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Chapter 5/When Ray arrived
I sat on my bed at home, thinking.I was way too exited to pack for
school. I finally realized, I was going to be late, and picking up my
books, and putting them inside my red and black bag, I raced for my
closet.I pulled on my school uniform,(like in CCS, exept the skirt is
red with a green stripe at the bottom, and its longer)and my black
knee high boots.They were sooo uncomfortable.
I met Margarett outside, and we walked to school together. She
noticed I was fidgeting.Trying to make my hair straighter, retying my
black ribbon, and pulling on my uniform coat.
"You sure are nervous!"She laughed.
"And you know why."I smiled.
"Do you think he'll remember me?"I asked her.
"Of coursehe will!You were best friends!"
We got quiet.I really wanted to tell her about Malikai liking her, but
if I did, he'd probably beat me up.And I did not want that to happen.
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"Students, I would like to introduce to you two newcomers. Linda,
and Ray.Linda is from US, and Ray's from China.I would like you all
to give them a warm welcome."Ms.Toji said.
Everybody clapped.
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By the end of the day I saw Tyler say something to Michelle which
made her gasp.I only heard a part of their conversation.Tyler said
something about breaking up.Then he walked off with Linda.
Ray however walked up to Michelle, and offered her a tissue.She
smiled, and brushed her golden blond hair from her face.
School day ended and it was time to talk to Ray.I saw him walking
in the garden hall.I ran up to him, and stopped at about a ten step
distance.
"Ray!"I smiled.
He looked at me.
"Huh?Who are you?"
"It's me Aki, don't you remember?"
"What are you talking about?I don't know you!Just get away from
me!"
"Ray!"She reached out her hand.
"You're crazy!Go away!"
::Ray's POV::
I took a couple of steps back.Who was she, anyway? I saw a tear roll
down her cream coloured face, as her eyes grew a little wider.The
strong wind untied her ribbon, and her long, dark brown hair fluttered
in the wind, and she didn't bother to retrieve it.I realized that she was
pretty, but crazy.
I took off.
On my way, I bumped into someone on my way.It was Michelle.
"Watch where you're go-"She looked up."Oh Ray!Hi!"She smiled.
"Hi Michelle, sorry."
"It's okay."She picked up her books.
"Um...Ray, I was wondering..."She bit her lip."If you'd like to hang
out with me tommorow night?"
"Uh.. yeah, I guess."I remembered that girl.
"Oh Ray!You're just ever so wonderful!"She threw her arms around
me, dropping her books, and kissed me.
Then she picked up her books.She scribled something on a scrap of
paper, and handed it to me.
"My address.Can you pick me up?"She asked.
"Yeah, sure."
"Oh I gotta go.See ya tommorow!"She winked and ran off.
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Poor Aki, don't ya think?Well thanks for reading, next chapter will be posted soon!
Chapter 5/When Ray arrived
I sat on my bed at home, thinking.I was way too exited to pack for
school. I finally realized, I was going to be late, and picking up my
books, and putting them inside my red and black bag, I raced for my
closet.I pulled on my school uniform,(like in CCS, exept the skirt is
red with a green stripe at the bottom, and its longer)and my black
knee high boots.They were sooo uncomfortable.
I met Margarett outside, and we walked to school together. She
noticed I was fidgeting.Trying to make my hair straighter, retying my
black ribbon, and pulling on my uniform coat.
"You sure are nervous!"She laughed.
"And you know why."I smiled.
"Do you think he'll remember me?"I asked her.
"Of coursehe will!You were best friends!"
We got quiet.I really wanted to tell her about Malikai liking her, but
if I did, he'd probably beat me up.And I did not want that to happen.
*********************
"Students, I would like to introduce to you two newcomers. Linda,
and Ray.Linda is from US, and Ray's from China.I would like you all
to give them a warm welcome."Ms.Toji said.
Everybody clapped.
****************
By the end of the day I saw Tyler say something to Michelle which
made her gasp.I only heard a part of their conversation.Tyler said
something about breaking up.Then he walked off with Linda.
Ray however walked up to Michelle, and offered her a tissue.She
smiled, and brushed her golden blond hair from her face.
School day ended and it was time to talk to Ray.I saw him walking
in the garden hall.I ran up to him, and stopped at about a ten step
distance.
"Ray!"I smiled.
He looked at me.
"Huh?Who are you?"
"It's me Aki, don't you remember?"
"What are you talking about?I don't know you!Just get away from
me!"
"Ray!"She reached out her hand.
"You're crazy!Go away!"
::Ray's POV::
I took a couple of steps back.Who was she, anyway? I saw a tear roll
down her cream coloured face, as her eyes grew a little wider.The
strong wind untied her ribbon, and her long, dark brown hair fluttered
in the wind, and she didn't bother to retrieve it.I realized that she was
pretty, but crazy.
I took off.
On my way, I bumped into someone on my way.It was Michelle.
"Watch where you're go-"She looked up."Oh Ray!Hi!"She smiled.
"Hi Michelle, sorry."
"It's okay."She picked up her books.
"Um...Ray, I was wondering..."She bit her lip."If you'd like to hang
out with me tommorow night?"
"Uh.. yeah, I guess."I remembered that girl.
"Oh Ray!You're just ever so wonderful!"She threw her arms around
me, dropping her books, and kissed me.
Then she picked up her books.She scribled something on a scrap of
paper, and handed it to me.
"My address.Can you pick me up?"She asked.
"Yeah, sure."
"Oh I gotta go.See ya tommorow!"She winked and ran off.
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Poor Aki, don't ya think?Well thanks for reading, next chapter will be posted soon!