Hey all...I didn't forget about my other story…but I just had to
work on this one...I was so excited about it...so here it goes. This is the second version of the original Survival of the Fittest I wrote. The first version got deleted by accident. So I decided to do a second version, I must say this one is much better.
Survival of the Fittest
ch1.
An armor cladded young man proceeded to walk down a cold well-lighted hallway. He
was tall with black hair that spiked out into flames. His eyes were as black as coal and he was
well built. His tight dark blue outfit clung to his every curve and left little to the imagination.
as he walked along his mind began to think up things he would say to the king and queen, His mind ceased to think when he approached the two large golden doors, each marked with the royal symbol of Vegetasei. Quickly the young warrior announced who he was to the guard's and was permitted to enter.
Upon entering the giant room he could see the king and queen sitting on the far end of the room and all around them were the council. All eyes watched him as he entered and he summoned all strength to keep his composure, before them Slowly the whispered to the queen before turning back to the warrior.
"Address why you are here and be quick about it" The king glared at him in hopes thathis superiority would shake him.
The young warrior bowed before him and proceeded to ask him a favor.
"As you know, your daughter and I have been married for about a year..."
he was interrupted by the long bored sigh of the king.
"Goten be quick, I could be sparring with trunks right now but instead I am listening to my
daughter's poor excuse of a mate." Goten quickly took a gulp, for he knew it would be death to cross him.
"For our anniversary I would like to take her to one of our private planets that Vegetasei owns." The king looked over to his aqua-haired wife, who nodded her approval of the voyage.
"I will let you take my daughter to any of the planets we have conquered, however, you can not go to the planet. However, you can not go to the planet, Arcia." Goten slowly bowed and proceeded to walk out the golden doors.
"you really could be nicer to him, Vegeta: The aqua-haired queen said. "Besides Goten is Bura's chosen mate and he IS now part of the royal family." She looked him in the face and quickly scanned her eyes over his fine features. His black eyes looked toward her and showed her, he had no care for if he was his daughter's mate or not.
"I really don't see what she sees in him. He is a low-class Saiyan and not even worthy of being a part of the royal family." The queen let out a quick giggle turned her head in time to watch Goten talk out of the royal chamber.
"Funny, my father wondered the same thing and why I would leave my home planet to come to Vegetasei to be your wife." Quickly she cut an eye over at him, in hopes of hearing one of Vegeta's quick replies.
"Well, my dear Bulma, our race invaded your pitiful excuse of a planet, Earth. And, might I add, if you didn't come I would have blown up your planet."
"Oh really!" she gave him a quick smirk. "And I thought you loved me!" Vegeta glanced at her and gave her a quick kiss on the cheek.
"I do, that and I was going to blow up your precious planet."
Goten walked down the cold steel hallway intent on getting to his woman. He didn't even notice the various saiyans who happened to say HI to him. His mind was on task and one task only. He stopped abruptly in front of a large steel doors . On the door written in Saiyan were the words 'Lab." He walked up to the steel door and punched in the codes for the door.
Quickly the silver door slide open and revealed a room of while coats. People (mostly slaves from other planets) busied themselves with every experiment; they were so busy they didn't even notice he had walked into the room. Instantly, he noticed his half saiyan, half earthling mate. She was the only person in the room who had blue hair that glimmered in the sun. Goten walked up to his exotic mate and whispered in her ear, that he wanted to see her outside.
Instantly she stopped what she was doing and walked with him outside. His features were serious and led her to believe that something was wrong. He walked up to her with the same serious face plastered on and began to wrap his strong well-toned arms around her thin frame. Her big blue eyes, that seemed to be like puddles of emotion for him, searched his forever black eyes. Lightly he smiled his trademark smile and started to ease all doubt from her mind.
"For our anniversary" he said calmly "we are going on a voyage to any of the planets you chose." Bura squealed in delight and nearly lept into his arms. She kissed him passionately and nearly broke his ribs from the very strong hug she was causing. Though she was not fully Saiyan she still had the strength of one. She was just about to suggest some "fun" when one of her assistants came out telling her that King Vegeta required her in the arena. Sighing deeply she went to their chamber and proceeded to clad her body in the tight dark blue saiyan armor. She emerged out of the room with her long aqua hair tied back in a long ponytail. She wore a white gloves and white boots. She had a full navy blue body suit on and a white and gold chest plate. She made her way quickly to the where her father was and prepared herself for the thrashing she would soon receive.
She walked out into the large arena where her father stood. His dark black hair, that usually stood up like flames, flowed in the wind. His arms were crossed and it seemed like he was in the mood for a god challenge. As she walked to the middle. She noticed her friend, pan, helping her purple-haird bro out of the arena. Bura knew she was in trouble. If Trunks didn't even pose a problem, then how was she? Vegeta pointed to her and motioned for her to come. Bura step out in fron t of him and dropped into her fighting stance, Vegeta did the same and in an instant disappeared. Bura was left in the middle, searching frantically for her father. She calmed herself down enough to be able to pinpoint where he was. She jumped into the air and sent a punch into a space that seemed empty. Vegeta appeared with her hand in his gut. A red hot liquid began to run down his face, Vegeta slid a finger across his lip, in an attempt to wipe away the blood. Quickly he glanced at the blood and then back at Bura, who was at the moment trying to apologize for the blood she had just drawn. Anger flashed in his eyes and he sent a thunderous punch to her stomach. Bura grabbed her gut and cried out in agonizing pain. Vegeta took his tail and grabbed her by her neck, he sent numerous of punches all of her body. With one mighty blast of raw energy he sent her flying into a nearby wall. A Cloud of smoke flew up and made it hard for Vegeta to see Bura. Streams of blood ran from her lips and dripped from her chin, her hands were still on her stomach. Pain shot through her body, and caused her to want to cry out. Bura bit her lower lip to keep from herself from crying. Vegeta looked at his disheveled daughter and gave her an egoistical laugh. Bura growled at him and lashed out with full force. She landed one mighty blow to his jaw and in an instant a crack was heard. Vegeta had no time to react before she did a round kick to his waist and sent him flying into a nearby wall. Blood covered his face and for the tiniest moment she could even catch a faint smile Vegeta jumped out of the wall and was about to hit her hard when Bulma came into the arena. She had heard about the fight with trunks and had even seen the damage for herself.
Her eyes darted at Vegeta, who instantly knew what she was thinking.
"Bura" she said calmly "Don't you have packing to do" Bura knew why she was there and as fast as possible tried to walk out.
"If you want a fight, Vegeta" Bulma said with a smirk on her face "You can fight me, but you have to catch me first." Vegeta smirked at his wife's bravery and decided to let her have the head start before going after her.
Meanwhile, Bura was just pulling her tired body into the regeneration tank. The nurse closed the tank and the soothing cool liquid filled the tank. Slowly, she closed her eys and drifted into a deep sleep.
Her mind began to wander and she found herself instantly transported to a strange planet. She looked up into the sky and there was Goten and another man standing near her. She tried to move but only to find she couldn't. Lightly she picked up the hand that covered her stomach only to find it covered in red hot blood. She heard a crack behind her. She whirled around to be greeted by the sight of a gigantic creature. Its fangs protruded past its lower lips. She could tell it was hungry, just by the look in its eyes. She raised her hand to fire a ki blast, but she found se had no power. The creature with its golden cat like eyes crawled toward her. Its claws were spread outward. She tried to scream but no words came out. Frantically she looked at her husband who was no receiving blows to the gut. She raised her hand again toward the beast, in hopes it would fire. The animal stopped before her and growled. She tried to power up for a blast, but for some reason her ki just wasn't strong enough. Bura examined her hand and tried her hardest to formulate a reason as to why she had no powers.
She looked up just in time to watch Goten go flying to the ground. She turned back to the beast, who was inching its way toward her. She tried to stand to run, but the pain from the bloody wound was just to much to bare. The animal crouched down before her and prepared to lash out at her. All of time stood still as she watched the great beast before her.
Ok, guys, that was chapter 1. It was a lil bit different from my first chapter one, but no complaints here. I hope to have ch. 2 up as soon as possible. School is taking up a lot of my time so be patient with me.
work on this one...I was so excited about it...so here it goes. This is the second version of the original Survival of the Fittest I wrote. The first version got deleted by accident. So I decided to do a second version, I must say this one is much better.
Survival of the Fittest
ch1.
An armor cladded young man proceeded to walk down a cold well-lighted hallway. He
was tall with black hair that spiked out into flames. His eyes were as black as coal and he was
well built. His tight dark blue outfit clung to his every curve and left little to the imagination.
as he walked along his mind began to think up things he would say to the king and queen, His mind ceased to think when he approached the two large golden doors, each marked with the royal symbol of Vegetasei. Quickly the young warrior announced who he was to the guard's and was permitted to enter.
Upon entering the giant room he could see the king and queen sitting on the far end of the room and all around them were the council. All eyes watched him as he entered and he summoned all strength to keep his composure, before them Slowly the whispered to the queen before turning back to the warrior.
"Address why you are here and be quick about it" The king glared at him in hopes thathis superiority would shake him.
The young warrior bowed before him and proceeded to ask him a favor.
"As you know, your daughter and I have been married for about a year..."
he was interrupted by the long bored sigh of the king.
"Goten be quick, I could be sparring with trunks right now but instead I am listening to my
daughter's poor excuse of a mate." Goten quickly took a gulp, for he knew it would be death to cross him.
"For our anniversary I would like to take her to one of our private planets that Vegetasei owns." The king looked over to his aqua-haired wife, who nodded her approval of the voyage.
"I will let you take my daughter to any of the planets we have conquered, however, you can not go to the planet. However, you can not go to the planet, Arcia." Goten slowly bowed and proceeded to walk out the golden doors.
"you really could be nicer to him, Vegeta: The aqua-haired queen said. "Besides Goten is Bura's chosen mate and he IS now part of the royal family." She looked him in the face and quickly scanned her eyes over his fine features. His black eyes looked toward her and showed her, he had no care for if he was his daughter's mate or not.
"I really don't see what she sees in him. He is a low-class Saiyan and not even worthy of being a part of the royal family." The queen let out a quick giggle turned her head in time to watch Goten talk out of the royal chamber.
"Funny, my father wondered the same thing and why I would leave my home planet to come to Vegetasei to be your wife." Quickly she cut an eye over at him, in hopes of hearing one of Vegeta's quick replies.
"Well, my dear Bulma, our race invaded your pitiful excuse of a planet, Earth. And, might I add, if you didn't come I would have blown up your planet."
"Oh really!" she gave him a quick smirk. "And I thought you loved me!" Vegeta glanced at her and gave her a quick kiss on the cheek.
"I do, that and I was going to blow up your precious planet."
Goten walked down the cold steel hallway intent on getting to his woman. He didn't even notice the various saiyans who happened to say HI to him. His mind was on task and one task only. He stopped abruptly in front of a large steel doors . On the door written in Saiyan were the words 'Lab." He walked up to the steel door and punched in the codes for the door.
Quickly the silver door slide open and revealed a room of while coats. People (mostly slaves from other planets) busied themselves with every experiment; they were so busy they didn't even notice he had walked into the room. Instantly, he noticed his half saiyan, half earthling mate. She was the only person in the room who had blue hair that glimmered in the sun. Goten walked up to his exotic mate and whispered in her ear, that he wanted to see her outside.
Instantly she stopped what she was doing and walked with him outside. His features were serious and led her to believe that something was wrong. He walked up to her with the same serious face plastered on and began to wrap his strong well-toned arms around her thin frame. Her big blue eyes, that seemed to be like puddles of emotion for him, searched his forever black eyes. Lightly he smiled his trademark smile and started to ease all doubt from her mind.
"For our anniversary" he said calmly "we are going on a voyage to any of the planets you chose." Bura squealed in delight and nearly lept into his arms. She kissed him passionately and nearly broke his ribs from the very strong hug she was causing. Though she was not fully Saiyan she still had the strength of one. She was just about to suggest some "fun" when one of her assistants came out telling her that King Vegeta required her in the arena. Sighing deeply she went to their chamber and proceeded to clad her body in the tight dark blue saiyan armor. She emerged out of the room with her long aqua hair tied back in a long ponytail. She wore a white gloves and white boots. She had a full navy blue body suit on and a white and gold chest plate. She made her way quickly to the where her father was and prepared herself for the thrashing she would soon receive.
She walked out into the large arena where her father stood. His dark black hair, that usually stood up like flames, flowed in the wind. His arms were crossed and it seemed like he was in the mood for a god challenge. As she walked to the middle. She noticed her friend, pan, helping her purple-haird bro out of the arena. Bura knew she was in trouble. If Trunks didn't even pose a problem, then how was she? Vegeta pointed to her and motioned for her to come. Bura step out in fron t of him and dropped into her fighting stance, Vegeta did the same and in an instant disappeared. Bura was left in the middle, searching frantically for her father. She calmed herself down enough to be able to pinpoint where he was. She jumped into the air and sent a punch into a space that seemed empty. Vegeta appeared with her hand in his gut. A red hot liquid began to run down his face, Vegeta slid a finger across his lip, in an attempt to wipe away the blood. Quickly he glanced at the blood and then back at Bura, who was at the moment trying to apologize for the blood she had just drawn. Anger flashed in his eyes and he sent a thunderous punch to her stomach. Bura grabbed her gut and cried out in agonizing pain. Vegeta took his tail and grabbed her by her neck, he sent numerous of punches all of her body. With one mighty blast of raw energy he sent her flying into a nearby wall. A Cloud of smoke flew up and made it hard for Vegeta to see Bura. Streams of blood ran from her lips and dripped from her chin, her hands were still on her stomach. Pain shot through her body, and caused her to want to cry out. Bura bit her lower lip to keep from herself from crying. Vegeta looked at his disheveled daughter and gave her an egoistical laugh. Bura growled at him and lashed out with full force. She landed one mighty blow to his jaw and in an instant a crack was heard. Vegeta had no time to react before she did a round kick to his waist and sent him flying into a nearby wall. Blood covered his face and for the tiniest moment she could even catch a faint smile Vegeta jumped out of the wall and was about to hit her hard when Bulma came into the arena. She had heard about the fight with trunks and had even seen the damage for herself.
Her eyes darted at Vegeta, who instantly knew what she was thinking.
"Bura" she said calmly "Don't you have packing to do" Bura knew why she was there and as fast as possible tried to walk out.
"If you want a fight, Vegeta" Bulma said with a smirk on her face "You can fight me, but you have to catch me first." Vegeta smirked at his wife's bravery and decided to let her have the head start before going after her.
Meanwhile, Bura was just pulling her tired body into the regeneration tank. The nurse closed the tank and the soothing cool liquid filled the tank. Slowly, she closed her eys and drifted into a deep sleep.
Her mind began to wander and she found herself instantly transported to a strange planet. She looked up into the sky and there was Goten and another man standing near her. She tried to move but only to find she couldn't. Lightly she picked up the hand that covered her stomach only to find it covered in red hot blood. She heard a crack behind her. She whirled around to be greeted by the sight of a gigantic creature. Its fangs protruded past its lower lips. She could tell it was hungry, just by the look in its eyes. She raised her hand to fire a ki blast, but she found se had no power. The creature with its golden cat like eyes crawled toward her. Its claws were spread outward. She tried to scream but no words came out. Frantically she looked at her husband who was no receiving blows to the gut. She raised her hand again toward the beast, in hopes it would fire. The animal stopped before her and growled. She tried to power up for a blast, but for some reason her ki just wasn't strong enough. Bura examined her hand and tried her hardest to formulate a reason as to why she had no powers.
She looked up just in time to watch Goten go flying to the ground. She turned back to the beast, who was inching its way toward her. She tried to stand to run, but the pain from the bloody wound was just to much to bare. The animal crouched down before her and prepared to lash out at her. All of time stood still as she watched the great beast before her.
Ok, guys, that was chapter 1. It was a lil bit different from my first chapter one, but no complaints here. I hope to have ch. 2 up as soon as possible. School is taking up a lot of my time so be patient with me.