(Author's note: does anyone know who this might be?
To gn who wrote: THIS SUCKED! SO DON'T COMPLAIN ABOUT OTHER PEOPLE'S STORYIES! LIKE A PROMISE FULFILLED! IF YOU CAN'T TAKE THE ROMANCE THEN DON'T READ!
Response: uh.. forgive me.. but I think you might have me mistaken for someone else.. I've read "A Promise Fulfilled," and I've enjoyed it very much, and I wish very much for the author to continue. I myself am a big fan of Hiei/Keiko fics. All I've said to her (or him) is that if this author wished to make her story have a lemon scene there is another branch of fanfiction.net called "Adult Fanfiction.net" or something where this person could join and post the lemon scene there. I think the person you're looking for is a person (or an author) that goes by the name "Vindictive".. he's (or she's) the one whose been complaining about "A Promise Fulfilled," and as for the "don't read romance if I don't like it" part.. uh.. look at the genre of this story and you'll notice it says "Romance." And if I hated romance, then why am I writing a Romantic fic?.. duh...
Sincerely,
Asian Princess 61)
Black Snow Foxes and Red Fire Demons pt. 3
Prince Hiei stared deep into the burning depths of the roaring campfire as it slowly burned out leaving nothing but its glowing embers and sparkles flying into the night. The embers and sparkles mingled with the black smoke as it flew into the fading sunlight as the evening's first stars awoke to the darkness. Around him, three demon horses neighed and stomped their large hooves in the soft forest dirt. Prince Hiei watched in a new curiosity as his mind wandered back to the mysterious girl in the spring.
"So?" Yusuke asked as he poked and prodded a stick into the burning embers.
"So what?" Prince Hiei replied glaring at his advisors.
"So.. Who is she?" asked Kurama as he studied the empty bowl of food in his lap.
"Hm," Prince Hiei replied as Kurama and Yusuke sighed.
He turned away from the fire's warm glow and muttered something incoherent. Kurama arched a silver eyebrow.
"Pardon me?" He asked smirking.
"I don't know who she is," he muttered Yusuke and Kurama barely hearing.
Youko Kurama smirked an implying smirk once more as Yusuke shot him an implying look.
"You don't know?" Yusuke implied smirking. "You two weren't... were you?"
Prince Hiei turned and glared at the cream haired demon. Yusuke raised his arms up in defense.
"I'll take that as a 'no,'" Kurama added as he crossed his arms and tilted his head as he began thinking. "Your Majesty.. You must find out who she is.. Besides you know how the Queen wants to see you married."
"Yea," Yusuke began. "I have Keiko; Kurama has Kizna, and you're the only one left."
"Hm. I know Fox," Prince Hiei replied. "You don't need to remind me."
"Well.. Her majesty Queen Hina just wants to see you happy before she passes on," Kurama replied smiling. "Besides you're the only one out of all of us who has no wife."
"Hm," he replied turning away and stared deep into the dark forest as the night turned darker filling the night with a thousand diamonds in the sky.
He looked deep into the night sky wondering a thought that came to mind. 'What would it be like to have a wife?' he thought to himself softly.
Karasu worked through the night in the stone laboratory. He studied the old book of spells and potions as a cauldron boiled and bubbled behind him filling the air with the sour scent of poison as the fire crackled and hissed under the large black pot. Karasu pulled out a large basket of apples and slowly placed them into the boiling and bubbling poison. The apples hissed and turned black as they soaked the poison into their centers. One by one, he pulled them out as they turned a tantalizing and tempting ripe red. 'Snow White will not be able to resist,' he thought as he smiled an evil smile underneath his mask.
Cristy sat at the small table in a place the dwarves had set up for her as she picked and played with her food unable to stop thinking of the mysterious demon at the spring while the others around her ate heartily. She placed a pale hand on her lips as she remembered the sweet kiss they had shared. She closed her eyes in bliss. She jumped as she felt a hand on her arm breaking her reverie.
"Snow White?" the old Genkai rasped worriedly. "Are you all right? You've barely eaten."
"Oh.. Uh..." she began as she blushed brightly. "I'm all right.. Forgive me."
"Are you sure?" Yukina asked kindly her crimson eyes shining worriedly.
Cristy nodded smiling an unsure and nervous smile.
"Well.. I suppose I'm just not that hungry," Cristy said as she rolled a small tomato around on her plate.
Old Genkai nodded.
"Go on," she rasped. "You must need rest.. Go upstairs. Yukina prepare her a cot will you?"
"Of course," Yukina replied kindly as she stood. "Coming Cristy?"
"Uh.. Yea," Cristy replied as she stood and followed the small ice maiden.
She walked up the stairs leading to the bedrooms in a daze unable to stop thinking of the demon in the spring. She had noticed his black armor and red cape and began to wonder. 'Was he royalty?' she wondered to herself. 'A Prince perhaps? A noble lord even?' Confused, she sighed and quietly entered the bedroom Yukina had led her to. She leaned against the wall dreaming of the mysterious demon's lips on hers once more.
It was a simple bedroom white clay walls and a bare wooden floor and a window looking out into the deep dark forest and the midnight blue blanket of diamonds in the sky. A soft warm breeze flew in from the small cracks in the window reminding her once more of the warm spring water and the demon that held her in his arms. 'Too bad it had to end,' she thought softly sighing. She sighed again.
"Here," Yukina said softly and kindly breaking Cristy's reverie. "Will this do?"
Cristy looked up and found a thick blue quilt on the floor and a simple thin blanket and a small pillow beside the makeshift bed. Smiling, Cristy nodded. Yukina smiled and quietly walked out of the small room quietly shutting the door behind her. Cristy climbed under the thin blanket and rested her head on the pillow as she gazed into the deep, dark, and starry sky. Her crimson and golden eyes fluttered wildly as they opened and closed until she fell into a deep sleep dreaming of the mysterious demon at the spring.
The night was quickly falling and the stars quickly appearing. Kurama and Yusuke stomped out the fire and cleaned up the campsite.
"Are you read your Majesty?" Kurama asked as he set a bucket that had held water inside on the ground. "We have a journey ahead of us back to the castle."
Prince Hiei didn't reply.
"Your Majesty?" Kurama asked again worriedly.
"I want to find her," Prince Hiei whispered softly as a warm breeze blew.
"Excuse me?" Yusuke asked as he arched an eyebrow.
"I want to find her," he said louder and more sternly. "We'll head back to the castle tonight.. Then we'll come back within the next few days and find her."
Shocked, Yusuke and Kurama looked at their Prince. Kurama opened his mouth to say a word only to be cut off by the Prince.
"That is an order," Prince Hiei said sternly as he walked to a large black stallion tied to a tree.
He mounted the stallion his black armor clanging his red cape falling gracefully over the horse. Nervous, Kurama and Yusuke nodded as they mounted the other horses. Gently, the Prince kicked the horse in its side and galloped into the distance eager to make his way back to his castle as Kurama, mounted on a large white stallion, galloped behind him as Yusuke on a cream stallion with a snow white mane followed behind. They traveled deep into the night with the golden starlight and the silver moon guiding their way.
Prince Hiei stared into the roaring depths of his fireplace as his mind wandered back to the mysterious girl he had fallen in love with. In a dark corner, the large black grandfather clock chimed midnight as the castle fell into a deep night's sleep. He sat on the ground leaning against a black leather couch in the sitting area of his room. It was a large room with a large black fireplace and a black sitting area. A large black canopy bed stood by a large window looking deep into the darkness outside. He wore a black silk night shirt unbuttoned leaving his cream colored chest to the warmth and coldness of the air and a pair of black silk pants that fell attractively around his strong legs the silk falling into every curve of the muscle. (Author's note: Hiei fan-girls go ahead... indulge!) Quietly, he stood is bare feet rustling the carpet as he walked to the large bed. He laid down and turned his gaze to the starlit night as he slowly fell asleep dreaming of the strange girl in his arms.
She paced back and forth around the fireplace of her and husband's room waiting for her husband to return as she place a gentle hand on her swollen belly. She wore a long light blue silk nightgown and a sheer see-through robe and simple white slippered heels. Her light blue and green and flowered hair fell behind her falling in soft waves her white wings folded beneath the robe. She looked towards the bedroom door nervously. 'I can't believe it,' she thought smiling softly as she rubbed her belly. 'He'll be so happy when he hears the news.' She looked at the bowels of fruit and meat she had set out on the glass coffee table one last time making sure everything was in its proper place. She looked up as she heard the bedroom door open. Her husband walked in his silver hair softly flying behind him as he walked.
"Kizna," he said softly as he walked to her and pulled her close.
"Kurama," she replied softly as he placed a kiss on her lips.
"Did the visit with the doctor go well?" he asked concerned as he sat down on one of the white colored couches in their sitting area.
Then, he saw all the fruit and meats on the table.
"What's all this?" he asked confused looking up to her as she sat by his side.
"Yes.. The visit went well," she began smiling widely. "And I thought you might want something after the long journey home."
Youko Kurama smiled.
"And?" he asked as he pulled her close.
"And what?" Kizna replied innocently.
"And.. What are we having?" the silver haired Youko asked smiling eagerly. "A boy or girl?"
Kizna's smile grew wider.
"Let me guess.. A girl?" Kurama began thinking as Kizna shook her head. "A boy?"
She shook her head again as Kurama arched a confused eyebrow.
"Both?" Kurama guess his eyebrow still arched as Kizna nodded happily.
Then, Kurama got the idea.
"Twins?" he asked his gold eyes growing wide in shock.
Kizna smiled as Kurama let out a cry of joy that rang through the palace halls.
Tiredly, Yusuke walked into his and his wife's room and found his wife soundly sleeping on the bed her brown hair gently falling in her face and her demon tail soft thumping on the bed as a small sleeping child cooed in the crib next to the bed.
"I'm home Keiko," he whispered quietly to the sleeping woman in the bed.
Gently, he laid a kiss on the soft brown locks a small smile creeping on her face. Quietly, he walked over to the small crib and leaned down to kiss the small boy sleeping on the soft feather mattress. He reached down and tangled his fingers in the soft cream colored curls that slowly grew on the boy's small head as a small brown tail slowly wagged from the touch. He smiled. Yusuke changed into simple green night clothes and laid down by his sleeping wife pulling her close and drifted off into a sweet slumber.
(Author's note: I don't know why I put in a bit of Kurama/ Kizna and Yusuke/ Keiko fluff but I did. One of you asked if Kizna was gonna be in this fic and assuming you wanted her in it, I just put her in. If you know my writing, you know I like to do side romances so I guess that's why I did it.)
To gn who wrote: THIS SUCKED! SO DON'T COMPLAIN ABOUT OTHER PEOPLE'S STORYIES! LIKE A PROMISE FULFILLED! IF YOU CAN'T TAKE THE ROMANCE THEN DON'T READ!
Response: uh.. forgive me.. but I think you might have me mistaken for someone else.. I've read "A Promise Fulfilled," and I've enjoyed it very much, and I wish very much for the author to continue. I myself am a big fan of Hiei/Keiko fics. All I've said to her (or him) is that if this author wished to make her story have a lemon scene there is another branch of fanfiction.net called "Adult Fanfiction.net" or something where this person could join and post the lemon scene there. I think the person you're looking for is a person (or an author) that goes by the name "Vindictive".. he's (or she's) the one whose been complaining about "A Promise Fulfilled," and as for the "don't read romance if I don't like it" part.. uh.. look at the genre of this story and you'll notice it says "Romance." And if I hated romance, then why am I writing a Romantic fic?.. duh...
Sincerely,
Asian Princess 61)
Black Snow Foxes and Red Fire Demons pt. 3
Prince Hiei stared deep into the burning depths of the roaring campfire as it slowly burned out leaving nothing but its glowing embers and sparkles flying into the night. The embers and sparkles mingled with the black smoke as it flew into the fading sunlight as the evening's first stars awoke to the darkness. Around him, three demon horses neighed and stomped their large hooves in the soft forest dirt. Prince Hiei watched in a new curiosity as his mind wandered back to the mysterious girl in the spring.
"So?" Yusuke asked as he poked and prodded a stick into the burning embers.
"So what?" Prince Hiei replied glaring at his advisors.
"So.. Who is she?" asked Kurama as he studied the empty bowl of food in his lap.
"Hm," Prince Hiei replied as Kurama and Yusuke sighed.
He turned away from the fire's warm glow and muttered something incoherent. Kurama arched a silver eyebrow.
"Pardon me?" He asked smirking.
"I don't know who she is," he muttered Yusuke and Kurama barely hearing.
Youko Kurama smirked an implying smirk once more as Yusuke shot him an implying look.
"You don't know?" Yusuke implied smirking. "You two weren't... were you?"
Prince Hiei turned and glared at the cream haired demon. Yusuke raised his arms up in defense.
"I'll take that as a 'no,'" Kurama added as he crossed his arms and tilted his head as he began thinking. "Your Majesty.. You must find out who she is.. Besides you know how the Queen wants to see you married."
"Yea," Yusuke began. "I have Keiko; Kurama has Kizna, and you're the only one left."
"Hm. I know Fox," Prince Hiei replied. "You don't need to remind me."
"Well.. Her majesty Queen Hina just wants to see you happy before she passes on," Kurama replied smiling. "Besides you're the only one out of all of us who has no wife."
"Hm," he replied turning away and stared deep into the dark forest as the night turned darker filling the night with a thousand diamonds in the sky.
He looked deep into the night sky wondering a thought that came to mind. 'What would it be like to have a wife?' he thought to himself softly.
Karasu worked through the night in the stone laboratory. He studied the old book of spells and potions as a cauldron boiled and bubbled behind him filling the air with the sour scent of poison as the fire crackled and hissed under the large black pot. Karasu pulled out a large basket of apples and slowly placed them into the boiling and bubbling poison. The apples hissed and turned black as they soaked the poison into their centers. One by one, he pulled them out as they turned a tantalizing and tempting ripe red. 'Snow White will not be able to resist,' he thought as he smiled an evil smile underneath his mask.
Cristy sat at the small table in a place the dwarves had set up for her as she picked and played with her food unable to stop thinking of the mysterious demon at the spring while the others around her ate heartily. She placed a pale hand on her lips as she remembered the sweet kiss they had shared. She closed her eyes in bliss. She jumped as she felt a hand on her arm breaking her reverie.
"Snow White?" the old Genkai rasped worriedly. "Are you all right? You've barely eaten."
"Oh.. Uh..." she began as she blushed brightly. "I'm all right.. Forgive me."
"Are you sure?" Yukina asked kindly her crimson eyes shining worriedly.
Cristy nodded smiling an unsure and nervous smile.
"Well.. I suppose I'm just not that hungry," Cristy said as she rolled a small tomato around on her plate.
Old Genkai nodded.
"Go on," she rasped. "You must need rest.. Go upstairs. Yukina prepare her a cot will you?"
"Of course," Yukina replied kindly as she stood. "Coming Cristy?"
"Uh.. Yea," Cristy replied as she stood and followed the small ice maiden.
She walked up the stairs leading to the bedrooms in a daze unable to stop thinking of the demon in the spring. She had noticed his black armor and red cape and began to wonder. 'Was he royalty?' she wondered to herself. 'A Prince perhaps? A noble lord even?' Confused, she sighed and quietly entered the bedroom Yukina had led her to. She leaned against the wall dreaming of the mysterious demon's lips on hers once more.
It was a simple bedroom white clay walls and a bare wooden floor and a window looking out into the deep dark forest and the midnight blue blanket of diamonds in the sky. A soft warm breeze flew in from the small cracks in the window reminding her once more of the warm spring water and the demon that held her in his arms. 'Too bad it had to end,' she thought softly sighing. She sighed again.
"Here," Yukina said softly and kindly breaking Cristy's reverie. "Will this do?"
Cristy looked up and found a thick blue quilt on the floor and a simple thin blanket and a small pillow beside the makeshift bed. Smiling, Cristy nodded. Yukina smiled and quietly walked out of the small room quietly shutting the door behind her. Cristy climbed under the thin blanket and rested her head on the pillow as she gazed into the deep, dark, and starry sky. Her crimson and golden eyes fluttered wildly as they opened and closed until she fell into a deep sleep dreaming of the mysterious demon at the spring.
The night was quickly falling and the stars quickly appearing. Kurama and Yusuke stomped out the fire and cleaned up the campsite.
"Are you read your Majesty?" Kurama asked as he set a bucket that had held water inside on the ground. "We have a journey ahead of us back to the castle."
Prince Hiei didn't reply.
"Your Majesty?" Kurama asked again worriedly.
"I want to find her," Prince Hiei whispered softly as a warm breeze blew.
"Excuse me?" Yusuke asked as he arched an eyebrow.
"I want to find her," he said louder and more sternly. "We'll head back to the castle tonight.. Then we'll come back within the next few days and find her."
Shocked, Yusuke and Kurama looked at their Prince. Kurama opened his mouth to say a word only to be cut off by the Prince.
"That is an order," Prince Hiei said sternly as he walked to a large black stallion tied to a tree.
He mounted the stallion his black armor clanging his red cape falling gracefully over the horse. Nervous, Kurama and Yusuke nodded as they mounted the other horses. Gently, the Prince kicked the horse in its side and galloped into the distance eager to make his way back to his castle as Kurama, mounted on a large white stallion, galloped behind him as Yusuke on a cream stallion with a snow white mane followed behind. They traveled deep into the night with the golden starlight and the silver moon guiding their way.
Prince Hiei stared into the roaring depths of his fireplace as his mind wandered back to the mysterious girl he had fallen in love with. In a dark corner, the large black grandfather clock chimed midnight as the castle fell into a deep night's sleep. He sat on the ground leaning against a black leather couch in the sitting area of his room. It was a large room with a large black fireplace and a black sitting area. A large black canopy bed stood by a large window looking deep into the darkness outside. He wore a black silk night shirt unbuttoned leaving his cream colored chest to the warmth and coldness of the air and a pair of black silk pants that fell attractively around his strong legs the silk falling into every curve of the muscle. (Author's note: Hiei fan-girls go ahead... indulge!) Quietly, he stood is bare feet rustling the carpet as he walked to the large bed. He laid down and turned his gaze to the starlit night as he slowly fell asleep dreaming of the strange girl in his arms.
She paced back and forth around the fireplace of her and husband's room waiting for her husband to return as she place a gentle hand on her swollen belly. She wore a long light blue silk nightgown and a sheer see-through robe and simple white slippered heels. Her light blue and green and flowered hair fell behind her falling in soft waves her white wings folded beneath the robe. She looked towards the bedroom door nervously. 'I can't believe it,' she thought smiling softly as she rubbed her belly. 'He'll be so happy when he hears the news.' She looked at the bowels of fruit and meat she had set out on the glass coffee table one last time making sure everything was in its proper place. She looked up as she heard the bedroom door open. Her husband walked in his silver hair softly flying behind him as he walked.
"Kizna," he said softly as he walked to her and pulled her close.
"Kurama," she replied softly as he placed a kiss on her lips.
"Did the visit with the doctor go well?" he asked concerned as he sat down on one of the white colored couches in their sitting area.
Then, he saw all the fruit and meats on the table.
"What's all this?" he asked confused looking up to her as she sat by his side.
"Yes.. The visit went well," she began smiling widely. "And I thought you might want something after the long journey home."
Youko Kurama smiled.
"And?" he asked as he pulled her close.
"And what?" Kizna replied innocently.
"And.. What are we having?" the silver haired Youko asked smiling eagerly. "A boy or girl?"
Kizna's smile grew wider.
"Let me guess.. A girl?" Kurama began thinking as Kizna shook her head. "A boy?"
She shook her head again as Kurama arched a confused eyebrow.
"Both?" Kurama guess his eyebrow still arched as Kizna nodded happily.
Then, Kurama got the idea.
"Twins?" he asked his gold eyes growing wide in shock.
Kizna smiled as Kurama let out a cry of joy that rang through the palace halls.
Tiredly, Yusuke walked into his and his wife's room and found his wife soundly sleeping on the bed her brown hair gently falling in her face and her demon tail soft thumping on the bed as a small sleeping child cooed in the crib next to the bed.
"I'm home Keiko," he whispered quietly to the sleeping woman in the bed.
Gently, he laid a kiss on the soft brown locks a small smile creeping on her face. Quietly, he walked over to the small crib and leaned down to kiss the small boy sleeping on the soft feather mattress. He reached down and tangled his fingers in the soft cream colored curls that slowly grew on the boy's small head as a small brown tail slowly wagged from the touch. He smiled. Yusuke changed into simple green night clothes and laid down by his sleeping wife pulling her close and drifted off into a sweet slumber.
(Author's note: I don't know why I put in a bit of Kurama/ Kizna and Yusuke/ Keiko fluff but I did. One of you asked if Kizna was gonna be in this fic and assuming you wanted her in it, I just put her in. If you know my writing, you know I like to do side romances so I guess that's why I did it.)