelling. But, hay, we all have our fults. On my cat teast-do u have that?-that was the only thing I faild in. Hay, can u givemme the name to that fic. I would looove to read it*smiles*+of corse review~ Thanx for reviewing! Seezu Katie-Elf Anonymous PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
I REALLY ENJOY YOUR STORY!
IT'S VERY GOOD AND VERY INFORMATIVE!
IT'S VERY VERY GOOD!
PLEASE UPDATE VERY SOON!
THANK YOU FOR WRITING SUCH A WONDERFUL STORY!
I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL I READ THE SECOND CHAPTER!
WILL YOU PLEASE WRITE HER 1st & 2nd YEARS? I WOULD APPREICATE IT VERY MUCH IF YOU COULD?
*QUESTIONS:
1.) HOW DID SHE GET BITTEN?
I LOVE THIS STORY!
IT'S VERY COOL!
-Katie-Elf
Lin3:woh! Katie-elf! Dan you like this story, don't yah!? I'll have to pleas you and up date sooner!
Sure I'll write them. Starting tommarow-after school of corse.
Qestions: 1:Will be answered in a prequl-sallright? I'll make 3 prequls- one cercling around mainly on her becoming a werewolf. I'll lend yah a hint though*looks around and motions for you to come closer so I can wisper in your ear*She got bitten when she was nine or ten. Havent dicided. And she almost is gotten rid of. Pleas give me a nother lovely*blush's*or a few more lovely reviews. seeu Katie-Elf Anonymous PLEASE UPDATE!
I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT IS GONNA HAPPEN? I CAN'T STAND IT ANY LONGER!
PRETTY PLEASE!
YOU MUST UPDATE SOON!
PLEASE!
PLEASE!
PLEASE!
PRETTY PLEASE!
I BEG OF YOU!
PLEASE!
Your 1st Reviewer, Katie-Elf
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Oooh I'm sooo sorry! I'll have to up date more, I know!
pLEAS KEEP READING! to my 1st reviewer katie elf.
hope Anonymous i like your fic, it sounds interesting. i hope you update soon Hi! Like it! THanx. Intresting, even better. Here's u r up date. I'll, hopefully be able to up date more often.
Gryphnwng Signed Not too bad for a first. ^_^ Good idea, combining Harry as girl with Harry as were-wolf. Both ideas aren't done very often, and together- never seen that. I think what you need to work on most would be your spelling and grammar. I'd suggest finding a beta, it can help to have someone go over chapters before you release then. Also- try taking a little less from the actual story. I believe you'll use less soon though, since your story diverges from the regualr plot. *grins* Enjoying this so far, hope you do update. Oh, one more thing- have you changed Remus Lupins name to Lumpkin, or was that an error? Just confused. Well, enjoy the weekend, can't wait to review again. ^^
~*~Gryphnwng~*~ Lin3:Thanx ya deary. Thank yah again. I do like to make my stories more unice and notticable, I'm hoping of someday becoming a writer and FF.net is a peeerfect oprotunity to write, and let ppl read what I got. Yah, spelling grammer *whines*I hate it all. Ill fid a beta some time . .soon. After school quites being such A PAIN IN THE BUTT! *coghs* Sorry. Oh, yes, I do admit this is quite close to the actual story. But you are right, it does part quite far from the rest of the plot line. Here's u r up date! Lumpkin? Whare? i'll have to check taht out-it's just a error*blush's*I am really bad at that. Yes and I hope you injoy you're's, and pleas do review again*grins*.
Karriena Lily Anonymous Oh wow. never really thought about harry as a girl before... I like it! ^_^ THis is a good story so far! Write More! Write More! WRITE MORE!!
Thanx, I have a few stories like that. I injoy writing Harry is girl storys. Howz about u check 'em out some time! Some are quite good. Heres more.
FAllen Dragon Anonymous Very confused person over here! Update soon! 00 confused? How? Pleas explain how u r confused. Here's u r up date!
Anjusigned It's actually very good since this is your first chapter. However, you should use less stuff from the Harry Potter books. You should use less of her stuff and use more of your ideas. People like it when you make it your own.
Anyhow,
Keep it up! Yah, I know. I donno why I did that. Think this is the one I did when I was younger. Tell me how you like this one. CU
Katy Kinneas Signed I like how you've done this. Normally I wouldn't like het...but its Harry and Draco! I take it this is her third year, it should be really interesting. Keep it up! Thank you. That is a very 'very' nice complement. yes it is her 3ed year, Also I'm planing on haveing her 1st and 2ed years up and then fourth and so on.*Giggls*just wait untill I get Harry and Draco into a deep 'deep' relationship in fifth year*wink wink*oh, and I have made other D/H stories- just ta let ya know*Wink**giggls*n-wayz. Seez u.Thanx for the review.
Katie-Elf 2003-06-19 1 Anonymous I LOVE THIS STORY! ITS COOL!
Will you descride Harry?
Does she look like Harry would look as a boy-with the messy black & green eyes?
How long is her hair?
PLEASE UPDATE SOON AS I REALLY WANT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT IN YOUR STORY!!
THANK YOU FOR WRITING!
IT'S REALLY COOL! Sure I'll discribe her. In the next chapter-I promis- I'll have the man think of her looks. Though just to let u know she doesn't have glass's.
PLEAS R+R
OH AND PPLS PLEAS LEAVE E-MAIL SO I CAN CONTACT YOU!
thanx, and seeu
******* Aryante took a step back, hand over her racing hart.
"Oh, you scared me!"she said breathlessly looking to a man, tall, stout, and very healthy looking peering down on her. He had shoulder length coil hair, his eyes were that of a black birds back, and his skin was leathery and tanned. She shuffled slightly at his intense gaze but took it for curiosity. She got that a lot.
"I. . .I have to go,"she was about to walk passed the man when he lashed a arm out at her and grabbed her gruffly by the elbow.
"Wait,"his voice was deep, oddly soft, but creepily so. It sent shivers down her spine.
"N. . no my Aunt needs help in the kitchen,"her voice became more firm with each word,"I 'have' to go inside. Pleas let me go."
He just gripped more tightly at that, his other hand clutching her shoulder tightly forcing her to face towards him.
"Don't worry, it'll all be over in a few minuts,"he murmured.
"Wha-"She stopped in mid sentence as she peered at the object in the man's hand. A gun. Fear welled up in her and instantly she considered using magic. But the still fresh warning from the ministry last year settled all thoughts of that. Hogwarts was her home.
Instead she set for yelling. "WHAT THE HELL!"
Immediately she used the powers werewolf's posses and kicked the gun into a dark corner of the ally, then tried punching him. ... and was amazed by the fact that he could catch her hand and be able to hold it back no sweat.
Their they stood, her eyes wide and fearful as she looked into the cold face of the black haired stranger , his silver eyes glaring at her.
"Fighting only makes it worse,"he promised, so saying he pushed her hand back and she fought not to scream in pain as she thought for sure her skin would rip. The fearsome grip tightened and he suddenly squeezed her hand, a loud crunching sound echoing throughout the alleyway.
She swayed on her spot, eyes becoming unfocused, before she tried every punch and kick she could throw his way. But he blocked each one. Suddenly he was able to trip her and hold her to the ground with his own weight.
Something glinted in his hand and the next thing Harriet knew, she had a silver blade knife to her through. Never in her werewolf lived life had she ever felt silver. Sure their were brass and silver nob's at Hogwarts School, but she had always wore Dragon hide gloves for that - curtisy of Albus Dumbldoor.' Their was a sudden growl and he stopped. Aryante was taking short, quick gasps, and she Immetealy - as the knife had been token from her neck and she felt a sudden burst of adrenalin, she yelled at the top of her lungs,"Help! Is somebody over their!"she felt the man be flung off her and she quickly shuffled and tried to sit up, but was unable to seeing as how the adrenalin rush ended as soon as it begun and she was just as helpless as she was before, but even more so.
"And don't you ever think of touching her again!"the man's voice was strong, yet soothing, and unlike the other mans more light hearted.
Slowly the man turned around to look at Aryante, and she blinked at what she saw, trying to see through the hot stinging tears that blinded her. *** A bitter fragrance laces the air so thickly, more a smell then a feeling, more feeling then knowing of what it is. It makes the hair on the back of my neck stand, and the feeling of dominece natural comes to life as it always does when this feeling is near me.
Fear. I smell fear.
Fear is a drug, a drug the wolf feeds on. Fear brings on pain. The wolf feeds off the pain. Fear can become intense, so intense it can make one loose his head for it to continue-like Humans and their silly gold. That is why the wolf has the chase and plays with it's food, the fear is the drug, the pain is it's treat.
I'm immune to the smell of fear. Being what I am I think it a normal thing to feel around you. But what worries me is, It's coming from one of my own kind.
Of course, I know, it isn't from 'my' pack. I am right now out trying to look normal as I trek amount the muggle streets-I cannot stock upon the wizerding world's alleyways and cobble stone walks as for they not only know what I am, they fear me so they would capture me.
I'm on a mission.
But me and my pack will have to wait a while longer for a bite to eat. I am interested, or more so worried, at what makes fear strike so strongly in the hart of one of our own.
I quickly make my way towards it, a small scream issuing from the next ally way that was coming up, and I force my self to quicken my steps, What if it was the Ministry of Magic? They kill our kind after they torture us at times. It's no wonder most Werewolf's turned to the dark lord when he was here. Or just kept to themselfs.
Rounding the corner I am shocked at what I see. A girl, just a mere pup in our sites,(were wolf's, mind you, are pups till age of 25), has a man who is holding her with a knife at her throughout, a trickle of blood spilling from the small nick in her neck. Normally this blood would issue the wolf to become more crazed and take over slightly, but she is one of my kind, and could be a new pack member. I have to ask the girl for her pack, if she has one.
The girl, her eyes wide yet she doesn't look to me, much less I would doubt she could see me as for the man suddenly blocks her sights, starts to scream in a shrilly voice,"Help! Is somebody over their!" I angrily grab the man by the shoulders and fling him off of her.
I wish to check if the girl fairs all right but , sadly, the man leaps at me, and I have to fight him off. Such strength in a man such as him. But I recognize his sent. I know of what 'he' is.
Once chasing the stupid bagger off I quickly gather my wits about me to check out the pup. She's in a corner, whimpering as one would for its mothers milk, eyes glossy with tears and weakness, and limp like a dead stag.
I pick her up, wincing at her thin frame. She cant have a pack, no good pack leader would let a one so young starve! After all, werewolf pups are becoming scarce - speshly since Alpha Females and Males have been taken countless of times so it take's a while for a pack to regroup, much less reproduce.
She whimpers looking up to me with eyes that many pups withold - I haven't seen a pup since the one 13 years ago died- and it is so strong of inniconts that it brakes my hart. Yet, something, something I do not know of is held deeply within those emerald orbs. Something dark, haunting one might say.
"Do not fret, young Pup,"I say in a murmured voice in the language we wolf's speak to one a nether,"I will help you. You shall be fine, and away from harm."
The pup smiles, weakly, and quickly is fast to sleep.
But I am unsure of her actual well fair. Her breath is shallow, but quick, and her skin is hot to the touch. Mind you she is also quite underweight. Must feed her more meat, need more fat on those bones.
I quickly except the alleyway passing many thing; a barking dog chasing me shortly, a cat mowing on a tree, kids playing, birds singing, water running, people pulling in or out of their drives, or washing their cars, a owl flying over head hooting. Soon the sounds of a town leave and I'm faced with a countryside. It is now eve. It has token me most the day to escape the dence houces and drives of the vast city.
Hear a wind blows, causing small gust to make the long emerald grass to ripple, and a few miles ahead lays a forest. My forest. Quickly I start running. The girl has moved little in her hours of sleep, and has shown no sings of waking. The only change is her skin becoming hotter. I plan to stop and wet her down.
I only hope I can save this lone cub before it's to late.
~~~~
Albus Dumble door sat in a worry, fretting over how he would be able to contact the professors from their summer homes without the ministry being notified that Harriet Potter had not returned home last night. He pondered this subject until he had gotten a headache.
Rubbing the brig of his nose he peered down at a paper, from the ministry, that was a contract to the school. He had a big probable. Demeanors. They were to come to the school, wither he liked them or not. Thankfully they would not gloat about the halls, or hover in the class rooms. They were to be outside.
He didn't wish his students to be exposed to such vile creature. Much less they were what he feared. The memorize of the cries, the pleads - Albus shook his head. It was no time to ponder such depressing thoughts. They were of passed.
A short rap interrupted his thoughts. Surprised, as for he expected no one to visit him, or at least at such early hours such as this(buy Merlin's beard it was 2:00 in the morning!), but shook it off. Pushing away the sleepiness and worry he set himself stoutly, quill in hand and replied,"Come in!"
The man who entered was of not who he expected.
*I sooo wanted to leave it here! But, alas, I'm not that cruel.*
"Aaaa Albus!"greeted the man who stepped in. The man was odd, that was for sure. His dominator reflected nothing of his looks:He was old, and was dressed in what seemed to be old tattered robs, his pointed hat slightly bent, and his beard short and graying. But his eyes with held wisdom and power.
"Gandalf,"laughed Dumbldoor as he went around his desk to greet the other wizard,"Such a gap of time it has been since I've last seen you. Why, the last time must have been....about a century ago!"
Gandalf himself laughed,"Yes it has been."he then looked serious,"I must talk to you about Aryante."
Albus knew exactly of what he spoke of. Harriet.
He frowned, his wrinkles creasing deeply into his skin.
"I am sorry, my friend, but I only have bad new,"He murmured softly,"I must talk to you about. Come sit."
Gandalf frowned,"I have family of hers,"said he,"who was wanting to know of her."
~~~~~~~
The sun was now at a set, everything in the Village was quite and eerie, shadows now stretching out and becoming strange shapes to make ones mind think on the imagination.
The marble hallways, and vast rooms with high ceilings were darkened, and this was the easily largest house in the hole village. A castle, one could say.
Even though the evening sun shown down into the front windows of the castle, a large eerie shadow covering quarter of the village from behind it, a person sat within one of the hottest but most oldest of magic feeling rooms in the hole place.
The Library.
Silver eyes scanned the paper that was held with two ivory hands for what could be the hundredth time, sweat dripped from golden locks wither from the heat or something else.
Despite he was in the most musty, dust filled room, one in which the the sun pounding gently threw the pain glass windows, he could think nothing of any of that, only the letter was on his mind.
Many thoughts trailed threw his head, mostly questions with unsure able answers. How could he be? It wasn't true, was it? But he was. And that would explain the family looks.Pale skin, gold hair, silver eyes...but how could it be.
This letter rattled his brain, and went every ware but to every logical teaching he ever had. It just wasn't possible.
But, then again, Harriet Potter was the same, but to his hart. Oh how he felt such strange and unnatural feelings towards her, but his pride and teaching's tough him away from that feeling towards the enemy.
As for, he had fallen, quite hard, in love with Harriet Potter.
~~~~~
Hay yall! Hope yo like this chappy! Now pleas do review~
Also I happen ta have responces to preivous reviwers:
Anonymous little long. Ok though. Up date. THen i'll say if I like
U need a name*smiles*but thenx for the review. I think I know who u r, and- correct me if I am wrong- when I say that you're my cosin-ither Cassie or Amanda.
Long? U muuusst be kidding. iI am a up dating! DO u like?
draco4harry Anonymous When are you continuing please continue the story soon. It good COntineuing right now. Thanx for the good and lovely review. Heather Anonymous I really like your fan fic and would like to read more. I think it is very interresting.
Thank you. Glade u could read it. Yes, I do that with all my stories. I try to make every one of them unic. Never really tried the idea of making something idinacl to some one elses-though some times ppl guess that. Pleas, R+R. See uz
ShanniC Anonymous Aside from spelling errors, ans technical jargon, you've got a great idea. I'm writing a Harry is a girl fic too excpet in my fic, she is Snape's daughter. Good job. Hope you continue.
0.0 Yah, I'm a bad girl in spelling. But, hay, we all have our fults. On my cat teast-do u have that?-that was the only thing I faild in. Hay, can u givemme the name to that fic. I would looove to read it*smiles*+of corse review~ Thanx for reviewing! Seezu Katie-Elf Anonymous PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
I REALLY ENJOY YOUR STORY!
IT'S VERY GOOD AND VERY INFORMATIVE!
IT'S VERY VERY GOOD!
PLEASE UPDATE VERY SOON!
THANK YOU FOR WRITING SUCH A WONDERFUL STORY!
I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL I READ THE SECOND CHAPTER!
WILL YOU PLEASE WRITE HER 1st & 2nd YEARS? I WOULD APPREICATE IT VERY MUCH IF YOU COULD?
*QUESTIONS:
1.) HOW DID SHE GET BITTEN?
I LOVE THIS STORY!
IT'S VERY COOL!
-Katie-Elf
Lin3:woh! Katie-elf! Dan you like this story, don't yah!? I'll have to pleas you and up date sooner!
Sure I'll write them. Starting tommarow-after school of corse.
Qestions: 1:Will be answered in a prequl-sallright? I'll make 3 prequls- one cercling around mainly on her becoming a werewolf. I'll lend yah a hint though*looks around and motions for you to come closer so I can wisper in your ear*She got bitten when she was nine or ten. Havent dicided. And she almost is gotten rid of. Pleas give me a nother lovely*blush's*or a few more lovely reviews. seeu Katie-Elf Anonymous PLEASE UPDATE!
I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT IS GONNA HAPPEN? I CAN'T STAND IT ANY LONGER!
PRETTY PLEASE!
YOU MUST UPDATE SOON!
PLEASE!
PLEASE!
PLEASE!
PRETTY PLEASE!
I BEG OF YOU!
PLEASE!
Your 1st Reviewer, Katie-Elf
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Oooh I'm sooo sorry! I'll have to up date more, I know!
pLEAS KEEP READING! to my 1st reviewer katie elf.
hope Anonymous i like your fic, it sounds interesting. i hope you update soon Hi! Like it! THanx. Intresting, even better. Here's u r up date. I'll, hopefully be able to up date more often.
Gryphnwng Signed Not too bad for a first. ^_^ Good idea, combining Harry as girl with Harry as were-wolf. Both ideas aren't done very often, and together- never seen that. I think what you need to work on most would be your spelling and grammar. I'd suggest finding a beta, it can help to have someone go over chapters before you release then. Also- try taking a little less from the actual story. I believe you'll use less soon though, since your story diverges from the regualr plot. *grins* Enjoying this so far, hope you do update. Oh, one more thing- have you changed Remus Lupins name to Lumpkin, or was that an error? Just confused. Well, enjoy the weekend, can't wait to review again. ^^
~*~Gryphnwng~*~ Lin3:Thanx ya deary. Thank yah again. I do like to make my stories more unice and notticable, I'm hoping of someday becoming a writer and FF.net is a peeerfect oprotunity to write, and let ppl read what I got. Yah, spelling grammer *whines*I hate it all. Ill fid a beta some time . .soon. After school quites being such A PAIN IN THE BUTT! *coghs* Sorry. Oh, yes, I do admit this is quite close to the actual story. But you are right, it does part quite far from the rest of the plot line. Here's u r up date! Lumpkin? Whare? i'll have to check taht out-it's just a error*blush's*I am really bad at that. Yes and I hope you injoy you're's, and pleas do review again*grins*.
Karriena Lily Anonymous Oh wow. never really thought about harry as a girl before... I like it! ^_^ THis is a good story so far! Write More! Write More! WRITE MORE!!
Thanx, I have a few stories like that. I injoy writing Harry is girl storys. Howz about u check 'em out some time! Some are quite good. Heres more.
FAllen Dragon Anonymous Very confused person over here! Update soon! 00 confused? How? Pleas explain how u r confused. Here's u r up date!
Anjusigned It's actually very good since this is your first chapter. However, you should use less stuff from the Harry Potter books. You should use less of her stuff and use more of your ideas. People like it when you make it your own.
Anyhow,
Keep it up! Yah, I know. I donno why I did that. Think this is the one I did when I was younger. Tell me how you like this one. CU
Katy Kinneas Signed I like how you've done this. Normally I wouldn't like het...but its Harry and Draco! I take it this is her third year, it should be really interesting. Keep it up! Thank you. That is a very 'very' nice complement. yes it is her 3ed year, Also I'm planing on haveing her 1st and 2ed years up and then fourth and so on.*Giggls*just wait untill I get Harry and Draco into a deep 'deep' relationship in fifth year*wink wink*oh, and I have made other D/H stories- just ta let ya know*Wink**giggls*n-wayz. Seez u.Thanx for the review.
Katie-Elf 2003-06-19 1 Anonymous I LOVE THIS STORY! ITS COOL!
Will you descride Harry?
Does she look like Harry would look as a boy-with the messy black & green eyes?
How long is her hair?
PLEASE UPDATE SOON AS I REALLY WANT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT IN YOUR STORY!!
THANK YOU FOR WRITING!
IT'S REALLY COOL! Sure I'll discribe her. In the next chapter-I promis- I'll have the man think of her looks. Though just to let u know she doesn't have glass's.
PLEAS R+R
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thanx, and seeu
