Sorry for the grammar and spelling mistakes but I just don't have the time
to check my fic. Please concentrate on the storyline instead of trying to
spot my mistakes.
Love,
Huiling
The Start of Term
As usual, the hall was packed with students waiting for the start of term feast and the most important Sorting ceremony for the 1st years. Malfoy was already at the Slytherin table but he was alone and shouted at whoever got near him and tried to talk. He was in one of the worst Malfoy mood and even Crabbe and Guile took care to get as far away from him as possible, they were sitting at the end of the table.
Hermione settled down in between Fred and George, Ron upon seeing this tried to squeeze into a very small space between her and Fred but Fred just wouldn't give in. They were pushing each other when Fred suddenly barged and Ron fell right through the space and landed hard on the floor. Hermione's face turned white and reprimanded Fred for playing such dangerous prank, Ron only suffered a bruise from the fall but upon seeing Hermione's concern, whimpered and said that he had a broken a vein, behaving like a complete idiot. Harry felt his hand itching to slap Ron back to his senses but remembering how foul Ron could be, gave up the idea and watched the Sorting ceremony instead.
Among the sea of heads, Harry could see Cho Chang sitting alone at the end of the Ravenclaw table. She was looking at her plate not watching the Sorting ceremony. She had lost a lot of weight since Harry last saw her, harry could still remember the scenario vividly. Last year at the end of term feast when Dumbledore was toasting Cedric, Cho Chang was weeping quietly. The Cho Chang he remembered was cheerful and healthy looking but the Cho Chang Harry sees now looks very depressed and ill. Harry can't bring himself to watch her anymore; he was the one responsible for her state now, if he had not asked Cedric. Harry felt very guilty and angry at the very thought thus he tried to turn his attention to Snape who looks as if he fell into a pool of slimy oily stuff, judging from his entangled oily hair. Harry thought that it may smell too and he hope he will never get the chance to know.
After the feast and Dumbledore's speech (the same old crap about Flinch's rules and the forbidden forest, only that the list of forbidden items increased to 1000 types), they went back to their dormitory. They were briefed about the new password ("Love is in the air"); Neville just can't get it into his head. (He was saying, "Love is in my hair" instead)
After some catching up with the rest of the Gryffindors, finally at around 1am in the morning, Hermione yawned and bade Harry and Ron goodnight. Ron bade Hermione goodnight too but there was a strong tinge of disappointment in his voice and he used his eyes to send her to her dormitory. Harry was watching him closely and found that Ron could not take his eyes off the door Hermione disappeared into, as if expecting her to reappear. But it was clear to Harry that she will not because ha could see from the gap under the door that the light was off.
Harry can't bear to see Ron in such a torment state took him gently by the arm and lead him back to the boys' dormitory.
Please keep on following the series. I assure you that the next chap will be very touching. Be prepared to use a lot of tissues.
Huiling
The Start of Term
As usual, the hall was packed with students waiting for the start of term feast and the most important Sorting ceremony for the 1st years. Malfoy was already at the Slytherin table but he was alone and shouted at whoever got near him and tried to talk. He was in one of the worst Malfoy mood and even Crabbe and Guile took care to get as far away from him as possible, they were sitting at the end of the table.
Hermione settled down in between Fred and George, Ron upon seeing this tried to squeeze into a very small space between her and Fred but Fred just wouldn't give in. They were pushing each other when Fred suddenly barged and Ron fell right through the space and landed hard on the floor. Hermione's face turned white and reprimanded Fred for playing such dangerous prank, Ron only suffered a bruise from the fall but upon seeing Hermione's concern, whimpered and said that he had a broken a vein, behaving like a complete idiot. Harry felt his hand itching to slap Ron back to his senses but remembering how foul Ron could be, gave up the idea and watched the Sorting ceremony instead.
Among the sea of heads, Harry could see Cho Chang sitting alone at the end of the Ravenclaw table. She was looking at her plate not watching the Sorting ceremony. She had lost a lot of weight since Harry last saw her, harry could still remember the scenario vividly. Last year at the end of term feast when Dumbledore was toasting Cedric, Cho Chang was weeping quietly. The Cho Chang he remembered was cheerful and healthy looking but the Cho Chang Harry sees now looks very depressed and ill. Harry can't bring himself to watch her anymore; he was the one responsible for her state now, if he had not asked Cedric. Harry felt very guilty and angry at the very thought thus he tried to turn his attention to Snape who looks as if he fell into a pool of slimy oily stuff, judging from his entangled oily hair. Harry thought that it may smell too and he hope he will never get the chance to know.
After the feast and Dumbledore's speech (the same old crap about Flinch's rules and the forbidden forest, only that the list of forbidden items increased to 1000 types), they went back to their dormitory. They were briefed about the new password ("Love is in the air"); Neville just can't get it into his head. (He was saying, "Love is in my hair" instead)
After some catching up with the rest of the Gryffindors, finally at around 1am in the morning, Hermione yawned and bade Harry and Ron goodnight. Ron bade Hermione goodnight too but there was a strong tinge of disappointment in his voice and he used his eyes to send her to her dormitory. Harry was watching him closely and found that Ron could not take his eyes off the door Hermione disappeared into, as if expecting her to reappear. But it was clear to Harry that she will not because ha could see from the gap under the door that the light was off.
Harry can't bear to see Ron in such a torment state took him gently by the arm and lead him back to the boys' dormitory.
Please keep on following the series. I assure you that the next chap will be very touching. Be prepared to use a lot of tissues.